專題20 提綱類作文-2017年中考英語試題分項版解析匯編 帶解析

專題20提綱類作文1.【2017年安徽】書面表達。假如你是李華，你們學校將舉行“弘揚中華傳統(tǒng)文化——戲曲進校園”展演活動，你打算邀請你的美國朋友Mike參加。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。 1.時間：7月1日下午2點； 2.地點：學校操場； 3.內(nèi)容：文化展覽、節(jié)目表演等。 提示詞：戲曲operan.表演performancen. 注意：1.詞數(shù)80～100； 2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關的信息； 4.開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearMike, IknowyouareinterestedinChinesetraditionalculture._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearMike,IknowyouareinterestedinChinesetraditionalculture.Now,Ihaveapieceofgoodnewstosharewithyou.ThereisanactivityaboutChinesetraditionaloperasat2:00p.m.onJuly1.Itwillbeheldontheplaygroundinourschoolandalltheteachersandstudentswillattend.Onthatday,acultureshowandmanywonderfuloperaperformanceswillbeputon.It'sachanceforyoutolearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture.Comeandjoinus!Ithinkwe'llhaveagreattime.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua寫作亮點：這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。文章脈絡清晰，自然流暢，首先通過分享好消息來引出展演及展演時間，進而介紹展演地點及展演內(nèi)容最后提出邀請。同時文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意積累，掌握一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理?？键c：提綱類作文。學！科網(wǎng)2.【2017年山東青島】書面表達。某英語雜志社對部分中學生的周末活動做了問卷調(diào)查（結果如圖），請你寫一篇英語短文參加征文活動。內(nèi)容包括：1.簡要描述調(diào)查結果。2.談一談中學生應該如何度過一個有意義的周末（至少兩條）。要求： 1.詞數(shù)：80-100。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名。didasurveyaboutmiddleschoolstudents’weekendHerearetheresults. 【答案】didasurveyaboutmiddleschoolstudents’weekendHerearetheresults.Wefoundthataboutfourtypercentofthestudentsoftendotheirhomeworkonweekends.Andthenumberofthestudentswhoplaycomputergamesonweekendsisaboutthirty-fivepercentsofthestudents.Onlyfifteenpercentsofthestudentslikereadingandabouttenpercentdootherthings.Asstudents,Itisourdutytostudyhard.butwemustlearntorelaxonweekendssothatwecanlearnbetternexkweekdays.AlthoughitisfuntorelaxbyusingtheInternetbutspendingtoomuchtimeoncomputergamesisnotgoodforstudents.Ithinkthebestwaytorelaxisthroughexercise.Itishealthyforourmindandbody..Ialsothinkweshoulddomorereadingbecauseitcanopenoureyestotheworld.Ifso,Ithinkourweekendswillbemoremeaningful.【解析】考點：提綱類作文。3.【2017年山東德州】書面表達。假如你叫張明，你的外國朋友John發(fā)來郵件，請你介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示及要求給他寫一封80—100詞的回信。FestivalsTimeFoodActivitiesMeanings1TheLanternFestivalInJanuaryorFebruaryyuanxiaoWatchlanternshowsanddragondancesPrayforhealthandhappinessforthewholeyear2TheMid-AutumnFestivalInthemiddleofautumnmooncakesWatchthemoon;TellthestoryofChang’eCelebrateharvest;gettogetherwiththefamily3……………參考詞匯：prayfor祈求；harvest豐收要求：1.描述節(jié)日1和節(jié)日2，并自主選擇節(jié)日3進行介紹，包括節(jié)日名稱、時間、美食、活動方式及意義等；2.語言通順，要點齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學校名稱；4.文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。FromZhangMingToJohnSubjectAnintroductionofChinesefestivalsDearJohn,Gladtoreceiveyouemail.YouaskedmeaboutfestivalsinChina.Letmeintroducesomeimportantonestoyou.Firstofall,IwanttointroducetheLanternFestival.ItcomesinJanuaryorFebruary.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Canyoutellmesomethingaboutthefestivalsinyourcountry?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,ZhangMing【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearJohn,Gladtoreceiveyouremail.YouaskedmeaboutfestivalsinChina.Letmeintroducesomeimportantonestoyou.Firstofall,IwanttointroducetheLanternFestival.ItcomesinJanuaryorFebruary.Onthatday,weeatyuanxiao,gotowatchlanternshowsanddragondancestoprayforhealthandhappinessforthewholeyear.TheMid-AutumnFestivalisinthemiddleofautumn.Itisatimeforthefamilytogettogetherandcelebrateharvest.Atnight,thewholefamilyeatdeliciousmooncakesandtellthestoryofChang'ewhilewatchingthebigbrightmoon.TheSpringFestivalisthemostimportantforusChinese.It'sthebeginningofanewyear.Weusuallyeatdumplings,meatandsomeothernicefood.Towelcomethenewyear,wedosomecleaning,buynewclothes,setofffireworksandvisitourrelatives.Everyone,youngorold,hasahappysmileontheirfaces.Canyoutellmesomethingaboutthefestivalsinyourcountry?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,ZhangMing【解析】試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。根據(jù)提示，可知主要介紹三個節(jié)日：元宵節(jié)、中秋節(jié)、及自己選擇的一個節(jié)日。對于幾日的介紹主要涉及節(jié)日名稱、時間、美食、活動方式及意義幾個方面。由于介紹節(jié)日情況，所以主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，但是要注意第三人稱單數(shù)的運用。在自選節(jié)日介紹時，要選擇自己熟悉的節(jié)日來介紹，這樣語言及內(nèi)容才會豐富?？键c：提綱類作文。4.【2017年山東泰安】寫作。如今，很多城市出現(xiàn)了一種綠色出行方式――共享單車（bike-sharing）,它因環(huán)保、便捷而備受青睞，但同時也引發(fā)了一些問題。請你根據(jù)提示以“Bike-sharing”為題寫一篇英語短文，表達自己的看法和建議。要點提示：AdvantagesBeconvenient,lesspollution,reducethetrafficpressure（減緩交通壓力）Takeexercise…ProblemsThrowaway,damage（毀損）,bestolen…AdviceCivilized（文明的）,followtherules,takegoodcareof…注意：1.短文應包括以上要點，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名及地名；3.詞數(shù)：80-100（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。Bike-sharingToday,asagreenermeansoftransportation,bike-sharingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinmanycities._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Today,asagreenermeansoftransportation,bike-sharingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinmanycities.It’sknownthatithasmanyadvantages.Soit’senjoyedbylotsofpeople.Firstofall,it’sveryconvenientforpeopletogosomewhere.Also,ithelpstoreducethetrafficpressure.Therewillbelesspollutionbecauseofbike-sharing.Besides,bike-sharinghelpspeopletakemoreexercise.Inthisway,it’shelpfultopeople’shealth.However,italsobringssomeproblems.Forexample,somepeoplethrowthemawayafterusingbikes.Evensomepeopledamagethem,andsomebikesarestolen.Inmyopinion,everyoneshouldtrytobecivilizedandfollowtherulesofusingbikes.Aslongaswetakegoodcareofbikes,itwillmakeourlifebetterandbetter,andourenvironmentwillbemorebeautiful.【解析】考點：提綱作文。5.【2017年山東棗莊】書面表達。把書面表達答案寫在答題卡第七節(jié)的橫線上。Writeareviewofthefollowingstoryinabout90words.Thereviewhastoincludethefollowingpoints:1.Thenameofyourreview.2.Theidea(s)ofyourreview.3.Thereason(s)foryouridea(s).4.Somethingyoudecideafteryouconsideralltheinformationinthestory.“Cock-a-doodle-doo!”criedthecock（公雞）.Hestoodinthefarm-yardandcriedaloud,sothatallpeoplemighthearhim.“Cock-a-diidke-doo!HowusefulIam,forIalwaysgetupfirst.AndIcryaboutassoonasthesunrisestomakeallpeopleinthehousewake.”“Cluck!Cluck!Cluck!”criedthehenfromtheyard.Shewaswalkingaboutwiththreeprettylittlechickens,andtryingtofindsomefoodforthem.“Cluck!Cluck!Cluck!I’mmoreusefulthanyou.AlmosteverydayIlayanicefresheggformymaster’s（男主人）breakfast.ThenthinkhowusefulIamtomymistress（女主人）.Howmanynicethingsdoesshemakewithmyeggsforthechildren?Shecouldnotgetonwellwithouteggs.”【答案】TheUseoftheCockandthehenThecockisuseful.Healwaysgetsupfirstandcries,“Cock-a-diidke-doo!”towakeallpeopleinthehouseup.Thehenisusefultoo.Ontheonehand,shetriestofindfoodforprettylittlechickens;ontheotherhand,shelaysanicefresheggforhermaster’sbreakfast.Hermistressmakesmanythingswithhereggsforthechildren.Shecouldgetonwellwitheggs.Inaword,boththecockandthehenareuseful.Itiswrongofthemtoseetheirownuseonlyinsteadofseeingeachother’suse.【解析】試題分析：短文主要考查分析能力及寫作整理信息的能力，用自己的語言對于公雞和母雞的行為做出評價，并要寫出自己這樣評價的理由。要注意所寫的句子應該符合英語語法，不要遺漏要點。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：getup起床；wakesbup把某人叫醒；trytodosth努力做某事；findfood找到食物；itis+形容詞+介詞(of/for)+todosth做某事是怎樣的；用了一些過渡句或短語，如：Ontheonehand,ontheotherhand，Inaword等，使句子上下文過度自然?？键c：提綱作文。6.【2017年浙江金華】書面表達。假如你應邀參加一個國際讀書會，并將分享自己讀過的一本好書。請根據(jù)下列表格中的要點，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你要分享的書。Keypoints（要點）Wordsandexpressionsforreference（參考詞匯）WhatthenameisTheOldManandtheSea…WhowroteitErnestHemingway,America…WhatitisaboutFisherman,Fightagainstfishandnature…WhyIlikeitMeaningful,nevergiveup,Well-knownsentence:“Manisnotmadefordefeat（失?。?”,…Interesting,helpful,…Well-knownsentence:…注意：（1）可選擇使用所給的書名及內(nèi)容，也可另選書籍；（2）短文內(nèi)容可適當增加；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；（4）詞數(shù)：80~100；（5）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。短文首句：ThebookI’dliketosharewithyouisTheOldManandtheSea.【答案】ThebookI’dliketosharewithyouisTheOldandtheSea,writtenbyanAmericanwriterErnestHemingway.Thisbooktellsaboutafishermanwhoisluckyenoughtocatchahugefishatsea,butfindsithardtotakeithome.Onthewayback,hehastofightagainstthefish,andtheseaaswell.WhatIlikemostaboutthebookisthatthefishermannevergivesupwhenmeetingwithdifficulties.Istillrememberthewell-knownfromthebook:Manisnotmadefordefeat.Thistellsusthatnothingseemsterribleaslongaswehaveastrongwillandabraveheart.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給出材料作文。要求介紹自己讀過的“老人與?！边@本書。主要從書名，作者，內(nèi)容，喜歡書的原因（即從中學到了什么）幾個方面敘述。適當?shù)慕榻B文中的名句。在運用語言時，不要拘泥于一種形式，注意一個意思可以有多種表達形式。遇到想不起來的詞或句型時，可以找同義詞、近義詞或同義句來代替，這樣可以節(jié)省時間。在寫作時，盡量用自己有把握的方法來表達，用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞句，文章要以敘述清楚為主，避免大量詞句堆積以至冗長，盡量少用沒有十分把握的“大詞”或比較復雜的語法結構和句型。寫作亮點：這篇短文結構合理，行文流暢，內(nèi)容豐富，其中長句，復合句的運用非常熟練，為文章添彩。如：定語從句Thisbooktellsaboutafishermanwhoisluckyenoughtocatchahugefishatsea,；表語從句WhatIlikemostaboutthebookisthatthefishermannevergivesupwhenmeetingwithdifficulties.；賓語從句Istillrememberthewell-knownfromthebook:Manisnotmadefordefeat.等?？键c：提綱作文。7.【2017年浙江麗水】假設你是LiMing,你的筆友Lisa想了解在畢業(yè)之際,你將為母校做些什么有意義的事.從下表所列的五項內(nèi)容中,至少選擇兩項,用英語給Lisa寫一封電子郵件.DosomethingforMySchoolVolunteertodo(cleanuptheschool,…)Givesomethingaway(suchasbooks,…)Givesuggestions(organizemoreactivities,…)Maketheschoolmorebeautiful(planttrees,…)Writetoyoungerschoolmates(howtousetime,…)…注意：(1)文中必須包括所選內(nèi)容括號內(nèi)的提示,并適當發(fā)揮；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名等相關信息；(3)詞數(shù)：80--100；(4)短文開頭供選擇使用.不計入總詞數(shù).HelloLisa,Howisitgoing?It’stimeformetoleaveschool.YouaskmewhatIcandoformyschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiMing【答案】HelloLisa,Howisitgoing?It’stimeformetoleaveschool.YouaskmewhatIcandoformyschool.Herearemyplansthatlwouldliketosharewithyou.Firstofall,Iwillvolunteertodosomecleaningwithmyclassmates,suchascleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloors.Tokeepourschoolclean,wewillaskourschoolmatesnottolitteratschool.Also,Iwillgiveawaymyfavoritebookstotheschoollibrarysothatouryoungerschoolmatescanreadmoregoodbooks.AndIwillcallonmoreschoolmatestodoso.It’sreallyhardformetosaygoodbye.Iwishmyschooltohaveabetterfuture.(98words)LiMingPossibleversion2HelloLisa,Howisitgoing?It’stimeformetoleaveschool.YouaskmewhatIcandoformyschool.HerearemyplansI'dliketosharewithyou.Firstofall,Iplantowritealettertotheyoungerschoolmates,tellingthemtovaluethepeoplearoundandgetalongwellwiththem.Andlwillsharemysuccessandfailureinstudy,too.Also,Iwillgivesomesuggestionsonhowtomakeourschoolbetter.Moretreesandflowersmustbeplanted.Moreafter-classactivitiesshouldbeorganizedsothatourschoolmatescanjoininthemtorelax.Ihopeallofouryoungerschoolmatescanliveandstudyhappilyinourschool.(98words)LiMing【解析】寫作亮點：短文思路清晰，邏輯性強。句式變化多樣，連詞使用恰當。如：Tokeepourschoolclean,wewillaskourschoolmatesnottolitteratschool.，Iwillgiveawaymyfavoritebookstotheschoollibrarysothatouryoungerschoolmatescanreadmoregoodbooks.，Moretreesandflowersmustbeplanted.Moreafter-classactivitiesshouldbeorganizedsothatourschoolmatescanjoininthemtorelax.IFirstofall,，Also,等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點：提綱作文。8.【2017年浙江紹興】書面表達。76.某英語教育網(wǎng)站正在開展主題為“Howcanateenagerhaveasuccessfullife?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學（結果見下表）。請據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點。同學主要觀點你的觀點努力學習尊重父母服務社會計劃未來……（至少兩條）注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié)；（2）你的觀點至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：尊重respect短文首句：Ihaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowateenagercanhaveasuccessfullife.【答案】Ihaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowateenagercanhaveasuccessfullife.Moststudentsbelieveit’snecessarytostudyhard.Afterall,studyplaysakeyroleintheirlife.Theyalsoagreetheyshouldrespecttheirparents,wholookafterthemeveryday.Besides,they’rereadytoservethesocietyandintheiropinionit’sreallymeaningful.What’smore,theythinkeachteenagerissupposedtomakeagoodplanforfuture.Frommypointofview,weneedtomakesomegoodfriendssothatwecanlearnfromeachother.Also,wemustbeactiveandexercisemoretokeephealthybecauseit’simportanttoasuccessfullife.【解析】試題分析：英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“Howcanateenagerhaveasuccessfullife?”的討論，采訪了一些同學參與討論，寫出他們的觀點及自己的觀點。因為是敘述同學的現(xiàn)在的觀點，所以句子應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，敘述同學的觀點用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點用第一人稱。注意不要遺漏要點，所寫的句子應該符合英語語法，不能是漢語式的句子，要使用一些高級詞匯及句式。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：doasurveyaboutsth關于某事做調(diào)查；respecttheirparents,尊敬他們的父母；lookafter照顧；makeagoodplanforsth為某事做一個好的計劃；makesomegoodfriends交一些好朋友；keephealthy保持健康。用了賓語從句，如：Moststudentsbelieveit’snecessarytostudyhard.What’smore,theythinkeachteenagerissupposedtomakeagoodplanforfuture.用了because引導的原因狀語從句，如：Also,wemustbeactiveandexercisemoretokeephealthybecauseit’simportanttoasuccessfullife.增加了文章的亮點，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子?？键c：提綱作文。9.【2017年四川南充】書面表達。假如你是李華,你的筆友Frank是一名美國中學生,打算今年暑假來南充旅游。請你根據(jù)以下思維導圖,用英語寫一封email給他介紹一下南充。要求:1.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2.必須包含思維導圖所給的提示，并做適當發(fā)揮；3.行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名，校名或地名（思維導圖中提及的除外）；4.詞數(shù)：80-100（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。DearFrank,I'mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoNanchongthissummervacation.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopetoseeyou!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearFrank,I’mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoNanchongthissummervacation.Nanchongisagreatcitywithalonghistory.YoucanwatchNorthSichuanPuppetryandknowaboutChenShou,awell－knownhistorian.HewroteabookcalledRecordsoftheThreeKingdoms.TherearemanyplacesofinterestinNanchong.YoucanvisitLangzhongAncientCity.Thebuildingsaresoamazing.AndyoucanenjoythefantasticJialingRiverandthewonderfulMountLingyun.Ifyouwanttorelaxyourself,makesuretotryZhangfeiBeef,ClearNoodlesinChiliSauceandotherdeliciousfood.Besides,youcanhavefunandbuysomethingspecialforyourfamilyandfriendsatWangfujingMall.Hopetoseeyou!Yours,LiHua【解析】考點：提綱作文。10.【2017年貴州安順】書面表達（本大題共20分，分為兩個部分，A部分5分，B部分15分）安順市今年能否創(chuàng)建“全國文明城市”成功，不僅要靠市委市政府的全力推進和各單位的扎實工作，更要靠每一位安順市民從自身做起，一言一語現(xiàn)內(nèi)涵，一舉一止顯文明。作為中學生的你，也有義務為我市爭創(chuàng)“全國文明城市”貢獻一份力量。請根據(jù)要求，完成A、B兩項寫作任務。A．請你根據(jù)自己的想法，用完整的英語句子或簡略的英語答語回答下面五個問題。1.IsAnshunamorebeautifulcitythanbefore?2.DoyouthinkitisnecessaryforAnshuntobeacivilized(文明的)city?3.Areyouhappywiththestrive?4.WhatshouldyoudotomakeAnshunbecomeagreencity?5.Howcanyoubecomeacivilizedmiddleschoolstudent?B．請你根據(jù)上面五個問題的內(nèi)容及你的同答，以“WhatshouldIdoforthestrive?(我該為創(chuàng)建做什么？)”為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。參考詞匯：1．創(chuàng)建(n.)strive2．申報bidfor3．稱號(n．)title4．全國文明城市NationallyCivilizedCity5．為……作貢獻contributetoWhatShouldIDoFortheStrive?【答案】WhatShouldIDoFortheStrive？Asweknow，Anshuncityisbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful．Actually，AnshunisbiddingforthetitleofNationallyCivilizedCity，whichisamustforourcitytobecomegreenandfamousinChina．Asamiddleschoolstudent，Iamterriblyhappyforthat，becauseIwilldowhatIcantohelpthestrive.Whatshouldwedothen？Firstly，wecannotlittereverywhereandweshouldkeepthestreetclean．Secondly，weshouldfollowthetrafficrulesalltimestokeepsafe．Thirdly，weshouldtreateachotherpolitelyandbehaveinacivilizedway．Moreimportantly，wemustplantmoretrees，flowersandplantstomakethecitygreener．Tosumup，itiseveryone'sdutytocontributetothestriveandstruggleforthehonorof"NationallyCivilizedCity"，isn'tit？【解析】 試題分析：本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：Asamiddleschoolstudent，Iamterriblyhappyforthat，becauseIwilldowhatIcantohelpthestrive．作為一名中學生，我非常高興，因為我會盡我所能去幫助創(chuàng)建．這是because引導的原因狀語從句，因為…，同時這個句子里又有一個賓語從句whatIcantohelpthestrive．高分句型二itiseveryone'sdutytocontributetothestriveandstruggleforthehonorof"NationallyCivilizedCity"，isn'tit？爭取創(chuàng)建"全國文明城市"并且為之奮斗是每個人的責任，不是嗎？這是一個反意疑問句，前半句是肯定句，后半句是否定句?？键c：提綱作文。11.【2017海南】梁玲同學是你校初三（1）班的學生。她家境貧寒，但她勇于面對困難、主動承擔家根據(jù)下面的采訪筆記寫一篇關于她的報道。要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2.必須包含所給提示，并做適當發(fā)揮；3.行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4.詞數(shù)80左右。（短文的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）LiangLing,a14-year-oldgirl,isastudentinClass1,Grade9.Shecomesfrom…____________________________________________________________________________________Sheisgreat.Let’swishherabetterfuture.【答案】LiangLing，a14-year-oldgirl，isastudentinClass1，Grade9．Shecomesfromapoorfamily．Sinceshewasalittlegirl，shehascaredforherfamily．EverydayLiangLinghelpswiththecooking，cleaningandwashing．Iaskedherwhethershewastiredofdoingsomuchhousework．"Notreally．"Shesmiled．"I'vegotusedtoit．"Thoughsheisbusy，shestudieshardandgetsgoodgrades．What'smore，sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers．Everyonelikesherbecauseofherkindness．Inoureyes，shealwaysfacesdifficultiesbravely．Nomatterhowhardthelifeis，shenevergivesup．

Sheisgreat．Let'swishherabetterfuture．【解析】高分句型二

Thoughsheisbusy，shestudieshardandgetsgoodgrades．雖然她很忙，但她努力學習并取得好成績．注意though，雖然，后面不能和but連用．12.【2017年黑龍江哈爾濱】假如你是北京的李麗，下周你在哈爾濱讀中學的表妹來北京旅游．請根據(jù)以下提示給她寫一封信，并告訴她在北京旅游期間做一名文明的（well﹣mannered）中學生．寫作要點：1、歡迎她來北京．2、介紹北京的情況．（1）下周天氣：白天最高溫度超過330C；（2）交通方式：最好乘坐地鐵；（3）必去的名勝：長城．3、對她在北京旅游期間如何做一名文明的中學生提出具體建議．寫作要求：1、不得使用真實的姓名和學校名．2、可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫．3、字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰．4、至少80詞．DearLiLan，Howareyoudoing？Bestwishes!YoursLiLi．【答案】DearLiLan，Howareyoudoing？WelcometoBeijing．BeijingislocatedintheeastofChinaandattractsmoreandmorepeopleathomeandabroadtovisit，studyandevenlivedthereforalongtime．Thereasonwhybeijingissopopularisthatitisneitherhotinsummernorcoldinwinter．Notonlyisitthecapitalofchina，butalsoitisrecognizedasthepolitical，educational，andculturecenter．Ifyouwanttohaveanenjoyablejourney，Isuggestyouclimbthegreatwall．BecausethefamoussayinginChinaisthatthemanwhodoesnotreachthegreatwallisnotatrueman．Theweatherwillbehotnextweekendsandthehighesttemperatureisabove30degrees．Soyoushouldwearcoolclothes．Thetransportationisveryconvenientbecausethesubwaynearlycoversthewholecity．Soyouhadbettertakethesubwaytogoout．Beijingisacivilizedcityandyoushouldbeacivilizedstudent．ZunlaoaiyouisthetraditionalvirtueoftheChinesenation．Ifyousitnexttotheoldorthesick，pleasetaketheinitiativeseat．Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.Bestwishes!Yours,LiLi【解析】【高分句型二】NotonlyisitthecapitalofChina，butalsoitisrecognizedasthepolitical，educational，andculturecenter．它不僅是中國的首都，而且是政治、教育和文化中心．Notonly…butalso…不僅…而且，notonly放句首，句子要倒裝．考點：提綱作文。13.【2017年黑龍江齊齊哈爾】(A)Writeapassageaccordingtotheinformationgiven.(30-50words)尊老敬老是中華傳統(tǒng)美德，你是老年之家(theoldpeople'shome)的負責人王強，在假期即將到來之際，你想要招聘與你志同道合，愿為公益事業(yè)服務的志愿者。請以此為話題擬一則招聘廣告。(30-50詞之間)提示：1．要求有愛心，善溝通…，．2．請有意者給你打電話686-7729。VolunteersWanted____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(B)Writeapassageaccordingtothetitlegiven.(80-100words)生活中、學習中，父母的關愛、老師的付出，朋友的幫助成就了今天的你，讓你走；境走向成功。此時此刻你一定有很多感謝的話要說。根據(jù)提示用英文寫一篇短文。提示：1．感謝對象：父母，老師，朋友…．．（可選擇一個對象或多個對象來寫）。2．感謝的原因：生活方面，學習方面…，．3．美好祝福。要求：(1)詞數(shù)：80-100詞之間。(2)字跡工整，語言流暢，表達準確，邏輯清晰。(3)文章內(nèi)容可適當發(fā)揮。Thanks____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A篇VolunteersWantedWeneedvolunteersintheoldpeople'shome．Doyouwanttohelptheoldpeople？Areyougoodwiththeold？Canyousing？Canyoudance？Canyouplaychesswiththeold？Doyouknowmanystories？Ifyouwanttojoinus，pleasecallWangQiangat686﹣7729.B篇ThanksInmylife，Igetlotsofhelpandlovefrommanypeople．NowIwanttoexpressmythankstothem．First，Iwanttothankmyparents．Theyprovideahappylifeforme．Theydomuchformeandgivemesomuchlove．Second，Iwanttothankmyteachers．Theyarealwaysbusydoingtheirwork．WhenIhaveproblemswithmystudy，theyaresopatientandhelpful．Third，Iwanttothankmyclassmates．Theymakemefeellesslonely．Iwillrememberthedayswhenweplayandstudytogether．Thankyou，myparents，myteacherandmyclassmates．Ihopeyouareingoodhealthandhaveabetterfuture．【解析】試題分析：以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達清楚的要點和細節(jié)。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：【高分句型一】①WhenI②haveproblemswithmystudy，theyaresopatientandhelpful．①when引導的時間狀語從句．②haveproblemswith…在某方面有困難【高分句型二】Iwillrememberthedayswhenweplayandstudytogether．weplayandstudytogether是定語從句，修飾先行詞thedays，關系詞when作為從句狀語．考點：提綱作文。14.【2017甘肅省白銀市中考】書面表達（滿分15分）今天是西方的“父親節(jié)”，請根據(jù)以下的提示以MyBestDad為題寫一篇短文介紹自己的父親。要求：1.文中需包含提示中提到的至少4條內(nèi)容：2.可根據(jù)圖片發(fā)揮想象、適量拓展；3.句子及篇章結構準確、連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4.詞數(shù)：80-100詞左右；5.文中不得出現(xiàn)父親的真實姓名、工作單位及考生的任何個人相關倍息?！敬鸢浮縈yBestDadMydadisthebestmanIknow．Heis45yearsold．Heissogoodatmakingmywholefamilyhappy．Whenhecomeshome，helikestotellussomethinginterestinghe'sheardduringtheday．Andhispocketsarefullofchocolatesthatalwaysmakemehappy．Helikeseatingnoodlesbest．Myfavoritememoryofmydadisthathealwayswantstokeepmefrommakingmistakesbuthetriestoletmefindmyownway，eventhoughhisheartbreaksinsilencewhenIgethurt．Thisismybestdad．IlovehimandI'msoproudofhim．【解析】 試題分析：本文是介紹爸爸的情況，根據(jù)提示可知，這里敘述的是爸爸通常做的事情，所以應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，句子的主語用第三人稱單數(shù)形式，所以應該注意主謂一致，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，不要遺漏圖畫的信息。寫作亮點：本文用了一些短語和句式，如：begoodat擅長；tellsbsth告訴某人某事；befullof充滿；beproudof以……為自豪。用了when，eventhough引導的從句，增加了文章的亮點?？键c：提綱類作文。15.【2017廣東省深圳市中考】假設你是李華，三年的初中生活即將過去，你的外籍同學Sam在英語學習上幫助了你，在即將畢業(yè)之際，請你在給Sam的畢業(yè)紀念冊上用英語寫一段留言，要求包括以下內(nèi)容要點：1．你在學習上曾遇到的困難；2．Sam對你的幫助，建議及措施：（1）多聽多讀；（2）多看英語電影；多唱英文歌曲；（3）…（自由發(fā)揮；不少于一項內(nèi)容）3．你的收獲及對Sam的感謝和祝福．DearSam，Howtimeflies!It'stimeforustosaygoodbye．Yourssincerely，LiHua．【答案】DearSam，Howtimeflies!It'stimeforustosaygoodbye!YouhaveofferedmesomuchhelpinmyEnglishthatIthinkwordstoshowthanksarefarfromenough．Istillrememberthreeyearsago，IhaddifficultiesinlearningEnglish．Itwasdifficultformetomemorizesomanywordsandunderstandwhatpeopleweresaying．MyspokenEnglishandwrittenEnglishwerepoortoo．However，I'msoluckythatImetyou，akind﹣hearted，smartandpatientboy．Firstly，youtaughtmetolistenmoreandreadmore．Anditreallyhelpedmealot．Besides，yousuggestedthatIshouldwatchEnglishmoviesandsingclassicEnglishsongs．Inaddition，youtoldmetoformthehabitofreadingaloudinthemorningandreadingnovelsbeforegoingtobed．Asaresult，Ifinallymadegreatprogress．AndIwishyouhappyandhealthy．Yourssincerely，LiHua．【解析】 試題分析：確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)．要求介紹．同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：It'stimeforsbtodosth到了做某事的時間了；havedifficultiesindoingsth做某事有困難；tellsbtodosth告訴某人做某事；teachsbtodosth教某人去做某事；用了that引導的賓語從句，用了Besides，F(xiàn)irstly，Inaddition，Asaresult連接詞，使短文銜接自然?？键c：提綱類作文。16.【2017湖北省鄂州市中考】為響應我市“創(chuàng)建國家衛(wèi)生城市”的號召，6月3日，5000多名市民以綠色出行的方式參與了“生態(tài)鄂州——環(huán)洋瀾湖健步走”活動。請以“共建綠色城市”為主題，根據(jù)以下文字提示，并適當發(fā)表自己的觀點，寫一篇英語短文。主題Let’sbuildagreencitytogether具體做法方式益處1.騎車、徒步出行避免交通擁堵，減少空氣污染2.不亂扔垃圾，不隨地吐痰讓城市變得干凈舒適3.植樹造林美化城市，保護環(huán)境你的建議聯(lián)系自己的生活實際提出幾條具體的合理的建議。（至少2條）要求：1.80－100詞（開頭的首句已給出，不計算在總詞數(shù)內(nèi)）。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。參考詞匯：吐痰spit垃圾箱dustbin交通擁堵trafficjams環(huán)境environmentAsamiddleschoolstudentofEzhou,it’sourdutytohelpbuildagreencity._________________________________________________________