2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：杰里米尋貓記：從慌亂到安心的歷程+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習杰里米尋貓記：從慌亂到安心的歷程1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Jeremyisaboywholovestolendahelpinghandtohisfamily.Hespendsqualitytimeplayingwithhisbabysisterwhilehismotherbusiesherselfinthekitchen,cookingdinner.Andaftermeals,hedutifullyassistshisfatherwithdryingthedishes.However,Jeremy’sfavoritejobisfeedingFletch,thefamily’spetcat.Fletchisahandsomecat,hisfuramixofbrownandblack,adornedwithtigerstripesrunningacrosshisback.Whenhe’shungry,FletchhasauniquewayofcommunicatingwithJeremy.HegentlybumpshisheadagainstJeremy’slegs,asilentreminderthatit’stimeforhismeal.Oneeveningafterdinner,MomaskedJeremytofindBabySuzy’sdoll.“Ithinkshemighthavedroppeditinthebackyardthisafternoon,”shesaidworriedly.“Shewon’tbeabletosleepwithoutit.Canyoutakealookbeforeitgetstoodark?”4續(xù)寫原文Withouthesitation,Jeremyopenedthebackdoorandranoutside.Thebrightreddollstoodoutamongthegrass,makingiteasyforhimtospot.Grabbingit,heranbackinside,relievedtohavefoundit.Laterthatnight,asJeremypreparedforbed,herememberedhisusualroutine.HealwayssaidgoodnighttoFletchbeforeturningoffthelight,butthecatwasnowheretobefound.Jeremysearchedthebathroomandhallway,butFletchwasmissing.Worried,hewentdownstairstogoonhissearch.Hecheckedthelivingroomanddiningroom,butstillnosignofFletch.Ashereachedthekitchen,Jeremy’sheartsank.Tearsbegantowellupinhiseyes.Mom,whowasenjoyingacupoftea,lookedupandnoticedhisworry.“Jeremy,youshouldbeinbedbynow!What’swrong?”sheasked,concernetchedonherface.5段首句Paragraph1：“Thebackdoorisopen!”Jeremycried,uneasinesscreepingintohisvoice.Paragraph2：Thenextmorning,Jeremywasawokenbyafamiliarsound—aloud“Meow”.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8杰里米是個樂于幫助家人的男孩，他喜歡和妹妹玩耍、幫爸爸洗碗，尤其喜歡喂家里的寵物貓弗萊奇。一天晚飯后，媽媽讓他去后院找妹妹的娃娃，他很快找到了。但晚上準備睡覺時，他發(fā)現(xiàn)弗萊奇不見了。他找遍了多個房間都沒找到，心里很著急。此時媽媽發(fā)現(xiàn)了他的異樣。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：“Thebackdoorisopen!”Jeremycried,uneasinesscreepingintohisvoice.“后門開著！”杰里米叫道，聲音里透著不安。他心急如焚地向媽媽解釋，肯定是自己找娃娃時忘了關門，弗萊奇很可能跑出去了。一想到這兒，他的眼淚就止不住地流。媽媽趕緊放下手中的茶杯，安慰他說大家一起找，肯定能找到。這時爸爸也被吵醒了，加入了尋找的隊伍。他們拿著手電筒，在院子里仔細地尋找，不放過任何一個角落。他們呼喚著弗萊奇的名字，聲音在寂靜的夜晚顯得格外響亮。然而，回應他們的只有空蕩蕩的黑夜。杰里米滿心自責，覺得都是自己的疏忽才讓弗萊奇陷入危險，他暗暗發(fā)誓，要是能找到弗萊奇，以后一定小心。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thenextmorning,Jeremywasawokenbyafamiliarsound—aloud“Meow”.第二天早上，杰里米被一陣熟悉的聲音——一聲響亮的“喵”叫醒了。他瞬間從床上坐起來，簡直不敢相信自己的耳朵。他連鞋都沒顧得上穿，就飛奔下樓。當他看到弗萊奇正安然無恙地坐在門口，悠閑地舔著爪子時，心中的喜悅簡直無法言表。他一下子沖過去，把弗萊奇緊緊抱在懷里，眼淚再次奪眶而出，但這次是激動和開心的淚水。他不停地向弗萊奇道歉，承諾以后一定不會再這么粗心。媽媽和爸爸看到這一幕，也都欣慰地笑了。經過這件事，杰里米明白了做事要細心負責，不能因為一時的大意而讓自己和家人擔心。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)“Thebackdoorisopen!”Jeremycried,uneasinesscreepingintohisvoice.Heexplainedtohismotherinapanicthathemusthaveforgottentoclosethedoorwhenhewenttofindthedoll.HewasextremelyworriedthatFletchmighthaverunout.Assoonashethoughtofthis,hiseyeswerefilledwithtears.Hismotherquicklyputdownthecupofteainherhandandcomfortedhim,sayingthattheywouldfindFletchiftheysearchedtogether.Atthistime,hisfatherwasalsowokenupandjoinedthesearch.Theytookflashlightsandcarefullysearchedtheyard,leavingnocornerunsearched.TheycalledoutFletch'sname,andtheirvoicessoundedparticularlyloudinthequietnight.However,onlytheemptynightrespondedtothem.Jeremywasfilledwithself-blame,feelingthatitwasallhiscarelessnessthatputFletchindanger.HesecretlysworethatifhecouldfindFletch,hewouldbecarefulinthefuture.13范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,Jeremywasawokenbyafamiliarsound—aloud“Meow”.Hesatupinbedinaninstant,hardlybelievinghisears.Herusheddownstairswithoutevenputtingonhisshoes.WhenhesawFletchsittingatthedoorsafelyandlickinghispawsleisurely,thejoyinhisheartwasbeyondwords.HerushedoverandhuggedFletchtightly,andtearswelledupinhiseyesagain,butthistimetheyweretearsofexcitementandhappiness.HekeptapologizingtoFletch,promisingthathewouldneverbesocarelessagain.Hismotherandfatheralsosmiledwithreliefwhentheysawthisscene.Afterthisincident,Jeremyunderstoodthatheshouldbecarefulandresponsiblewhendoingthings,andnotmakehimselfandhisfamilyworriedbecauseofmomentarycarelessness.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)“Thebackdoorisopen!”Jeremycried,asenseofuneasinesscreepingintohisvoice.Inastateofpanic,heexplainedtohismotherthathemusthaveleftthedoorajarwhenhewenttoretrievethedoll.ThethoughtthatFletchmighthaveescapedintothenightfilledhimwithdread,andtearswelledupinhiseyes.Withouthesitation,hismothersetasidehercupofteaandofferedwordsofcomfort,assuringhimthattogethertheywouldfindtheirbelovedpet.Hisfather,rousedfromsleepbythecommotion,joinedthesearchparty.Armedwithflashlights,theyscouredeveryinchoftheyard,theirvoicescallingoutFletch'snameechoingthroughthestillnight.Buttheonlyresponsewastheemptysilence.Overwhelmedwithself-blame,Jeremyberatedhimselfforhiscarelessness,vowingthatifhefoundFletch,hewouldbemorevigilantinthefuture.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,Jeremywasjoltedawakebyafamiliarsound—aloud“Meow”.Inaninstant,hesatboltuprightinbed,scarcelyabletobelievehisears.Barefoot,hedasheddownstairs.ThesightofFletch,safeandsound,sittingat