高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：情人節(jié)的暖心行動：為受傷同學(xué)裝點(diǎn)驚喜+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)情人節(jié)的暖心行動：為受傷同學(xué)裝點(diǎn)驚喜1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文AsValentine’sDay,atimeforexpressingaffectionthroughtheexchangeofpresents,drewnear,Kendrafoundherselfseatedatthekitchentable,carefullypenninghernameonValentine’scardsforherclassmates.Sherecognizedherownhesitation;wordsdidn’tcomeeasilytoher.Whilesheenviedtheeasewithwhichherpeerstalkedandlaughed,hershynessoftenkeptherquiet.Kendragrabbedanothercard..Hereyeslitupatthephrase“You’redynamite(引起轟動的人或物)!”—atermthatwouldundoubtedlydelightherGrammy,whofrequentlyusedtheexpressiontopraisetheirfestivedecorations.“Well,thatlooksdynamite!”Grammywouldexclaim,herapprovalfillingKendrawithwarmth.4續(xù)寫原文JustasKendrawassigningthecards,hermothercamein,sharingthesadnewsofElise,theirneighbor,andherrecentaccidentthatledtoabrokenleg,restrictinghertohomeschoolingforthecomingweeks.KendrafeltsorryforElise,andquicklypickedthemostsplendidvalentine,hurryingtoElise’shome.Uponarrival,Kendra’slookfelluponthelife-sizeddeerstatuedecoratingthefrontyard.Shestudiedit,sayingtoherself,“Wouldn’tthisdeerlookcoolwithabigheartaroundhisneck?ElisecouldlookoutofthewindowandseeitdecoratedforValentine’sday.”5續(xù)寫原文Withthisidea,KendragotthesizableredheartherGrammyhadgivenher,tieditwithstring,andhungitaroundthestatue’snecklikeafestivechain.Thenextday,shedecoratedtheantlers(鹿角)withavarietyofsmallerhearts.ItwasduringthisactofkindnessthatColinandAmy,Elise’sfellowclassmates,happeneduponthescene.“AreyoudecoratingElise’sdeerforValentine’sDay?”theyasked.Kendraconfirmedwithanod,explainingherintentiontocheerupElise.Despiteheruncertaintyaboutwhattoaddnext,Colinproposedaddingsomecolor,whileAmysuggestedputtingdecorationsonthedeer’sbackandforehead.Unitedbyasharedpurpose,theyagreedtomeetlater.6段首句Paragraph1:Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced.Paragraph2:Justthen,Elise’sfrontdooropened,andElisestuckherheadout..7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9情人節(jié)臨近，這是一個(gè)人們通過互贈禮物表達(dá)愛意的節(jié)日。肯德拉坐在廚房桌前，認(rèn)真地在情人節(jié)卡片上寫下自己的名字，準(zhǔn)備送給同學(xué)們。她生性害羞，寫卡片時(shí)也覺得難以表達(dá)內(nèi)心想法。她看到一張卡片上的“你真了不起！”這句話，想到了奶奶常常用類似的話語稱贊節(jié)日裝飾，這讓她心里感到溫暖。就在這時(shí)，媽媽進(jìn)來告訴她鄰居埃莉斯出了意外，腿骨折了，接下來幾周都要在家學(xué)習(xí)?？系吕芡榘＠蛩梗谑翘暨x了最漂亮的情人節(jié)卡片，匆忙前往埃莉斯家。到了埃莉斯家，肯德拉看到前院的真人大小的鹿雕像，萌生了給它裝飾一番，讓埃莉斯透過窗戶就能看到情人節(jié)裝飾的想法。她用奶奶給的大紅心，系上繩子掛在雕像脖子上當(dāng)作裝飾鏈，第二天又在鹿角上掛了各種小愛心。此時(shí)，埃莉斯的同學(xué)科林和艾米路過，得知肯德拉的想法后，他們也加入進(jìn)來，科林提議增添顏色，艾米建議在鹿的背部和額頭裝飾，大家約定稍后再一起行動。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced.那天下午，他們帶著找來的材料碰面，準(zhǔn)備一起裝飾這只鹿?？屏謳砹藥坠搋r艷的顏料，有粉色、紫色和黃色，這些色彩在陽光下閃爍著迷人的光澤。艾米則帶來了一些彩色的絲帶和亮片，還有一些小巧精致的蝴蝶結(jié)。肯德拉看著這些豐富的材料，心中充滿了期待，她覺得這只鹿一定會變得更加漂亮。他們分工明確，科林負(fù)責(zé)用顏料在鹿的身上繪制一些可愛的圖案，比如星星、月亮和愛心。他專注地?fù)]舞著畫筆，不一會兒，一只栩栩如生的粉色愛心就出現(xiàn)在了鹿的身上。艾米則用絲帶和亮片裝飾鹿的背部和額頭，她把絲帶系成漂亮的蝴蝶結(jié)，然后小心翼翼地將亮片粘貼在上面，每一個(gè)動作都充滿了細(xì)心和耐心?？系吕^續(xù)在鹿角上添加更多的小愛心，她還找來了一些彩色的羽毛，將它們穿插在鹿角之間，讓鹿角看起來更加生動。他們一邊忙碌，一邊交流著彼此的想法，歡聲笑語回蕩在院子里。經(jīng)過一番努力，這只原本普通的鹿雕像變得煥然一新，它就像一個(gè)穿著華麗盛裝的舞者，散發(fā)著迷人的魅力。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Justthen,Elise’sfrontdooropened,andElisestuckherheadout.就在這時(shí)，埃莉斯家的前門打開了，埃莉斯探出頭來。她的目光一下子就被眼前這只光彩奪目的鹿吸引住了，她的眼睛瞪得大大的，臉上露出了驚喜和感動的神情。她拄著拐杖，慢慢地走到院子里，仔細(xì)地欣賞著這只被精心裝飾過的鹿?？系吕?、科林和艾米看到埃莉斯出來，都迎了上去?？系吕χf：“埃莉斯，這是我們?yōu)槟銣?zhǔn)備的情人節(jié)驚喜，希望你能喜歡?！卑＠蛩垢袆拥脽釡I盈眶，她激動地說：“這是我見過的最漂亮的鹿，謝謝你們，你們真是太好了！”科林和艾米也紛紛表示，希望這個(gè)裝飾能讓埃莉斯在受傷的日子里感到開心和溫暖。埃莉斯看著他們，心中充滿了感激，她覺得自己雖然受傷了，但因?yàn)橛辛诉@些好朋友的關(guān)心和愛護(hù)，這個(gè)情人節(jié)變得格外特別。他們圍坐在一起，分享著這個(gè)充滿愛意的時(shí)刻，歡聲笑語在院子里久久回蕩。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced.Colinbroughtseveralcansofbrightpaints,includingpink,purpleandyellow,whichsparkledcharminglyinthesunlight.Amy,ontheotherhand,carriedsomecolorfulribbons,sequinsandsmall,delicatebows.Kendralookedattheserichmaterialswithgreatanticipation.Shebelievedthatthedeerwouldbecomeevenmorebeautiful.Theyhadacleardivisionoflabor.Colinwasinchargeofpaintingsomelovelypatternsonthedeer'sbodywiththepaints,suchasstars,moonsandhearts.Hefocusedonwavingthepaintbrush,andsoon,avividpinkheartappearedonthedeer'sbody.Amyusedtheribbonsandsequinstodecoratethedeer'sbackandforehead.Shetiedtheribbonsintobeautifulbowsandthencarefullypastedthesequinsonthem,everymovementfullofcareandpatience.Kendracontinuedtoaddmoresmallheartstotheantlers.Shealsofoundsomecolorfulfeathersandinsertedthemamongtheantlerstomaketheantlerslookmorevivid.Whiletheywerebusy,theycommunicatedwitheachotherabouttheirideas,andlaughterechoedintheyard.Aftertheirefforts,theoriginallyordinarydeerstatuewascompletelytransformed.Itwaslikeadanceringorgeouscostumes,exudingacharmingcharm.14范文呈現(xiàn)Justthen,Elise'sfrontdooropened,andElisestuckherheadout.Hereyeswereimmediatelyattractedbythedazzlingdeerinfrontofher.Hereyeswidened,andalookofsurpriseandemotionappearedonherface.Shewalkedslowlyintotheyardwiththehelpofcrutchesandcarefullyadmiredtheelaboratelydecorateddeer.WhenKendra,ColinandAmysawElisecomeout,theyallwentuptoher.Kendrasmiledandsaid,"Elise,thisisaValentine'ssurprisewepreparedforyou.Ihopeyoulikeit."Elisewassomovedthattearsfilledhereyes.Shesaidexcitedly,"ThisisthemostbeautifuldeerI'veeverseen.Thankyouallsomuch!"ColinandAmyalsoexpressedthattheyhopedthisdecorationcouldmakeElisefeelhappyandwarmduringherinjury.Eliselookedatthem,filledwithgratitudeinherheart.Shefeltthatalthoughshewasinjured,thisValentine'sDaybecameextremelyspecialbecauseofthecareandloveofthesegoodfriends.Theysataroundtogether,sharingthismomentfulloflove,andlaughterlingeredintheyardforalongtime.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thatafternoon,theyreconvenedtoadornthedeerwiththematerialstheyhadprocured.Colinarrived,bearingseveralcansofvibrantpaints-pink,purple,andyellow-thatglistenedenchantinglyinthesunlight.Amy,forherpart,carriedanassortmentofcolorfulribbons,twinklingsequins,anddaintybows.Kendra'seyeslitupatthesightoftheseabundantmaterials,herheartbrimmingwithanticipation.Shewascertainthatthedeerwasabouttobetransformedintoaworkofart.Theyswiftlydividedthetasksamongthemselves.Colintookupthepaintbrush,intentoncreatingadorablepatternsonthedeer'sbody.Withdeftstrokes,hepaintedstars,moons,andhearts,eachonecomingtolifeunderhisskilledhand.Beforelong,avividpinkheartadornedthedeer'sflank,addingatouchofwhimsy.Amy,meanwhile,setaboutdecoratingthedeer'sbackandforeheadwiththeribbonsandsequins.Shetiedtheribbonsintointricatebows,andthenmeticulouslyappliedthesequins,hereverymovementatestamenttoherpatienceandcare.Kendra,nottobeoutdone,continuedtoadorntheantlerswithadditionalsmallhearts.Sheevensourcedsomecolorfulfeathersandartfullyinsertedthemamongtheantlers,givingthemalivelyanddynamicappearance.Astheyworked,theyengagedinanimatedconversation,sharingideasandlaughingheartily.Theirvoicesechoedthroughtheyard,fillingtheairwithasenseofcamaraderieandjoy.Afteraperiodofintenseeffort,theonce-plaindeerstatuewascompletelytransformed.Itnowstoodbeforethem,resplendentandmagnificent,likearegalcreaturereadytotakecenterstage.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Justthen,Elise'sfrontdoorswungopen,andEliseemerged,hergazeimmediatelydrawntotheresplendentdeer.Hereyeswidenedinastonishment,andalookofprofoundemotionwashedoverherface.Withtheaidofhercrutches,shemadeherwayslowlyintotheyard,hereyesfixedontheelaboratelydecorateddeer.Kendra,Colin,andAmyrushedtowardsher,theirfacesbeamingwithexcitement.Kendra