讀后續(xù)寫-流浪漢將丟失的背包歸還給失主+(1)+講義 高一下學(xué)期期末考試英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Sometimesyoucancounton(指望)peopletodotherightthing.WhenDaveTallyfoundabackpackwithalaptopandanenvelopefullofcashin2010,hecouldhaveconsidereditaveryluckyday.Thehomelessmancounted$3,300inthebag,anamountthatwouldmakeahugedifferenceinhislife.However,astempting(誘人的)asitwastokeepthemoney,deepdownheknewitwasn’ttherightthingtodo.Backthen,Tallywassleepinginthebasementsoflocalchurchesandtryingtosaveupenoughmoneytofixhisonlysourceoftransportation:hisbike.Thatmoneycouldhaveboughthim,abrandnewone.Instead,heturnedthebagtohisbossattheTempeCommunityActionAgency,anorganizationthathelpshomelesspeopleintheareafindjobs.Tallyhadbeenworkingtherepart-time.“Findingtheenvelopewiththecashwasjustexciting.Therewerelotsofcrazythoughtsthatwentthroughmyhead,”TallytoldABCNewsatthetime.“Iwentintothesurvivalmodeforamoment,actuallymorethanamoment,thinkingaboutallthethingsIcoulddoformyself.”“IbeatmyselfupprettyhardforeventhinkingIwouldspendonecentofthatperson’smoney,”Tallyadded.AfterTallymadeuphismindtoreturnthebag,hefacedtheproblemoftrackingdownitsowner.Therewerenoidentifiersonthebackpackorawaytogetintothelaptopwithoutapassword.Butthensomeonesuggestedcheckingtheflashdrive(閃存盤)thatthey’dalsofoundinsidethebagtoseeifitheldanyclues(線索).Itsuredid.ArizonaStateUniversitystudentBryanBelangerhaduploadedhisresume(簡歷)tothedrive,easilyprovidingTallywithhiscontactinformation.Asitturnedout,BryanBelangerwascarryingthatcashbecausehewasbuyingausedcarfromCraigslistwebsite,andheaccidentallylefthisbelongingsinastationonthewaytowork.Paragraph1:Belangerwasregretfulforhiscarelessnessandthoughthisbackpackwasgoneforever._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Tallysaidthedayhefoundthemoney’srightfulownerwasthedayhislifechanged._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：2010年，無家可歸的DaveTally撿到一個裝有筆記本電腦和3300美元現(xiàn)金的背包，盡管這筆錢對急需修理自行車、改善生活的他極具誘惑，但他深知不應(yīng)據(jù)為己有，于是決定歸還。他就職于幫助無家可歸者找工作的機(jī)構(gòu)，在同事建議下，通過背包內(nèi)閃存盤上的簡歷找到了失主——正準(zhǔn)備用這筆錢買二手車的大學(xué)生BryanBelanger，他因粗心遺落背包，本以為找不回來了。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：伏筆：Tally無家可歸且自行車需修理，暗示他經(jīng)濟(jì)窘迫，急需錢財(cái)。回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫中可寫B(tài)elanger得知Tally處境后，不僅感恩歸還，還發(fā)起募捐幫Tally改善生活，解決他的燃眉之急。伏筆：提到Tally工作的社區(qū)行動機(jī)構(gòu)幫助無家可歸者找工作，為后文他因善舉獲回報做鋪墊?；貞?yīng)：當(dāng)?shù)仄髽I(yè)聽聞Tally事跡，主動聯(lián)系機(jī)構(gòu)，為他提供一份全職且待遇優(yōu)厚的工作，認(rèn)可他的誠信。伏筆：背包里有閃存盤，這是找到失主的關(guān)鍵線索，突出物品細(xì)節(jié)的重要性?；貞?yīng)：后續(xù)Belanger為表感激，送Tally一個新的、存儲容量更大的閃存盤，方便他日常工作使用。伏筆：Tally歸還背包時經(jīng)歷內(nèi)心掙扎，展現(xiàn)人性抉擇，使人物更立體。回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫里當(dāng)面對各種回報，Tally再次堅(jiān)守本心，他的正直品格感染周圍人，大家紛紛以他為榜樣踐行誠信。伏筆：Belanger用現(xiàn)金買二手車，這筆錢對他很重要，側(cè)面烘托Tally歸還行為的可貴?；貞?yīng)：Belanger買到車后，常載著Tally四處奔波，幫他參與志愿活動，二人成為摯友共同傳遞善意。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：第一段：情感線：Belanger從懊悔、絕望轉(zhuǎn)為驚喜、感激。故事線：接到Tally電話時，Belanger不敢相信，匆忙趕到約定地點(diǎn)，看到失而復(fù)得的背包，激動落淚，對Tally連聲道謝，堅(jiān)持要給予酬謝，被Tally婉拒。第二段：情感線：Tally從歸還后的平靜欣慰，到因生活轉(zhuǎn)變而滿懷希望與感恩。故事線：Tally的善舉傳開，社區(qū)居民紛紛點(diǎn)贊，愛心人士送他生活用品，機(jī)構(gòu)給他升職機(jī)會，他也更積極投身公益，用行動影響他人。主旨升華句：“Honestyisthebestpolicy,anditalwayspavesthewayforunexpectedblessings.”（誠實(shí)乃上策，它總會為意想不到的福祉鋪路。）“Doingtherightthing,eveninthetoughesttimes,cansparkachainreactionofkindness.”（即使在最艱難的時候，做正確的事也能引發(fā)一連串的善意。）“Asmallactofintegritycanmakeabigsplashinthepoolofhumanity,creatingripplesofchange.”（一個小小的正直之舉能在人性之池中激起大水花，產(chǎn)生變革的漣漪。）“Truewealthliesnotinwhatwepossess,butinthegoodnessweshareandtheliveswetouch.”（真正的財(cái)富不在于我們擁有什么，而在于我們分享的善意以及所觸及的生命。）“Whenwechoosetobehonest,wenotonlyreturnwhat'slost,butalsofindapartofourbetterselves.”（當(dāng)我們選擇誠實(shí)時，我們不僅歸還了丟失的東西，還找到了更好的自己。）寫作示范一：Paragraph1:Belangerwasregretfulforhiscarelessnessandthoughthisbackpackwasgoneforever.Butoneday,hisphonerang,anditwasTally.Hearingthenewsthathisbackpackhadbeenfound,Belangerwasstunned.HerushedtotheplaceTallymentioned,hisheartpounding.Whenhesawhisbelongingsintact,tearsstreameddownhischeeks.“Ican'tbelieveit!You'realifesaver,”heexclaimed,grabbingTally'shandandshakingitvigorously.Hereachedforhiswallet,intendingtogiveTallyareward,butTallyjustsmiledandsaidhedidn'tdoitforthemoney.Paragraph2:Tallysaidthedayhefoundthemoney’srightfulownerwasthedayhislifechanged.Wordofhishonestyspreadlikewildfireinthecommunity.Peopleweretouchedbyhisselflessactandstartedtoofferhelp.Thelocalgrocerystoreprovidedhimwithfreefoodforamonth,andthecommunitycentergavehimawarmplacetostay.Tallywasoverwhelmedwithgratitude.Herealizedthatbydoingtherightthing,hehadnotonlyrestoredBelanger'sfaithinhumanitybutalsoopenedthedoortoanewlifeforhimself.Fromthenon,hededicatedhimselftohelpingothers,becomingashiningexampleofkindnessintheneighborhood.寫作示范二：Paragraph1:Belangerwasregretfulforhiscarelessnessandthoughthisbackpackwasgoneforever.Suddenly,acallcamethrough,andontheotherendwasTally.Belangerwassoastonishedthathealmostdroppedthephone.Racingtotherendezvouspoint,hesawTallystandingtherewithhisbackpack.Hiseyeswidenedindisbelief,thenfilledwithtearsofjoy.“Thankyousomuch!Idon'tknowwhatIwouldhavedonewithoutyou,”hechokedout.HetriedtopresssomecashintoTally'shand,butTallyfirmlydeclined,sayingitwashismoralobligation.Paragraph2:Tallysaidthedayhefoundthemoney’srightfulownerwasthedayhislifechanged.Thestorygotpickedupbythelocalmedia,andTallybecameanovernightcelebrity.Alocalbusinessowner,impressedbyhisintegrity,offeredhimawell-paidjob.Tallyaccepteditgratefully.Meanwhile,BelangerandTallybecamegoodfriends.Theyoftenvolunteeredtogether,spreadingthemessageofhonestyandkindness.Tallyknewthathisonedecisionhadnotonlychangedhislifebutalsosetoffawaveofpositivechangeinthecommunity,provingthatgoodnessalwaysbegetsmoregoodness.【答案】Paragraph1:Belangerwasregretfulforhiscarelessnessandthoughthisbackpackwasgoneforever.WhenhesawTallywithhisbackpack,hewassomovedthatheofferedacashrewardwhichwasturneddownbyTally.Meanwhile,Tally’sstorymadethelocalnews,an