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下定決心調(diào)整自己的學(xué)習(xí)、生活優(yōu)先級事務(wù)的男孩成長廣東省佛山市S6高質(zhì)量發(fā)展聯(lián)盟2024-2025學(xué)年上學(xué)期高三聯(lián)考英語試卷第二節(jié)原文分析讀后續(xù)寫原文審讀多篇范文呈現(xiàn)解題思路分析讀后續(xù)寫可積累文本2、

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故事山模式：

銜接點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；銜接點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；銜接點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；銜接點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。推薦的動作、心理、環(huán)境描寫例句：動作描寫1.Shehesitatedforamoment,thenknockedsoftlyonthedoor.2.Maya’sfingerstrembledslightlyassheopenedherlunchbox.3.Tinaextendedherhandwithawarmsmile,offeringapieceofhersandwich.心理描寫1.AwaveofregretwashedoverMayaassherecalledherwordstoTina.2.Shefeltaflickerofhopewhenshenoticedthewomanstandingbesideher.3.Lonelinessgnawedatherheart,butsheresolvedtofacethedaywithcourage.環(huán)境描寫1.Theofficebuzzedwithfaintchatter,butMayafeltlikeanoutsiderinadistantworld.2.Theclassroomwasfilledwiththearomaofsnacksandthechatterofchildren.3.Sunlightstreamedthroughthelargewindows,castinglongshadowsonthetiledfloor.1.語法點分析

動名詞作介詞賓語

>示例：Shewasafraidthattalkingaboutheroriginaldreamwouldupsetthetwoofus.

解釋：在“beafraidthat”結(jié)構(gòu)中，talking作為動名詞形式，作“about”的賓語，表示“談?wù)搲粝搿边@個行為。Heapologizedfornottellingthetruth.Theyinsistedonstayinguntilthegamewasover.

分詞短語作狀語

>示例：Livinginasmallcity,Itookseveraloddjobs...

解釋：“Livinginasmallcity”是現(xiàn)在分詞短語，表示原因狀語，相當于“SinceIliveinasmallcity”。Havingfinishedhishomework,hewentouttoplay.Notknowingwhattosay,sheremainedsilent.1.非謂語動詞文章中頻繁使用非謂語動詞來簡化句子結(jié)構(gòu)或表示原因、方式等。非謂語動詞包括分詞、動名詞和不定式，能夠為句子增添連貫性和簡潔感。例句：Livinginasmallcity,Itookseveraloddjobs.

解析：“Livinginasmallcity”為現(xiàn)在分詞短語，作原因狀語，相當于“SinceIlivedinasmallcity”。例句：Determinedtodoeverythinginmypowertosupporther,Itookseveraloddjobs.

解析：Determinedtodoeverythinginmypower中的“determined”為過去分詞短語，表示原因狀語。

高考得分要求例句：

-Feelingtired,shedecidedtotakearestbeforecontinuingherwork.-Encouragedbyhisfriends,hedecidedtopursuehisdream.2.強調(diào)句強烈表達主觀情感的句子采用了強調(diào)句結(jié)構(gòu)，突出“是……做了某事”的含義。例句：ItwasMarywhogotthenewsandracedhere.

解析：這是典型的強調(diào)句結(jié)構(gòu)“itis/was...who/that...”，強調(diào)了“Mary”這個人做的動作“gotthenewsandracedhere”。例句：ItwasJane’sdreamthatkepthergoing,evenwhenthingsgottough.

解析：Itwas...that...強調(diào)句結(jié)構(gòu)，突出“Jane’sdream”在文中的重要性。

高考得分要求例句：

-Itwastheteacherwhoencouragedmetoworkharder.-Itwasthemusicthatliftedherspiritsindifficulttimes.3.定語從句文章多處使用定語從句，幫助補充說明名詞，增加句子信息量，使表達更加生動。例句：ItwasMarywhogotthenewsandracedhere.

解析：該從句為“Mary”作補充說明，詳細描述了Mary的行為，是一個非限制性定語從句。例句：Janeeventuallyacceptedthefactthatshewouldhavetogetaroundinawheelchair.

解析：“thatshewouldhavetogetaroundinawheelchair”為定語從句，修飾先行詞“fact”。

高考得分要求例句：

-HeistheonewhohelpedmewhenIneededitthemost.-Thebookthatyourecommendedwasreallyinteresting.4.比喻修辭文章中使用了比喻修辭手法，以生動的比喻表達情感。例句：Ifrozewithshock,feelingasifIhadbeenthrownintoadarkworld.

解析：“asifIhadbeenthrownintoadarkworld”中比喻了突發(fā)事故帶來的無助與悲傷，傳達了母親內(nèi)心的絕望。

高考得分要求例句：

-Thenewshithimlikeathunderbolt,leavinghimspeechless.-Hersmilewaslikesunshine,brighteningeveryone’sday.

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原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：重點單詞短語-becrazyabout-近義詞：beenthusiasticabout,beobsessedwith-反義詞：beindifferentto,dislike-例句：

Shewascrazyaboutpainting,spendinghoursonherartworkeveryday.Markisnotcrazyabouthorrormovies;hepreferscomedies.-toone’sheart’scontent-近義詞：asmuchasonewants,tothefullest-反義詞：restrictedly,tosomeextent-例句：

Duringtheholiday,thekidscouldplaytotheirheart’scontent.Thebuffetallowedgueststoeattotheirheart’scontent.原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：-bychance-近義詞：byaccident,accidentally-反義詞：onpurpose,intentionally-例句：

Shemetheroldfriendbychanceatthebookstore.Bychance,hefoundavaluablepaintinghiddenintheattic.-recoverone’sconsciousness-近義詞：regainconsciousness,wakeup-反義詞：loseconsciousness,passout-例句：

Thepatientslowlyrecoveredhisconsciousnessafterthesurgery.Helostconsciousnessduetothehighfever.原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：-standby-近義詞：support,backup-反義詞：abandon,leave-例句：

Hisfriendsstoodbyhimduringthedifficulttimes.Thecommunitypromisedtostandbythefamilyaftertheirloss.原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：1.Hesitant-近義詞:uncertain,doubtful,reluctant-反義詞:decisive,certain,confident-聯(lián)想詞:hesitation,pause,uncertainty,second-guess-例句:Shewashesitantaboutattendingtheeventalone.Despitefeelinghesitant,heagreedtogivethespeech.2.Reassure-近義詞:comfort,console,encourage-反義詞:discourage,unsettle,alarm-聯(lián)想詞:assurance,comfort,support,calm-例句:Theteacherreassuredherstudentsthattheyhaddonewellontheexam.Hetriedtoreassurehisfriendafterthedifficultinterview.原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：3.Determination-近義詞:resolve,perseverance,willpower-反義詞:indecision,doubt,hesitation-聯(lián)想詞:courage,ambition,drive,resilience-例句:Herdeterminationtosucceedwasclearinheractions.Ittakesdeterminationtoovercomesuchchallenges.4.Captivated-近義詞:fascinated,enchanted,absorbed-反義詞:indifferent,uninterested,bored-聯(lián)想詞:attention,interest,intrigue,engagement-例句:Theaudiencewascaptivatedbythespeaker’swords.Childrenareoftencaptivatedbystoriesofadventure.原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：5.Resilience-近義詞:strength,endurance,persistence-反義詞:weakness,fragility,vulnerability-聯(lián)想詞:recovery,adaptability,toughness,flexibility-例句:Herresilienceinthefaceofhardshipinspiredeveryone.Ittakesresiliencetobouncebackafterasetback.6.Applause-近義詞:clapping,ovation,cheers-反義詞:silence,criticism,disapproval-聯(lián)想詞:recognition,praise,acknowledgment,appreciation-例句:Theartistreceivedloudapplauseforherstunningperformance.Theaudienceeruptedinapplauseaftertheshow.原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：7.Erupt-近義詞:explode,burst,breakout-反義詞:calm,subside,quietdown-聯(lián)想詞:outburst,reaction,excitement,spontaneous-例句:Theroomeruptedinlaughterafterthecomedian’sjoke.Thestadiumeruptedincheersasthewinninggoalwasscored.8.Inspiration-近義詞:encouragement,motivation,influence-反義詞:discouragement,demotivation-聯(lián)想詞:creativity,idea,stimulus,spark-例句:Herstoryservesasaninspirationtoothersfacingdifficulties.Thespeechwasagreatsourceofinspirationforyoungartists.原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：1.Charity(慈善)-近義詞:philanthropy,generosity,goodwill-反義詞:selfishness,greed,meanness-聯(lián)想詞:donation,kindness,compassion,fundraiser-例句:-Thecharityeventraisedfundstosupportlocalschools.-Herdonationtocharityreflectedhergenerousnature.2.Hesitation(猶豫)-近義詞:reluctance,uncertainty,pause-反義詞:confidence,certainty,decisiveness-聯(lián)想詞:doubt,delay,secondthoughts,reservation-例句:-Herhesitationwasclearassheconsideredthebigdecision.-Afteramomentofhesitation,heagreedtotheplan.原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：3.Reclaim(重新獲得)-近義詞:regain,recover,retrieve-反義詞:lose,abandon,surrender-聯(lián)想詞:takeback,restore,retrieve,reassert-例句:-Heworkedhardtoreclaimhisreputationafterthescandal.-Shereclaimedherconfidenceaftercompletingtheproject.4.Radiant(容光煥發(fā)的)-近義詞:glowing,beaming,luminous-反義詞:dull,gloomy,lackluster-聯(lián)想詞:bright,shining,brilliant,sparkling-例句:-Shelookedradiantinherweddingdress.-Hisradiantsmilebrighteneduptheroom原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：5.Captivating(迷人的)-近義詞:enchanting,fascinating,mesmerizing-反義詞:boring,unappealing,repellent-聯(lián)想詞:charm,allure,attractiveness,intrigue-例句:-Thebook’scaptivatingstorykeptmereadingallnight.-Hercaptivatingperformancewonovertheaudience.6.Resilience(堅韌)-近義詞:strength,toughness,endurance-反義詞:weakness,fragility,vulnerability-聯(lián)想詞:recovery,persistence,adaptability,bounce-back-例句:-Herresiliencehelpedherovercomenumerousobstacles.-Thecommunityshowedresilienceinthefaceofdisaster.原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：7.Thunderous(雷鳴般的)-近義詞:loud,booming,roaring-反義詞:soft,quiet,faint-聯(lián)想詞:applause,ovation,intense,powerful-例句:-Thestadiumeruptedinthunderousapplause.-Thespeakerreceivedthunderouscheersfromthecrowd.8.Flicker(閃爍)-近義詞:glimmer,sparkle,twinkle-反義詞:steady,constant,shinecontinuously-聯(lián)想詞:flash,blink,wavering,momentary-例句:-Thecandlelightflickeredinthebreeze.-Hopeflickeredinhereyesasshelistenedtothenews.原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：5.Captivating(迷人的)-近義詞:enchanting,fascinating,mesmerizing-反義詞:boring,unappealing,repellent-聯(lián)想詞:charm,allure,attractiveness,intrigue-例句:-Thebook’scaptivatingstorykeptmereadingallnight.-Hercaptivatingperformancewonovertheaudience.6.Resilience(堅韌)-近義詞:strength,toughness,endurance-反義詞:weakness,fragility,vulnerability-聯(lián)想詞:recovery,persistence,adaptability,bounce-back-例句:-Herresiliencehelpedherovercomenumerousobstacles.-Thecommunityshowedresilienceinthefaceofdisaster.原文和范文中詞匯和可積累部分：9.Erupt(爆發(fā))-近義詞:explode,burst,breakout-反義詞:subside,calm,quietdown-聯(lián)想詞:reaction,outburst,spontaneous,intense-例句:-Thecrowderuptedincheerswhenthewinnerwasannounced.-Angere