高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：平凡之日我成為+“電影式”+英雄

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)平凡之日，我成為“電影式”英雄1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Ilikewatchingmovies.Inthemovies,kidsarealwayssospecial.Theyareusuallyreallysmart.Ortheyareneverscaredofanythingfrightening.Ortheyhavemagicpowerandcanhelpthoseingreattroubleout.Whyhasn'tthiseverhappenedtome?Iamnotassmartasthekidsinthemovies.Ihavenevermetwithanythingscary.AndIamnotpowerfulenoughtohelpsomeoneoutoftrouble.ButIdohopeIcanbecomesuchaheroasthoseinthemovies.Mymothersaystheheroesinthemoviesdon'texistinreallife,addingthatbeingaheroisreallygood,butIamtooyoungtobecomeone.ItwasMonday.Nothingseemedspecial.Itwassunny,withbirdssinginginthesky.IwaswalkinghomefromschoolalongtheusualstreetwhenInoticedanoldwomanontheothersideofthestreet.Shewaswalkingveryslowly,slidingherhandalongthefence.Shelookedlikeapersonleftbehindbythesubway;everyonewasracingpasther.Deepdowninmyheart,Isensedthatsomethingwasnotright.Outofcuriosity,Idecidedtocrossthestreet.4續(xù)寫原文Isqueezed(擠)intothecrowdandapproachedherfromtheside.“Areyouokay?”Iasked.Shemadenoanswer.“Excuseme,”Isaidalittlelouder.“Areyouokay?”“Canyougivemeyourhand,littleboy?”askedthewoman,lookingsad.Withouthesitation,Igavehermyhand.ThenIsawherfacelitup.ItwasthenthatIrealizedthatshewasblind.“Whereareyougoing?”Iaskedher.“Tomydaughter’shome,”shereplied.“It’sherbirthdaytoday.Ibringheragift.”5段首句Paragraph1：Thewomantoldmeherdaughter’saddress.Paragraph2：“Youarehere!”thedaughtersaidindisbelief.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8“我”喜歡看電影，渴望像電影中的孩子一樣成為英雄。一個周一，“我”放學(xué)回家途中，看到街道對面一位老婦人行動遲緩，似乎與周圍匆忙的人群格格不入。出于好奇，“我”上前詢問，發(fā)現(xiàn)她是盲人，要去女兒家送生日禮物。老婦人告知“我”她女兒的地址，“我”決定送她過去。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thewomantoldmeherdaughter’saddress.老婦人告訴了我她女兒的地址，我心里估算了一下，距離還挺遠(yuǎn)。但我沒有絲毫猶豫，我緊緊握住她的手，輕聲說：“奶奶，您放心，我送您去?！蔽覀兟哌M熙熙攘攘的街道，人群來來往往，十分擁擠。我一邊在前面艱難地開路，一邊不斷回頭告訴奶奶小心腳下的路。遇到過馬路時，車水馬龍，喇叭聲此起彼伏。我仔細(xì)觀察路況，等車流稍緩，便迅速而穩(wěn)健地帶著奶奶穿過馬路。一路上，我還跟奶奶聊起她女兒，奶奶臉上洋溢著幸福的笑容，我也因能幫助她而感到開心。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：“Youarehere!”thedaughtersaidindisbelief.“您真的到了！”女兒不敢置信地說道。她眼中滿是驚喜與感動，連忙把我們迎進屋里。她緊緊握住我的手，不停地說著感謝的話：“小朋友，太感謝你了，要不是你，真不知道我媽還要在路上耽擱多久。”老婦人也滿是欣慰地看著我，對我說：“好孩子，你真是幫了大忙?！蔽矣行┎缓靡馑嫉?fù)蠐项^說：“這是我應(yīng)該做的?！笨粗齻兡概畧F聚的溫馨場景，我心里像吃了蜜一樣甜，那一刻，我覺得自己就像電影里的英雄，做了一件特別有意義的事。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Thewomantoldmeherdaughter’saddress.Aftermakingaquickmentalcalculation,Ifounditwasquitealongway.However,Ididn'thaveasecondthought.Iheldherhandfirmlyandsaidsoftly,"Grandma,don'tworry.I'lltakeyouthere."Thenwesteppedintothebustlingstreet.Thecrowdwascomingandgoing,makingitverycrowded.Itriedtomakeawaythroughthepeopleinfront,andatthesametime,IkeptturningbacktoremindGrandmatowatchhersteps.Whenwecametotheroadcrossing,therewasastreamofcarswithhornsblaring.Icarefullyobservedthetraffic.Assoonasthetrafficflowsloweddownabit,IquicklyandsteadilyledGrandmaacrosstheroad.Ontheway,IchattedwithGrandmaaboutherdaughter,andahappysmilespreadacrossherface.Ifeltdelightedtobeabletohelpher.13范文呈現(xiàn)“Youarehere!”thedaughtersaidindisbelief.Hereyeswerefilledwithsurpriseandgratitude.Shequicklywelcomedusintothehouse.Sheheldmyhandtightlyandsaidwordsofthanksrepeatedly,"Littlefriend,thankyousomuch.Ifitweren'tforyou,Idon'tknowhowlongmymomwouldhavebeendelayedontheroad."Theoldwomanalsolookedatmewithgreatreliefandsaid,"Goodboy,you'vereallydoneabigfavor."Iscratchedmyheadshylyandsaid,"It'swhatIshoulddo."Lookingatthewarmsceneofthemother-daughterreunion,Ifeltassweetaseatinghoney.Atthatmoment,Ifeltlikeaherointhemovies,havingdonesomethingreallymeaningful.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thewomantoldmeherdaughter’saddress.Aquickmentalcalculationrevealedthatitwasaratherdistantlocation,yetwithouthesitation,Iclaspedherhandfirmlyandmurmuredsoftly,"Grandma,restassured.I'llaccompanyyouthere."Wethenmadeourwayintothebustlingthoroughfare,wherethecrowdsurgedtoandfro,creatingacongestedscene.Pushingthroughthethrongahead,IconstantlyglancedbacktocautionGrandmaabouthersteps.Uponreachingthecrossroads,astreamofvehicleswithhonkinghornspresentedachallengingsituation.Iattentivelymonitoredthetraffic,andtheinstanttheflowslackenedslightly,IdeftlyandsteadilyguidedGrandmaacross.Enroute,engaginginconversationwithGrandmaaboutherdaughter,Iwitnessedaradiantsmileilluminatingherface.Helpingherthusfilledmewithaprofoundsenseofdelight.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)“Youarehere!”thedaughterexclaimedindisbelief,hereyesbrimmingwithamixtureofsurpriseandgratitude.Swiftly,sheusheredusintothehouse.Graspingmyhandtightly,sheshoweredmewithastreamofthanks,"Littlefriend,you'retrulyalifesaver.Haditnotbeenforyou,Ishuddertothinkhowlongmymotherwouldhavebeenstrandedontheway."Theoldwoman,beamingwithrelief,echoed,"Goodlad,you'verenderedinvaluableassistance."Scratchingmyheadsheepishly,Ireplied,"It'smypleasure."Gazingattheheart-warmingreunionofthemotheranddaughter,aswee