作文14 遼寧撫順卷（滿分作文+同類作文+素材積累）-備戰(zhàn)2022年中考英語滿分作文+萬能模板+熱點(diǎn)素材

2021年中考滿分作文特快專刊真題在線作文14遼寧撫順卷真題在線（遼寧省撫順市、本溪市、遼陽市2021年中考英語試題）1.小作文根據(jù)要求完成小作文。詞數(shù)：30詞左右。假設(shè)今天是你在校的最后一天，你將如何度過這一天呢？請至少寫出三件事。Todayismylastschoolday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________滿分范文滿分范文Todayismylastschoolday.Iwilllistentotheteacherscarefullyinclass.Iwanttosay“thankyou”tomyteachers.I’llgivemybestwishestomyclassmates.考題解析考題解析1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞在校最后一天所做的事情寫一篇小作文。真題在線2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般將來時(shí)。至少介紹三件自己在這一天要做的事情。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。真題在線2.大作文（遼寧省撫順市、本溪市、遼陽市2021年中考英語試題）根據(jù)要求完成大作文。詞數(shù):80﹣100詞。每個(gè)人都會(huì)從不同的經(jīng)歷中獲得不同的感受。哪一種感受經(jīng)常伴隨著你呢？請根據(jù)下面的圖示寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括:（1）Howdoyouoftenfeel?（2）Whatmakesyouso...Why?（3）Doyouwanttomakeanychanges?How?要求:（1）內(nèi)容完整,語意連貫,層次清晰,書寫規(guī)范。（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。（3）短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Ioftenfeel__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________滿分范文滿分范文Ioftenfeelangry.I’mangrywithmyself.Ihopetodevelopsomehealthyhabitslikegettingupearlyortakingmoreexercise,butIstillspendmostofmytimestayingupplayingcomputergames.I’malsoangrywithmyfriendBill.HearguedwithmeseveraldaysagoandIdon’twanttotalktohimanymore.ButIreallywanttochangethesethings.MaybeIshouldbestrictwithmyselfandmaybeIshouldsaysorrytoBillfirst.Afterall,Idon’twanttolosemybestfriend.Ihopemylifecanbefilledwithpeaceandhappiness.考題解析考題解析1.題干解讀：本題為材料作文，要求根據(jù)題目要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇關(guān)于自己情緒的作文。題目所給要點(diǎn)提示必須全部包括，切忌遺漏。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)人稱應(yīng)用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)根據(jù)動(dòng)作發(fā)展時(shí)段正確使用過去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在時(shí)或?qū)頃r(shí)。這是一篇提綱作文，題目要求圍繞提示內(nèi)容寫作，命題既有限制又給予學(xué)生發(fā)揮的空間。在寫作中要綜合運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞、副詞等進(jìn)行過渡。名師點(diǎn)評(píng)名師點(diǎn)評(píng)2021年撫順卷在考題形式上跟前幾年相比沒有變化，皆是小作文+大作文的形式，既考察了學(xué)生在日常生活中的英語應(yīng)用能力，也考察了學(xué)生對于生活中相關(guān)話題的英語表達(dá)，既給了學(xué)生想象空間，也在題干中給了一定的限制。但就考題難度上來講，21年的題目難度有所上升，所以學(xué)生在應(yīng)對下一年中考時(shí)需多練習(xí)，并對應(yīng)積累多種話題的語言表達(dá)。佳句積累1.Ihopetodevelopsomehealthyhabitslikegettingupearlyortakingmoreexercise.【亮點(diǎn)】亮點(diǎn)一：運(yùn)用短語developsomehealthyhabits：養(yǎng)成健康的習(xí)慣。亮點(diǎn)二:like用于列舉2.Afterall,Idon’twanttolosemybestfriend.【亮點(diǎn)】afterall：畢竟3.Ihopemylifecanbefilledwithpeaceandhappiness.【亮點(diǎn)】最后一段提出希望，總結(jié)升華。舉一反三相似題①初中畢業(yè)的腳步日益臨近,你是否記得四年里與老師們,同學(xué)們經(jīng)歷的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴?這些經(jīng)歷給你帶來怎樣的體驗(yàn)和感受?有感動(dòng),有失落,有尷尬,有喜悅,有傷心......,經(jīng)歷過了,我們才能感悟生活的哲理。請你以“My____________Experience”為題,寫一篇英語短文。提示：1.敘述一下這次經(jīng)歷。2.談?wù)勗谶@次經(jīng)歷后的感受。要求:1.提示信息齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，行文流暢連貫2.條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范整潔；3.詞數(shù)：100個(gè)左右?！緟⒖挤段摹縎peakingofexams,Ihavemanyunforgettableexperiences.Iwouldliketosayonethingthatimpressedmemost.Itwasthemathsfinalexamination.WhenIwasdoingadifficultmathsproblem,suddenlytheteacherwhosupervisedourclassshouted,"Whatareyoudoing?"IturnedaroundandfoundthattheteacherwasstandingbesideXiaoMing,holdingapieceofpaperinherhand.XiaoMinglookedrathernervous,saying,"Sorry,Ms.Wang,Ishouldnotdothat."Thenhewasaskedtogetoutoftheclassbehindtheteacher.Thistoldmeagreatlesson:Weshouldnotdowhatwearenotallowedtodobecauseittakesgreatrisks.So,weshouldknowthatgoodstudentsshouldobeytherulesofexaminations.【考題解析】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。相似題②你還記得老師的關(guān)心、同學(xué)的幫助嗎?其實(shí)，正是生活中無處不在的陽光讓你感受到生活中的陽光和幸福，請以“Sunshineinmylife”為題，并根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求用英語寫一篇短文。1.要點(diǎn)：1）是什么事情讓你感受到生活是美好的；2）這件事的經(jīng)過是什么；3）經(jīng)歷了這件事后你的感受是什么。2.要求：1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2）詞數(shù)100左右。Sunshineinmylife___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】SunshineinmylifeEveryonehasdifferentideasaboutlife.Inmyopinion,lifeisbeautifulandfullofsunshine.Severalweeksago,oneofmyclassmatesSunwasbadlyill.Hehadtobeinhospitalforalongtime.Buthisfamilywastoopoortoaffordit.Whatcouldwedo?Wedecidedtocollectmoneyforhim.Everyoneinourclasstookoutourpocketmoney.Then,wewenttothestreetonSundaytocollectmoneyfromothers.Whenwesentallthemoneytohim,heandhisparentsweredeeplymoved.Maybesometimeswefeelunlucky,butweshouldbelieve:Lifeisbeautiful.Helpandlovewillbearoundusforever.【考題解析】1.題干解讀：本文屬于記敘文寫作，可以分兩段去寫。第一段寫生活中感受到溫暖的事件，包括經(jīng)過，內(nèi)容相對描寫豐富；第二段寫事后的感受。事件敘述應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：學(xué)生應(yīng)根據(jù)所給提示并結(jié)合事件進(jìn)行描述。適當(dāng)使用副詞和連詞等和一些名言警句來增加亮點(diǎn)。寫好時(shí)，再閱讀一遍，減少語法錯(cuò)誤，不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯(cuò)誤。相似題③校報(bào)針對相關(guān)新冠肺炎及新冠疫情期間逆行的醫(yī)護(hù)人員進(jìn)行了報(bào)道。假如你是你校的李明，你被深深地感動(dòng)了，你想給醫(yī)護(hù)人員寫一封感謝信，借此表達(dá)你對醫(yī)護(hù)人員的感恩感謝，致敬奮戰(zhàn)在抗擊一線的醫(yī)護(hù)人員。要點(diǎn)提示：1）表達(dá)感恩感謝。2）個(gè)人感受。3）表達(dá)愿望。參考詞匯：COVID-19新冠肺炎，pandemic疫情，infection感染要求：1)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。2)詞數(shù)100左右。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Dearmedicalworkers,IamXiaoMingfromourschool.Asweallknow,since2019,COVID-19hashadabadinfluenceonus.Butthankstoyou,wearen’tafraidanymore.IammovedmostsoIwouldliketoexpressmysincerethankstoyoubecauseallyoudevotedyourselvesinthebattleagainstCOVID-19.Duringthispandemic,itisyouwhotriedyourbesttorescuethoseinfectedpeoplewithoutregardingtheshortageofequipmentandtheriskofinfection.ItisalsoyouwhomakeusbuildupourconfidencetodefeatCOVID-19.Suchfewwordscan’tfullyexpressourthankfulnessforyourgreatcontribution.Youareallthegreatheroesinmyheart.IsurelybelievethatwithourjointeffortsChinawillwinthebattleandmakeaquickrecovery.Yourssincerely,XiaoMIng【考題解析】1.題干解讀：本篇文章屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一份信件。主要為對奮戰(zhàn)在抗擊新冠疫情冠狀病毒第一線的醫(yī)護(hù)人員表達(dá)感謝。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；要根據(jù)寫作要求，寫出：（1）表達(dá)謝意；（2）個(gè)人感受；（3）表達(dá)信心；能根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞組進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題；連詞成句，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡；書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面整潔美觀。相似題④在生活中有許多人曾經(jīng)幫助或鼓勵(lì)過我們，令我們時(shí)常心存感激。請用英文寫一封信表達(dá)你對某人的感激之情，要點(diǎn)如下：1.結(jié)合你們之間的經(jīng)歷談一談你為何要感謝他/她；2.你當(dāng)時(shí)的感受以及此經(jīng)歷對你的影響；3.此時(shí)此刻你想對他/她說的話。注意：1.表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，過渡銜接自然，書寫工整，卷面整潔；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右。參考詞匯：appreciatev.感激_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearMrsWang,Nowordcandescribemythankstoyou,myEnglishteacher.WhenIfirstcameintothemiddleschool,IwaspooratmyEnglish.Oneday,youaskedmetogotoyourofficeafterschool.Youlistenedtomyproblempatientlyandencouragedmetokeepstudyinghard.WemadeaplayformyEnglishstudy.Afterthat,youstartedtohelpmefromtimetotime.Finally,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Iwasmoveddeeplyandreallyencouragedbyyourteachingstyleandyourkindness,Iachievedmuchinyourclass.SoIdevelopedadeeploveinEnglish.Ithankyouverymuchforallthehelpyouhavegivenme.Yours,xxx【考題解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文，要求寫一封信表達(dá)對某人的感激之情，注意書信的基本格式。內(nèi)容包括：你因何事要感激她/他；你當(dāng)時(shí)的感受以及此經(jīng)歷對你的影響；此時(shí)此刻你想對他/她說的話。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：介紹過去的經(jīng)歷時(shí)，以一般過去時(shí)為主；闡述個(gè)人的想法時(shí)，以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，注意主謂一致問題；寫作時(shí)注意按要點(diǎn)分段敘述，保證文章條理清晰，語句通順。相似題⑤困難經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)在我們的學(xué)習(xí)生活當(dāng)中。你是否曾經(jīng)幫助過身邊遇到困難的同學(xué)或者被其他同學(xué)幫助?請描述你一次幫助他人或被別人幫助的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀愕母惺芎徒ㄗh。內(nèi)容包括:1.敘述你在學(xué)習(xí)上，一次幫助他人或被別人幫助的經(jīng)歷并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?.我們該如何解決學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的困難，給出3條建議。3.呼呼同學(xué)之間互相幫助。作文要求:1.不能照抄原文，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名字。2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________