考點(diǎn)16 英語(yǔ)作文中句式的升級(jí)-新高考英語(yǔ)一輪總復(fù)習(xí)（上海專(zhuān)用）（解析版）

PAGE1考點(diǎn)16英語(yǔ)作文中句式的升級(jí)課前熱身練（2023春·上海·華師大二附中?？茧A段練習(xí)）在社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)日漸流行的今天，高中生使用QQ、微信、B站等平臺(tái)的頻率日漸增多。網(wǎng)絡(luò)平臺(tái)給同學(xué)們提供學(xué)習(xí)資源的同時(shí)，也帶來(lái)了虛假新聞、濫用言論自由等問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)就這一社會(huì)現(xiàn)象發(fā)表看法，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)述目前網(wǎng)絡(luò)平臺(tái)的一些問(wèn)題；2.提出你對(duì)改善網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境的建議及理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays,theuseofsocialmediaplatformssuchasQQ,WeChatandBilibilibyhighschoolstudentsisincreasingrapidly.However,theseparticipationsbringupseveralproblems,suchastheproliferationoffakenews,theabuseoffreedomofspeech,andsoon.Toimprovetheonlineenvironment,Isuggestthatschoolshouldpromoteaneducationprogrammeforthestudents,whichemphasizestheimportanceoftheaccuracyofinformationandbeawareofinappropriatewordsorworksontheInternet.Besides,studentsshouldalsotaketheinitiativetobuildahealthyonlineenvironmentbyavoidingfakenews,disrespectfulwordsortrolling.Lastbutnotleast,teenagersshouldlimitandbalancetheuseoftheInternet.Abusiveandinappropriatebehaviorsfromsocialmediacanbelargelyavoidedifmoretimeisputintooutdooractivitiesandproductiveworks.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于開(kāi)放性作文。在社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)日漸流行的今天，高中生使用QQ、微信、B站等平臺(tái)的頻率日漸增多。網(wǎng)絡(luò)平臺(tái)給同學(xué)們提供學(xué)習(xí)資源的同時(shí)，也帶來(lái)了虛假新聞、濫用言論自由等問(wèn)題。要求考生請(qǐng)就這一社會(huì)現(xiàn)象發(fā)表看法?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累迅速地：rapidly→quickly引起：bringup→cause/bringabout建議：suggest→advise/propose此外：besides→inaddition2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合原句：However,theseparticipationsbringupseveralproblems,suchastheproliferationoffakenews,theabuseoffreedomofspeech,andsoon.拓展句：However,theseparticipationsbringupseveralproblems,whichincludetheproliferationoffakenewsandtheabuseoffreedomofspeech.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Toimprovetheonlineenvironment,Isuggestthatschoolshouldpromoteaneducationprogrammeforthestudents,whichemphasizestheimportanceoftheaccuracyofinformationandbeawareofinappropriatewordsorworksontheInternet.(運(yùn)用了連接詞that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句和which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Abusiveandinappropriatebehaviorsfromsocialmediacanbelargelyavoidedifmoretimeisputintooutdooractivitiesandproductiveworks.(運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句)核心考點(diǎn)梳理（一）使用萬(wàn)能句型使用萬(wàn)能句型能讓簡(jiǎn)單句變成復(fù)合句，每篇文章可以用1到2句。詞義萬(wàn)能句型例句毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)Thereisnodoubtthat...Thereisnodoubtthat/Thereisnodenyingthat/Itgoeswithoutsayingthat/Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatcertainamountofplayingtimeplaysanimportantroleinchildren’sgrowth.不可否認(rèn)Thereisnodenyingthat...不言而喻Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...普遍認(rèn)為Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat...（二）使用高級(jí)句型高級(jí)句型的運(yùn)用就是對(duì)高中所學(xué)語(yǔ)法的靈活運(yùn)用。語(yǔ)法高級(jí)句型例句定語(yǔ)從句which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句Environmentalpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious,whichhasarousedthepublic’sconcern.介詞+關(guān)系代詞Speakingandlisteningareofgreatsignificanceforlanguagelearning,bywhichyouaresuretomaketremendousprogress.時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)名詞后加when和where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句Ibelievethatwithjointefforts,thecampuswillbeaspureasparadisewherewewon’tgetlostinmoralitybutwillimproveourlearningefficiency.名詞性從句主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)的句子都可改成What+主+謂isWhatwestudentsshouldpayattentiontoisthemistakeswe’vemadeinourstudy.同位語(yǔ)從句HereIaminthehopethatmyadvicewilladdabrillianttouchtoyoursuccess.狀語(yǔ)從句原因Itisbeneficialforyoutomakesomelocalfriends,consideringthatitneedssomepracticetolearnaforeignlanguagewell.結(jié)果Inaword,socialpracticeisimportanttostudentsintheirstudy,theformationoftheirworldoutlookandthedevelopmentoftheirpersonalities.Consequently/Asaresult,studentsshouldtakeanactivepartinsocialpracticeasmuchaspossible.讓步Althoughtheknowledgethatwehavegainedinclassisimportant,equalconcentrationshouldbelaidonourpracticalabilitieswhichplayanimportantroleinourfuturecareer.比較Thelongeryoupersevere,thegreaterthesuccessyouwillachieve.Nothingismoreimportantthanyourownself-confidence.強(qiáng)調(diào)句Itis...that...Itisthisearliestdreaminmylifethatsupportsmetoalwaysstriveformybrightfuture.倒裝句N(xiāo)otonly...butalso...Throughsocialpractice,notonlywillstudentsbeabletocommunicatewithmorepeoplebutalsoknowaboutdeepersocialproblemsandmoreaboutthemselves.Only+介詞短語(yǔ)/狀語(yǔ)從句Onlyinthiswaycanweliveinamoreharmonioussociety.Onlyifwetakemeasurestoaddresstheproblemwillwe名詞/形容詞/副詞/動(dòng)詞+as(雖然)Youngasweare,

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rapidly,Withthecollegeentranceexaminationapproaching,Withsomanysportingfacilitiesprovidedbytheschool,...插入語(yǔ)在句子主語(yǔ)后插入短語(yǔ)，同位語(yǔ)和定語(yǔ)從句，讓句子顯得更高級(jí)。常用插入語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)有：tosome/alargeextent;needlesstosay①Thereisnodoubtthatcomputer,directlyorindirectly,toalargeextent,influencesourlifeprimarilyowingtothatcomputercanimprovetheefficiencyofourworkandstudy.②ShanghaiMuseum,awell-knownanddistinguishedmuseumbothathomeandabroad,ismoreprofessionalinholdingpaintingexhibitions.③Thenaughtyboy,whowasspoiledbyhisparents,alwaysinsistsonthingshewants.比喻AistoBwhatCistoD.JustasAistoB,soisCtoD.Readingistoamanwhatsaltistoadish.Justasgardenersaretoflowers,soisateachertohisstudent.感嘆句How.../What...Howtimeflies!/Whatatragedy!諺語(yǔ)多背誦一些諺語(yǔ)Asthesaying/proverbgoes,practicemakesperfect.（三）高級(jí)句型的轉(zhuǎn)化Socialpracticeisgoodforstudents.使用定語(yǔ)從句：Socialpracticewillenableusstudentstobeexposedmoretoreallife,whichwillmakeusgetfamiliarwiththelocalsocietyandbroadenourhorizons.使用狀語(yǔ)從句：Wewillgetfamiliarwiththelocalsocietyandbroadenourhorizons,consideringthatsocialpracticewillenableusstudentstobeexposedmoretoreallife.Socialpracticewillenableusstudentstobeexposedmoretoreallife.Consequently,wewillgetfamiliarwiththelocalsocietyandbroadenourhorizons.使用非謂語(yǔ)：Socialpracticewillenableusstudentstobeexposedmoretoreallife,thusmakingusgetfamiliarwiththelocalsocietyandbroadenourhorizons.使用倒裝：Notonlycansocialpracticeenableusstudentstobeexposedmoretoreallife,thusmakingusgetfamiliarwiththelocalsociety,butitcanbroadenourhorizonsaswell.（四）各種寫(xiě)作技巧的運(yùn)用Toomuchhomeworkwillharmchildren'sphysicalandmentalhealth.①加萬(wàn)能單詞或句型：Thereisnodenyingthattoomuchhomeworkwillharmchildren'sphysicalandmentalhealth./Toomuchhomeworkwillundoubtedlyharmchildren'sphysicalandmentalhealth.②用高級(jí)詞匯和詞組：Toomuchhomeworkwillundoubtedlyexertanegativeimpacton/serveasanobstacletochildren'sphysicalandpsychologicalhealth.③用高級(jí)句型：Toomuchhomeworkwillundoubtedlymakeourchildrensufferfromunbearable(unendurable/intolerable)stress,whichservesasanobstacletoboththeirphysicalandpsychologicalhealth,nottomentionthefactthatthoseendlesshomeworkextraordinarilygoagainsttheconceptofall-rounddevelopment.當(dāng)堂知識(shí)檢測(cè)1．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.上圖是一副引人深思的漫畫(huà)：“或許不完美，但……”，請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋Ｄ愕淖魑谋仨毎ǎ?.簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片2.談?wù)剰闹蝎@得的啟發(fā)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thecomic,whichistitled“PerhapsImperfect,but...”,depictstwodancers,oneofwhomisseatedonawheelchairandtheotherisstandingup.Theseatedindividual,whoislearningtodancewithagreatdealofeffort,isaninspirationtousall.Meanwhile,thestandingdancer,whosemovesareflowingandgraceful,demonstrateshermasteryoftheart.Lifeisnotalwaysperfect,andeventhosewithdisabilitiescanachieveincrediblethings,whichthisimageremindsusof.Theseateddancer,whoseeffortsarecertainlynotinhibitedbyherwheelchair,hasadeterminationthatistrulyadmirable.Additionally,thestandingdancer,whoisperhapsperfectinherownway,canlearnthatimperfectionisabeautyinitself.Thus,thiscomicinspiresusalltoappreciateourownstrengthsandweaknesses,andtosupportoneanotherinourconqueststoovercomeourperceivedlimitations.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】這是一篇看圖作文。要求考生根據(jù)漫畫(huà)中的信息寫(xiě)一篇作文，要求有圖片的描述以及從漫畫(huà)中得到的啟示?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累描繪，描畫(huà)：depict→draw與此同時(shí)：meanwhile→inthemeantime另外：additionally→inaddition值得陳贊的：admirable→commendable2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)折原句：Lifeisnotalwaysperfect,andeventhosewithdisabilitiescanachieveincrediblethings,whichthisimageremindsusof.拓展句：Thisimageremindsusthatlifeisnotalwaysperfect,andthateventhosewithdisabilitiescanachieveincrediblethings.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Theseatedindividual,whoislearningtodancewithagreatdealofeffort,isaninspirationtousall.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】Theseateddancer,whoseeffortsarecertainlynotinhibitedbyherwheelchair,hasadeterminationthatistrulyadmirable.(運(yùn)用了whose引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)2．請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容和要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容要求：1.描述畫(huà)面（守株待兔）；2.概述其寓意；3.談?wù)剛€(gè)人感想。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：stump樹(shù)樁______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnepossibleversionInthepicture,amanisstayingbyastumpwaitingforharestocomeanddashthemselvesagainstit.Legendhasitthatafarmerwasonedayworkinginthefieldswhenhesawaharebumpintoastumpaccidentallyandbreakitsneck.Fromthenon,hegaveupfarmingandsimplysatbythestumpwaitingformoreharestocomeandrunintoit.However,thereisnosuchthingassomethingfornothing.It’salsofoolishofthosewhodon’tworkthroughtheirownefforts,butstillwanttoberewarded.Weshouldnotwaitforunexpectedgainsbytrustingchanceandluck.It’shardworkthatpaysoff.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于圖畫(huà)作文。要求考生根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容和要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累意外地：accidentally→bychance從那時(shí)起：fromthenon→sincethen放棄：giveup→abandon然而：however→nevertheless2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inthepicture,amanisstayingbyastumpwaitingforharestocomeanddashthemselvesagainstit.拓展句：Inthepicture,amanisstayingbyastump,whoiswaitingforharestocomeanddashthemselvesagainstit.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】It’salsofoolishofthosewhodon’tworkthroughtheirownefforts,butstillwanttoberewarded.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】It’shardworkthatpaysoff.（運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）3．英文報(bào)ChinaDaily正以Helpingtheoldadapttoadigitalsociety為題征集稿件，請(qǐng)認(rèn)真觀察圖片后寫(xiě)一篇短文進(jìn)行投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片；2.你的觀點(diǎn)和建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文的題目已為你寫(xiě)好。參考詞匯：scanQRcodes掃描二維碼但你有沒(méi)有注意過(guò)有個(gè)群體被擋在二維碼的門(mén)外Butthereisagroupleftbehindbythistrend?

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HelpingtheoldadapttoadigitalsocietyNowadays,mobilepaymentgainsgreatpopularityinChina,makingourlifemoreandmoreconvenient.MostofusareusedtopayingbyscanningQRcodes.However,theoldareleftbehindbythistrend.Therefore,howtohelptheoldadapttoadigitalsocietyisofgreatimportance.Aseveryoneknows,theoldhavedifficultyinlearningnewthings.Wheneverwemeettheoldintrouble,wearesupposedtomakeeveryefforttoteachthem.What’smore,itisessentialtoraisetheirawarenessoflifelonglearning.Onlyinthiswaycantheykeepupwiththetimes.Themoretheylearn,theeasiertheycanadapttosociety.Lastbutnotleast,itistimethatourgovernmenttookmeasurestobridgethedigitalgapandprovidethemwithconvenientlifeservices,suchasmakingtheirtravelpossiblebyaddingmoreinformationtotheirseniorcards.Hopefully,withourjointefforts,theoldcanadaptthemselvestoadigitalsocietyquicklyandliveagoodlife.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求考生在觀察圖片后寫(xiě)一篇以Helpingtheoldadapttoadigitalsociety為題的稿件向英文報(bào)ChinaDaily進(jìn)行投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累重要的：essential→critical適應(yīng)：adaptoneselfto...→adjustoneselfto...因此：therefore→hence采取措施：takemeasures→takeaction2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：What’smore,itisessentialtoraisetheirawarenessoflifelonglearning.拓展句：What’smore,itisessentialthatweshouldraisetheirawarenessoflifelonglearning.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays,mobilepaymentgainsgreatpopularityinChina,makingourlifemoreandmoreconvenient.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ))【高分句型2】Wheneverwemeettheoldintrouble,wearesupposedtomakeeveryefforttoteachthem.(運(yùn)用了whenever引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句)4．假設(shè)你是光明中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，今天學(xué)校組織了消防演習(xí)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)日記，敘述整個(gè)演習(xí)過(guò)程，并談?wù)勛约旱母邢?。注意：?）日記的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好；（2）詞數(shù)100詞左右；（3）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Thismorning,ourschoolheldafiredrill.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Thismorning,ourschoolheldafiredrill.Wewerelisteningtotheteacherattentivelyinthemathclasswhenweheardthefirealarmfromthespeakeronthewall.Theteacherstoppedteachingimmediatelyandinstructedustoexittheclassroominorder.Whenwegotintothepassageway,wefoundweweresurroundedbysmokeeverywhere.Itwaschokingandourtearsrandown.Westudentsbentdown,coveredourmouthwithhandkerchiefs,andrandownstairsrapidlyintotheopenontheplayground,justaswehadbeentaughtbefore.Whenwecamebacktoourclassroom,westudentsgaveasummaryofthisfiredrill.IthinkfiredisastersareoftenseenonTVandreadaboutinthenewspaper.Weshouldknowtheskilltoescapefromafireincaseofemergency.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇記敘文，要求考生寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)日記，敘述整個(gè)消防演練過(guò)程，并談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累立刻：immediately→instantly指導(dǎo)：instruct→guide經(jīng)常：often→frequently應(yīng)該：should→besupposedto2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Itwaschokingandourtearsrandown.拓展句：Itwaschoking,whichmadeourtearsrundown.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Wewerelisteningtotheteacherattentivelyinthemathclasswhenweheardthefirealarmfromthespeakeronthewall.(運(yùn)用了固定句型)[高分句型2]Whenwegotintothepassageway,wefoundweweresurroundedbysmokeeverywhere.(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句)5．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李津，下周你校將與英國(guó)姊妹校線(xiàn)上“云”交流校園生活。高中三年即將結(jié)束，回顧豐富多彩的校園生活，哪一次校園活動(dòng)給你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢?請(qǐng)你以“TheMostImpressiveSchoolActivity”為題寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹活動(dòng)過(guò)程;2.分享個(gè)人感受。注意：短文不少于100詞。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello,everyone!I’mLiJin,aseniorthreestudentfromChenguanghighschool.I’mmorethandelightedtocommunicatewiththeclassmatesfromthesisterschoolinBritainonlineaboutcampuslife.Lookingback,Ifindthepastdayshavewitnessedplentyofmemorableactivities.Andtheonethatimpressedmemostisthecoming-of-ageceremony.ThemeaningfuleventwasheldonMay4thtohonorthestudentswhohadturned18.Wegatheredatthestadium,wearingtraditionaldresses.First,ourprincipalsincerelyextendedhiscongratulationsonusbecominggrown-ups.Andwereviewedourhighschoollifetogether,whichwasfullofhappiness.ThenfollowedtheConfucian-stylecoming-of-ageceremonies—JiLi(forgirls)andGuanLi(forboys).Finally,wemadeasolemnvowtoshouldertheresponsibilitiesofanadult.Personally,thisactivitynotonlyexposedustotraditionalChineseculture,butalsomotivatedustoembracethenewidentityandliveuptoourpromise.We,18-year-olds,shouldcherishouryouth.That’sall.Thankyou.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)為一篇應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生以“TheMostImpressiveSchoolActivity”為題寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。【詳解】1.詞匯積累：高興的：delighted→pleased/cheerful回顧：review→lookback/retrospect激勵(lì)：motivate→inspire/stimulate2.句式拓展：原句：Personally,thisactivitynotonlyexposedustotraditionalChineseculture,butalsomotivatedustoembracethenewidentityandliveuptoourpromise.拓展句：Personally,notonlydidthisactivityexposeustotraditionalChineseculture,butalsoitmotivatedustoembracethenewidentityandliveuptoourpromise.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Lookingback,Ifindthepastdayshavewitnessedplentyofmemorableactivities.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)。)【高分句型2】Andwereviewedourhighschoollifetogether,whichwasfullofhappiness.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。)課后鞏固提高6．你校英文報(bào)正在舉辦主題為“Theimportanceofgoals”的征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.目標(biāo)的重要性；2.呼吁同學(xué)們樹(shù)立目標(biāo)。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Theimportanceofgoals_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文：TheimportanceofgoalsAsasayinggoes,“Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.”O(jiān)bviously,goalsplayanessentialroleinourlife.Inthefirstplace,goalsguideustowardswherewewanttohead,providingawaytooursuccessfuljourney.Inaddition,peoplewhoareawareoftheirgoalstendtostaymotivatedandinspiredwhenfacedwithadversity.Lastbutnotleast,wearebecomingphysicallyandspirituallyfulfilledwhenfocusingonourgoals.Hence,ifyoustilldon’thaveagoal,setanappropriateoneandtrytoaccomplishit.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于開(kāi)放性作文，要求考生講述目標(biāo)的重要性并呼吁同學(xué)們樹(shù)立目標(biāo)。【詳解】1.詞匯積累在……方面起極其重要的作用：playanessentialrolein→playavitalpartin指引：guide→direct意識(shí)到：beawareof→beconsciousof/realize集中注意力于：focuson→concentrateon2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Inthefirstplace,goalsguideustowardswherewewanttohead,providingawaytooursuccessfuljourney.拓展句：Firstofall,goalsdirectsustowardsthedestinationwhichwewanttoheadfor,providingawaytooursuccessfuljourney.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Inaddition,peoplewhoareawareoftheirgoalstendtostaymotivatedandinspiredwhenfacedwithadversity.(使用了who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句和when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，且狀語(yǔ)從句中使用了省略結(jié)構(gòu))【高分句型2】Hence,ifyoustilldon’thaveagoal,setanappropriateoneandtrytoaccomplishit.(使用了if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句和祈使句)7．你校英文報(bào)正在進(jìn)行題為AMeaningfulVolunteeringExperience的征文，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；3.你的感受。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。AMeaningfulVolunteeringExperience_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

AMeaningfulVolunteeringExperienceLastSaturdaymorning,I,togetherwithmyclassmates,workedasvolunteersinourcommunitycentre.Wehelpedtohandoutfoodandmedicinedonatedbyalocalcompanytotheelderlylivinginourcommunity.Wealsodeliveredthefoodandmedicinetothehomesofthosewhohaddifficultywalkingormoving.TiredasIwasafterhoursofhardwork,Ifeltverydelighted.Thismeaningfulvolunteeringexperiencewasnotonlyarelayoflove,butalsoagoodchanceformyownpersonalimprovement.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文是開(kāi)放性作文。要求考生寫(xiě)一篇題為AMeaningfulVolunteeringExperience的征文?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累分發(fā)：handout→distribute捐贈(zèng)：donate→giveaway困難：difficulty→trouble勞累的：tired→weary2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Wehelpedtohandoutfoodandmedicinedonatedbyalocalcompanytotheelderlylivinginourcommunity.拓展句：Wehelpedtohandoutfoodandmedicinethathadbeendonatedbyalocalcompanytotheelderlylivinginourcommunity.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Wealsodeliveredthefoodandmedicinetothehomesofthosewhohaddifficultywalkingormoving.（由who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】TiredasIwasafterhoursofhardwork,Ifeltverydelighted.（由as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）8．上周六，你們班組織了一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你據(jù)此寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容；2.收獲與感想。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行為連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion：WetookpartinasocialpracticeactivitylastSaturday.Iwasinitiallyexcitedaswewouldbeabletoexperiencethelifeoutsideofcampus.IwasdepressedwhenIlearnedthatweneededtohelpthecleaners.However,itistheseadmirablecleanerswhoworktirelesslytokeeptheentirecityclean.Whattheydomeansagreatdealtoourcommunity.Weworkedallmorningclearingthestreet.Ifeltasenseofachievementatthattime.Thepracticetaughtmethatrespectingthebeautifulenvironmentmeansrespectingourselves.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于開(kāi)放性作文。要求考生根據(jù)上周六班級(jí)所組織的一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累參加：takepartin→participatein激動(dòng)的，興奮的：excited→thrilled大量，很多：agreatdeal→alot整個(gè)的：entire→whole2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Weworkedallmorningclearingthestreet.Ifeltasenseofachievementatthattime.拓展句：Weworkedallmorningclearingthestreet,atwhichtimeIfeltasenseofachievement.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】IwasdepressedwhenIlearnedthatweneededtohelpthecleaners.(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句以及that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】However,itistheseadmirablecleanerswhoworktirelesslytokeeptheentirecityclean.(運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)9．假定你是李華，最近你的班級(jí)就學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中面臨的問(wèn)題對(duì)班上的同學(xué)進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖表，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文向?qū)W校英文報(bào)投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)生面臨困難的狀況描述；2.簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)論；3.你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.稿件標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。WhatTroubleWeHave___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

WhatTroubleWeHaveHavingdoneasurveyamongourclassmatesrecently,wefindoutwhattroublesstudentsarefacing.Accordingtothedata,morethanhalfofthestudentsthinkthebiggesttroubletheyfaceiskeepingupwithothers,which,inmyopinion,isthemainsourceofstudents’pressure.Nearlyonefifththinkit’sratherchallengingtohavemorefriends.About12percentbelievethatthebiggestchallengetheyfaceishavingahealthierlifestyle.Alsoafewstudentsexpresstheirconcernabouttheirrelationshipwithparentsandseveralconsiderkeepinghobbiesasaluxury.Only3percentthinktheyhavenoproblems.Iguessitisthehighpressurefromstudyandpeersthatcausestheseproblems.Consequently,Isuggestthatsomeactivitiesshouldbeorganizedtoprovidestudentswithopportunitiestorelievestresssothattheywouldadoptamorepositiveattitudetowardcomingchallenges.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】這是一篇圖表作文。假定你是李華，最近你的班級(jí)就學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)