高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：校園飛盤與登山：友誼與溫暖的傳遞

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)校園飛盤與登山：友誼與溫暖的傳遞1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文MypoliticalcareerintheStudentUnion(SU)beganbythrowingfrisbees(飛盤)onthecampuslawn.IwouldthrowafrisbeetosomeoneIdidn’tknowandtheywouldthrowittosomeonetheydidn’tknow.Beforelong,wehadbuiltacommunityofpeoplewhometeverydayatlunchtothrowfrisbees.Besidesfrisbees,thegroupdecidedtoclimbthemountainnearourcampus.Whenwereachedthepeak,itfeltlikewewereatsummercamp.Welaughed,dancedandtoldjokes.Itwastotallyfun.Whileplayinglikelittlechildreninthecoolmountainair,wealldecidedtodoitagainthefollowingweek.Ourmotto(座右銘)was“BringaFriend”.Westartedoutwithasmallgroupofhikers.Butasthewordspread,thenumberofparticipantsincreased.Wemadeitaruletoclimbthemountaineveryweekend.Allofuswerepassionateaboutthefantasticexperience,whichwewerelookingforwardto.4續(xù)寫原文Onedayoncampus,Idecidedtothrowmyfrisbeetosomestrangers,runoverandinvitethemtoclimbthemountain.Muchtomysurprise,agirlsittinginawheelchairgotholdofit.HernamewasGrace.Iaskedherifshehadeverbeentothetopofthemountain.Shesaidshehadn’t.Holdingthewheelchairtightly,shehungdownherheadinawkwardsilence.Thenshetoldmethatshehadsufferedfromlungdiseasewhenshewasyounganddependedonoxygentwenty-fourhoursaday.So,itwasimpossibleforhertomovewithouthelp.Fortunately,thingsgotbetter.Withcontinuouseffortsandtreatment,shemanagedtoliveonherownwiththeassistanceofthewheelchair:ItoldherthatmyfriendsandIwouldcarryherifshewereupforit.OnhearingwhatIsaid,sherefusedwithouthesitation,addingthatitwouldbeabothertocarryher.ButItriedmybesttopersuadehertocomealongwithusbytalkingabouttheinterestingexperiences.5段首句Paragraph1：Havingthoughtforawhile,Gracestillrefusedmyoffer.Paragraph2：Onthedownhiltpath,GraceaskedmewhynotrunfortheSUelection.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8作者通過在校園草坪扔飛盤結(jié)識(shí)了一群朋友，大家組成了一個(gè)社區(qū)，每天午餐時(shí)扔飛盤，還決定一起爬山。他們的活動(dòng)吸引了越來(lái)越多人參與，并且約定每周都去爬山。有一天，作者向陌生人扔飛盤并邀請(qǐng)他們?nèi)ヅ郎?，遇到了坐輪椅的格蕾絲。格蕾絲因小時(shí)候患肺病，生活離不開輪椅。作者表示可以抬她上山，格蕾絲起初拒絕了，認(rèn)為這會(huì)給大家添麻煩，但作者不斷勸說(shuō)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Havingthoughtforawhile,Gracestillrefusedmyoffer.格蕾絲想了一會(huì)兒，還是拒絕了我的提議。她眼神中透露出一絲無(wú)奈和自卑，小聲地說(shuō)她不想成為大家的累贅。盡管我再三保證大家都很歡迎她，而且我們都很樂意幫助她，但她依舊不為所動(dòng)?？粗龍?jiān)決的樣子，我心里有些失落，但我沒有放棄。我繼續(xù)和她聊天，給她講我們之前爬山時(shí)發(fā)生的各種有趣的事情，比如誰(shuí)不小心滑倒在泥地里，大家又是如何互相幫助的。漸漸地，格蕾絲的表情不再那么嚴(yán)肅，眼中似乎有了一絲動(dòng)搖。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Onthedownhiltpath,GraceaskedmewhynotrunfortheSUelection.在下山的路上，格蕾絲突然問我為什么不參加學(xué)生會(huì)選舉。我有些驚訝，沒想到她會(huì)這么問。我告訴她我從來(lái)沒有想過這件事，覺得自己還不夠優(yōu)秀。格蕾絲聽后，認(rèn)真地看著我說(shuō)，我組織了這么有趣的活動(dòng)，能讓大家都聚在一起，給大家?guī)?lái)快樂，這就證明我有領(lǐng)導(dǎo)能力。她鼓勵(lì)我去嘗試，說(shuō)這是一個(gè)可以讓更多人受益的機(jī)會(huì)。她的話讓我陷入了沉思，我開始認(rèn)真思考參加學(xué)生會(huì)選舉的可能性，也許真的可以通過這個(gè)平臺(tái)做更多有意義的事情。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Havingthoughtforawhile,Gracestillrefusedmyoffer.Therewasatraceofhelplessnessandinferiorityinhereyes.Shemurmuredthatshedidn'twanttobeaburdentoeveryone.AlthoughIassuredherrepeatedlythateveryonewouldbemorethanhappytowelcomeherandwewereallwillingtohelp,sheremainedunmoved.Lookingatherdeterminedlook,Ifeltabitdisappointed,butIdidn'tgiveup.Icontinuedtochatwithher,tellingheralltheinterestingthingsthathadhappenedduringourpreviousmountain-climbingtrips.Forexample,howsomeoneaccidentallyslippedinthemudandhowweallhelpedeachother.Gradually,Grace'sexpressionsoftened,andthereseemedtobeaglimmerofhesitationinhereyes.13范文呈現(xiàn)Onthedownhillpath,GraceaskedmewhynotrunfortheSUelection.Iwasabitsurprised.IhadneverthoughtaboutitbeforeandtoldherthatIdidn'tthinkIwasgoodenough.GracelookedatmeseriouslyandsaidthatIhadorganizedsuchinterestingactivities,bringingeveryonetogetherandbringinghappinesstoeveryone,whichprovedthatIhadleadershipskills.Sheencouragedmetogiveitatry,sayingthatitwasanopportunitytobenefitmorepeople.Herwordsmademefallintodeepthought.IbegantoseriouslyconsiderthepossibilityofrunningfortheSUelection.MaybeIcouldreallydomoremeaningfulthingsthroughthisplatform.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Havingthoughtforawhile,Gracestillrefusedmyoffer.Atingeofhelplessnessandself-deprecationwasevidentinhereyesasshesoftlymurmuredthatshedreadedbeingaburdentousall.Despitemyrepeatedassurancesthatwewereeagertowelcomeherwithopenarmsandweremorethanwillingtoassist,sheremainedsteadfastinherrefusal.Gazingatherresolutecountenance,asenseofdisappointmentwelledupwithinme,yetIwasfarfromreadytothrowinthetowel.Ipersistedinourconversation,regalingherwithtalesofourpastmountain-climbingescapades.Irecountedhowoneofushadtakenanunexpectedtumbleinthemudandhowwehadralliedtogethertolendahand.Littlebylittle,Grace'srigidexpressionrelaxed,andaflickerofindecisiondancedinhereyes.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Onthedownhillpath,Graceposedaquestionthatcaughtmeoff-guard:whynotrunfortheSUelection?Iconfessedthattheideahadnevercrossedmymind,expressingmyself-doubtaboutmycapabilities.Gracefixedhergazeonmeearnestlyandstatedthatmy