高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：為家人她選擇了另一份獎(jiǎng)品

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)為家人，她選擇了另一份獎(jiǎng)品1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Theteacherhadjustannouncedthatshewasgoingtogiveasmallgifttotheboyorgirlwhoansweredthemostquestionscorrectlyintheteststheyweregoingtohavethatday.Whatitwas,shewouldn’tsay,exceptthatitwasverynice,verypretty,andverytasty.Ofcoursethatlastwordseteverybody’smouthwatering.“Somethingtasty!”saidTadao.“Icouldusethatrightnow.”“AndsocouldI,”saidEnrica,whosemotherhadbeensobusythatmorninglookingafterhertwolittlesistersandherbabybrotherthatshehadforgottentomakeherlunch.4續(xù)寫原文Thenthetestsbegan,andhoweveryoneworked!Whentheteacheraskedthequestionsaloud,handsflashedupallovertheroomandwavedaboutliketreesinahighwind.Whentheanswershadtobewritten,therewasanunusualsilence.Itwaslotsoffun,andeveryonehadhighhopesofwinningtheprize.Slowlythehoursdraggedby,andpoorEnricagothungrierandhungriereveryminute,imaginingwhatshewoulddowiththeprizeifshewon.Atlastthetestswereallover,theanswersallchecked,andthefinalgradesalltotaledup.“Now,”saidtheteacher,“I’mreadytotellyouthewinneroftheprize-Enrica,beatingReneebyjustonepoint.”5續(xù)寫原文Atthismomenttheteacheropenedherdeskandtookoutabigchocolateegg,tiedwithapieceofwideblueribbon(絲帶).“Howlovely!”criedeverybody.“Nowjustamoment,”saidtheteacher.“Ihaveasecondprize.It’sinthisbox.”Everyonelookedandsawfourlittlechocolateeggs.Theylookedgood,too,butnotasattractiveasthebigoneintheblueribbon.Enricacameforwardtoreceiveherprize.Shehadlookedatbothprizesandwasthinkinghard.“Please,”shestammered(結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說),“would-wouldyoumindifIhadthesecondprizeinstead?”6段首句Paragraph1：Theteacherwassosurprisedthatshehardlyknewwhattosay.Paragraph2：Enricajustranhomewiththesecondprizeboxforhersistersandbrother.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9老師宣布要給當(dāng)天測(cè)試中答對(duì)題目最多的學(xué)生一份既好看又美味的小禮物。同學(xué)們都踴躍參與測(cè)試，埃麗卡因?yàn)閶寢屆β禌]做午餐，一直餓著肚子，還在想象贏得獎(jiǎng)品后的場(chǎng)景。測(cè)試結(jié)束后，埃麗卡以一分優(yōu)勢(shì)戰(zhàn)勝蕾妮贏得獎(jiǎng)品。但老師拿出一大一小兩份獎(jiǎng)品時(shí)，埃麗卡卻出人意料地選擇了小份的那份。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Theteacherwassosurprisedthatshehardlyknewwhattosay.老師聽到埃麗卡的請(qǐng)求后，十分驚訝，嘴巴微張，眼睛瞪大，愣在了原地。過了好幾秒，她才緩過神來，溫柔地看著埃麗卡問道：“親愛的，能告訴老師為什么嗎？畢竟大的巧克力蛋看起來更誘人呀?！卑｛惪ㄓ行┎缓靡馑嫉氐拖骂^，小聲說：“老師，我媽媽今天忙著照顧弟弟妹妹，忘記給我做午餐，我現(xiàn)在雖然很餓，但我更想把這些巧克力蛋帶回去給弟弟妹妹們吃，他們肯定會(huì)很開心?！崩蠋熉牶?，眼眶微微泛紅，被埃麗卡的善良深深打動(dòng)，她摸摸埃麗卡的頭，說道：“你真是個(gè)好孩子，老師為你驕傲?！?1續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Enricajustranhomewiththesecondprizeboxforhersistersandbrother.埃麗卡緊緊抱著裝有四個(gè)小巧克力蛋的盒子，一路小跑回家。到家后，她氣喘吁吁地推開家門，大聲喊道：“弟弟妹妹們，快來看我?guī)裁椿貋砝玻　闭诳蛷d玩耍的弟弟妹妹們聽到聲音，像小炮彈一樣沖向埃麗卡。她笑著打開盒子，弟弟妹妹們看到巧克力蛋，眼睛瞬間亮了起來，興奮地歡呼著。埃麗卡給每個(gè)弟弟妹妹都分了一個(gè)，看著他們吃得津津有味，臉上露出滿足的笑容。盡管自己沒有吃到大巧克力蛋，但此刻，她心里卻比吃了蜜還甜。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Enricaclutchedtheboxwiththefourlittlechocolateeggstightlyandranallthewayhome.Assoonasshearrived,shepushedthedooropenbreathlesslyandshouted,"Sistersandbrother,comeandseewhatI'vebroughtback!"Hersiblings,whowereplayinginthelivingroom,rushedtowardsherlikelittlerockets.Withabigsmile,sheopenedthebox.Atthesightofthechocolateeggs,theireyessparkledwithexcitement,andtheycheeredloudly.Enricadistributedonechocolateeggtoeachofthem.Watchingthemenjoythetreatswithrelish,acontentedsmilespreadacrossherface.Eventhoughshedidn'tgetthebigchocolateegg,atthismoment,shefelthappierthaneverbefore.14范文呈現(xiàn)Weeksaftermypromise,Ifounditincreasinglyhardtocontinuemyhorriblework.EverytimeIapproachedtheworkbenchfilledwiththematerialsforcreatingthefemalemonster,asenseofrevulsionwelledupinsideme.AsIlookedatthosecomponents,Icouldvividlyimaginethetwomonsterscausingchaosanddestructionintheworld.IwasacutelyawarethatwhatIwasdoingwaslikeplayingwithfire,butthefearofthemonster'srevengeonmyfamilyheldmeback.Thisconflictedfeelinghauntedmedayandnight.Ipacedrestlesslyintheworkshop,constantlyonthevergeofgivingup.However,thethoughtofmyfamily'ssafetyforcedmetokeepgoing,eventhougheverystepfeltlikeIwaswalkingonbrokenglass,filledwithpainandhesitation.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Theteacherwassosurprisedthatshehardlyknewwhattosay.Afteramomentofshockedstillness,sheregainedhercomposureand,lookingtenderlyatEnrica,inquired,"Dear,whatpromptsyourchoice?Thelargechocolateegg,afterall,seemsfarmoretempting."Blushingandloweringhergaze,Enricarepliedsoftly,"Teacher,mymom,occupiedwithmylittlesistersandbabybrother,overlookedmakingmylunchtoday.Despitemyhunger,I'meagertobringthesechocolateeggshomeforthem.Theirjoywillbemyreward."DeeplymovedbyEnrica'sselflessness,theteacher'seyeswelledup.StrokingEnrica'shair,shesaid,"You'reanextraordinarygirl,andI'mtrulyproudofyou."16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Clutchingtheboxoffourlittlechocolateeggs,Enricasprintedhome.Uponarrival,breathlesslypushingopenthedoor,sheexclaimed,"Sistersandbrother,comequickly!LookwhatI'vegot!"Hersiblings,engrossedinplayinthelivingroom,dashedtowardsher.Withabeamingsmile,sheopenedthebox.Instantly,theireyeslitupwithexcitement,andcheersfilledtheroom.Enricahandedeachofthemachocolateegg.Asshewatchedthem