2022年湖北省孝感市大學英語6級大學英語六級測試卷(含答案)

【2022年】湖北省孝感市大學英語6級大

學英語六級測試卷（含答案）

學校:班級:姓名:考號:

一、l.Writing（10題）

1.Directions:Forthispart,youaresupposedtowriteastartessayentitled

ShouldEuthanasiaBeLegalized'?Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.安樂死應該合法化；

2.安樂死不應合法化；

3.我的觀點。

2.Directions:YourfriendPeterneedstomakeadecisioninchoosingtostudy

historyorcomputerscience.Hereallylikeshistory,butheistoldthatitwill

beeasierforhimtofindajobifhestudiescomputertechnology.Makeyour

comparisonandthenwritealettertohimandgiveyoursuggestions.You

shouldwriteatleast150wordswithin30minutes.

3.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteALetterofcomplaint

aboutthenoisearoundyourschool.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

accordingtotheoutlinesgivenbelowinChinese.

假設你是李明，深受學校附近一家工廠的噪音之苦，現(xiàn)在你寫信給學校

領導反映情況，內容包括以下幾點：

1.噪音污染的現(xiàn)狀和嚴重程度

2.引起噪音的原因

3.你希望校領導能盡快采取措施解決問題

ALetterofComplaint

4.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopic

DoWeNeed"NevergiveupH?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowing

theoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.“永不言棄”一直被認為是一種積極的生活態(tài)度，是個人成功的關鍵因

素

2.但是，也有人認為適當?shù)姆艞壊攀敲髦堑倪x擇

3.你對此的看法及理由

DoWeNeed"Nevergiveup"?

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopicHighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.有的大學畢業(yè)生擇業(yè)時盲目追求高工資,有的則認為提供學習機會及

事業(yè)上的發(fā)展才更重要的；

2.持有這兩種觀點的原因；

3.你的觀點。

NeverTakeThingsforGranted

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledSayNotoDrunkDriving.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.眾所周知，酒后駕車十分危險

2.但近年來越來越多的人酒后駕車.原因是

3.我認為.

SayNotoDrunkDriving

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledIsaDiplomaEverything?Youshouldwriteatleast150words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前社會上存在著迷信文憑的現(xiàn)象

2.造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3.我對此的觀點

IsaDiplomaEverything?

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

withthetitleofALetterofInquiry,statingthereasonsthatyouwantanew

roomnextterm.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingthesituation

givenbelowinChinese.

[*]

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:AbilityandGoodLooks.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow;

1.老一輩常說，能力比相貌重要

2.如今很多人卻認為相貌比有力重要

3.你的看法

AbilityandGoodLooks

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomplaint

lettertothecustomerservicedepartmentofthecompany'sheadoffice.You

boughtalaptopafewdaysagofromabigcomputerchainstore,butthelaptop

stoppedworking.Whenyoutookitbacktothestore,theyrefusedtodealwith

theproblem.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegiven

below.

1.計算機出現(xiàn)了什么問題。

2.與店方交涉的經過。

3.你希望公司的客戶服務部門能盡快幫助解決問題。

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.

Menandwomenhaveproblemsinconversingwitheachotherbecausethey

areraisedtoseetheworldindifferentways.

A.YB.NC.NG

12.

Researcherssaythatsupplementscancompletelytaketheplaceofrealfood

inthenearfuture.

A.YB.NC.NG

13.

Comparedwiththehybridcorn,thenativecornispoorin.

14.

Ifyouhaveanyconcernaboutanewdrugoritssideeffects,youcanaskyour

doctororpharmacistquestions,orcallthedrugcompanyfor.

15.Gardening

Thetechnologyofbeauty

Now,gardeningwasdrivenbythreemaintrends:technologicalchange,plant

prospectingandfashion.Ofthese,themostimportantwastechnology,whose

advancesmadeitpossibleforthemiddleclassestoenjoywhathadoncebeen

affordableonlytotheveryrich.

Themostdramaticexampleofpopularizingtechnologywassurelythe

inventionofthelawnmower.Nothingwasmorelabour-intensive,inthe18th

century,thanmaintainingalargelawn.Itwouldtakethreemenwithscythes

（大鐮刀）awholedaytocutanacre（two-fifthsofahectare）ofgrass;they

wouldbefollowedbylawnwomenwhosetaskwastogatherupthecuttings.

Justonemanwenttomow

Then,in1830,EdwinBeardBuddingrealisedthattherotarybladeusedinthe

clothindustrytoproduceanevenpileontextilescouldbeusedongrass.The

rotarylawnmowermeantthatsuburbanhomescouldaffordtheneat

greensward（草皮）previouslyavailableonlytotherich.

TheothertechnologythattransformedVictoriangardeningwasthe

developmentoftheartofgrowingplantsunderglass.Importingplantsfrom

countriesasdistantasAustraliabecameacommercialpossibilityoncethey

weresealedinwoodenboxeswithglasstops.Fromthe1830son,Victorian

gardens,privateandpublic,usedmassesofbeddingplants.In1877,2million

plantswerebeddedoutinLondon'sparks,ofteninelaborategeometric

designs.Growingthemunderglassprotectedthembothfromfrostandfrom

pollution.

Inthepastcentury,technologyhasonceagaintransformedandsimplified

gardening.Amongthemostsignificantadvancesisthegrowingofplantsin

containers.Insteadoforderingplantsgrowninopenfieldsanddugupbare-

rootedforplantinginautumn,gardenersnowtypicallybuyplantswhich,

becausetheyhavebeengrownincontainers,canbetransplantedatalmost

anytimeofyear.Containergrowinghasinturnbecomepossiblelargely

becauseofthedevelopmentoflightercomposts.

Othermen'sflowers

Thepasttwocenturieshaveseenanimmenseincreaseintherangeofgarden

plants.Nativespecieshavebeenrefinedanddeveloped;andexplorershave

broughtbackplantsfromallpartsoftheworld.Thepassionforplant

collectingsprangpartlyfromtheexpansionofCatholicreligiousorders（神

職）abroadinthe16thcentury,lookingformedicinalplantsaswellassouls

toconvert.Manyearlyplant-huntersarecommemoratedinplantnames,such

astheTradescants,fatherandson;SirJosephBanks,whosailedwithCaptain

Cookandbroughthome3500speciesfromAustralia.

Fashioniseverybitasimportantindeterminingwhatpeoplegrowasinwhat

theywear.Thegeometry,gravelandbeddingplantsofthemid-19th-cenmry

town-housegardenhadgivenway,bythecentury'send,toapassionfor

informalityandEnglishcottagegardens,fosteredbytwoofthegreat

designersoftheage.Theirinfluencehasprovedenduring.'Allovertheworld,

peoplewanttorivalEnglishgardens,ofteninaclimatethatmakesitvery

difficult/'saysSarahBond,anenthusiasticamateurgardenerinManhattan.

Agrowingbusiness

Bothgardeningandlookingatgardensaredevelopingrapidly.Givepeoplea

pieceofgroundandtheywillbuysomethingtoputinit.MarkBhattiand

AndrewChurchofBrightonUniversityinEnglandpointtothefactthat

peoplenowseemtospendfarmoreonmachineryandchemicals,andmore

againonbenches,barbecues,potsandsun-loungers,thantheyspendonplants

themselves.

Moreover,therangeofplaceswherepeoplecanbuygardeningsupplieshas

expanded.Supermarketsandgeneralstoresfrequentlycarryplantsandother

gardeningnecessities.Onthecontrary,Britain'sGardenCentreAssociation

saysthataround12%ofthetypicalturnoverofagardencentrenowcomes

fromthecafe.Atriptoaga

A.YB.NC.NG

16.

Thediscussiononhowtomotivatestudentssuggeststhatthefocuson

wasnotalwaysenough.

17.

AccordingtoDavidVaughan,theAntarcticisshrinkingduetoclimatechange.

A.YB.NC.NG

18.

Tocalculatethecaloriesexpendingtodigestthefood,youcanmultiplythe

numberofcaloriesyoueatby.

19.

Oneofthesecretsoftheforeigner'ssuccesscanbedescribedas"DoinRome

asRomansdo'1.

A.YB.NC.NG

20.

Whatdomostliarsfeelwhentheyareabletogetawaywithlying?

A.Fortunate.B.Ashamed.C.Proud.D.Fun

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10

21.SectionC

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhearapassagethreetimes.Whenthe

passageisreadforthefirsttime,youshouldlistencarefullyforitsgeneral

idea.Whenthepassageisreadforthesecondtime,youarerequiredtofillin

theblanksnumberedfrom36to43withtheexactwordsyouhavejustheard.

Forblanksnumberedfrom44to46youarerequiredtofillinthemissing

information.Fortheseblanks,youcaneitherusetheexactwordsyouhave

justheardorwritedownthe

Manyworkersdependonplans[Bl]bytheiremployerstohelppay

fortheirretirement.Therearetwomajorkindsofretirementplans.Oneis

definedbywhatispaidout,theotherbywhatispaidin.

Thefirstiscalledadefined[B2]plan,orpension.Itprovidesset

[B3]basedonthenumberofyearsan[B4]hasworked:

Theseplansoftenpayforhealthcareandothercosts.Theymightalsoprovide

moneytofamilymemberswhenthe[B5]dies.

Pensions,however,canbeabigcosttoemployers.IntheUnitedStates,the

changefroma[B6]economytoaserviceeconomyhasresultedin

fewerandfewer[B7]plans.

Theothermajorkindofretirementplaniscalledadefined[B8]plan.

Twothingsdefinehowmuchaworkerwillgetatretirement.[B9].

Onepopularversionisafour-oh-one-kplan,namedafterapartofthetaxlaw.

[BIO].

Butsomeplansareverycomplex.Aneasierwayforsmallemployerstooffer

retirementsavingsisthroughaSavingsIncentiveMatchPlan.[Bll].

[Bl]

22.(26)

A.Becauseitisshortofvitamins.

B.Becauseitisnotveryclean.

C.Becausethereareadditives.

0.Becausetherearenotmanyvarieties.

23.(32)

A.Byforcingthemfarming.

B.Byaffectingthequalityofsoils.

C.Byaddingchemicalsandpollutingthewaterways.

D.Byaffectingtheenvironmentstheylivein.

24.(33)

A.Avisittoaprison.

B.Theinfluenceofhisfather.

C.Atalkwithsomemiserableslaves.

D.HisexperienceinthewarbetweenFranceandAustria.

25.

[B3]

26.聽力原文：W:Howmanyliteraturecourseshaveyoutakenatthe

University?

M:I'vehadonlyonecourseeachinAmericanandBritishliterature.IwishI

hadhadmore,especiallyinotherlanguages.

Q:Whatarethespeakerstalkingabout?

(16)

A.Languagecourses.

B.Universities.

C.BritishandAmericanEnglish.

0.Literaturecourses.

27.(28)

A.Shemeanttoaskthecrewwheretheladies'lavatorywas.

B.ShewantedtowatchTV.

C.Shetookitfortheladies'lavatory.

D.Shewantedtotalktothecaptain.

28.

[B5]

29.(29)

A.Thelungs.

B.Theheart.

C.Thecirculation.

D.A11oftheabove.

30.聽力原文：W:Tom,wherewereyouyesterdayevening?Iexpectedtosee

youattheconcert.

M:Oh,Iwaitedforyouatthecomerofyourstreet.ThenIlookedforyouat

yourflat,butthehousekeepersaidyouwereout.

Q:Whydidn'ttheymeetthatevening?

(15)

A.Theywerebothbusydoingtheirownwork.

B.Theywaitedforeachotheratdifferentplaces.

C.Theywenttothestreetcorneratdifferenttimes.

D.Themanwenttotheconcertbutthewomandidn't.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)

31.

Thefollowingstatementsarewrongexcept.

A.IlearnedphilosophyatDeanCollege

B.Igotmybachelor'sdegreeatDeanCollege

C.itisateacheratDeanCollegewholedmetoeconomics

D.IgobacktoDeanCollegefromtimetotimeafterIgraduatefromit

32.Amongthosepeoplewaitingfbrtheteenagersattheclub,onemissing

elementis.

33.

Whichofthefollowingarethepatientsentitledtodointermsoftheproposal?

A.Behonesttotheirdoctors.

B.Controltheirmedicalinformation.

C.Determinehowtomaketheirmedicalrecords.

D.Accusetheinsurersofmakinguseoftheirmedicaldata.

五、5.ErrorCorrection?題）

34.

[S7]

35.

[sio]

36.

[S8]

六、6.ErrorCorrection。題）

37.[SI]

38.[S8]

39.

[S3]

參考答案

1.ShouldEuthanasiaBeLegalized?Euthanasiahasbeenahighly

controversialissueathomeandabroad.InsomenorthernEuropeancountries

itislegalized.Nowithasbecomeahottopicagaininourcountrybecausean

incurablepatientwantedthedoctorstoimplementeuthanasiaonhimbutthey

hadtorefusetodososinceitwasforbiddenbylaw.Somepeoplethinkthat

euthanasiashouldbelegalizedandputintopractice.Insodoingitwillbenefit

allpeopleinvolved.Firstitcanlessenthepainofthedyingpatientwhosuffers

terriblyfromtheincurabledisease.Seconditwillalsoreducethegreat

financialpressureonthelivingbecauseagreatdealofmoneyhastobespent

inprolongingthelifeofthedying.Ontheotherhandothersbelievethat

euthanasiashouldnotbelegalizedandperformed.Itisgenerally

acknowledgedthatlifeisthemostpreciousofallandshouldbeputbefore

everythingelse.Onceapersonisdeadheorshecannevercomebacktolife

anditisirreplaceable.What'smoreifeuthanasiaislegalizeditispossiblefor

wickedpeopletotakeadvantageofittokilllegitimately.Inmyopinion

euthanasiashouldbelegallyimplementedbutstrictlawsmustbemadeand

severemeasurestakenincaseitisabused.Andalsoiftheincurablepatient

wantstogoonlivinginpaininsteadofhavingeuthanasiahisorherchoice

mustberespected.ShouldEuthanasiaBeLegalized?Euthanasiahasbeena

highlycontroversialissueathomeandabroad.InsomenorthernEuropean

countriesitislegalized.Nowithasbecomeahottopicagaininourcountry

becauseanincurablepatientwantedthedoctorstoimplementeuthanasiaon

himbuttheyhadtorefusetodososinceitwasforbiddenbylaw.Somepeople

thinkthateuthanasiashouldbelegalizedandputintopractice.Insodoing,it

willbenefitallpeopleinvolved.First,itcanlessenthepainofthedying

patientwhosuffersterriblyfromtheincurabledisease.Second,itwillalso

reducethegreatfinancialpressureonthelivingbecauseagreatdealofmoney

hastobespentinprolongingthelifeofthedying.Ontheotherhand,others

believethateuthanasiashouldnotbelegalizedandperformed.Itisgenerally

acknowledgedthatlifeisthemostpreciousofallandshouldbeputbefore

everythingelse.Onceapersonisdead,heorshecannevercomebacktolife,

anditisirreplaceable.Whafsmore,ifeuthanasiaislegalized,itispossible

forwickedpeopletotakeadvantageofittokilllegitimately.Inmyopinion,

euthanasiashouldbelegallyimplementedbutstrictlawsmustbemadeand

severemeasurestakenincaseitisabused.Andalso,iftheincurablepatient

wantstogoonlivinginpaininsteadofhavingeuthanasia,hisorherchoice

mustberespected.

2.DearPeterYouhaveaskedmeformyadviceconcerningwhetheryou

shouldstudyhistoryorcomputerscienceatauniversity.HereishowIlook

atit.Iknowyouhavebeeninterestedinhistorysinceschooldays.However

asapracticalpersonandyourfriendIwouldadviseyoutotakeupcomputer

science.Thereareseveralreasonsforthis.Firstlyuniversitytrainingisa

preparationforyourfuturecareer.Thereforewhenyouchooseyourmajoryou

havetothinkaboutitsprospect——whetheritwillensureyourestablishment

andcontinuousdevelopmentinsociety.Computersciencewillofferyou

muchwiderjobopportunities.Histoi*yhoweverfascinatingitmaybeoffers

farfewercareerprospects.Secondlyintheageofscienceandtechnologyit

isnecessaryforonetobecomputer-literate.Infactthecomputerisplaying

anincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.Ifyouchoosecomputerscienceas

yourmajorIamsureyoucanenjoyfarbettercareerprospectsthanyoucan

withhistory.OfcourseIamnotsuggestingthatyougiveupyourinterestin

historyaltogether.Youcantakeitasahobbywhichmayenrichyourlife.In

thiswaywhileyoustudycomputerscienceforyourfuturecareeryoucanalso

findpleasureinyourhobby.IhopewhatIsaidcanbeofsomehelpforyouto

decide.Iwishyoucouldmakeawiseandhappychoice.Bestwishes

RebeccaDearPeter,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceconcerningwhether

youshouldstudyhistoryorcomputerscienceatauniversity.HereishowI

lookatit.Iknowyouhavebeeninterestedinhistorysinceschooldays.

However,asapracticalpersonandyourfriend,Iwouldadviseyoutotakeup

computerscience.Therearcseveralreasonsforthis.Firstly,university

trainingisapreparationforyourfuturecareer.Therefore,whenyouchoose

yourmajor,youhavetothinkaboutitsprospect-whetheritwillensureyour

establishmentandcontinuousdevelopmentinsociety.Computersciencewill

offeryoumuchwiderjobopportunities.History,howeverfascinatingitmay

be,offersfarfewercareerprospects.Secondly,intheageofscienceand

technology,itisnecessaryforonetobecomputer-literate.Infact,the

computerisplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.Ifyouchoose

computerscienceasyourmajor,Iamsureyoucanenjoyfarbettercareer

prospectsthanyoucanwithhistory.Ofcourse,Iamnotsuggestingthatyou

giveupyourinterestinhistoryaltogether.Youcantakeitasahobby,which

mayenrichyourlife.Inthisway,whileyoustudycomputerscienceforyour

futurecareer,youcanalsofindpleasureinyourhobby.IhopewhatIsaidcan

beofsomehelpforyoutodecide.Iwishyoucouldmakeawiseandhappy

choice.Bestwishes,Rebecca

3.DearSirorMadameIhatetocomplainbutonethingreallydisturbsusalot.

MynameisLiMing.IamastudentofthisschoolandIventuretowritea

lettertoyoutocomplainaboutthepoorenvironmentaroundourschool.

RecentlywestudenDearSirorMadame,Ihatetocomplain,butonething

reallydisturbsusalot.MynameisLiMing.Iamastudentofthisschool,and

Iventuretowritealettertoyoutocomplainaboutthepoorenvironment

aroundourschool.Recently,westuden

4.DoWeNeed°Nevergiveup"?Itiswidelyacceptedthat"Nevergiveup”a

strongandpositivelifeattitudeisthekeyforindividualsuccessonthe

groundsthatpermanentpersistencemayboostourconfidencestrDoWeNeed

"Nevergiveup"？Itiswidelyacceptedthat"Nevergiveup”,astrongand

positivelifeattitude,isthekeyforindividualsuccessonthegroundsthat

permanentpersistencemayboostourconfidence,str

5.HighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?Therearemoreandmorecollege

graduateslookingforjobseveryyear.Buttheyhavedifferentviewsabout

whatkindofjobtheyshouldchoose.Somestudentsfocustheirattentionon

thejobsthatpromisehighsalaries.Othersshowapreferenceforthosethat

offerachancetolearnskillsandadvancementpossibilities.Studentsholding

thefirstviewusuallythinkthatmoremoneywillresultinmorehappiness.

Withalotofmoneyinhandtheywillbeabletoenjoyarichlife.Otherwise

theywillsufferfromdepressionduetothelackofenoughmoney.However

holdersofthesecondviewwillarguethatoneshoulddevelophisskillsas

muchaspossible.Itiscareerdevelopmentthatcountsmost.Without

developmentyouwillbeoutrunbyothersandfallbehindthetimessooneror

later.AsfarasIamconcernedI'dliketogivemysupporttothesecondview.

Afterallmoneyisnoteverything.Yourdevelopmentismuchmoreimportant.

Inthelongrunyouwillreapmorecareerbenefits.Ifweblindlyclingtothose

highpaidjobsandfailtodevelopourabilitywewillsuffergreaterlossinthe

end.HighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?Therearemoreandmorecollege

graduateslookingforjobseveryyear.Buttheyhavedifferentviewsabout

whatkindofjobtheyshouldchoose.Somestudentsfbcustheirattentionon

thejobsthatpromisehighsalaries.Othersshowapreferenceforthosethat

offerachancetolearnskillsandadvancementpossibilities.Studentsholding

thefirstviewusuallythinkthatmoremoneywillresultinmorehappiness.

Withalotofmoneyinhand,theywillbeabletoenjoyarichlife.Otherwise,

theywillsufferfromdepressionduetothelackofenoughmoney.However,

holdersofthesecondviewwillarguethatoneshoulddevelophisskillsas

muchaspossible.Itiscareerdevelopmentthatcountsmost.Without

development,youwillbeoutrunbyothersandfallbehindthetimessooneror

later.AsfarasIamconcerned,Tdliketogivemysupporttothesecondview.

Afterall,moneyisnoteverything.Yourdevelopmentismuchmoreimportant.

Inthelongrun,youwillreapmorecareerbenefits.Ifweblindlyclingtothose

highpaidjobsandfailtodevelopourability,wewillsuffergreaterlossinthe

end.解析：[審題]

本文是一篇議論文。旨先列舉出兩種對立的觀點，然后分別說明各自的

理由，最后表達自己的觀點。[寫作思路]

第一段；提出兩種不同的觀點——追求高工資與注重事業(yè)發(fā)展。

第二段：說明各自的理由C

第三段：支持第二種觀點：立足長遠，注重事業(yè)發(fā)展,

6.SayNotoDrunkDriving[1]Asisknowntoalldrunkdrivingisvery

dangerous.[2]Itputstorisksnotonlythedriver'slifebutalsothoseofother

innocentpeople.[3]DangerousasitistherehavebeeSayNotoDrunk

Driving[1]Asisknowntoall,drunkdrivingisverydangerous.[2]Itputsto

risksnotonlythedriver'slifebutalsothoseofotherinnocentpeople.[3]

Dangerousasitis,therehavebee解析：本文要求對酒醉駕駛的原因進行

分析，并提出門己的看法。如果要求分析酒醉駕駛的不良后果，那就容

易點，可outline要求分析酒醉駕駛的原因，許多考生可能絞盡腦汁也

不知道該說什么好了。

范文從兩個角度分析原因：首先，經濟上富裕了，開車的人更多了；其

次，司機主觀上對自己的駕駛技術太過門信。這兩條都很好，與醉駕密

切相關，很有說服力。

是否還有別的原因呢?——無酒不成宴的傳統(tǒng)習慣勺現(xiàn)代生活不合拍；

法律上對醉駕處罰力度不夠；酒席上人們的自控能力太差；等等。讀者

可以自己盡情展開自己的思路，寫出好文章來。

最后還要說明“我認為“，當然要與標題SayNo的看法一致了。但要注

意如何表達。

Analysis

11]由outline改寫而來，得來毫不費功夫。

[2]是[1]的支持句，putsthtodanger/risks是較好的搭配。

[3]還是描寫現(xiàn)象。其中暗含這種現(xiàn)象的存在原因，于是下文就可以就

這些原因進行分析。注意這句話與前一段話之間有轉折關系，用了讓步

結構。

[4][5]onereasonisthat；anotherreasonisthat...,銜接自然。

[6]注意tallvictimto的用法

[7]是作文標題的再現(xiàn)!主題句。

[8]怎樣sayno呢?再提一下具體措施，文章就更加有力度了。也是⑺

的支持/擴展句。

7.1saDiplomaEverything?Nowadaysthereisawidelyheldbeliefthat

diplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiplomaatallcosts

andothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncan

beexplainedbyatleasttworeasons.Ontheonehandpeoplebelieveahigher

diplomacanguaranteeaprosperousfuturesuchassuccessfulcareersand

respectablepositions.Ontheotherhandthediplomapeopleholdisattached

totoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionfbrpeopletodo

almosteverythingforexampletofindajobtohaveadatewithagirl.Inmy

opinionitisnodoubtthatdiplomaisimportantbecauseitshowsaperson's

academiclevelandability.Howeveradiplomacannotproveeverythingno

matterhowhighadiplomais.Ahigherdiplomacanonlytellothersthatthe

holderhasreceivedthiskindofeducation.Asfbrwhetherheorsheis

competentinworkingandwhetherheorsheisvirtuousthesestillremainas

questions.IsaDiplomaEverything?Nowadaysthereisawidelyheldbelief

thatdiplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiplomaatallcosts,

andothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncan

beexplainedbyatleasttworeasons.Ontheonehand,peoplebelieveahigher

diplomacanguaranteeaprosperousfuture,suchassuccessfulcareersand

respectablepositions.Ontheotherhand,thediplomapeopleholdisattached

totoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionfbrpeopletodo

almosteverything,fbrexample,tofindajob,tohaveadatewithagirl.Inmy

opinion,itisnodoubtthatdiplomaisimportant,becauseitshowsaperson's

academiclevelandability.However,adiplomacannotproveeverything,no

matterhowhighadiplomais.Ahigherdiplomacanonlytellothersthatthe

holderhasreceivedthiskindofeducation.Asforwhetherheorsheis

competentinworkingandwhetherheorsheisvirtuous,thesestillremainas

questions.解析：①由題目可知這是一篇分析型作文，需要運用“描述現(xiàn)

象——解釋原因一一提出解決辦法”的模式。本文按照要求可分成三部

分，第一段簡單介紹目前社會存在的現(xiàn)象；第二段分析造成這一現(xiàn)象的

具體原因，第三段闡述自己對該問題的看法。②在每段的論述中請注意

句式的變化，如定語從句、讓步狀語從句等；注意銜接手段的使用，如

however,asfor等。

8.ALetterofInquiryDearSirorMadameMynameisLiJingasophomore

ofthelawschool.IamwritingtoinformyouthatIwishtomoveintoanew

roomnextterm.IwouldpreferasingleroomasIfindthepresentsharing

arrangementinconvenient.Imustexplainthatthereasonformy

dissatisfactionismyroommate'sinconsideratebehavior.Foronethinghis

friendsareconstantlyvisitinghimandnoisypartiesarefrequentlyheld.For

anotherheplayshisloudspeakertooloudandtoolate.Inadditionhe

sometimestakesmythingswithoutmypermission.Underthese

circumstancesIfinditdifficulttoconcentrateonmystudiesandIamfalling

behindinmyassignments.WorseIbecomemorenervousanddepressedas

soonasIentermyroom.Iamsureyouwillunderstandmysituationandagree

thattheonlysolutionisformetomoveintoaroomofmyownwhereIwill

befreefromsuchdistractions.ThereforeIwouldbegratefulifyoucouldfind

asingleroomformepreferablynotinthesamebuildingbutasneartothe

collegecampusaspossible.SincerelyYoursLiJingALetterofInquiryDear

SirorMadame,MynameisLiJing,asophomoreofthelawschool.Iam

writingtoinform,youthatIwishtomoveintoanewroomnextterm.Iwould

preferasingleroom,asIfindthepresentsharingarrangementinconvenient.

Imustexplainthatthereasonformydissatisfactionismyroommatc*s

inconsideratebehavior.Foronething,hisfriendsareconstantlyvisitinghim

andnoisypartiesarefrequentlyheld.Foranotherheplayshisloudspeakertoo

loudandtoolate.Inaddition,hesometimestakesmythingswithoutmy

permission.Underthesecircumstances,Ifinditdifficulttoconcentrateonmy

studies,andIamfallingbehindinmyassignments.Worse,Ibecomemore

nervousanddepressedassoonasIentermyroom.Iamsureyouwill

understandmysituationandagreethattheonlysolutionisformetomove

intoaroomofmyown,whereIwillbefreefromsuchdistractions.Therefore,

Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldfindasingleroomforme,preferablynotin

thesamebuildingbutasneartothecollegecampusaspossible.Sincerely

Yours,LiJing

9.AbiIityandGoodLooksOldpeopleusuallytollyoungpeoplethatthey

shouldnotjudgepeoplebytheirappearance.Thatmeansappearanceisloss

importantthansayability.Indeedwe'veseensomanybrilliantpeoplewho

arenotgood-lookingatall.Inthefilm"Mozart"anoperasingerreiteratesthis

viewbysaying:"Forawomanoftasteitisnotthelooksbutthetalentthat

interestsus."Forherthepreferenceshowsone'staste.Nowadayshowever

thingsaremuchdifferentinthejobmarket.Withmoreandmoreinterviewers

puttingemphasisonthelooksortheappearanceofthejobapplican