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高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)暫別手機(jī)三十天:重拾生活本真1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文MyiPhonewasmissing.Oneday,itwasgluedtomypalm,andthenext…poof!Itwasgone.Itookallthenecessarystepstofindmyphone.Icheckedjacketpockets,searchedourapartment,andIstoppedbackintoWholeFoodsandgym.Desperately,Icalledandtextedthephone,andIdownloadedaphone-finderapp.Badluck.Itwasgone.Iwasreflectingonwhatitwouldmeannottohaveasmartphone—maybenotforever,butpossiblyforlongerthanacoupleofdays.AsIheardmyhusbandabouttobindmeintoanothertwo-yearcontract,Ifoundmyselfscreaming,“No!”Idecidedtoconductasocialexperiment.Iwouldnotuseasmartphoneforthirtydays.IknewthatonceIhadareplacementinhand,itwouldnotbesoeasytogetridofthescreen.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Earlyon,Ireachedforaphantom(虛幻的)phonemoretimesthanIcancount.Finally,tohavesomethingformyhandstodo,Iboughtabookthathadbeenrecommendedbymorethanonefriend.Iwasn’tabletotakephotos.Thiswasalossforme.MyInstagramwastypicallyupdatedeveryweekorso,andIusedthecamerafeaturetorecordplacesIwantedtorevisit,itemsformyshoppinglist,andthebehaviorsofmyfourchildren.AsanenthusiasticuseroftheiPhonenotepadfeature,Iendedupbuyingaphysicalnotebook,whichledtomoremeaningfulnotetaking.5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Ihadmoretimetotrulylisten.Ihadbeenprogrammedtoignoreeverythingexceptwhatwasdirectlyinfrontofmeonthefascinatingscreen.Withoutthedistraction,Iwasmorepresent.Moresleep,lessactivity…thethirty-daybreakwasacompleteresetonthebasics.ItalsoleftmewithaheightenedawarenessofhowcarelesslyIhadbeenmanagingadultlife.Gettingawayfromthephone,Iopeneduptoanewwayofbeing.Finally,Imanagedtostoptheconstantrushofdoingthings.6段首句Paragraph1:IbegantoreturntothelifethatIhadabandonedyearsago.Paragraph2:Soonaftertheexperiment,anewiPhonearrived.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9作者的iPhone丟失后,多方尋找無(wú)果。因不想與丈夫簽訂新的兩年合約,決定開(kāi)展為期30天不用智能手機(jī)的社會(huì)實(shí)驗(yàn)。實(shí)驗(yàn)初期,她常下意識(shí)找手機(jī),后通過(guò)看書(shū)、買(mǎi)筆記本替代手機(jī)功能。沒(méi)有手機(jī)干擾,她能更專(zhuān)注地傾聽(tīng)、享受生活,意識(shí)到之前被手機(jī)分散了太多精力。點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首,續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1:IbegantoreturntothelifethatIhadabandonedyearsago.我開(kāi)始重新回歸到多年前曾拋棄的生活。曾經(jīng),閱讀紙質(zhì)書(shū)是我最大的愛(ài)好,可智能手機(jī)的出現(xiàn)讓我漸漸遺忘了那種沉浸在文字海洋中的快樂(lè)。如今,我又重新捧起一本本經(jīng)典著作,在午后的陽(yáng)光下,慢慢翻動(dòng)書(shū)頁(yè),感受作者筆下細(xì)膩的情感與深刻的思想。我還恢復(fù)了晨跑的習(xí)慣,沿著河邊的小路奔跑,呼吸著清新的空氣,欣賞著沿途的風(fēng)景,看著朝陽(yáng)一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)升起,心中充滿了對(duì)生活的熱愛(ài)。與家人相處的時(shí)光也變得更加珍貴,晚上我們會(huì)一起玩桌游,歡聲笑語(yǔ)回蕩在房間里,增進(jìn)了彼此之間的感情。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2:Soonaftertheexperiment,anewiPhonearrived.在實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)束后不久,一部新的iPhone送到了我手中。當(dāng)我拆開(kāi)包裝,看到那熟悉的屏幕時(shí),心中既興奮又有些擔(dān)憂。興奮的是它能再次為我?guī)?lái)便捷的生活和豐富的信息,擔(dān)憂的是我會(huì)再次陷入對(duì)手機(jī)過(guò)度依賴的怪圈。于是,我給自己制定了嚴(yán)格的使用規(guī)則。我卸載了一些容易讓人沉迷的娛樂(lè)軟件,只保留了必要的社交和工作應(yīng)用。我規(guī)定自己每天使用手機(jī)的時(shí)間不超過(guò)兩小時(shí),并且在和家人相處、閱讀、運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)候,將手機(jī)調(diào)至靜音狀態(tài)。通過(guò)這些措施,我希望能更好地掌控手機(jī),而不是被它掌控我的生活。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)IbegantoreturntothelifethatIhadabandonedyearsago.Readingphysicalbooksusedtobeoneofmygreatestpleasures,buttheadventofsmartphonesmademegraduallyforgetthejoyofbeingimmersedintheoceanofwords.Now,Ipickedupclassicworksagain.Intheafternoonsun,Islowlyturnedthepages,feelingthedelicateemotionsandprofoundthoughtsdescribedbytheauthors.Ialsoresumedmymorningrunningroutine.Runningalongtheriversidepath,Ibreathedinthefreshairandadmiredthesceneryalongtheway.Watchingthesunrisebitbybit,myheartwasfilledwithloveforlife.Thetimespentwithmyfamilybecamemoreprecious.Intheevenings,weplayedboardgamestogether.Thelaughterechoedintheroom,strengtheningourbond.14范文呈現(xiàn)Soonaftertheexperiment,anewiPhonearrived.WhenIunpackeditandsawthefamiliarscreen,Ifeltbothexcitedandabitworried.Iwasexcitedbecauseitcouldbringmeconvenienceandaccesstoabundantinformationagain.However,IwasworriedthatIwouldfallbackintothetrapofover-relyingonthephone.Therefore,Isetstrictrulesformyself.Iuninstalledsomeentertainmentappsthatwereeasytogetaddictedtoandonlykeptessentialsocialandworkapplications.Ilimitedmydailyphone-usingtimetonomorethantwohours.Also,whenIwaswithmyfamily,reading,orexercising,Iwouldturnmyphonetosilentmode.Throughthesemeasures,Ihopedtobettercontrolmyphoneuseinsteadofbeingcontrolledbyit.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)IembarkedonajourneybacktothelifeIhadforsakenyearsago.Once,delvingintophysicalbookswasoneofmymostcherishedpastimes,yettheemergenceofsmartphonesgraduallyluredmeawayfromtheenchantmentoflosingmyselfinaseaofwords.Now,Ionceagaincradledclassicvolumesinmyhands.Bathedinthewarmglowofafternoonsunlight,Ileisurelyturnedeachpage,savoringeveryemotionandprofoundinsightpennedbytheauthors.Additionally,Ireinstatedmymorningjoggingroutine.AsItrottedalongtheriversidetrail,thecrisp,freshairfilledmylungs,andthecaptivatingsceneryunfoldedbeforemyeyes.Witnessingthesun'sgradualascent,myheartswelledwithanoverwhelmingsenseofloveforlife.Moreover,thetimespentinthecompanyofmyfamilytookonanewfoundsignificance.Intheevenings,weengagedinboard-gamesessions,ourlaughterreverberatingthroughouttheroom,forginganevenstrongerfamilybond.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Shortlyaftertheexperiment'sconclusion,anewiPhonefounditswayintomyhands.Uponunwrappingitandlayingeyesonthefamiliarscreen,acomplexmixofexcitementandtrepidationcoursedthroughme.Theexcitementstemmedfromtheanticipationoftheconvenienceandvastreservoirofinformationitpromised,whilethetrepidationarosefromthefearofslippingbackintothequagmireofexcessivephonedependence.Thus,Ii
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