專題10-應(yīng)用文寫作(10)-研讀近十年高考英語滿分書面表達(dá)聚焦2023高考

研讀近十年高考英語滿分書面表達(dá)聚焦2023高考Part1應(yīng)用文寫作文（十）1．（2014·安徽卷）為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長，某中學(xué)英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。內(nèi)容要點如下：1．表示理解并給予安慰；2．提出建議并說明理由。注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；3．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：tempern.脾氣，情緒HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Jamie【答案】HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobewrong,soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips:First,talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriends，asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Andthird,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou’llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours，Jamie【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱作文。【詳解】內(nèi)容是用英文寫一封回信。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示：為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長，某中學(xué)英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。內(nèi)容要點如下：1．表示理解并給予安慰；2．提出建議并說明理由。弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點就是主要內(nèi)容。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照提示的3個方面的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時為主。4.注意寫信格式?！军c睛】文章思路清晰，語言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了較為高級的句式:that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.定語從句so…that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.高級句式的應(yīng)用提升了寫作的檔次，整個短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語表達(dá)能力。2．（2014·重慶卷）青少年研究專家SusanBeacham在自己的英文網(wǎng)站上開辟專欄，邀請大家分享心目中的“最好禮物”。她認(rèn)為，禮物貴在心意，應(yīng)為之付出時間和精力。假設(shè)你是李華，請用英文發(fā)帖，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：*贊同Susan的看法*你收到或送出的最好禮物是什么*該禮物的意義*期待大家回復(fù)注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于80；2.符合語言規(guī)范；3.在答題卡上作答；4.開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。IamahighschoolstudentfromChina.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】IamahighschoolstudentfromChinaandIamquiteforyouropinionaboutbestgifts:thevalueofgiftsliesinitsintensionsoweshoulddevotemoretothem.ThebestgiftI’veeverreceivedisabookfrommyEnglishteacher,Debbie,whichshebroughttomewhenshereturnedfromherholidayinUSA.Thebook’snameisChickenSoupfortheTeenageSoul:TheRealDeal:Friends.Ivaluethisbookbecauseitshowsmehowtokeepthebalanceoffriendshipinapositiveway.AndImustthankmyfavoriteteacherforhercareaboutmebecauseshefoundmeatlossdealingwithfriendsatonetime.Readingit,Ihavebeeninspiredandbalancedmyselfinlifeandstudy.Istronglyrecommendyoutoreaditandsharewhatyougainwithmeinyourreply.Yoursever,LiHua【詳解】審題：該題也具有較大的開放度。但按要求一定要寫出Susan的看法，而這個看法就在試題的寫作說明里：禮物貴在心意，應(yīng)為之付出時間和精力。而選擇什么樣的角度來寫一定要根據(jù)自己的生活和切身感受，且要量力而行。寫作技巧：一般情況下應(yīng)分三段來完成改寫任務(wù)：1闡釋Susan的觀點并表示認(rèn)同。2收到或送出的禮物的具體描寫及其意義。該部分是本寫作任務(wù)的重點，應(yīng)多費筆墨完成。3表期待應(yīng)另外起段完成，以便閱卷老師發(fā)現(xiàn)和評判內(nèi)容要點。遣詞造句盡量使用自己熟悉的詞句。優(yōu)秀學(xué)生一定要在保持正確的前提下盡量使用較為復(fù)雜的句型，如狀語從句，定語從句，倒裝句和適量的非謂語動詞。特別強(qiáng)調(diào)：一定要注意卷面整潔并避免拼寫錯誤。3．（2014·浙江卷）學(xué)校圖書館需要購置一批新書，現(xiàn)向?qū)W生征求意見。假如你是李越，你認(rèn)為學(xué)校圖書館最需要購置科普類圖書（popularsciencebooks）和文學(xué)類圖書（literarybooks）。請你用英語給圖書館王老師寫一封100—120詞的信，推薦這兩類書，并分別說明推薦理由。注意：信的抬頭與落款已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）。DearMr.Wang,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YourssincerelyLiYue【答案】DearMr.Wang,Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.Whatweneedmostarepopularsciencebooks.Usuallypopularsciencebooksexplainbasicprinciplesofnatureinasimpleandinterestingway.Theyhelpusunderstandsciencesubjectsbetterandarouseourcuriosityaboutscientificdiscoveries.Inadditiontoreadingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.ThatiswhyIrecommendanothercategoryofbooks:literarybooks.Classicliteraryworks,writtenbymasters,presentgreatthoughtsthroughfascinatingstoriesandlanguage.Theynotonlyofferusjoyandexcitement,butalsoencourageustothinkcritically.I’llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.Yourssincerely,LiYue【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生就學(xué)校圖書館需要購置的新書提供建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累購買：buy→purchase建議：suggestion→advice有趣的：interesting→amusing推薦：recommend→propose2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Usuallypopularsciencebooksexplainbasicprinciplesofnatureinasimpleandinterestingway.拓展句：Itisinasimpleandinterestingwaythatpopularsciencebooksexplainbasicprinciplesofnature.【點睛】[高分句型1]Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.(由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型2]Whatweneedmostarepopularsciencebooks.(由what引導(dǎo)的主語從句)4.（2014·北京卷）你給英國朋友Chris寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你們原計劃7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于腳部受傷，你無法按原計劃前往；3.表達(dá)你的歉意并建議將旅行推遲到8月份。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50.2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearChris,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Joe【答案】DearChris,Howiseverythinggoing?Doyourememberourplan?WeplannedtovisitYunnaninJuly.Butnowbecausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.I’msorryaboutit.CanIsuggestthatweputitoffuntilearlyAugust?Iwishyoucouldunderstand.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,Joe【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給給英國朋友Chris寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：你們原計劃7月份一同去云南旅游；由于腳部受傷，你無法按原計劃前往；表達(dá)你的歉意并建議將旅行推遲到8月份?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累游覽：visit→travelaround因為：because→since受傷了：beinjured→getinjured建議：suggest→advise2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Doyourememberourplan?WeplannedtovisitYunnaninJuly.拓展句：DoyourememberourplanthatwewillvisitYunnaninJuly?【點睛】[高分句型1]Butnowbecausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.(運用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)[高分句型2]CanIsuggestthatweputitoffuntilearlyAugust?(運用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)5．（2014·全國I卷）假如你是李華，計劃暑假期間去英國學(xué)習(xí)英語為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意。請給該校寫一封信，詢問有關(guān)情況。（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢。參考詞匯：住宿—accommodation________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madam,IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.I’veseenyourad,andI’dliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourse.First,whenwillthecoursestartandhowmanyclasshoursarethereperweek?Besides,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.I’dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.Wouldtherebehostfamilyoruniversitydormitory?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假如你是李華，計劃暑假期間去英國學(xué)習(xí)英語為期六周。一則廣告引起了你的注意。請給該校寫一封信，詢問有關(guān)情況。【詳解】1.詞匯積累計劃：plan→mapout此外：besides→what’smore為……付款：pay…for→spend…on回復(fù)：reply→response2.句式拓展并列句變主從復(fù)合句原句：IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.拓展句：IamastudentinChina,whoplanstogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.【點睛】【高分句型1】Besides,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.（運用了虛擬語氣）【高分句型2】I’dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.（運用了howmuch和whether引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）6．（2014·全國II卷）一家英語報社向中學(xué)生征文，主題是“十年后的我”，請根據(jù)下列要點和你的暢想完成短文。1.家庭：2．工作：3.業(yè)余生活。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右：2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫：3.開頭語已為你寫好。Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewouldbelikeinthefuture.Ithinkmylifewillbeverydifferentintenyears.Iwillbetwenty-eightyearsoldbythen.Iwillhavemyownfamily,probablywithalovelychild.IhopeIwillworkinacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner.Iwillenjoymyworkandgetalongwellwithmycolleagues.I’lldoagoodjobinwhateverIdo.Inmyfreetime,Iwillcontinuetotakeregularexercise,suchasswimming,runningandvariousballgames.Onmyholidays,Iwilltravelaroundtheworld.Inaword,mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolorful.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于半開放性作文。要求考生以“十年后的我”為題，寫一篇征文。【詳解】本文的話題是“十年后的我”，要求考生從家庭、工作和業(yè)余生活來想象十年以后的自己。文章應(yīng)該使用一般將來時和第一人稱。因為提示信息較少，所以要充分發(fā)揮想象，增加適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，充實內(nèi)容。比如可以聯(lián)想到的內(nèi)容有健身，度假，聚會等等。在寫作時盡量使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，插入語以使文章層次分明，使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)和高級詞匯亮點來提高文章的檔次，如定語從句，賓語從句和狀語從句等。此外，因為是暢想未來，所以要用一般將來時。【點睛】本篇范文短小精悍，要點全面，語言簡練，時態(tài)人稱準(zhǔn)確，很好的完成了寫作任務(wù)。在文章開頭作者緊扣題目，提出自己對未來的暢想，然后從生活，工作，家庭三個方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短語Inmyfreetime,Inaword,suchas等介詞短語，避免了文章句式的單一。此外，還用到了較多的高級語法表達(dá)，如IhopeI'llworkinacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner.（省略that的賓語從句）I'lldoagoodjobinwhateverIdo.（whatever引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）Inaword,mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolorful.（比較級+and+比較級連用）等，這些都給樸素的語言帶來了亮點。7．（2014·天津卷）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)高二(1)班的班長李津，得知美國學(xué)生Chris作為交換生，下學(xué)期將到你班學(xué)習(xí)。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給他寫封郵件：(1)表示歡迎(2)介紹與本地生活相關(guān)的信息（如天氣，飲食等）(3)介紹本班情況(4)希望Chris做哪些事情，以增進(jìn)中美學(xué)生之間的了解和友誼注意：(1)請勿提及與考生相關(guān)的真實信息。(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。詞數(shù)不少于100；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。(1)參考詞匯：交換生exchangestudentDearChris,I’mLiJin,monitorofClassOne,GradeEleven.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris，I'mLiJin,monitorofClassOne,GradeEleven.WelcometoourclassinChina.I'mgladyoucanjoinourclass,whichisawonderfulgroup.Everystudentnotonlyenjoysstudying,butisreadytohelpeachother.Soifyoujoinus,I'msureyoucangetalongwellwiththemandquicklymakefriendswiththem,too.Theclimatehereischangeable.Now,itisverycoolinautumnandcoldinwinter,sodon'tforgettobringdifferentkindsofclotheswithyou.Inyoursparetime,youcanvisitsomefamousplacesofinterestinourcity,aswellastastingallkindsofdelicioustraditionalChineselocalfoods.WeChineseusechopstickstohaveChinesefoodinsteadofforksandknives.AndIcanbeyourtourguideifyoulike.AsanAmerican,thereisnodoubtthatyouarefamiliarwithyourcountry.Soifitisconvenienttoyou,pleasebringamapofAmericaandsomephotosofyourfamilies，friends,andsomefamousbuildingswithyou,andgiveussomespeechestointroduceyourschoollifeanddifferentcultureofAmerica.Andwe’llexchangeourdifferentlivesandculturestogetherthen.lookingforwardtoyourcoming!YoursLiJin【導(dǎo)語】本文是一封書信。假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)高二(1)班的班長李津，得知美國學(xué)生Chris作為交換生，下學(xué)期將到你班學(xué)習(xí)。請根據(jù)提示，給他寫封郵件?！驹斀狻勘疚囊髮懸环釫mail。本文包括了四個要點。1.表示歡迎。2.介紹班級情況。3.注意事項。4.希望Chris做的事。應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時?！军c睛】范文要點齊全，全文連貫。運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；notonly…butalso連接詞；用了getalongwellwith，makefriendswith，aswellas，insteadof，itisconvenienttoyou等短語和固定句型。8．（2014·福建卷）如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語(quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文?！癝uccessistheabilitytogofromonefailuretoanotherwithnolossofenthusiasm.（熱情）”－SirWinston,Churchill內(nèi)容要求：1.你對該引語的理解；2.你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷；3.恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。注意：1.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；3.詞數(shù)：120左右。ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthatweshouldn'tgetdiscouragedrightafterfailures.Rather,weshouldkeeptryingwithenthusiasm.Successconsistsintheabilitytocontinueeffortsthroughfailures.Attheageoftwelve,Igotanicebikeasabirthdaygift.SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn'twaittotrymyhandatridingit.However,itwasharderthanexpected.Thebikeseemedtooheavyanddifficulttocontrol.Worsestill,Itookmanyfallsoffthebike.Iwasabouttogiveupwhen