高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)：從棄植到奪冠：女孩的郁金香夢(mèng)

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)從棄植到奪冠：女孩的郁金香夢(mèng)1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Jenniferworkedwithhermotherintheirvegetablegardeneveryday.Theproducefromtheirgardenwassoldatthefarmer'smarket.Thisishowtheymadetheirliving.Jenniferoftenpretendedtheplantsshetendedwerebeautifultulips,likeMrs.Talia’sprizeflowers.“Foolishgirl!”hermotherscolded.“Flowerscan'tbeeaten!Tendtothevegetables.That'sourliving.”Jenniferknewhermotherwasright.TheonlypersoninthevillagewhomademoneysellingflowerswasMrs.Talia.Shegrewtulipsandsoldthemtolocalflowershops.EveryyearshewonfirstprizeattheTulipFestival.OthercontestantswhisperedthatMrs.Taliausedmagictogrowhertulips.Howelsecouldshewinfirstprizetwentyyearsinarow?JenniferenviedMrs.Talia.IfshecouldsellflowerslikeMrs.Talia,shewouldbeabletobuythingsforhermother.Buttulipswereexpensivetostart,andJennifercouldonlydreamaboutgrowingthem.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Oneday,JennifervisitedMrs.Taliatoseeherflowers.Mrs.Taliawasinspectinghertulipswhenshearrived.ThegardenofflowersspringingupthrilledJennifer.Mrs.Taliashatteredherdaydream.“Spyingonmeagain!”Mrs.Taliafrowned.Jennifertookadeepbreathandexplainedshecameonlytoseeherflowers,hopingtogrowsuchbeautifultulipsandwinaprizeatthefestivallikeher.“You!Winaprizegrowingflowers?”Mrs.TaliachuckledandtoldJenniferthesecrettogrowingprizetulipshadbeenpasseddowntoherfrompastgenerationsofherfamily.Mrs.Taliapattedhershoulderandsaidstickingtovegetableswasabetterchoiceforher.Mrs.Taliareturnedtohergardening,ignoringthesadlookonJennifer’sface.Thenshepulledupwhatlookedlikeaweed.“What'sthat?”Jenniferasked.Mrs.Taliasaiditwasonlyashabbyplantandthenthrewitoverthefenceintothefieldbesidethegarden.5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Jennifersmiledandhadanidea.ShebowedfarewelltoMrs.Taliaandwentoutofthegardengate.Jenniferlookeddownatthediscardedplantonthevillagepathandglancedback.Mrs.Taliawasbusymindingherprizetulips.Jenniferquicklybentoverandpickeduptheplantbeforerushinghome.6段首句Paragraph1：Jenniferwonderedwhatsheshoulddowithherplant.Paragraph2：Jennifergotuponfestivalmorning.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9詹妮弗和母親靠打理菜園種菜賣菜為生。她羨慕塔莉亞夫人靠種郁金香賣花賺錢，還年年在郁金香節(jié)獲獎(jiǎng)。詹妮弗去參觀塔莉亞夫人的花園，表達(dá)自己也想種郁金香獲獎(jiǎng)的愿望，卻遭嘲笑。塔莉亞夫人扔掉一株看似雜草的植物，詹妮弗撿起它，打算嘗試種植。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：Jenniferwonderedwhatsheshoulddowithherplant.詹妮弗思索著該如何處置這株植物。她深知母親一心撲在蔬菜種植上，不會(huì)理解她對(duì)郁金香的喜愛(ài)，所以決定將它種在菜園一個(gè)隱蔽的角落，希望能避開(kāi)母親的視線。此后，每天完成菜園的日常工作后，詹妮弗便迫不及待地跑去照料這株植物。她精心地給它澆水，仔細(xì)地除去周圍的雜草，還時(shí)常為它松一松土。日子一天天過(guò)去，植物在詹妮弗的悉心照料下茁壯成長(zhǎng)。嫩綠的葉子越發(fā)茂盛，小小的花苞也漸漸冒了出來(lái)。終于，在一個(gè)陽(yáng)光明媚的清晨，一朵嬌艷欲滴的郁金香綻放了，花瓣紅得奪目，仿佛是詹妮弗心中希望的火焰。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Jennifergotuponfestivalmorning.郁金香節(jié)的清晨，詹妮弗早早地起了床。她小心翼翼地剪下盛開(kāi)的郁金香，帶著既緊張又興奮的心情前往節(jié)日現(xiàn)場(chǎng)。當(dāng)她把郁金香拿去參賽時(shí)，周圍的人紛紛投來(lái)懷疑和嘲笑的目光，他們還記得塔莉亞夫人對(duì)詹妮弗的嘲諷。然而，當(dāng)評(píng)委們開(kāi)始評(píng)選時(shí)，詹妮弗的郁金香憑借其獨(dú)特的美吸引了他們的目光。它的花瓣質(zhì)地柔軟，色澤鮮艷，形態(tài)優(yōu)雅，在眾多參賽作品中脫穎而出。最終，詹妮弗憑借這株郁金香贏得了一等獎(jiǎng)。這個(gè)結(jié)果讓所有人都大為驚訝，詹妮弗自己更是激動(dòng)得熱淚盈眶，她用行動(dòng)證明了自己的夢(mèng)想并非遙不可及。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Jenniferwonderedwhatsheshoulddowithherplant.Sheknewthathermother,whowasfullyfocusedonvegetablegrowing,wouldn'tunderstandherlovefortulips.So,shedecidedtoplantitinahiddencorneroftheirvegetablegarden,hopingtokeepitoutofhermother'ssight.Afterthat,everyday,onceshefinishedherroutinetasksinthevegetablegarden,Jenniferwouldrushtotakecareoftheplant.Shewatereditcarefully,removedtheweedsarounditmeticulously,andevenloosenedthesoilforitfrequently.Astimewentby,theplantgrewwellunderJennifer'scarefulcare.Thetendergreenleavesbecamemoreandmorelush,andsmallflowerbudsgraduallyemerged.Finally,onasunnymorning,abeautifultulipbloomed.Itspetalswerebrightlyred,asifitwastheflameofhopeinJennifer'sheart.14范文呈現(xiàn)Jennifergotuponfestivalmorning.Shecarefullycutthebloomingtulipandwenttothefestivalsitewithamixedfeelingofnervousnessandexcitement.Whensheenteredthetulipinthecompetition,peoplearoundhercastdoubtfulandmockingglances,stillrememberingMrs.Talia'smockeryofJennifer.However,whenthejudgesstartedtheirevaluation,Jennifer'stulipcaughttheireyeswithitsuniquebeauty.Itspetalsweresoftintexture,brightincolor,andelegantinshape,standingoutamongnumerousentries.Eventually,Jenniferwonthefirstprizewiththistulip.Thisresultsurprisedeveryone,andJenniferherselfwassoexcitedthattearswelledupinhereyes.Shehadprovedwithheractionsthatherdreamwasnotoutofreach.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Jenniferwonderedwhatsheshoulddowithherplant.Awarethathermother,engrossedinvegetablecultivation,wouldscarcelycomprehendherpassionfortulips,sheresolvedtoplantitinasecludedcorneroftheirvegetablegarden,inabidtokeepitconcealedfromhermother'sview.Subsequently,eachday,uponcompletinghervegetable-tendingchores,Jenniferwouldhastentoattendtotheplant.Shewatereditwithmeticulouscare,painstakinglyremovedthesurroundingweeds,andfrequentlyloosenedthesoil.Asthedaysrolledby,theplantthrivedunderJennifer'stenderlovingcare.Thedelicategreenleavesgrewincreasinglylush,andtinyflowerbudsbegantopeekout.Finally,onaradiantmorning,aresplendenttulipburstintobloom.Itspetals,avividshadeofred,resembledaflickeringflameofhopewithinJennifer'sheart.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Jennifergotuponfestivalmorning.Withgreatcare,shesnippedtheblossomingtulipandmadeherwaytothefestivalvenue,herheartpoundingwithablendofnervousnessandexcitement.Assheenteredhertulipinthecompetition,thosearoundhershotskepticalandmockingglances,stillrecollectingMr