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高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習考試困境:珍妮的艱難抉擇與成長1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ItwasatypicalMondaymorningforJenny,adiligenthighschoolsenior.Thesoundofheralarmclockwokeherup,arudeawakeningfromhersweetdreams.Sheunwillinglyopenedhereyes,knowingwhatwaitedforher-another5longdaysatschool.Draggingherselfoutofbed,Jennywentthroughherusualmorningroutine.Shehurriedlygotdressed,grabbedherbackpack,andrushedtothekitchenforbreakfast.Hermotherhadpreparedanutritiousmeal,butJennyhadnoappetite.Shewastoooccupiedwiththoughtsofanupcomingexaminhermostchallengingsubject,mathematics.AsJennywalkedtoschool,hermindwanderedbacktothecountlesshoursshehadspentstudyingandpracticingequations(方程式).Shehadputinlotsofeffort,hopingtoimprovehergrades.However,despiteherdedication,shewasstrugglingtoachievethedesiredresults.Doubtsstartedcrawlingin,andanxietystayedinhermindlikedarkclouds.4續(xù)寫原文Asstudentssettledintotheirseats,Mr.Johnson,theirmathteacher,announcedthattheexamwouldtakeplacethatafternoon.Jennystartedtofeelafraid.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshehadforgottenhercalculatorathome,anessentialtoolfortheexam.Panicturnedintohopelessness,assheknewthatborrowingoneduringthetestwouldbestrictlyprohibited.Jenny’sfriends,EmmaandDavid,noticedherworryandapproachedherafterclass.Theyofferedtheirhelp.EmmasuggestedthatJennybehonesttoMr.Johnsonandexplainhersituation.David,however,hadadifferentplan.Heproposedsneaking(偷偷給)hiscalculatortoherduringtheexam,riskingpunishmentforcheating.5段首句Paragraph1:Jenny’sheartsank.Paragraph2:Theexamstarted.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8周一早晨,高三學生珍妮被鬧鐘叫醒,滿心不情愿地開啟新一周的學校生活。她因即將到來的數(shù)學考試而焦慮,盡管努力學習但成績?nèi)圆焕硐???荚嚠斕?,她忘帶計算器,而考試中借計算器是被禁止的。朋友艾瑪和大衛(wèi)發(fā)現(xiàn)她的擔憂,艾瑪建議她向老師如實說明情況,大衛(wèi)則提議考試時偷偷遞給她計算器。點1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語;點2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語;點4:文章結尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Soon,thebeachwasfilledwithscenesofjoy.珍妮的心一沉。她沒想到會面臨這樣艱難的抉擇。接受大衛(wèi)偷偷遞計算器的提議,雖然可能會在考試中取得好成績,但這是不誠實的行為,違背了她的原則,一旦被發(fā)現(xiàn),不僅自己會受到嚴厲的懲罰,還會連累大衛(wèi)。而聽從艾瑪?shù)慕ㄗh,向老師坦白,又擔心老師不會通融,自己依然會在考試中處于劣勢,成績也會受到影響。她內(nèi)心十分糾結,眉頭緊鎖,雙手不自覺地揪著衣角。在一番激烈的思想斗爭后,珍妮想到一直以來父母和老師對自己品德的教導,她終于下定決心,要做一個誠實的人。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:Theexamstarted.考試開始了。珍妮深吸一口氣,平復了一下緊張的心情,然后起身走向老師。她鼓起勇氣,誠懇地對老師說:“老師,我忘記帶計算器了,非常抱歉?!崩蠋熆粗?,眼中閃過一絲驚訝,但很快露出了理解的神情。老師說:“這次我可以借給你,不過下次一定要記得?!闭淠莞屑さ亟舆^老師遞來的計算器,回到座位上開始認真答題。雖然考試過程中遇到了不少難題,但她憑借著扎實的知識和努力,盡力完成了試卷。考試結束后,珍妮感到無比輕松,因為她堅守了自己的原則,也收獲了成長。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Jenny’sheartsank.Sheneverexpectedtofacesuchatoughdecision.AcceptingDavid'sproposalofsecretlypassingthecalculatormighthelphergetgoodgradesintheexam.However,itwasdishonestandagainstherprinciples.Oncediscovered,notonlywouldshebeseverelypunished,butDavidwouldalsobeimplicated.Ontheotherhand,followingEmma'sadviceandbeinghonestwiththeteacher,shewasworriedthattheteachermightnotbelenient,andshewouldstillbeatadisadvantageintheexam,whichwouldaffecthergrades.Shewasextremelyconflicted,frowningtightlyandunconsciouslytuggingatthecornerofherclotheswithherhands.Afterafierceinternalstruggle,thinkingofthemoralteachingsfromherparentsandteachers,Jennyfinallymadeuphermindtobeanhonestperson.13范文呈現(xiàn)Theexamstarted.Jennytookadeepbreathtocalmhernerves,thenstoodupandwalkedtowardstheteacher.Shesummoneduphercourageandsaidsincerely,"Teacher,I'msosorrythatIforgottobringmycalculator."Theteacherlookedather,aflashofsurpriseinhiseyes,butsoonalookofunderstandingappeared.Theteachersaid,"Icanlendyouminethistime,butremembertobringitnexttime."Jennygratefullytookthecalculatorfromtheteacherandreturnedtoherseattostartansweringthequestionscarefully.Althoughsheencounteredmanydifficultproblemsduringtheexam,shetriedherbesttocompletethepaperwithhersolidknowledgeandhardwork.Aftertheexam,Jennyfeltextremelyrelievedbecauseshehadadheredtoherprinciplesandalsogainedgrowth.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Jenny’sheartsank.Neverhadsheanticipatedbeingconfrontedwithsuchaformidabledecision.AcceptingDavid'sofferofsurreptitiouslyslippingherthecalculatormightsecurehergoodmarksintheexam.Nevertheless,itwasablatantactofdishonesty,runningcountertoherdeeply-heldprinciples.Weretheytobecaught,notonlywouldshebesubjecttoseverepunishment,butDavidwouldalsobedraggedintothequagmire.Conversely,heedingEmma'scounselandcomingcleantotheteacherfilledherwithtrepidation.Shefearedthattheteachermightnotshowmercy,leavingheratadistinctdisadvantageduringtheexamandthusadverselyaffectinghergrades.Tornbetweenthetwooptions,shefurrowedherbrows,herhandsunconsciouslyclutchingthehemofherclothes.Afteraprotractedinternalbattle,recallingthemorallessonsinstilledbyherparentsandteachers,Jennyfinallysteeledherresolvetoupholdherintegrity.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Theexamstarted.Takingadeepbreathtosteadyhernerves,Jennyrosefromherseatandmadeherwaytowardstheteacher.Summoningallhercourage,shesaidearnestly,"Teacher,I'mterriblysorry,butI'veforgottenmycalculator."Theteacher'seyeswidenedinmomentarysurprise,whichwasswiftlyreplacedbyanexpressionofunderstanding."I'lllendyouminethistime,"theteachersaid,"butd

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