2025年八省聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫試題解析及寫作指導(dǎo)講義

八省聯(lián)考讀續(xù)兇悍外表機(jī)車黨的鐵漢柔情讀后續(xù)寫題目2025年1月普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試適應(yīng)性測(cè)試英語(yǔ)試題（八省聯(lián)考）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary(紀(jì)錄片)aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmyco-workerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.Iresignedmyselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestlessandbored.Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn’tseemparticularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobraveit.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers—verybig,tough-lookingbikers.I’veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen—allwearinginsignia(徽章)thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub—standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.注意：（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para.1Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Para.2Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.語(yǔ)篇分析據(jù)分析，2025八省聯(lián)考卷讀后續(xù)寫文本難度等級(jí)為標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，大致對(duì)應(yīng)美國(guó)七到八年級(jí)學(xué)生閱讀水平，三音節(jié)以上的復(fù)雜單詞，2024新課標(biāo)卷讀后續(xù)寫中有19個(gè)，而2025八省聯(lián)考該部分則多達(dá)32個(gè)！材料出現(xiàn)選修或課標(biāo)以外詞匯，諸如：conferencen.會(huì)議animalshelter動(dòng)物收容所abandon遺棄urgen.強(qiáng)烈欲望fundraisingevent募捐活動(dòng)resignoneselfto只好接受restlessadj.坐立不安的bravev.勇敢面對(duì)desertedadj.荒涼的neverthelessadv.然而故事梗概一位熱愛動(dòng)物的女士，被募捐活動(dòng)廣告吸引，天黑黑孤身一人從賓館出發(fā)，穿過(guò)幾條無(wú)人街，電影院前撞見一群身材魁梧、佩戴徽章的摩托車手，這時(shí)主人公開始擔(dān)心自己的安全……人物分析“我”:原文的敘述者，一個(gè)普通人，因愛動(dòng)物而勇敢面對(duì)內(nèi)心恐懼，最終經(jīng)歷了一次從誤解到感悟的轉(zhuǎn)變。摩托車騎士:外表“粗獷”，但實(shí)際上是富有愛心的動(dòng)物救助者，他們的反差成為推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展的關(guān)鍵。情節(jié)分析開端：敘述者計(jì)劃參加動(dòng)物救助紀(jì)錄片放映，卻因夜晚街道的寂靜與騎士的外表而感到恐懼。發(fā)展：敘述者鼓起勇氣進(jìn)入劇院，發(fā)現(xiàn)更多的騎士也在場(chǎng)。高潮：紀(jì)錄片揭示騎士是動(dòng)物救助者，敘述者從恐懼到敬佩的情緒轉(zhuǎn)變。結(jié)局：敘述者反思自身的刻板印象，感悟到善良可能隱藏在意想不到的人群中。情緒發(fā)展開端情緒：猶豫、害怕——因陌生環(huán)境與騎士的外表而充滿警惕。發(fā)展情緒：驚訝、好奇——逐漸發(fā)現(xiàn)騎士的真正身份與用意。高潮情緒：敬佩、感動(dòng)——通過(guò)紀(jì)錄片感受到騎士的善意與奉獻(xiàn)。結(jié)局情緒：平靜、反思——從誤解到自我成長(zhǎng)，對(duì)人性和外表有了新的認(rèn)知。主題分析不要以貌取人：外表并不決定一個(gè)人的品質(zhì)，真正的善良往往藏在不經(jīng)意之中。續(xù)寫方向以及難點(diǎn)1.第一段描寫進(jìn)入劇場(chǎng)看到的畫面以及波動(dòng)的心情與所給句銜接，描寫作者進(jìn)入劇場(chǎng)看到更多bikers時(shí)的心情，同時(shí)應(yīng)適當(dāng)推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展（不能整段就在描述恐懼的心情）：尋找座位，觀察環(huán)境，以及bikers，心中疑惑漸增。最后與第二段銜接，可以是等待電影開場(chǎng)或者燈光變暗，電影即將開始。1.我看到更多騎手，愈發(fā)恐懼；2.尋找座位，觀察周圍環(huán)境；3.恐懼和困惑夾雜，我等待電影開場(chǎng)。2.第一段描寫誤判的心情，紀(jì)錄片畫面以及最后的感悟本段描寫作者知道bikers原來(lái)是動(dòng)物營(yíng)救組織后的心情，以及觀看documentary，了解到tough-lookingbikers背后的故事，到最后作者受到的震撼以及感動(dòng)，升華此次經(jīng)歷給自己帶來(lái)的影響。1.我恍然大悟，心生羞愧；（下降）2.影片徐徐展開，我驚嘆不已；（下降）3.收獲感動(dòng)以及人生教訓(xùn)。（結(jié)局）伏筆foreshadowing文中提到“thereweretwentyorsoverylargemen–allwearinginsignia(徽章)thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub”，以及“warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,myheartwaspounding等描寫，都為后文揭示這些騎手的真實(shí)身份埋下伏筆，讓讀者也跟著“我”一起好奇他們到底是怎樣的群體,同時(shí)讓tough-lookingbikers和warm-heartedrescuevolunteers形成強(qiáng)烈的反差。PossibleVersionIhurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Ifeltlikeescapingfromahellandthenfoundmyselfinanother.MyuneasegrewasIsqueezedpasttheirleatherjacketsandintimidatingtattoos(可怕的紋身),searchingforanemptyseat.However,mynervousnessbegantowaver(動(dòng)搖)asIoverheardsnippets(零星的話)oftheirconversations—wordslike“rescue,”“fostering,”and“adoption”floatedtomyears.Confused,Iglancedattheirjacketsagainandnoticedpawprintsandwordlike“Rescue”.Mypreviousfearslowlywaned(減弱)andturnedintokeencuriosity.Whoweretheseintimidatingmen?Whyweretheyhere?Thosequestionskeptwhirlinginmymind.Thoughstillnervous,Itriedtocalmmynervesasthetheatrelightsdimmed.(109words)Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.Revealingbeforemyeyesweresceneafterscenewherethesetough-lookingbikersnavigateddangerousareastosavestray(流離失所的)animals,bringingthemtoshelters,andevennursedthembacktohealthintheirownhomes.Gonewasmyinitialfear,replacedbyoverwhelmingadmirationandshame.Whenthelightscamebackon,Ifinallygotaclearlookattheinsigniaontheirjackets——asimplepawprintwiththewords"RideforRescue"boldlydisplayedunderneath.Walkingoutofthetheater,Iwasfilledwithaweandguiltmingled.Inotonlywitnessedthebeautyofcompassionbutalsolearnedtoseebeyondstereotypes—alessonIwouldcarrywithmeforalifetime.(109words)一些“不要以貌取人”的語(yǔ)料積累主題句1."Don'tjudgeabookbyitscover,asthosewhoseemintimidatingmighthaveakindheart."不要以貌取人，那些看似令人生畏的人或許有著善良的心。2."Appearancescanbedeceiving,andunexpectedkindnessmaycomefromthemostunlikelypeople."外表可能具有欺騙性，意想不到的善意或許來(lái)自最不可能的人。3."Oneshouldnevermakeassumptionsbasedonlooksalone,forthere'softenmore