專題六-書面表達-04-建議類(解析版)

體裁命題形式寫作主題2022新高考I卷應用文邀請信寫郵件邀請外教進行一次訪談II卷應用文邀請信寫郵件邀請外教進行一次訪談全國卷乙卷說明文投稿利用填表調(diào)查結(jié)果給報社投稿甲卷應用文投稿以世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿2021新高考I卷應用文投稿?？痽outh慶祝十周年，向?？磉_自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福II卷應用文投稿校刊youth慶祝十周年，向校刊表達自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福全國卷乙卷應用文發(fā)言稿以“besmartonlinelearners”為主題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽甲卷應用文征求建議征求外國朋友建議，哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人2020全國卷I卷應用文投稿寫一篇以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題投稿參賽II卷應用文日記寫一篇英文短文介紹上周末采摘活動III卷應用文求助信給外教寫一封信，請幫忙指導建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，并說明理由，使別人了解自己的想法、主張，能利用所提建議解決有關問題的一類信件。建議信要簡潔明確、理由充分、具有合理性和說服力。其結(jié)構(gòu)一般如下：①、明確問題，并表明幫助意愿②、提出具體建議并給出相應的理由③、希望對方的問題得到解決素材精粹【高分句型】首段：開門見山表明寫信目的I'mverysorrytohearthatyouhavetroublein.......atthemoment.Herearesometipsforyou.獲悉此刻你遇到……麻煩，我深感遺憾。這是給你的一些建議。Learningthat......，'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonhowto........得知，我寫信給你一些關于如何…的建議。主體部分：提出具體建議Whenitcomestosuchasituation，Iwouldliketosuggestthat........Foronething，........Foranother,.......What'smore........當遇到這種情況時，我想建議…。一方面，……。另一方面，……。而且，…AsfarasI'mconcerned/Frommypointofview，itisagoodideato......./itwouldbewiseofyouto.......Besides，Istronglyadviseyouto..Lastbutnotleast，youcan.........就我而言/在我看來，……是個好主意/你……是明智的。此外，我強烈建議你……。最后但同樣重要的是，你可以……尾段：希望采納建議并表示祝福Personally，itwouldbebeneficialifyoustickto........在我看來，如果你堅持……的話會有好處的2.Iwillbeveryhappyifyoucantakemyadvice/ideasintoconsideration.如果你能考慮我的建議/想法，我會很開心。Hopefullythesesuggestionswillbeofgreathelptoyou.希望這些建議對你有很大的幫助。佳作共賞DearMichael，I'mmorethandelightedtolearnthatyouaregoingtoparticipateintheTraditionalChineseCultureCompetition.I'mwillingtogiveyouahandandoffersomepracticalsuggestionsatyourrequest.Tobeginwith，itisnecessaryforyoutoconsultsomebooksconcerningtraditionalChineseculture，thusbroadeningyourhorizonsandwellequippingyouforthecomingcompetition.Secondly，whynotwatchsomevideoclips？Youareboundtogetsomeinspirationfromthem.Asforwhenandwheretomeet，canwemakeitat4：00thisFridayafternooninyourclassroom？Ifit’snotconvenientforyou，pleaseletmeknowwhattimeissuitableforyouinadvance.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours，LiHua*注：本書"佳作共賞"欄目中畫波浪線的部分可作模板背誦。（2021·北京·高考真題）假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你和英國好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達歉意并說明原因；2.提出建議并給出理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.HowaboutgoingoutnextSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetattheschoolgateat9:00.Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給英國好友Jim寫一封電子郵件，就因故不能赴約而致歉并建議再約?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累通知：tell→inform麻煩：problem→trouble怎么樣：whatabout→howabout適合：fit→suit2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.拓展句：IshouldbeavailableanytimenextweekendsothatIcangooutwithyouandhaveagoodtime.【點睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthis

weekend.(運用了that引導的賓語從句)[高分句型2]I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.(運用了who引導的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型3]Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.(運用了what引導的賓語從句)（2021·全國·高考乙卷真題）你校將舉辦英語演講比賽。請你以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.分析優(yōu)勢與不足；2.提出學習建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.題目和首句已為你寫好。BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】onepossibleversion:BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,Wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽。【詳解】1.詞匯積累充分利用：makefulluseof→makethemostof擴寬,豐富：broaden→enrich各種各樣：allkindsof→varietiesof不完美：imperfection→defect2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.拓展句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantages，findingaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【點睛】[高分句型1]Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueand

thefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（非謂語作狀語和which引導的非限制性定語從句）[高分句型2]Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）（2019·天津·高考真題）假設你是晨光中學的李津，英國友好校將派教師來你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動?；顒悠陂g，英方教師Chris將做一個有關西方藝術的講座、現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學生的意見。請根據(jù)以下提示給Chris寫一封電子郵件:

⑴你喜歡的講座話題（從音樂、美術、舞蹈中任選其一）；⑵選擇該話題的原因及關于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；⑶希望從中有何收獲。注意：⑴詞數(shù)不少于100；⑵可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；⑶開頭和結(jié)尾已給出、不計入總詞數(shù)。DearChris,I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【答案】DearChris,

I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.It’sourgreatpleasuretohaveyouvisitourschoolandgivealectureonwesternartduringthecomingsummervacation.Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliverthelectureonthistopic.Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadvice,andIhopethatIcangainmoreknowledgethroughthelecture.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給英方教師Chris寫信，就一個有關西方藝術的講座內(nèi)容給出意見?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累做演講：givealecture→makeaspeech提供：providesb.withsth.→refersb.sth.機會：opportunity→chance采納建議：takeone’sadvice→followone’sadvice2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.拓展句：Westernmusic，whichisservedasabridge，providesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.【點睛】【高分句型1】Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliverthelectureonthistopic.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.（運用了when引導的時間狀語從句）（2022·江蘇省泰州市教育局模擬預測）假定你是李華，得知你的新西蘭筆友Jason正負責籌備學校的中國詩歌節(jié)。請你給他寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的心情；2.活動建議；3.良好祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好；3.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearJason,I’mgladthataChinesePoetryFestivalistotakeplaceinyourschool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThefestivalwillsurelydeepenyourunderstandingofChinesecultureandIhopeitwillbeasuccess.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJason,I’mgladthataChinesePoetryFestivalistotakeplaceinyourschool.Variouscompetitions,likepoetrytranslation,poetryreadingandpoetrywriting,shouldbeincluded,whichnotonlyhelparousestudents’passionforgettinginvolvedbutofferstudentsaplatformtoshowthemselves.Besides,Idorecommendalectureonpoetryappreciationbegiven,thusequippingthestudentswithmorerelevantknowledge.ThefestivalwillsurelydeepenyourunderstandingofChinesecultureandIhopeitwillbeasuccess.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。新西蘭筆友Jason正負責籌備學校的中國詩歌節(jié)，要求考生給他寫一封信?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累舉辦：takeplace→hold比賽：competitions→matches激發(fā)：arouse→inspire此外：Besides→What’smore2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Variouscompetitions,likepoetrytranslation,poetryreadingandpoetrywriting,shouldbeincluded.拓展句：Variouscompetitionswhichincludepoetrytranslation,poetryreadingandpoetrywriting.【點睛】【高分句型1】Variouscompetitions,likepoetrytranslation,poetryreadingandpoetrywriting,shouldbeincluded,whichnotonlyhelparousestudents’passionforgettinginvolvedbutofferstudentsaplatformtoshowthemselves.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句，同時使用了notonly……but句型）【高分句型2】I’mgladthataChinesePoetryFestivalistotakeplaceinyourschool.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）（2022·湖北·武漢市第十二中學模擬預測）假定你是李華，你校英語廣播電臺將對播出時段、時長、欄目等做調(diào)整，正在向聽眾征求意見。請你寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的建議；2.你的理由。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearEnglishradiostation,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua【答案】DearEnglishradiostation,

Knowingthatyouwilladjustthebroadcasttimeslot,lengthandcolumn,Iamwritingtogivemysuggestions.Firstofall,Ithinka20-minutenewssummarycanbeplayedbeforethemorningreadingclass,whichwillhelpstudentsunderstandnationaleventsandstimulatetheirlisteningability.Secondly,Englishpopsongscanbeplayedfortenminutesafterschoolatnoon,whichcanrelievestudents’studypressureallmorning.Finally,duringtheafternoonbreak,someexcellentsampleessayspublishedbystudentscanbeplayed.Hopingmysuggestionscanbehelpful.

Yours,

LiHua【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生對于你校英語廣播電臺將對播出時段、時長、欄目等做調(diào)整，正在向聽眾征求意見的情況，寫封郵件給出建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累建議：suggestions→advice緩解，放松：relieve→relax壓力：pressure→stress優(yōu)秀的：excellent→outstanding2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Finally,duringtheafternoonbreak,someexcellentsampleessayspublishedbystudentscanbeplayed.拓展句：Finally,duringtheafternoonbreak,someexcellentsampleessayswhicharepublishedbystudentscanbeplayed.【點睛】【高分句型1】Firstofall,Ithinka20-minutenewssummarycanbeplayedbeforethemorningreadingclass,whichwillhelpstudentsunderstandnationaleventsandstimulatetheirlisteningability.(運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句。)【高分句型2】Finally,duringtheafternoonbreak,someexcellentsampleessayspublishedbystudentscanbeplayed.(運用了非謂語動詞作后置定語。)（2022·吉林長春·模擬預測）假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Peter在中國留學兩年后即將返回美國。他打算送給他的寄宿家庭每人一份禮物，為此來信向你求助，請你回信給他提供一些建議。內(nèi)容包括：(1)肯定他的做法；(2)具體的建議；(3)表達祝愿。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearPeter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,I’mgladtohearthatyouwanttobuysomegiftsforyourmotherthatrepresentChineseculture.AndIamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Personally,Ithinkyoushouldbuythefollowingtwogifts:QipaoandChineseknot.Qipao,averybeautifultraditionaldressforChinesewomen,canshowtherealbeautyofawoman.Iamsureyourmotherwilllikeitverymuch.What’smore,itisalsoagoodchoiceforyoutobuytheChineseknot.Itisusuallyhunginthesittingroomorcars,whichrepresentsgoodluck.Wishyouagoodvacation.Pleasegivemybestwishestoyourfamily.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Peter在中國留學兩年后即將返回美國。他打算送給他的寄宿家庭每人一份禮物，為此來信向你求助，請你回信給他提供一些建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累建議：advice→suggestion就我而言：personally→asfarasI’mconcerned選擇：choice→option代表：represent→standfor2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Qipao,averybeautifultraditionaldressforChinesewomen,canshowtherealbeautyofawoman.拓展句：Qipao,whichisaverybeautifultraditionaldressforChinesewomen,canshowtherealbeautyofawoman.【點睛】[高分句型1]I’mgladtohearthatyouwanttobuysomegiftsforyourmotherthatrepresentChineseculture.(運用了that引導賓語從句)[高分句型2]Itisusuallyhunginthesittingroomorcars,whichrepresentsgoodluck.(運用了which引導非限制性定語從句)（2022·北京八十中模擬預測）假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的英國好友Jim最近總是感覺身體不適，因此寫信向你詢問如何健康飲食，請你給他回信。內(nèi)容包括：1.對Jim表示關切

2.提出合理建議3.表達祝愿內(nèi)容注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,I’mdelightedtohearfromyou,butsorrytohavelearnedyouaren’tfeelingwellthesedays.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’mdelightedtohearfromyou,butsorrytohavelearnedyouaren’tfeelingwellthesedays.Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtostayhealthy.Hereismyadvice.Firstly,you’dbetterkeepabalanceddiet.Itcanbebeneficialtoavoideatingfoodhighinfatorwithtoomuchsugar.Instead,havemorefreshvegetablesandfruits.Secondly,takingexerciseeverydayhelpsalottobuildupastrongbody.Asisknown,regularexercise,suchasjogging,isanessentialapproachtokeepingfit.Finally,Iwonderifyoualwaysstayuplateatnight.Ifso,pleasegetridofthishabit,forneverwillwebehealthywithoutenoughsleep.Allthesecountalotforkeepingyourbodyataproperweightandstayinghealthy.Itrulyhopeyouwillfindmyadvicehelpfulandgetwellsoon.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給好友Jim寫回信，回復他咨詢的如何健康飲食的問題。內(nèi)容包括：1.對Jim表示關切；2.提出合理建議；3.表達祝愿內(nèi)容?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累開心的：delighted→excited建議：advice→suggestion鍛煉：takeexercise→workout重要：count→matter2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Hereismyadvice.拓展句：Hereismyadvice,whichIhopewillbehelpfulforyou?！军c睛】【高分句型1】Itcanbebeneficialtoavoideatingfoodhighinfatorwithtoomuchsugar.Instead,havemorefreshvegetablesandfruits.(運用了非謂語動詞作賓語)【高分句型2】Asisknown,regularexercise,suchasjogging,isanessentialapproachtokeepingfit.(運用了as引導非限制性定語從句)（2022·湖南·雅禮中學二模）假如你是李華，你的巴基斯坦筆友Muhammad準備明年來你校做交換生，寫信向你咨詢?nèi)绾螌W習中文。請你用英語給他回封電子郵件。要點：1.表示歡迎；2.提出學習中文建議；3.期待與祝福。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearMuhammad,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMuhammad,Welcometobeanexchangestudentatourschoolnextyear.AstohowtolearnChinese,herecomemytips.First,youmightaswelltakeaChinesecoursetolayasolidfoundation.What’smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms,whichwillenableyoutoaccessstandardandauthenticChinese.Plus,befriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyouissuretobetteryouroralChinese.Meanwhile,itcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.Finally,Isuggestyoutrye-mailingmeinChinese.Ihopemysuggestionsabovemaybenefityou.HopeyouwillmakesufficientprogressinChinesesoon.Iamlookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。假如你是李華，你的巴基斯坦筆友Muhammad準備明年來你校做交換生，寫信向你咨詢?nèi)绾螌W習中文。請你用英語給他回封電子郵件?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累至于：asto→asfor建議：tip/suggestion→advice明智的：wise→advisable此外：what’smore→besides2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Plus,befriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyouissuretobetteryouroralChinese.Meanwhile,itcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.拓展句：Plus,notonlyisbefriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyousuretobetteryouroralChinese,butalsoitcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.【點睛】[高分句型1]What’smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms,whichwillenableyoutoaccessstandardandauthenticChinese.(運用了which引導非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Finally,Isuggestyoutrye-mailingmeinChinese.(運用了省略that的賓語從句和虛擬語氣)（2022·北京師大附中三模）假如你是紅星中學高三1班班長李華。最近你班同學聽外教Jim線上講課時遇到了一些問題。請你代表你班同學給Jim寫一封郵信，內(nèi)容包括：1.反映情況；2.給出建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’mLiHua,monitorofClassOneSeniorThreefromHongxingMiddleSchool.Representingmyclassmates,I’mwritingtotellyousomequestions.Duringyouronlineclasses,youknow,someofourstudents’spokenEnglishisnotverygood,sowearethinkingwhetheryoucanspeakalittleslowly,sothatweallcanfollowyou.Besides,youaretoostrictwithus,whichisofcoursegood,butyoucanalsoberelaxedandkindtous.Then,theatmosphereinyourclasseswillbemoreactive,andwedaretoexpressourselvesmorebravely.Youcanbelievethatwecanstillfinishwhatyouaskustodoeventhoughyouarenotsostrict.Wewillappreciateitifyoucantakeoursuggestions.Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua【解析】【導語】本文是應用文。要求考生給外教Jim寫一封郵信，反映學生們線上聽課時遇到的一些問題并給出建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累代表：represent→onbehalfof英語口語：spokenEnglish→oralEnglish此外：besides→what’smore建議：suggestion→advice2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：I’mLiHua,monitorofClassOneSeniorThreefromHongxingMiddleSchool.拓展句：I’mLiHua,whoisthemonitorofClassOneSeniorThreefromHongxingMiddleSchool.【點睛】【高分句型1】Duringyouronlineclass,youknow,someofourstudents’spokenEnglishisnotverygood,sowearethinkingwhetheryoucanspeakalittleslowly,sothatweallcanfollowyou.(運用了由whether引導的賓語從句和sothat引導的結(jié)果狀語從句)【高分句型2】Besides,youaretoostrictwithus,whichisofcoursegood,butyoucanalsoberelaxedandkindtous.(運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句)【高分句型3】Youcanbelievethatwecanstillfinishwhatyouaskustodoeventhoughyouarenotsostrict.(運用了that引導的賓語從句、what引導的賓語從句和eventhough引導的讓步狀語從句)（2022·山東煙臺·三模）你校英文報正在向全校學生進行英文征稿，征稿主題是“勞動與學生成長”，請你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1．你對勞動的認識；2．你經(jīng)常參加哪些勞動；3．你的建議。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。LaborandStudents’Growth________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnepossibleversionLaborandStudents’GrowthAsisknowntoall,laborisanecessityforastudent’sgrowth.Atpresent,moststudentsliveincitiesandrarelyhaveopportunitiestotrulyexperiencelabor,resultinginlackoflaboreducation.Throughlabor,studentscancultivatecorrectlaborviewpointanddeveloplaborhabits,whichwillcontributetostudents’overalldevelopment.Inmysparetime,I’dliketohelpmyparentsdovarietiesofhouseworkathome.Besides,Ioftenvolunteertodosomecleaningworkfortheelderlyatnursinghome.Inviewofmanybenefitsoflabortostudents,Isuggestthatweshouldregularlytakepartinawiderangeoflaborsothatwecanbecomewell-rounded.【解析】【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生寫一篇短文投稿，主題是“勞動與學生成長”?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累目前：atpresent→currently機會：opportunity→chance空余的：spare→free此外：besides→what’smore2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Atpresent,moststudentsliveincitiesandrarelyhaveopportunitiestotrulyexperiencelabor,resultinginlackoflaboreducation.拓展句：Atpresent,moststudentsliveincitiesandrarelyhaveopportunitiestotrulyexperiencelabor,whichresulsinlackoflaboreducation.【點睛】【高分句型1】Asisknowntoall,laborisanecessityforastudent’sgrowth.（運用了as引導的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Throughlabor,studentscancultivatecorrectlaborviewpointanddeveloplaborhabits,whichwillcontributetostudents’overalldevelopment.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）（2022·北京八十中三模）假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的英國筆友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他最近因疫情在家上網(wǎng)課，感到效果不理想，為此感到苦惱。請你給他回復郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.你對在線學習的看法；2.提出學習建議。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,

Learningthatyouhavebeenstrugglingtoadapttotheformofonlinecourses,IfeltthesamewayaswehadclassesonlineduringtheisolationofCovidbreakout.Now,I’dliketotalkaboutmyviewsononlineclasses.

Firstandforemost,itisthroughtheinternetthatclassescanbepresentedinmanyinterestingways:Pictures,videos,younameit.Onlyinthiswaycanteachersshedlightonsomecomplexideasandconcepts.Besides,youcanhaveteachers’lecturesrecordedandlearnthematyourownspace.Togetoveryouranxiety,youshouldgooverwhatyouaregoingtolearnnextclassaswellasconsultyourteacherconstantly.

Shouldyouwanttoseekfurtherhelp,don’thesitatetowritetome.Thanksforyourletter.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導語】本書面表達是一篇應用文，要求考生給英國筆友Jim回復一封電子郵件，對他最近因疫情在家上網(wǎng)課，感到效果不理想，為此感到苦惱，談談自己的看法并提出建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累首先：Firstandforemost→Firstofall快速瀏覽：goover→gothrough讓某物容易被人理解：shedlightonsth.→makesth.understood尋求：seek→askfor2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Besides,youcanhaveteachers’lecturesrecordedandlearnthematyourownspace.拓展句：Besides,youcanhaveteachers’lecturesrecordedandlearnthematyourownspace,whichwillhelpyoubetterdigestthepoints.【點睛】[高分句型1]Firstandforemost,itisthroughtheinternetthatclassescanbepresentedinmanyinterestingways:Pictures,videos,younameit.(運用了強調(diào)句句式)[高分句型2]Onlyinthiswaycanteachersshedlightonsomecomplexideasandconcepts.(運用了only+狀語置于句首的部分倒裝句式)（2022·浙江·模擬預測）假定你是李華，你校交換生Paul最近因為疫情在家上網(wǎng)課，感覺學習效果不理想，寫信詢問你如何改善。請你給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.給予安慰；2.提供建議；3.表達愿望。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearPaul,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPaul,Sorrytoknowthatyouarebeingtroubledwhentakingonlineclasses.Actually,Ihavebeenthereandherearesometipsworkingwellforme.First,ittakesself-disciplinetofullyengageinonlinelessons,sotrytoremove