2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：生日驚喜中的道德抉擇與堅(jiān)守+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)生日驚喜中的道德抉擇與堅(jiān)守1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Onmytwelfthbirthday,Idesiredashiningnewbicycle.However,consideringourfamily’sfinancialstruggle,Irealizedthatsuchabikewasmerelyanimpossibledream.Then,Idecidedtochooseanightstand(床頭柜).Itseemedlikeasensiblechoice,asitwouldprovidemewithasafespacetostoremypersonalthings.Therefore,Irequestedmyparentsforanightstandequippedwithlockabledrawers.Wevisitedthesecond-handfurniturestoreandchanceduponanoldnightstandinadarkbrowncolor.Althoughitsappearancewasn’tattractive,ithaddrawersthatcouldbelocked.Idecidedtorepaintitinordertomakeitlookbetter.4續(xù)寫原文Afterbringingithome,Ipreparedtopaintthenightstand.However,asIpulledoutthedrawers,Ifoundsomethingstucktothebackofthebottomdrawer.Curiousandeager,Ireacheddeepintothebackandwassurprisedtodiscoverabag.Uponopeningthebag,Idiscoveredseveralofficial-lookingpaperswithin,underwhichtherewasawad(沓)ofdollarbills!ImaginemysurprisewhenIfoundsuchatreasure,especiallyonmybirthday!Eagerly,Ireadthepapers,whichturnedoutawill.Acertainelderlywomanwasleavinghersavingstohersonandgrandchildren.Itmusthavebeenthatafterherpassingnooneknewofthemoney.Herfamilydonatedthenightstandtoasecond-handfurniturestore,andnowithasfounditswayintomyhand.5續(xù)寫原文Icountedthemoneyandfoundittotaledover1,000dollars.Myheartwasracingwithexcitement.Withsuchalargeamount,Icouldbuythecoolestbicycle.Ievenhadenoughtobuybicyclesformyyoungerbrothers.PerhapsIcouldevensurprisemyparentswithacar.Whatadilemma!ShouldIkeepthemoneyanduseittobuyallkindsofthingsformyselfandmyfamily?OrshouldIreturnitall?“Somebodyhelpsmewiththis!”Ibegged.ButIknewIdidn’ttrulyneedanyonetogivemetheanswer.Ihadaclearsenseofrightandwrong.Idecidednottofailthistest.Itwasatestofmyvirtue.6段首句Paragraph1：IaskedmyfamilytocometomybedroomandshowedthemwhatI’dfound.Paragraph2：Theythreereachedthelinetogether,whowasthecrowdcheering?Theboywasconfused.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9十二歲生日時(shí)，因家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)困難，“我”放棄新自行車，選擇二手床頭柜。帶回家準(zhǔn)備重新粉刷時(shí)，在抽屜后發(fā)現(xiàn)裝有遺囑和一千多美元的袋子。面對(duì)這筆巨款，“我”陷入糾結(jié)，是用它滿足家人的愿望，還是堅(jiān)守道德底線歸還。最終“我”決定通過家人支持尋找失主，一場(chǎng)歸還失物的行動(dòng)就此展開。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：IaskedmyfamilytocometomybedroomandshowedthemwhatI’dfound.我把家人叫到臥室，向他們展示了我發(fā)現(xiàn)的東西。家人們圍攏過來，看著桌上的錢和遺囑，臉上都露出了驚訝的神情。我詳細(xì)地講述了發(fā)現(xiàn)它們的經(jīng)過，說完后，大家都陷入了沉默。過了一會(huì)兒，爸爸率先開口，他嚴(yán)肅地看著我，眼神中滿是欣慰，表揚(yáng)我做得對(duì)，并且強(qiáng)調(diào)這錢必須歸還。媽媽也在一旁點(diǎn)頭表示贊同，她說這是做人的基本準(zhǔn)則。在家人的支持下，我們開始四處打聽尋找失主的方法。我們先聯(lián)系了二手家具店，店主幫我們聯(lián)系到了處理老太太遺產(chǎn)的慈善機(jī)構(gòu)。經(jīng)過一系列的電話溝通和信息核實(shí)，我們離歸還這筆失物越來越近。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Afewdayslater,theoldlady’ssoncametomyhousewithhiswife.幾天后，老太太的兒子和兒媳來到了我家。他們一進(jìn)門，眼中就閃爍著感激的淚光。他們緊緊握著我的手，激動(dòng)地說這筆錢對(duì)他們家庭意義重大，尤其是能幫助孩子們繼續(xù)學(xué)業(yè)。為了表達(dá)感謝，他們拿出一個(gè)紅包要給我當(dāng)作報(bào)酬，我連忙婉拒了。我真誠(chéng)地告訴他們，看到錢能回到真正屬于它的地方，我就已經(jīng)很滿足了。這次經(jīng)歷讓我更加堅(jiān)定了自己的道德信念，也讓我深刻理解了誠(chéng)信的價(jià)值，它成為我十二歲生日中最難忘的記憶。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Afewdayslater,theoldlady'ssonanddaughter-in-lawcametomyhouse.Assoonastheyenteredthedoor,theireyeswerefilledwithtearsofgratitude.Theyheldmyhandstightlyandsaidexcitedlythatthismoneywasofgreatsignificancetotheirfamily,especiallyfortheirchildren'seducation.Toexpresstheirgratitude,theytookoutaredenvelopeandwantedtogiveittomeasareward,butIdeclineditimmediately.Itoldthemsincerelythatseeingthemoneyreturntoitsrightfulplacemademeverysatisfied.Thisexperiencemadememoredeterminedinmymoralbeliefsandalsomademedeeplyunderstandthevalueofintegrity.Itbecamethemostmemorablememoryofmytwelfth-birthday.14范文呈現(xiàn)Whenhereachedthem,theboygentlytooktheblindman'shandandsaidsoftly,"Sir,letmeguideyou."Thenhesupportedtheoldlady'sarmandsaidwithconcern,"Grandma,don'tworry.We'llgotogetherslowly."Withtheboy'shelp,thethreeofthemmovedforwardstepbysteptowardsthefinishline.Whentheyfinallycrossedittogether,thecrowderuptedintocheersandapplause.Lookingaroundattheapprovingsmilesontheaudience'sfaces,theboyfinallyunderstoodthatrealsuccesswasn'taboutshiningalonebutaboutbringingwarmthtoothers.Fromthenon,theboychangedcompletelyandalwaysadheredtothebeliefofkindnessandhelpingothersinhislaterlife.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Isummonedmyfamilytomybedroom,unveilingtheunexpecteddiscoverybeforethem.Theireyeswidenedinastonishmentastheybeheldthestackofmoneyandthewilllyingonthetable.Inmeticulousdetail,Irecountedthesequenceofeventsthatledtothisfind.Post-narration,aprofoundsilenceensued.Momentslater,myfatherbrokethestillness.Hisgaze,firmyetfilledwithpride,fixeduponmeashecommendedmyuprightdecision,emphasizingthatthemoney'srightfulreturnwasnon-negotiable.Mymother,noddinginunison,affirmedthatsuchintegritywasthecornerstoneofourfamilyvalues.Bolsteredbytheirunwaveringsupport,weembarkedonaquesttolocatetherightfulowner.Ourinitialstepwastoreachouttothesecond-handfurniturestore,whoseproprietor,inturn,connecteduswiththecharityoverseeingtheoldlady'sestate.Throughaseriesofarduousphonecallsandpainstakinginformationverifications,weedgedclosertothefulfillmentofourmissiontorestorethelostinheritance.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Afewdayshence,theoldlady'ssonanddaughter-in-lawgracedourdoorstep.Theireyes,brimmingwithheartfeltgratitude,metmineastheyentered.Theyclaspedmyhandsfirmly,theirvoicestremulouswithemotionastheyexpressedtheprofoundsignificance