山西省長(zhǎng)治市2023-2024學(xué)年高一上學(xué)期期中考試英語(yǔ)試題英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫-家庭新成員從誤解到接納的心靈之旅講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IthoughtmyparentswerecrazywhentheysaidoverdinneronenightthatIwasgoingtohaveabrotherorsisterinaboutninemonths.Ialwayswantedalittlebrotherorsister,andnowIwasfinallygoingtogetone.However,IwasatapointinmylifewhereIwasusedtonothavingbrothersorsisters,andbeingthecenterofattentionathome.Thenextseveralmonthswerefilledwithexcitementaswepreparedforthenewadditiontothefamily.MyAuntDorothyandAuntLyndathrewherawonderfulbabyshower.Tomysurprise,Ialsoreceivedpresents.MyfamilywasworriedabouthowIwouldfeeloncethebabywasborn,sotheyshoweredmewithattention.Allofmyfriendswereexcitedforme.Inaway,Ithoughttheywerelookingforwardtomeexperiencingthepainsofbeinganeldersister.Thefollowingdayswentbyratherquickly.BeforeIknewit,onesummermorninginJunemymomwastakentothehospital.IwasvisitingmyAuntLyndainMissouriwhenwegotthecallthatmymomwasinlabor(分娩),sowedrovetothehospital,hopingthatwewouldn’tmissthebigevent.Westeppedintothehospitalat12:03p.m.,whichwastheexacttimemysister,Bekah,wasborn.Mymomhadsomeplications(并發(fā)癥)afterthedelivery.Whatwassupposedtobeatimeofcelebrationnowbecamealifeordeathwaitinggame.Myfirstreactionwastohatethebaby,sinceIfeltitwasallherfault(錯(cuò)誤)thatthishappened.Ihadmymomtomyselfforfifteenyearsofmylife,andnowitlookedasifshewasgoingtobetakenawayfrommeforever.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。WhenIsawBekahforthefirsttime,thosebadfeelingswentaway.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Oneweeklater,mymompulledthrough,anditwastimetogohome.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：得知即將有弟弟或妹妹時(shí)“我”心情復(fù)雜，準(zhǔn)備過(guò)程充滿興奮，家人朋友都很關(guān)注。媽媽分娩后出現(xiàn)并發(fā)癥，“我”起初怨恨新生兒，認(rèn)為是她導(dǎo)致媽媽生命垂危。文章圍繞家庭新成員的到來(lái)以及由此引發(fā)的一系列情感與事件展開(kāi)，展現(xiàn)家庭關(guān)系在特殊時(shí)期的變化與考驗(yàn)。伏筆與回應(yīng)：伏筆：“我”習(xí)慣了獨(dú)生子女生活且是家庭焦點(diǎn)?；貞?yīng)：媽媽出現(xiàn)并發(fā)癥后“我”對(duì)妹妹的怨恨，因擔(dān)心失去媽媽的寵愛(ài)。伏筆：家人擔(dān)心“我”感受而給予很多關(guān)注?；貞?yīng)：在媽媽生病時(shí)，家人的關(guān)心和陪伴也支撐著“我”，讓“我”有力量面對(duì)困難。伏筆：媽媽出現(xiàn)并發(fā)癥，情況危急。回應(yīng)：這使“我”情感產(chǎn)生巨大轉(zhuǎn)變，從期待新生命到怨恨，再到看到妹妹后的釋然。伏筆：朋友為“我”即將成為姐姐而興奮?；貞?yīng)：與“我”后來(lái)經(jīng)歷的痛苦形成對(duì)比，突出家庭變故對(duì)“我”的深刻影響。伏筆：媽媽被送往醫(yī)院分娩?；貞?yīng)：引出后續(xù)媽媽的并發(fā)癥以及“我”對(duì)妹妹態(tài)度的變化等一系列情節(jié)發(fā)展。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：情感線：第一段從看到妹妹時(shí)的怨恨消散到產(chǎn)生保護(hù)欲與愛(ài)意；第二段從媽媽康復(fù)后的欣慰與喜悅到對(duì)家庭新關(guān)系的珍惜與期待。故事線：第一段描述看到妹妹的模樣，內(nèi)心的觸動(dòng)，與妹妹的互動(dòng)；第二段講述媽媽出院回家，一家人團(tuán)聚的溫馨場(chǎng)景，“我”對(duì)未來(lái)家庭生活的展望。主旨升華句：Familyisabondthatcanwithstandthestormsofmisfortuneandemergestronger.（家庭是一種紐帶，能夠經(jīng)受住不幸的風(fēng)暴并變得更強(qiáng)大。）Inthefaceoffamilycrisis,loveandforgivenessarethekeystohealing.（面對(duì)家庭危機(jī)，愛(ài)與寬恕是治愈的關(guān)鍵。）Anewlifeinthefamilyisnotonlyaburdenbutalsoagiftofhopeandgrowth.（家庭中的新生命不僅是一種負(fù)擔(dān)，更是希望與成長(zhǎng)的禮物。）Thetrialsoffamilylifeteachusthevalueofpassionandunderstanding.（家庭生活的考驗(yàn)教會(huì)我們同情與理解的價(jià)值。）Familyloveislikealighthouse,guidingusthroughthedarkesttimes.（家庭之愛(ài)就像一座燈塔，指引我們度過(guò)最黑暗的時(shí)光。）寫作示范一：WhenIsawBekahforthefirsttime,thosebadfeelingswentaway.Shewassotinyanddelicate,withatuftofdarkhaironherhead.Herlittlefingerswereclenchedintofists,andsheseemedsopeacefulinhersleep.AsIlookedather,Irealizedshewasaninnocentbabyandnottoblame.Ifeltasuddenurgetoprotecther.Igentlystrokedhercheek,andshemadeasoftcooingsound.IknewthenthatIwouldloveherandbethereforher.

Oneweeklater,mymompulledthrough,anditwastimetogohome.WecarefullyplacedBekahinthecarseat,andIsatbesideher,watchingoverherduringtheride.Whenwegothome,thefamiliarsurroundingsseemedevenmoreprecious.MydadcarriedBekahintothehouse,andmymomwalkedslowly,leaningonme.Wegatheredinthelivingroom,andIheldBekahinmyarms,showingheraroundourhome.Iwasfilledwithgratitudethatourfamilywasintact,andIlookedforwardtothedaysahead,knowingthatwewouldfacewhatevercametogether.寫作示范二：WhenIsawBekahforthefirsttime,thosebadfeelingswentaway.Shewaslyinginthecrib,herfaceflushedpink.Hereyeswereclosed,andshehadasweetexpression.Icouldn'thelpbutbedrawntoher.IrememberedalltheexcitementwehadbeforeherbirthandhowmuchIhadwantedasibling.Ileanedoverandwhispered,"I'msorry,littleone."Sheopenedhereyesbrieflyandlookedatme,asifsheunderstood.Ifeltawarmconnection.

Oneweeklater,mymompulledthrough,anditwastimetogohome.Thehospitalhadbeenaplaceofworryandstress,butnowweweregoingbacktoourcozyhome.IhelpedmymomintothecarandthencarefullybuckledBekahin.Aswedrove,Ithoughtabouthowthisexperiencehadchangedme.Iwasnolongertheonlychild,butIhadgainedasisterandadeeperunderstandingoffamily.Whenwearrivedhome,weweregreetedbythefamiliarsmellandwarmth.Iknewourfamilywasonanewjourney,andIwasreadytoembraceitwithlove.【答案】Onepossibleversion:WhenIsawBekahforthefirsttime,thosebadfeelingswentaway.AsIlookedintohertinyfaceandheardhersoftcries,allofmyresentmentandangermeltedaway.ThesightofherbroughtawaveofloveandprotectivenessthatIhadneverexperiencedbefore.Suddenly,itdidn’tmatterthatIwasnolongerthecenterofattentioninourfamily.Irealizedthathavingalittlesistermeanthavingalifelongfriendt