上海教育版九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下冊(cè)Module3 Unit6第5課時(shí)教學(xué)課件

Module3SportandhealthUnit6Caringforyourhealth第5課時(shí)Writing·下冊(cè)·目錄02課堂練習(xí)01寫作樂園話題十四給朋友的一封郵件【短文寫作】假設(shè)你是Joe，你的朋友Simon最近因九年級(jí)功課壓力大而變得少言寡語(yǔ)，與同學(xué)溝通困難。他在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面也有困難，而且考前緊張失眠。此外，他因父母讓他放棄他喜愛的籃球活動(dòng)而與父母吵架。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件，幫他找到解決方案。80詞左右。寫作樂園DearSimon,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Joe【寫作指導(dǎo)】在寫作過程中要明確以下幾點(diǎn)：1.作文要求是寫一封電子郵件，要注意電子郵件的格式；2.作文開篇要簡(jiǎn)潔闡述寫這封電子郵件的目的——幫朋友Simon找到解決方案，所以重點(diǎn)應(yīng)該是寫解決方案，不要過多地寫問題，導(dǎo)致作文頭重腳輕；3.朋友Simon遇到的問題有：與同學(xué)溝通困難、英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)、緊張失眠、與父母吵架。寫作過程中提出的解決方案要合理，能夠相應(yīng)地解決這些問題。同時(shí)要給予鼓勵(lì)和支持?！痉段馁p析】DearSimon,I'msorrytohearthatyouhavehadsomuchtroublesinceyougotintoGrade9.I'mwritingtogiveyousomehelp.Youusedtobeoutgoingandnowyoudon'twanttoexpressyourselfbecauseofthestressfromstudy.Andyoudon'tgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.Ithinkyoushouldcommunicatewithyourclassmatesoften.AsforyourEnglishstudy,whynottakenotesinclassandpractisemoreafterclass?Learntorelax！Takealongwalkbeforetheexam.Youlovebasketballbutyourparentsaskedyoutostopitbecausetheywantyoutopaymoreattentiontoyourstudy.IfIwereyou,I'dtalkwiththeminsteadofarguingwiththem.IhopewhatIsaidcouldhelpyoudealwithyourworries.Bestwishes!Yours,Joe課堂練習(xí)一、寫作能力提升(一)請(qǐng)使用所給的短語(yǔ)造句。1.bebusywith忙于做……________________________________________________________________________________________________

TheSmithshavebeenbusywithhouseworksincemorning.2.takeup學(xué)著做；開始做________________________________________________________________________________________________(二)請(qǐng)找出句子中錯(cuò)誤的部分，并將正確的句子寫在橫線上。3.Isawsheistalkingwithhermother.________________________________________________Weshouldtakeupahobbybecausehobbiesareenjoyableandrelaxing.Isawshewastalkingwithhermother.4.Dosportsisagoodwaytogetrelaxed.________________________________________________(三)請(qǐng)根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)的擴(kuò)寫要求，將短句擴(kuò)寫。5.Weshouldformahabitofmakingplansforourstudy.(擴(kuò)寫原因)________________________________________________________________________________________________Doingsportsisagoodwaytogetrelaxed.Weshouldformahabitofmakingplansforourstudybecauseitcanhelpuslearnmoreefficiently.6.Weshouldlearntorelaxourselves.(擴(kuò)寫方式)________________________________________________________________________________________________

Weshouldlearntorelaxourselvesbydoingsportsoftenorwatchingamovie.二、讀寫綜合A.回答問題請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所提供的信息，回答5個(gè)問題。要求所寫答案語(yǔ)法正確、語(yǔ)義完整切題，并把答案寫在橫線上。

WhenIwasinprimaryschool,Iwasveryfatanddidn'tlikedoingexercise.Ifelttiredandboredwhendoinganykindofexercise.BecauseIhardlydidanyexercise,Ioftenfeltsickandwenttoseethedoctor.What'sworse,Iwasabsent（缺席的）fromschoolfromtimetotime,soIcouldn'tcatchupwithothers.Andmypoorhealthmadeitevenmoredifficultformetokeeponexercising.Myparentswerereallyworriedaboutme.

Oneafternoon,myfatheraskedmetohaveawalkwithhiminthepark.Hesaiditwasdifficultforpeoplewithverypoorhealthtotakeuprunningandothersportsatthebeginning,buttheycouldstartfromwalkingandincreaseendurance(耐力)littlebylittle.Withhisencouragement,Iagreedandwewentouttogether.Itwashardformetowalkforhalfanhour.Iwantedtogiveup,butmyfatherencouragedmetokeeponwalking.

Fromthenon,Ioftenwalkedwithmyparents.Tomysurprise,Icouldwalkforanhourinthefourthmonth.HowproudIfelt!NowIamaperfectrunnerinmymiddleschool.IlostallthefatandIamahealthygirlnow.1.Howdidthewriterfeelwhendoinganykindofexerciseinprimaryschool?________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thewriter/Shefelttiredandbored(whendoinganykindofexerciseinprimaryschool).2.Whydidthewriterfallbehindothersatschool?________________________________________________________________________________________________

Becausethewriter/shewasabsentfromschoolfromtimetotime.3.Whoencouragedthewritertotakeupdoingsports?________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thewriter's/Herfatherencouragedhertotakeupdoingsports./Thewriter's/Herfather.4.Howlongcouldthewriterkeepwalkinginthefourthmonth?________________________________________________________________________________________________5.Howisthewriternow,healthyorunhealthy?________________________________________________

Thewriter/Shecouldkeepwalkingforanhourinthefourthmonth./Foranhour.Thewriter/Sheishealthynow.B.書面表達(dá)健康的生活習(xí)慣對(duì)于成長(zhǎng)中的我們來說是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該如何養(yǎng)成健康的生活習(xí)慣?請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，寫一篇短文來給出你的建議。內(nèi)容包括：(1)關(guān)于作息的建議；(2)關(guān)于飲食的建議；(3)關(guān)于運(yùn)動(dòng)的建議；(4)補(bǔ)充其他建議。作文要求：(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。(2)語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Ithinkhealthyhabitsareveryimportanttous.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Herearesomewaystobehealthy.First,weshouldgetenoughsleepduringthenight.Wecangotobedearlyandgetupearly.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth.Second,wemu