Unit10Ivehadthisbikeforthreeyears單元主題寫作講義-2024-2025學(xué)年人教版八年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語(yǔ)

Unit10I’vehadthisbikeforthreeyears.單元主題寫作一、寫作思路本單元的寫作項(xiàng)目是“個(gè)人物品或周圍環(huán)境”,屬于“人與社會(huì)”主題范疇,涉及子主題“家鄉(xiāng)和社會(huì)的變遷;和諧家庭或社區(qū)生活”等。常見(jiàn)的寫作任務(wù)是描述物品承載的記憶、講述周圍事物的變化以及對(duì)未來(lái)的展望等。二、常用句型1）開(kāi)頭句1.Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodisatoybear.2.Pleaseallowmetointroducemybeautifulhometowntoyou.3.IhavealotoftoysandIlikethetoyrabbitbestofall.2）中間句1.Thetoybearhasleftmesomanysweetmemories.2.It’sspecialtomebecauseIusedtoplaywithitalmosteveryday.3）結(jié)尾句1.Wecouldnotonlymakefulluseofoldthings,butalsomakesomemoneyinthisway.2.Ibelieveyouwillfallinlovewithmycityandhaveawonderfultime.4）句子升格1.Idon’twanttopartwiththesetoys.I’mgettingolder.(升格為含though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的句子)→Idon’twanttopartwiththesetoysthoughI’mgettingolder.2.I’llkeepitforever.Itcanremindmeofmygrandma.(升格為動(dòng)詞不定式表目的的句子)→I’llkeepitforevertoremindmeofmygrandma.三、寫作示例有人說(shuō),那些跟隨自己多年的舊物件,記述了停留的過(guò)往,收藏著經(jīng)年的故事,訴說(shuō)著時(shí)間的滄桑。有時(shí)候,打開(kāi)整理箱就像打開(kāi)了記憶的盒子,美好、感動(dòng)、驚喜……各種滋味涌上心頭。假如你是李華,最近你們學(xué)校將要舉行一次舊雜物義賣(jumblesale)活動(dòng)來(lái)籌集資金幫助貧困山區(qū)的小伙伴,你會(huì)捐出什么樣的物件呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文。提示:1.Whatistheobject(物件)?2.Whendidyougetit?3.Howlonghaveyouhadit?4.Isitspecial?What’sthestoryaboutit?…要求:1.文章需包含所提示的內(nèi)容?？蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使行文流暢,內(nèi)容完整;2.80詞左右,開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。I’mreallyexcitedabouttheingjumblesaleinourschool.I’mgoingtotake_____________tothejumblesale.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________謀篇布局1.審題立意①題材:材料作文②人稱:第一人稱③時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)2.寫作提綱Onemeaningfulthing物品名稱I

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books.3,必背范文基礎(chǔ)篇I’mreallyexcitedabouttheingjumblesaleinourschool.I’mgoingtotakeabooktothejumblesale.Ihaveanoldbook,butit’sstillgood.Thatistosay,thereisnopagemissing.Besides,thebookismeaningfulandinterestingandIlikereadingit.I’vehadthebookforthreeyears.Myfriendgaveittomeonmybirthday.Myfriendgaveittomeonmybirthday.It’sspecialtomebecauseIusedtospendmysparetimeonit.What’smore,Ilearnedalotfromitanditmademefallinlovewithreadingbooks.Iregardeditasoneofmybestfriends.Inordertohelpfriendsinpoorareas,Idecidedtotakeitout.四、寫作練筆“愛(ài)家鄉(xiāng),贏未來(lái)”,家鄉(xiāng),承載著我們成長(zhǎng)的點(diǎn)滴回憶,是我們所有人的情牽夢(mèng)掛。家鄉(xiāng),是一個(gè)有溫度的詞,倦鳥(niǎo)歸林,魚(yú)翔淺底,落葉歸根,都是我們對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的渴望,也是生命在追尋著的一種歸宿。你記憶里的家鄉(xiāng)是什么樣子?關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng),你有什么美好的經(jīng)歷?這些年,它發(fā)生了哪些變化?提示:1.Whatwasyourhometownlikeinthepast?2.Whatstorydidyouhaveinyourhometown?3.Howhasyourhometownchangedovertheyears?要求:1.包含提示內(nèi)容,可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.詞數(shù)不少于80;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案Withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,therehavebeenalotofchangesinmyhometown,Bengbu,overtheseyears.Inthepast,peopledroppedlittereverywhereandthewaterintheriverwasdirty.Butnow,theenvironmentisimprovedalot.Notonlyaretheroadsbeingwiderandwider,butalsotherearegreentreesandbeautifulflowersonbothsidesoftheroadbecauseofthegovernment’ssupport.However,somethingswillneverchange.Lastyear,myparentsdecidedtogobackforafamilyreunionduringtheSpringFestival.Afteratwohourdrive,we