讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+圣誕奇跡：找回失蹤的貓咪+講義 高二上學(xué)期期末英語(yǔ)試題

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)圣誕奇跡：找回失蹤的貓咪講義浙江省杭州市第二中學(xué)2024-2025學(xué)年高二上學(xué)期期末英語(yǔ)試題原題ItwasChristmasEvemorning,andIawokewithamission:tofindmylostcat,Daisy.Sure,ithadbeensixmonthssinceshe’dgonemissing,butIstillhadfaith.Itwastheseasonformiracles,afterall.Shewasabeautifullady,herfurasoftblendofbrown,gold,andblackstripes(條紋).Mostimportantly,shewasasmartcat.IusedtotakehereverywhereIcouldinacarrier(貓籠),andshewassocleverthatshelearnedtowalkintoitonherown,somethingIneverthoughtacatwoulddo.Athome,Daisywouldenjoyagoodnapcurledupinsidemyparents’fireplace.Welovedhersomuchthatshewasinthefamily’sChristmaspictureeveryyear.So,wewouldn’tlikehermissingthisyear’s.Dadalwayssupportedme,buthewassoskeptical.Hespentawholelotoftimetryingtopreparemefortheworstdespitethefactthathespentallsixmonthslookingforthecat.“She’seitherbeenhitbyacarorbeentakeninbysomeonewhofoundher,”hesaid.Irolledmyeyes!Hecoulddowithalittlemorefaith!Besides,thoughIcouldn’texplainit,IknewI’dseeDaisyagain.She’dbeenastray(走失的寵物)whenIfoundher—atoughlittlegirlthathadsurvivedallonherown.Ifanycatcoulddotheimpossible,itwasmyDaisy.ThisChristmas,Iwasdeterminedtopickupmysearch.IgrabbedDaisy’scatcarrierandloadeditintothecar,thenaskedmydadtodrivemetotheshelter,hopingshe’dbeenfound.Myeyesscannedcatsofallshapesandsizesattheshelter.Muchtomydisappointment,noneofthemwasmyDaisy.Wedrovethroughthetownwithoutrest,checkingeveryshelterandaskingeveryonewecouldfind,buteachresponsewasthesame:noonehadseenher.Finally,wepulledoverinfrontofthelastshelterintown.注意：(1)續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Isteppedintothehouseandheardafamiliarmeow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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故事分析開(kāi)端圣誕節(jié)前夕，“我”決心尋找失蹤六個(gè)月的貓咪黛西，它對(duì)“我”和家人意義重大，每年都出現(xiàn)在家庭圣誕照片中。發(fā)展“我”和爸爸四處尋找，查看了多個(gè)收容所并詢(xún)問(wèn)了很多人，但都沒(méi)有黛西的消息。高潮（待續(xù)寫(xiě)）在最后一個(gè)收容所，“我”聽(tīng)到熟悉的貓叫，可能找到了黛西，但需要向工作人員證明它是“我”的貓，這是矛盾沖突的關(guān)鍵節(jié)點(diǎn)。結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫(xiě)）成功證明黛西是“我”的貓，“我”找回貓咪，收獲喜悅，或許還能從中獲得關(guān)于堅(jiān)持和希望的感悟。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)黛西很聰明，能自己走進(jìn)貓籠：在續(xù)寫(xiě)中可利用這一點(diǎn)，讓黛西在“我”面前走進(jìn)貓籠，向工作人員證明它是“我”的貓。爸爸的懷疑態(tài)度：在找到黛西后，爸爸可能會(huì)轉(zhuǎn)變態(tài)度，為故事增添情感變化。“我”堅(jiān)定的信念：是推動(dòng)“我”不斷尋找的動(dòng)力，在續(xù)寫(xiě)中體現(xiàn)信念支撐“我”不放棄，最終迎來(lái)好結(jié)果。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)（兩段）第一段著重描寫(xiě)“我”聽(tīng)到貓叫后的激動(dòng)心情，看到疑似黛西的貓時(shí)的驚喜與不確定。描述貓咪的狀態(tài)，如比記憶中瘦等。還可寫(xiě)爸爸和收容所工作人員的反應(yīng)，以及“我”初步與貓咪互動(dòng)，更加確定它就是黛西。第二段描寫(xiě)“我”為證明貓咪是自己的所采取的行動(dòng)，比如展示黛西會(huì)走進(jìn)貓籠的技能。接著寫(xiě)工作人員認(rèn)可后，“我”的喜悅之情，以及和爸爸帶著黛西回家的情景，最后升華主題，表達(dá)這次經(jīng)歷帶來(lái)的收獲。情感線(xiàn)起初，“我”懷著堅(jiān)定信念尋找黛西，過(guò)程中不斷失望但仍不放棄。聽(tīng)到熟悉貓叫時(shí)，“我”從失落轉(zhuǎn)為激動(dòng)、驚喜，又因不確定而忐忑。確定是黛西后，“我”充滿(mǎn)喜悅。在證明它是自己的貓的過(guò)程中，“我”緊張又期待。最后成功找回，“我”收獲滿(mǎn)滿(mǎn)的幸福和對(duì)生活的感悟。故事線(xiàn)“我”走進(jìn)最后一個(gè)收容所，聽(tīng)到熟悉貓叫。看到一只很像黛西的貓，與之互動(dòng)確認(rèn)。向工作人員證明這只貓是“我”的，展示黛西進(jìn)貓籠的技能。得到工作人員認(rèn)可，帶著黛西和爸爸回家。從這次經(jīng)歷中獲得成長(zhǎng)和感悟。主旨升華句Thisexperiencetaughtmethataslongasweholdontohopeandnevergiveup,miraclesarealwaysaroundthecorner.（這次經(jīng)歷讓我明白，只要我們心懷希望、永不放棄，奇跡總會(huì)在不遠(yuǎn)處。）ThroughthesearchforDaisy,Irealizedthatfaithcanovercomedifficultiesandleadustounexpectedhappiness.（在尋找黛西的過(guò)程中，我意識(shí)到信念能夠戰(zhàn)勝困難，引領(lǐng)我們走向意想不到的幸福。）Itwasn'tjustfindingacat;itwasajourneyofself-discovery,showingmethepowerofperseveranceandthebeautyofbelievinginsomethinggreaterthanourselves.（這不僅僅是找回一只貓，更是一次自我發(fā)現(xiàn)的旅程，讓我看到堅(jiān)持的力量以及相信美好事物的魅力。）ThisChristmas,Daisy'sreturnbecamethemostpreciousgift,remindingmethatthebestthingsinlifeoftencomewhenweleastexpectthem,aslongaswekeeplooking.（這個(gè)圣誕節(jié)，黛西的歸來(lái)是最珍貴的禮物，提醒著我，生活中最美好的事物往往在我們最意想不到的時(shí)候出現(xiàn)，只要我們持續(xù)追尋。）ThestoryoffindingDaisyshowsthateveninthefaceoflong-lastingloss,hopecanbloomandbringbackthewarmthandlovewecherish.（尋找黛西的故事表明，即使面對(duì)長(zhǎng)久的失去，希望也能綻放，帶回我們珍視的溫暖與愛(ài)。）寫(xiě)作示范一Isteppedintothehouseandheardafamiliarmeow.Myheartskippedabeat,andIrushedtowardsthesound.There,inthecorner,wasacatthatlookedexactlylikeDaisy.Shewasabitthinner,herfurnotasshinyasbefore,butthosebiggreeneyeswereunmistakable.Ikneltdownandreachedoutmyhand.“Daisy?”Icalledsoftly.Thecattiltedherhead,thenslowlywalkedtowardsmeandrubbedagainstmyhand.Iwasoverjoyed,tearswellingupinmyeyes.Dadcameover,lookingequallysurprised.Theshelterstaffwatchedwithcuriouseyes,abitskeptical.IknewIhadtoprovetothestaffthatshewasmycat.Iquicklyfetchedthecatcarrierfromthecar.RememberinghowDaisyusedtoenteritonherown,Iopenedthedoorandsaid,“Comeon,Daisy.”Tomyrelief,sheimmediatelyrecognizeditandwalkedrightin.Thestaffsmiledandnodded.WethankedthemandleftwithDaisy.Onthewayhome,Iheldthecarriertightly,feelinglikeIhadfoundalong-losttreasure.ThisChristmas,Itrulygotthebestgiftever.寫(xiě)作示范二Isteppedintothehouseandheardafamiliarmeow.Awaveofexcitementwashedoverme,andIcouldn'tbelievemyears.IscannedtheroomandspottedacatthatresembledDaisy.Sheseemedweak,butwhenshesawme,therewasaglimmerofrecognitioninhereyes.Ipickedherupgently,andshenuzzledintomyarms.Dadjoinedme,andwebothlookedatthecat,filledwithamixofhopeanddisbelief.Theshelterstaffwerehesitant,askingforproof.IknewIhadtoprovetothestaffthatshewasmycat.IrememberedthatDaisylovedaspecialtreatIalwaysgaveher.Luckily,Ihadsomeinmypocket.Itookitoutandshowedittothecat.Hereyeslitup,andshemeowedeagerly.Assheateithappily,thestaffwereconvinced.Wewereallowedtotakeherhome.Drivingback,Iwasfilledwithgratitude.Thisexperiencemademebelievethathopeandlovecanalwaysleadtobeautifulsurprises.參考答案Isteppedintothehouseandheardafamiliarmeow.Myheartleapedwithexcitement,andIfollowedthesoundwithbatedbreath.There,inasmallcage,wasacatthatlookedjustlikeDaisy.Shewasthinner,herfurabitscruffy,butIknewitwashe