專題21.1 書面表達(dá)（觀點(diǎn)看法類）（第02期） 帶解析

2019年中考真題英語分項(xiàng)匯編專題21書面表達(dá)考點(diǎn)1觀點(diǎn)看法類（一）【2019?北京市】根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在開展“安全月”宣傳活動，倡議大家制作關(guān)于安全教育的主題海報，你們班交換生Peter給你發(fā)郵件詢問相關(guān)事情。請用英語回復(fù)一封郵件，告訴他海報上交的時間，并分享你設(shè)計海報的一些想法。提示詞語：design，safetyrule，careful，protect，picture提示問題：Whenshouldyouhandintheposter?WhatwouldyouliketosharewithPeteraboutdesigningtheposter?DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IfthereisanythingmorethatIcanhelpwith,pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【寫作思路】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給Peter寫一封郵件，告訴他關(guān)于制作關(guān)于安全教育的主題海報的相關(guān)事宜。由題目中給出的提示問題可知，短文中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先告訴Peter海報上交的時間；然后和他分享一些設(shè)計海報的想法。第二個內(nèi)容應(yīng)該是短文的主體。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)聯(lián)系自己的實(shí)際生活，展開合理的想象，將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整后，用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，這是寫作中的一個難點(diǎn)。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主、第一、二人稱來敘述。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先要合理安排短文內(nèi)容，敘述應(yīng)有層次、有條理。可以使用一些表示先后順序的詞或短語，如First,Second,Lastbutnotleast等等。題目中給出的提示詞應(yīng)該在短文中用上。其次應(yīng)注意文章的表達(dá)，英語句式的結(jié)構(gòu)與漢語是不同的，因此不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)該從句式的整體考慮，先確定主干結(jié)構(gòu)，然后添加修飾成分。為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)注意使用一些高級詞匯、短語以及復(fù)合句、非謂語動詞等復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意上下連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.Asitisrequired，youaresupposedtohandintheposterbeforenextFriday.Beingyourclosefriend，Iamextremelywillingtosharesomeideasaboutdesigningtheposterwithyou.Firstandforemost，thebasicsafetyrulesareofgreatimportance，whichshouldbeincludedinyourposter.Inthesecondplace，followingthesafetyrulesissomeaningfulandcrucialthatyouhadbetterremindyourreadersofitssignificanceandadvisethemtobecarefulbothinandoutofschool.Lastbutbynomeansleast，ifIwereyou，Iwouldaddafewsuggestionsaboutsafetyawareness，consideringthatbettersafethansorry.Inaddition，itisagoodideaforyoutodrawafewpicturesonyourpostersoastomakeitmorelivelyandacceptable.IfthereisanythingmorethatIcanhelpwith,pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【名師點(diǎn)評】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，給Peter寫郵件，告訴他制作主題海報的一些事情。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合題目要求。除題目中給出的開頭和結(jié)尾，短文主要包括兩個內(nèi)容：第一段用一句話告訴Peter上交海報的時間；文章的中心和重點(diǎn)是放在了第二段上，這一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海報的想法。主要從四個方面進(jìn)行闡述，內(nèi)容非常詳實(shí)，并使用了Firstandforemost,Inthesecondplace,Lastbutbynomeansleast,Inaddition等短語，分清了這一段的層次，敘述非常有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，并使用了較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，表現(xiàn)了作者較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。短文中較好的句型有：Beingyourclosefriend，Iamextremelywillingtosharesomeideasaboutdesigningtheposterwithyou.、Inthesecondplace，followingthesafetyrulesissomeaningfulandcrucialthatyouhadbetterremindyourreadersofitssignificanceandadvisethemtobecarefulbothinandoutofschool、Inaddition，itisagoodideaforyoutodrawafewpicturesonyourpostersoastomakeitmorelivelyandacceptable.等。（二）【2019?福建省】假定你是李華，收到英國筆友Harry的郵件，獲悉他在機(jī)器人制作比賽中獲獎。請根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給他From:\hFrom:\hHarry@DearLiHua,I’mgladtotellyouthatI’vejustwonthethefirstplaceinarobot-makingcompetition.Iloverobots!Theybringmegreatfun.Whatdoyothinkofrobots?Doyouwanttohaveyourownrobot?Why?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.DearLiHua,I’mgladtotellyouthatI’vejustwonthethefirstplaceinarobot-makingcompetition.Iloverobots!Theybringmegreatfun.Whatdoyothinkofrobots?Doyouwanttohaveyourownrobot?Why?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,HarryTo:Lihua\h2019@163.com參考詞匯：congratulation祝賀注意事項(xiàng)：1.回復(fù)郵件時可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，郵件格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。DearHarry,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【寫作思路】此類觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)和原因說明類的作文，在我們?nèi)喌闹锌紡?fù)習(xí)中進(jìn)行過系統(tǒng)的訓(xùn)練。學(xué)生可根據(jù)日常所授的寫作模板，對全文內(nèi)容及結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行合理安排。（1）結(jié)構(gòu)：開頭表示祝賀，使用所給提示詞；（2）正文要點(diǎn)：表達(dá)興趣并說明原因，至少兩點(diǎn)（如熱點(diǎn)科技，對科技創(chuàng)新的興趣，對生活的改變，對醫(yī)療、救援的幫助等）；寫作時從單詞拼寫到句子結(jié)構(gòu)，從時態(tài)到語態(tài)，都應(yīng)該注意統(tǒng)一。在打草稿時把需要用到的關(guān)鍵詞、高級句式、關(guān)鍵結(jié)構(gòu)甚至注意事項(xiàng)等簡單地寫在題目旁邊，以盡量規(guī)避錯誤?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earHarry,Congratulations！HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews!Ithinkrobotsarehelpfulinmanyways.Andinthefuture,theywillplaymoreimportantrolesinourdailylife.Plus,Iamdyingtohavearobotofmyown.Icanhaveittakecareofmygrandparentswhenwearenotathome.Yousee,mygrandparentsareoldandcannotmoveeasily.Itcanhelpthemdosomehouseworksuchascooking,cleaningthehouseandsoon.Hopingyouwillmakegreaterprogress.Yours,LiHua（三）【2019?陜西省】即將畢業(yè)的你，將如何處理初中階段的各種書籍和筆記呢?假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下提示，給學(xué)校英文報寫一封電子郵件，分享你處理這些書籍和筆記的計劃與理由。要求：1.參考表格內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息（姓名，校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70個詞，（開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）。DearEditor,MynameisLiHua.I'mgoingtograduatesoon.I'dliketosharesomeideasabouthowtodealwithmybooksandnotebooks.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Therearemyideas.Ihopetheycanhelp.Yours,LiHua【寫作思路】本篇作文為應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封電子郵件，寫作時應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)內(nèi)容：1.審題：不需要寫題目，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，只需要按照給出的提示寫出自己如何處理筆記和書籍的計劃和理由，給的提示短語需要全部列出。2.列提綱：第一段：開頭已給出，引入主題，第二段：詳細(xì)列出自己處理筆記和書籍的計劃和理由第三段：結(jié)尾已給出，進(jìn)行情感的升華。3.人稱及時態(tài)：第一人“我”為主，時態(tài)應(yīng)選用一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earEditor,MynameisLiHua.I'mgoingtograduatesoon.I'dliketosharesomeideasabouthowtodealwithmybooksandnotebooks.Firstofall,Iwillputallmybooksintodifferentkinds.Secondly,Iamgoingtogivemytextbookstomyyoungercousins.Inthisway,theycanstudyathomeduringthecomingsummervacation.Besides,Iwanttohaveabooksalesothatchildrencanbuythepicturebooksatlowprices.What'smore,Idecidetokeepthenotebooksformyself.Theybringmelotsofsweetmemories.Finallytheusedpaperwillbetakentothewastecenter.Therearemyideas.Ihopetheycanhelp.Yours,LiHua（四）【2019?四川涼山州】每個人的生命只有一次，一定要珍愛自己的生命。該怎樣安全自救？請根據(jù)以下提示，以HowtoProtectOurselves為標(biāo)題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。安全對每個人都很重要交通：外出時遵守交通規(guī)則食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品活動：體育鍛煉時，不要弄傷自己不私自下河游泳自救是重要的技能之一交友需謹(jǐn)慎遠(yuǎn)離危險之人遇到危險保持冷靜然后要及時報警或向老師、家長求助盡可能避免受傷害保證自己的安全要求：1.語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫、通順。2.短文應(yīng)包括所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯。3.詞數(shù)80左右。文章開頭部分已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：safety,trafficrules,hurtoneself,withoutpermission,self-protection,stayawayfrom參考詞匯：safety,trafficrules,hurtoneself,withoutpermission,self-protection,stayawayfrom…,becareful,beindanger,keepcalm,call…forhelp,behurt.Dearfriends,Everyonehasonlyonelife,weshouldtreasureourlives.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?Herearesomesuggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,weshouldtryourbesttoprotectourselvesandvalueourlives.That’sall.Thankyou!【寫作思路】本文是根據(jù)材料提示寫作，所以分析所給材料之后，首先要在頭腦中確定文章的整體結(jié)構(gòu)，然后逐步細(xì)化．就像蓋房子一樣，先有整體框架，然后是房間，最后是室內(nèi)裝修．【參考范文】Dearfriends，Everyonehasonlyonelife，weshouldtreasureourlives．Buthowcanweprotectourselves？Herearesomesuggestions．Ontheonehand，weshouldrealizetheimportantceofsafetyandknowwhattodo．First，whenwegoout，wemustfollowtrafficrules．Ifwewalk，wemustusesidewalksandmustn'trunaredlight；Ifweridebikes，wemustridealongtherightsideandshouldn'tcarryothers；Second，weshoulddevelopahealthyeatinghabits．Eatregularmealseverydayandtrynottoeatjunkfoodoreatless．Whenfoodsmellsbad，don'teatit．Third，whenweplaysportsorgames，becarefulnottohurtourselves．Fourth，wemustn'tswiminriverswithoutourparentsorotheradultsaround．Ontheotherhand，weshouldlearntoprotectousrselves，whichisoneofthemostimportantlivingskills．Wemustbecarefulwhenmakingfriendsespeciallyonline．Somepersononlinearenothonest．Theyaredangerous，sowemustkeepawayfromthem．Ifwehappentohavetrouble，weshouldkeepcalmandremembertoaskourparents，teachersorpoliceforhelpsothatwecanprotectourselvsfromdangerorbeinghurt．Inaword，weshouldtryourbesttoprotectourselvesandvalueourlives．That'sall．Thankyou!【名師點(diǎn)評】高分句型一：weshouldrealizetheimportanceofsafetyandknowwhattodo.我們應(yīng)該意識到安全的重要性，并且知道如何去做。短語theimportanceof，whattodo結(jié)構(gòu)；高分句型二：whenwegoout，wemustfollowtrafficrules.當(dāng)我們外出時，必須遵守交通規(guī)則。狀語從句，情態(tài)動詞；高分句型三：weshouldlearntoprotectourselves，whichisoneofthemostimportantlivingskills．我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會保護(hù)自己，這是最重要的生存能力之一。定語從句；高分句型四：wemustkeepawayfromthem．我們必須遠(yuǎn)離他們。keepawayfrom短語高分句型五：weshouldkeepcalmandremembertoaskourparents，teachersorpoliceforhelpsothatwecanprotectourselvesfromdangerorbeinghurt．我們應(yīng)該保持冷靜，并且記住及時向家長，老師或警察求助。以便于保護(hù)自己遠(yuǎn)離危險，避免受傷害。remembertodo結(jié)構(gòu)，ask...forhelp，intime短語；sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句，protect..from...短語。（五）【2019?貴州省安順市】請你根據(jù)上面五個問題的內(nèi)容及你的回答，結(jié)合以下提示，以“HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?”為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。提示：1.謹(jǐn)慎交友。2.不參與打架斗毆。3.面對校園欺凌怎樣自我保護(hù)。參考詞匯：1.self-protection（自我保護(hù)）2.bully(n./v.欺凌）3.personalsafety（人身安全）4.haveviolentbehaviors(打架斗毆）HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作思路】這是一篇話題作文，以“HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?”為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，確定要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容。字?jǐn)?shù)80-100詞。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。【參考范文】HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?Schoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldstaycalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,wewilllearnhowtohaveaself-protectionbecauseourpersonalsafetyisthemostimportant.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan'thaveanyviolentbehavior.Finally,obeyingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.I'mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture,doyouthinkso?（六）【2019?襄陽市】據(jù)了解，為了進(jìn)一步引導(dǎo)中學(xué)生積極參加體育鍛煉，提高身體素質(zhì)，襄陽市教育主管部門正在研究制定有關(guān)“中考”體育考試的改革方案(theplan)，考慮在原有項(xiàng)目的基礎(chǔ)上增加籃球、排球或足球，總分(thescore)也由30分增加至50分。作為一名參加過體育“中考”的學(xué)生，你對這樣的改革持什么樣的態(tài)度。請根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)提示，用英語寫一篇短文表述你的觀點(diǎn)。1．要點(diǎn)提示：(l)觀點(diǎn)明確（要么贊成，要么反對）：(2)理由充分（可針對增加考試的項(xiàng)目和調(diào)整的分值，也可只選其一。限三條理由）；(3)給出建議（圍繞你的觀點(diǎn)提出一條合理化建議）。2．注意事項(xiàng)：(l)字?jǐn)?shù)：90詞左右：(2)行文應(yīng)連貫流暢；(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________