專題04 咨詢建議類-備戰(zhàn)2022中考英語六大類作文高分秘笈

寫作指導(dǎo)四步法四步法寫出給建議的短文1.首先要知道給出建議的格式：常用書信格式。2.然后寫出提建議的原因。3.最后根據(jù)具體的情況給出明確的建議。4.寫出希望。常用表達(dá)英語中咨詢建議類作文通常以書信的形式呈現(xiàn)，英語書信類作文的常用表達(dá)：開頭部分：

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____________（帶來的好處）.典例一(2021?湖北宜昌市·中考）假如你是國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華，學(xué)校正在為一年一度的藝術(shù)節(jié)招募表演者和志愿服務(wù)者。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)自己的意愿，給負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.Smith寫一封郵件推薦自己，并為學(xué)校藝術(shù)節(jié)提出1～2條合理建議。內(nèi)容包括：●意愿及理由●具體打算●合理建議要求∶1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名;2.詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMr.Smith,I’mwritingtotellyouwhatIwanttodofortheartfestival.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookforwardtoyourreplysoon.Yours,LiHua【優(yōu)秀范文】DearMr.Smith,I’mwritingtotellyouwhatIwanttodofortheartfestival.First,Iwanttorecommendmyselftotakepartintheactivity.Iwanttobeavolunteer.Iamkindandoutgoing.Ioftenvolunteertojoininsomeactivitiesliketalentshows.Second,Iwanttosharemyplanswithyou.Iwillkeeporder,andcleantheschoolhallaftertheactivity.Finally,Iwanttogivemysuggestionsabouttheactivity.Atthebeginningoftheactivity,weshoulddecoratetheschoolhall.Attheendoftheactivity,wevolunteersandplayersshouldtakephotostogether.Lookforwardtoyourreplysoon.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。給藝術(shù)節(jié)的負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.Smith寫一封郵件推薦自己。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。分為三段式：第一段引出出題；第二段描述自薦的理由；具體打算以及合理建議；第三段表達(dá)期待對(duì)方的回信。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。B典例二(2021?四川廣安市?中考）習(xí)近平主席在全國教育大會(huì)上強(qiáng)調(diào),中學(xué)生要做德智體美勞全面發(fā)展的社會(huì)主義建設(shè)者和接班人。某中學(xué)正在開展“做一名新時(shí)代的合格中學(xué)生”活動(dòng)。假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)的李揚(yáng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，向全校同學(xué)寫一篇倡議書。要點(diǎn)提示∶1.愛國，愛家，誠信，友好；2.努力學(xué)習(xí)，實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想；3.參加體育鍛煉，保持身心健康；4.熱愛大自然，護(hù)環(huán)境，與動(dòng)物和諧相處；5.積極參加各種活動(dòng)，如打掃教室，幫助父母做家務(wù)等。要求∶1.字跡工整，書寫規(guī)范，含全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校、班級(jí)名稱；3.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.請(qǐng)將書面表達(dá)內(nèi)容寫在答題卡上的相應(yīng)位置。參考詞匯∶keepone’spromise（守信）,nature（自然）,environment（環(huán)境）,getonwellwith（和諧相處）,takeanactivepartin（積極參加）Dearschoolmates,IamLiYangfromtheStudents’Union.We’rehavinganactivityofbeingagoodstudent.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【優(yōu)秀范文】Dearschoolmates.IamLiYangfromtheStudents’Union.We’rehavinganactivityofbeingagoodstudent.Firstofall,wemustloveourcountryandhome.Weshouldbehonestandkeepourpromise.Andweshouldalsobefriendlytothepeoplearoundus.Secondly,it’sourdutytostudyhard,andweshouldtryourbesttoachieveourdreams.Next,takingexercisecanmakeuskeephealthy.Afterthat,wearesupposedtoshowlovetonatureandprotecttheenvironment.Animalsareourfriends,soweshouldgetonwellwiththem.What’smore,weshouldgetintothehabitoftakinganactivepartinallkindsofactivities,suchastidyinguptheclassroomandhelpingourparentswithhousework.Comeon!Ibelievewecanmakeit.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)提示圍繞“如何做一名新時(shí)代的合格中學(xué)生”寫一篇倡議書。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱。第一段根據(jù)所給的提示要點(diǎn)，告訴學(xué)生們?nèi)绾巫鲆幻细竦闹袑W(xué)生，給出建議，；第二段呼吁同學(xué)們趕快行動(dòng)起來。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。典例三(2021?重慶?中考）教育部近日印發(fā)通知，要求控制中小學(xué)生的書面作業(yè)總量，合理布置不同類型的作業(yè)。為此，某英文雜志社正在開展以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇征文，講述自身經(jīng)歷，提出合理建議。要求：1.80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：1.做過的最有創(chuàng)意的英語作業(yè)（內(nèi)容、收獲……）；2.更多有創(chuàng)意的英語作業(yè)建議（形式、理由……）；3.……MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【優(yōu)秀范文】MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.DoingcreativehomeworkmakesusmoreinterestedinEnglish.Onceourteacheraskedustowritealettertoaforeigner.WeweretoldtointroducetheSpringFestivalintheletter.ItnotonlyhelpedmeimprovemywrittenskillsbutalsoprovidedagoodchancetospreadChinesetraditionalculture.Inmyopinion,it’salsoagoodchoicetodrawmindmaps.Ithelpsustohaveabetterunderstandingofthelessons.Besides,wecanlearntosingEnglishsongs,sincemostofuslovesinging.Inthisway,ourEnglishaswellashobbiesdevelop.Ihopewe’llhavemorecreativeEnglishhomeworkinthefuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)所給的參考信息以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”為題寫一篇征文，從自身經(jīng)歷來談?wù)勛约旱挠袆?chuàng)意的英語作業(yè)，并提出合理的建議。注意要點(diǎn)齊全。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，本文寫自身經(jīng)歷時(shí)用一般過去時(shí)，提建議時(shí)可采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要以第一、三人稱交替使用。文章開頭已給出，第一段點(diǎn)題；第二段寫自身經(jīng)歷，第三段提出建議；第四段總結(jié)。寫作中可使用亮點(diǎn)詞匯和句型為文章增添色彩，如：notonly...butalso...，It固定句型等。注意保證上下文語句通順，條理清晰，文中無單詞和語法上的錯(cuò)誤。典例四(2021?重慶?中考）新冠疫情提醒人們更加重視健康。越來越多的人通過運(yùn)動(dòng)來保持健康，但是運(yùn)動(dòng)安全也不容小覷。請(qǐng)你給校報(bào)的英語欄目EnglishCorner投稿，號(hào)召同學(xué)們重視運(yùn)動(dòng)安全。要求：1.80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：1.運(yùn)動(dòng)安全的現(xiàn)狀和重要性；2.運(yùn)動(dòng)安全的建議（著裝、熱身、規(guī)則……）；3.…….參考詞匯：熱身運(yùn)動(dòng)warming-upexerciseCOVID-19hastaughtustopaymoreattentiontoourhealth________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【優(yōu)秀范文】COVID-19hastaughtustopaymoreattentiontoourhealth.TodayIwanttotalkaboutsportssafety.Sportssafetyisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.Nowadays,studentspaylessattentiontosportssafety.Sothereareallkindsofaccidentsthathappenatschools.Wedoexercisebecauseitcanimproveourphysicalfitnessandhealth.Tokeepsafecanensurethatwecanbetterachievethegoalsofsports.Whenweexercise,weshoulddoenoughwarming-upactivities.Weshouldwearcomfortableandsuitableclothes.Weshouldadopttherightwayofrest,payattentiontothereasonabledietandhealthcare.Weshouldexercisetokeephealthy,andweshouldalsopayattentiontosportssafety.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，介紹運(yùn)動(dòng)安全的相關(guān)問題。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱來介紹，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可分為四段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹運(yùn)動(dòng)安全的現(xiàn)狀和重要性；第三段給出運(yùn)動(dòng)安全的建議；第四段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。典例五(2021?山東德州市?中考）世界衛(wèi)生組織和聯(lián)合國兒童基金會(huì)將生活技能（lifeskills）作為全球青少年兒童發(fā)展的重要主題之一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖中提示寫一篇英語短文，描述作為青少年,你們應(yīng)提高哪些及如何提高自己的生活技能。除了提示中的內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)你至少再補(bǔ)充一條。要求：1.語言通順，要點(diǎn)齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.80~100詞，文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Lifeskillsarenecessaryforus.Whatlifeskillsshouldweteenagersdevelop?Andhow?Hereismyopinion.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allinall,ifwetryourbesttoimprovetheselifeskills,wewillleadahappier,andhealthierlife.【優(yōu)秀范文】Lifeskillsarenecessaryforus.Whatlifeskillsshouldweteenagersdevelop?Andhow?Hereismyopinion.First,weshouldtryourbesttokeephealthy.It’sagoodideatokeepabalanceddietandtakedailyexercise.Andbehappyeveryday.Second,workingwithothersisimportant.Sometimes,weneedtoworkasateam.Whenwecommunicatewithothers,trytounderstandthem.Third,solveproblemsindifferentways.Weareabletofindouttheproblem,findsolutionsaloneorwithothersandthensolveit.Besides,learntomanagetime.Wecanmakealistofthingstodoeverymorning.Getupearlyandneverbelateforschool.Finally,learnsomebasicskills,suchascooking.WecanaskfamilyforhelporsearchtheInternet.Thenpracticemakingsomedishes.Allinall,ifwetryourbesttoimprovetheselifeskills,wewillleadahappier,andhealthierlife.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇看圖作文。圍繞青少年應(yīng)提高哪些生活技能來寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第一段引出主題；第二段至第六段描述青少年應(yīng)提高哪些生活技能，以及如何提高這些生活技能；最后一段總結(jié)概括。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。預(yù)測(cè)一【題目要求】假如你是蘇華，你的筆友劉玲給你發(fā)了一封電子部件，請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件，請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件中的內(nèi)容用英語回復(fù)。DearSuHua,Gladtobeyourfriend.WearebothinGradeNine.SometimesIfeelworriedaboutmyschoolworkbecauseIamweakinMath.IfindgettinghighmarksintheMathexamisnoteasy.Meanwhile,mymothertellsmetofinishmoreMathexercisesandIalsohavetoattendtutoringclasses(課外輔導(dǎo)班)atweekends.IfeelstressedandworriedwhenhavingaMathexam.CouldyoutellmehowIcandealwiththeseproblems?Hopetogivemevaluableadvice.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Allthebest,LiuLing注意事項(xiàng)：1.回信內(nèi)容根據(jù)郵件自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合語境；2.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】

DearLiuLing,Thankyousomuchforyouremail.Iamwillingtosharemyadvicewithyou.Infact,MathplaysanimportantroleinGradeNine.YoushouldspendmoretimeonMathexercises.However,whenyoufeeltiredorstayuplate,youmaywatchfilmsortalkshowsforhalfanhourtorelaxyourself.ThenifyouhavedifficultyinlearningMath,youcanaskyourteachersforhelp.Withthehelpofyourteachers,youcanstudyMathbetter.Thirdly,inmyopinion,youhadbettercommunicatewithyourmother.Youcantellheryourworries,feelingsandproblems.Ihopethesesuggestionscanhelpyou.Yours,SuHua預(yù)測(cè)二【題目要求】中考將至，初三的同學(xué)們學(xué)業(yè)繁重，但學(xué)生會(huì)呼吁大家仍要堅(jiān)持每天閱讀。大家針對(duì)閱讀的書籍類型及理由各抒己見。假設(shè)你是初三學(xué)生會(huì)的會(huì)長，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格的提示，寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿，在級(jí)會(huì)上介紹某些同學(xué)的建議，并談?wù)勀愕膫€(gè)人建議及理由，以及分享你的讀書計(jì)劃。類型理由讀書計(jì)劃建議一報(bào)紙雜志1.足不出戶便知天下事；2.增長知識(shí)，鍛煉思維能力。/建議二漫畫1.放松頭腦，減壓；2.激發(fā)想象力。/你的建議？（請(qǐng)寫出兩點(diǎn)理由）1.每天做完作業(yè)后再閱讀20-30分鐘；2.把有價(jià)值的東西記錄下來。注意:1.詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右(開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù))2.短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Dearstudents,Doingsomereadingeverydayisimportanttous.Studentsinourgradesharetheirideasaboutreading.【參考范文】Dearstudents,Doingsomereadingeverydayisimportanttous.Studentsinourgradesharetheirideasaboutreading.Somestudentssuggestthatweshouldreadnewspapersandmagazines.Thisallowsustoknowwhat'sgoingonintheworldwithoutgoingout.Itcanalsoincreaseourknowledgeandexerciseourthinkingability.Otherstudentssuggestthatweshouldreadsomecomics.Itcanhelpusrelaxandreduceourstress.Itcanalsostimulateourimagination.Inmyopinion,weshouldreadsomebooksabouthistory.Historyislikeamirrorwhichcantelluswhattodo.Ifwecanknowhistorywell,oursocietywilldevelopquickly.Wecanreadforabout20to30minuteseverydayafterfinishingourhomework.Also,weshouldtakedownvaluablewordsorsentences.Readingisgoodforus.Let'sreadtogether.預(yù)測(cè)三作為中學(xué)生，我們現(xiàn)在的學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大，經(jīng)常面對(duì)各種考試，因此有時(shí)會(huì)產(chǎn)生焦慮情緒。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，簡單描述一下我們的考試壓力主要體現(xiàn)在哪些方面，并針對(duì)此種情況給出合理的建議。提示：1、表現(xiàn)：擔(dān)心考試；考前很難入睡；考試時(shí)發(fā)揮失?！?、建議：請(qǐng)從考前學(xué)習(xí)準(zhǔn)備、作息時(shí)間和放松方式這三方面，給出至少四條緩解考試壓力的具體建議。要求：1、觀點(diǎn)鮮明，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，內(nèi)容連貫，要用到所有提示內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3、詞數(shù)：80詞左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。HowtoDealwiththeExamStressWestudentsareverybusywithschoolworkandinthefaceofmanyexamseveryschoolday.Someofus____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】HowtoDealwiththeExamStressWestudentsareverybusywithschoolworkandinthefaceofmanyexamseveryschoolday.Someofusaresoworriedaboutexamsthatit’shardtofallasleepbeforethem.Whenwepaymuchattentiontotheexam,thetestresultswon’tbegood.Parentsandteacherswillblamethem,theywillalsoloseconfidence.Ifwehaveproperstress,wecanworkharder,butifwehavetoomuchpressure,itmayhaveabadeffectonourstudy.Weshouldlearntoreleasepressure.Firstofall,weshouldreviewcarefullyandmakefullpreparationbeforetheexam.Second,weshouldn’tstayuplatetoreviewfortheexam.Third,afterreviewingforaperiodoftime,weshouldalsorelaxourselvesappropriately.Inaddition,ifwedowellintheexam,wewillgiveourselvesappropriaterewards.SoIhopeeveryonecandealwiththeexamstressproperlyandgetgoodgrades.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，寫出考試壓力的表現(xiàn)，提出自己的建議等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要與已給出的開頭融合起來，用第一人稱和其他人稱相結(jié)合來寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，多用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should提出建議，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤?！绢}目要求】假如你是李華，要參加“21世紀(jì)杯”中學(xué)生英語演講大賽，題目為HowtoMakeOurWeekendsMoreMeaningful，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給信息完成一篇英文演講稿。注意：(1)演講稿必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)拓展；(2)詞數(shù)：90詞左右（文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；HowtoMakeOurWeekendsMoreMeaningfulLadiesandgentlemen,itismypleasuretopresentmyspeechhere.Mytopictodayishowtomakeourweekendsmoremeaningful.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】HowtoMakeOurWeekendsMoreMeaningfulLadiesandgentlemen,itismypleasuretopresentmyspeechhere.Mytopictodayishowtomakeourweekendsmoremeaningful.Firstofall,theweekendisagreattimeforfamilytogettogether.It’sgoodtohelpourparentsdosomehousework.Thatcanhelpusunderstandeachotherbetterandshowourloveforthem.Secondly,weshouldspendtimedoingexercise.I