作文21 遼寧朝陽(yáng)卷（滿分作文+同類(lèi)作文+素材積累）-備戰(zhàn)2022年中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文+萬(wàn)能模板+熱點(diǎn)素材

2021年中考滿分作文特快專(zhuān)刊真題在線作文21遼寧朝陽(yáng)卷真題在線（遼寧省朝陽(yáng)市2021年中考英語(yǔ)試題）作為中學(xué)生，我們現(xiàn)在的學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大，經(jīng)常面對(duì)各種考試，因此有時(shí)會(huì)產(chǎn)生焦慮情緒。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，簡(jiǎn)單描述一下我們的考試壓力主要體現(xiàn)在哪些方面，并針對(duì)此種情況給出合理的建議。提示：1、表現(xiàn)：擔(dān)心考試；考前很難入睡；考試時(shí)發(fā)揮失?！?、建議：請(qǐng)從考前學(xué)習(xí)準(zhǔn)備、作息時(shí)間和放松方式這三方面，給出至少四條緩解考試壓力的具體建議。要求：1、觀點(diǎn)鮮明，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，內(nèi)容連貫，要用到所有提示內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3、詞數(shù)：80詞左右，文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。HowtoDealwiththeExamStressWestudentsareverybusywithschoolworkandinthefaceofmanyexamseveryschoolday.Someofus_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析考題解析滿分范文1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)出考試壓力的表現(xiàn)，提出自己的建議等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。

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寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要與已給出的開(kāi)頭融合起來(lái)，用第一人稱(chēng)和其他人稱(chēng)相結(jié)合來(lái)寫(xiě)作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，多用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should提出建議，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。滿分范文HowtoDealwiththeExamStressWestudentsareverybusywithschoolworkandinthefaceofmanyexamseveryschoolday.Someofusaresoworriedaboutexamsthatit’shardtofallasleepbeforethem.Whenwepaymuchattentiontotheexam,thetestresultswon’tbegood.Parentsandteacherswillblamethem,theywillalsoloseconfidence.Ifwehaveproperstress,wecanworkharder,butifwehavetoomuchpressure,itmayhaveabadeffectonourstudy.Weshouldlearntoreleasepressure.Firstofall,weshouldreviewcarefullyandmakefullpreparationbeforetheexam.Second,weshouldn’tstayuplatetoreviewfortheexam.Third,afterreviewingforaperiodoftime,weshouldalsorelaxourselvesappropriately.Inaddition,ifwedowellintheexam,wewillgiveourselvesappropriaterewards.名師點(diǎn)評(píng)SoIhopeeveryonecandealwiththeexamstressproperlyandgetgoodgrades.名師點(diǎn)評(píng)2021年朝陽(yáng)卷在考查形式上跟前幾年沒(méi)有變化，但考查難度有一定波動(dòng)，2019年考查了書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，要求給出怎樣度過(guò)假期的建議，2020年考查了自我介紹，相對(duì)而言比較簡(jiǎn)單，2021年則考查的是壓力的表現(xiàn)以及給出相對(duì)應(yīng)的建議，難度上是有增加的。所以學(xué)生在平常學(xué)習(xí)中需多加練習(xí)，以應(yīng)對(duì)不同難度的書(shū)面表達(dá)。佳句積累1.Westudentsareverybusywithschoolworkandinthefaceofmanyexamseveryschoolday.【亮點(diǎn)】bebusywith：忙于…inthefaceof:面對(duì)…2.Someofusaresoworriedaboutexamsthatit’shardtofallasleepbeforethem.【亮點(diǎn)】beworriedabout：擔(dān)心；擔(dān)憂；so…that…如此…以至于…3.Inaddition,ifwedowellintheexam,wewillgiveourselvesappropriaterewards.【亮點(diǎn)】inaddition：另外；并且，表增補(bǔ)。Ifwe…，wewill…為主將從現(xiàn)的運(yùn)用。舉一反三相似題①壓力（Stress），現(xiàn)在的人都會(huì)有壓力，你認(rèn)為有壓力是好事還是壞事，壓力應(yīng)該如何去排解，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文：內(nèi)容要求：談?wù)勀悻F(xiàn)在遇到的壓力（學(xué)業(yè)、功課、課外學(xué)習(xí)、友誼、父母期盼等）壓力對(duì)對(duì)你產(chǎn)生的影響（影響隨眠、心情焦慮、易發(fā)脾氣等）怎樣應(yīng)付壓力（找傾訴對(duì)象、運(yùn)動(dòng)、吃東西、聽(tīng)音樂(lè)等）【參考范文】Everyonehasstress,includingme.Mystresscomesfrommanypartsinmylife.Mystudybringmetoomuchstress.MyparentssaidifIdon'tstudywell,Iwon'thaveagoodfuture.SoIhavetodomuchhomeworkandhavemanyafter-classclasses.Theymayexpectmetobethebestintheworld.Ifeelsoterrible.Ican'tsleepwellandworryabouteverything.Igetabadtemper.NowIthinkofsomeideastodealwithstress.First,IthinkIshouldtalktosomeoneaboutmyproblem.Second,Ishouldtakeexercisetorelaxmyself.Third,whenI'mstressed,Icaneatsomethingorlistentomusictocalmdown.【考題解析】試題分析：首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要從三個(gè)部分闡述，壓力，壓力的影響以及如何解決壓力。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，三個(gè)部分內(nèi)容銜接自然，清晰簡(jiǎn)明地表達(dá)了自己的壓力是什么，給自己帶來(lái)的影響和如何解決壓力的三個(gè)看法。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、豐富、流暢。注意了上下文銜接詞的使用，表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)層次分明。結(jié)合書(shū)本所學(xué)內(nèi)容，運(yùn)用書(shū)本所學(xué)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)技能很好完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。考點(diǎn)：話題作文。相似題②臺(tái)師大心測(cè)中心從2011年至2015年，每年抽樣調(diào)查全國(guó)初三學(xué)生的壓力感受，調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示初三學(xué)生的壓力逐年增大，而學(xué)生的壓力主要來(lái)自于升學(xué)、父母和老師。并且壓力過(guò)大的學(xué)生成績(jī)下滑幅度較大。為了減輕學(xué)生的壓力，某校開(kāi)展了“升學(xué)無(wú)壓力”活動(dòng)，各班就此展開(kāi)了討論，同學(xué)們紛紛發(fā)言。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己對(duì)壓力的看法及自己的親身經(jīng)歷，給由于壓力過(guò)大導(dǎo)致成績(jī)直線下降的同學(xué)露西寫(xiě)一封郵件，建議她如何正確地面對(duì)壓力，釋放壓力，并將壓力轉(zhuǎn)化為動(dòng)力。要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞，提示詞僅供參考；2.郵件的格式已給出，開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。DearLucy,I'msorrytoknowthatyouhavebeenunderalotofpressurerecently.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】Dear_Lucy，I'm_sorry_to_know_that_you_have_been_under_a_lot_of_pressure_recently.Toomuchpressurecancauseussomephysicalandmentalproblems.Therefore,weshoulddealwithpressurewisely.Afewmonthsago,Ialsofeltpressedandwasalwayslowinspiritsbecauseofmypoorgrades.Oneday,mymothernoticedthatandwehadaheart-to-hearttalk.Thensheencouragedmetodosomeexercisetorelaxmyselfinthepark.Fewdayslater,Ifeltrefreshedandrelaxed.Havingsuchagreatexperience,Iwanttogiveyousomesuggestions.Firstly,whenyoufacepressure,youshouldhaveacorrectunderstandingofthatandovercomeitbravely.Secondly,talkingtootherscanhelpyoureleaseyourpressureatthesametime.Finally,doingmoreexerciseisagoodwaytoreleasepressure,too.Ibelieveexercisecanmakeyoubothastrongbodyandastrongmind.Ihopemysuggestionscanhelpyouandyoucangetoutofyourtroublesoon.Yours，Li_Hua【考題解析】審題指導(dǎo)：細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1.本文是寫(xiě)給同學(xué)的一封郵件，故文體為應(yīng)用文。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括自己對(duì)壓力的態(tài)度，自己的經(jīng)歷及建議；2.敘述自己對(duì)于壓力的態(tài)度及建議時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，寫(xiě)自己的經(jīng)歷時(shí)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；3.詞數(shù)不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：如何釋放壓力要點(diǎn)提示素材串聯(lián)開(kāi)頭：陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)過(guò)多的壓力給我們帶來(lái)了身體和心理上的問(wèn)題，我們應(yīng)該明智地處理壓力(somephysicalandmentalproblems;dealwith)正文：講述自己一次面對(duì)壓力的經(jīng)歷1.成績(jī)不理想感到有壓力(bealwayslowinspirits)2.跟媽媽用心地交流(haveaheart-to-hearttalk)3.跟媽媽去公園做運(yùn)動(dòng)(dosomeexercisetorelax)結(jié)尾：提出建議1.正確認(rèn)識(shí)并勇敢面對(duì)壓力(haveacorrectunderstanding;overcomeitbravely)2.向他人傾訴(talktoothers)3.多做運(yùn)動(dòng)(domoreexercise)相似題③學(xué)習(xí)生活中的許多煩惱都會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生壓力，來(lái)自父母同學(xué)的壓力、學(xué)習(xí)的壓力……為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問(wèn)題，你們班特意開(kāi)展了一次以“Lesspressure,BetterLife”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備一篇發(fā)言稿談?wù)勀憔徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法與同學(xué)一起分享。內(nèi)容包括：1.同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么？2.我的壓力是什么？3.我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的？★注意文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。詞數(shù)110左右。Helloboysandgirls!Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudents______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishestoyouall.Yours,Friend【參考范文】Helloboysandgirls!Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudentscan’tgetonwellwiththeirclassmates,whileothersmayworryabouttheirexams.I’malwaysunderpressure,too.Myparentswantmetobethetopstudentinclass.Sotheysendmetoallkindsoftrainingclassesatweekends.LastMondayevening,Ihadatalkwithmymother.ItoldherIwasnotlazy.Ireallyfelttired.Ineededtimetorelax.Mymotheragreedwithmeatlast.SoIthinkaconversationwithparentsisnecessarytosolvetheproblem.Bestwishestoyouall.Yours,Friend【考題解析】題干解讀：這個(gè)題目要求學(xué)生們寫(xiě)一篇主題為“LessPressure,BetterLife”的演講稿。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)生們普遍存在的壓力是什么；你的壓力是什么；你是如何緩解壓力的。學(xué)生們可根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際生活，將這三個(gè)問(wèn)題的細(xì)節(jié)拓展，用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，這篇作為應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主、第三人稱(chēng)和第一人稱(chēng)為主敘述，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要選擇適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意文章整體結(jié)構(gòu)，每一段的主題應(yīng)明確，層次清晰。注意英語(yǔ)句式結(jié)構(gòu)的特點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次。同時(shí)注意上下文的銜接，使文意連貫。相似題④成長(zhǎng)需要壓力。作為一名中學(xué)生，你會(huì)面對(duì)很多壓力：升學(xué)的壓力，同學(xué)交際的壓力……九年級(jí)一班以“壓力讓人進(jìn)步還是失去信心”為題，展開(kāi)了辯論。假設(shè)你是正方或反方的一員(只需選擇一方)，請(qǐng)圍繞你的觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)合親身經(jīng)歷來(lái)說(shuō)服同學(xué)們。要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；2.提示詞正、反方均可使用，僅供參考；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Beingateenager,it'snormalforustobesurroundedbystress.However,howtodealwithitwillleadtodifferentresults.Inmyview,Ithinkstresscanhelpusimproveourselves.WhenIenteredmymiddleschoolthreeyearsago,IknewnothingaboutthenewchallengesthatIwouldhavetoface.OneofthebiggestproblemsIgotwasthatIcouldn'tfinishmyhomeworkontime.ItputtoomuchstressonmeandIfailedmyexaminthefirstterm.Ididn'tknowwhattodoatfirstbutthenIdecidedtochangemyself.Icommunicatedwithmyparentsandteacherstolowermystress.Atthesametime,Ialsomadesomeplanstohelpfitintothenewschoollifequickly.Finally,Imadegreatprogressinmystudy.Sowhenwehavestressinlife,weshouldfaceitactively.Thinkofsomeusefulwaystosolvetheproblemsthatmayproducestressandthentakeactiontoovercomethem.Asaresult,wecanbecomemuchstrongerinmindandeverythingwillbebetterandbetter.相似題⑤沒(méi)有壓力就沒(méi)有動(dòng)力，海燕如果沒(méi)有風(fēng)浪，那么它無(wú)法高飛；樹(shù)木如果沒(méi)有風(fēng)雨，那么它就無(wú)法生長(zhǎng)；我們?nèi)绻麤](méi)有壓力，便不能前進(jìn)。一個(gè)人只有在壓力下才能不斷成長(zhǎng)，不斷進(jìn)步。請(qǐng)以"Stresshelpsmeimprove"為題，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談?wù)剦毫κ侨绾问鼓阕兊酶玫?。要?1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】StresshelpsmeimproveIt’snormalforusteenagerstoexperiencestress.AndIthinkstresscanhelpusimprove.WhenIenteredmiddleschool,oneofthebiggestproblemsImetwasthatIcouldn’tfinishmyhomeworkontime.ItputtoomuchstressonmeandIfailedmyexams.Ididn’tknowwhattodoatfirstbutthenIdecidedtochangemyself.Icommunicatedwithmyparentsandteachersonhowtodealwithmystress.Ialsomadesomeplanstohelpmyselfstudy.Finally,Imadegreatprogress.Sowhenwehavestressinlife,weshouldfaceitactively.Asaresult,wecanbecomemuchstrongerandeverythingwillbebetterandbetter.【考題解析】1.題干解讀：本文屬于夾敘夾議文寫(xiě)作，文章要求以“壓力幫助我進(jìn)步”為題，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談?wù)剦毫κ侨绾问棺约鹤兊酶玫摹５谝欢伍_(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，闡明“壓力使人進(jìn)步”；第二段介紹自己緩解壓力的經(jīng)歷；第三段闡述我們遇到壓力時(shí)的正確做法，升華主題。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主題為“壓力使人成長(zhǎng)”；寫(xiě)作時(shí)以第一人稱(chēng)為主，介紹自己的經(jīng)歷及感受；文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主介紹經(jīng)歷，以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)闡述感受；寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意聯(lián)系生活實(shí)際及自己的感受，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清晰。相似題⑥許多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱都會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生壓力。為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)并解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問(wèn)題，你們班特意開(kāi)展了一次以“LessPressure,BetterLife”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。經(jīng)過(guò)調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)很多學(xué)生存在壓力問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法，與同學(xué)們分享。內(nèi)容包括：一、當(dāng)前學(xué)生面臨的壓力：1.作業(yè)多，睡眠少；2.父母嚴(yán)，太在意分?jǐn)?shù)，溝通少；3.沒(méi)有時(shí)間進(jìn)行課外活動(dòng)，體質(zhì)差。二、我的壓力是什么？（至少2點(diǎn)）三、我是如何成功緩解壓力的？注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名;詞數(shù)80左右；短文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出；參考詞匯：壓力pressure(不可數(shù)名詞)Hello,boysandgirls,Todaywedidasurveyabouttheproblemswestudentsfaceinourclass.Theresultsshowthepressureweareunder._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________