高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+小男孩與鄰居跨越血緣的祖孫情+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)小男孩與鄰居，跨越血緣的祖孫情1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文MyfamilymovedinasmallhouseinBrighton,Coloradoonmyseventhbirthday.MyfirstmemoryisourneighborBill,anoldman,handingmestrawberriesfromhisgardenthroughaholeinthechain-linkfence.“Weneedtomaketheholebigger,”hesaidjokingly.LaterIknewthathelivedalone.Billspentmuchtimeworkinginthegarden,andIwasalwaystalkingtohimfromouryard.Iwasachatterbox.IthinkwhatdrewmetoBillisthathenevergottiredoflisteningtome.IalsothinkBillsawalotofhimselfinme—wewerebothlonelyandanxious—andthatmaybewhyhealwaystookthetimetolistentome.Itwasawonderfulconnection.Thereweren’tanykidsofmyageintheneighborhood,andmyparentswereverybusy,soImostlyplayedintheyardwithmydog.Ihadalotofimaginaryfriends—awholefamily,actually,withawife,children,abestfriend...nojoke.Weirdkid.4續(xù)寫原文Oneday,myparentsaskedBillwhetherhe’dwatchmewhiletheywereawayonbusiness.Thisworkedforeveryone,soitbecameasomewhatmonthlyoccurrence.Billhadaspareroominhishouse,whichbecame“my”room.Billpromisedtoteachmetodrivethelawntractor(割草機)somedayandIwasalwayslookingforwardtoit.Inwinter,Billwouldattachasnowplow(鏟雪機)tothefrontofthedawntractor.IseriouslytoldhimthatIwouldinventabettersnowplowwhenIgrewup.“Sureyouwill.You’llgetapatentcertificate.Ittakesacertificatetoproveanimportantthing,”Billsaidwithasmile.Onesnowymorning,anideasuddenlyhitme.MyparentswerewatchingTVwhenIspititout,“WhatifIadoptedBillasmygrandpa?”MyparentssaidIcouldgooverandaskhim.5段首句Paragraph1：Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”Paragraph2：Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchain-linkfence.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了七歲時“我”家搬到科羅拉多州布萊頓的小房子，結(jié)識了鄰居Bill。他獨自居住，常與在院子里玩耍的“我”聊天，耐心傾聽“我”說話。因附近沒有同齡孩子，父母又忙碌，“我”常和Bill在一起，父母出差時還會讓他照顧“我”。Bill答應(yīng)教“我”開割草機，“我”也憧憬未來能發(fā)明更好的鏟雪機。一天，“我”突發(fā)奇想，想收養(yǎng)Bill當(dāng)爺爺，得到了父母的同意。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”我敲響了他的門，走進(jìn)客廳坐下后，鼓起勇氣問道：“我能收養(yǎng)您當(dāng)我的爺爺嗎？”Bill聽到這話，先是愣了一下，隨即眼中閃過驚喜與感動。他的眼眶微微泛紅，嘴角上揚，露出了欣慰的笑容。“孩子，你真的愿意認(rèn)我做爺爺嗎？”他聲音略帶顫抖地問道。我用力地點點頭，說：“當(dāng)然啦，您一直都對我很好，我想讓您當(dāng)我的爺爺。”Bill激動地站起身，張開雙臂緊緊地抱住我，那一刻，我感受到了無比的溫暖。他輕輕撫摸著我的頭，承諾以后會像真正的爺爺一樣疼愛我、照顧我，陪伴我成長。從那以后，我們之間的關(guān)系更加親密了，我每天都盼望著能和爺爺Bill待在一起。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchain-linkfence.第二天清晨，我滿懷期待地跟著爺爺Bill學(xué)習(xí)駕駛帶鏟雪機的割草機。一開始，我小心翼翼地操作著，進(jìn)展還算順利?？赏蝗?，我一個不小心，割草機朝著鏈狀圍欄沖了過去，瞬間就把圍欄撞倒了一大片。我嚇得臉色蒼白，心臟砰砰直跳，不知所措地站在那里。爺爺Bill見狀，立刻跑過來，他沒有絲毫的責(zé)備，而是溫柔地拍了拍我的肩膀，安慰我說：“別害怕，寶貝，這只是個意外。咱們一起把它修好就行?！庇谑?，我們一起動手，找來工具，花費了整整一個上午的時間，終于把圍欄修好了。當(dāng)父母回到家，得知了這件事，他們不僅沒有生氣，反而夸贊我們的合作精神，這讓我心里暖暖的，也讓我和爺爺Bill之間的感情變得更加深厚。你對這兩段故事情節(jié)的節(jié)奏和內(nèi)容滿意嗎，是否需要增加一些細(xì)節(jié)或調(diào)整情節(jié)走向。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”Billwastakenabackatfirst.Then,alookofpleasantsurpriseanddeepemotionwashedoverhisface.Hiseyesglistenedwithunshedtears,andawarmsmilespreadacrosshislips.“Mydearchild,areyoureallywillingtoconsidermeasyourgrandpa?”heasked,hisvoiceslightlyquivering.Inoddedvigorouslyandsaid,“Sure,you'vealwaysbeensokindtome.Iwantyoutobemygrandpa.”Billstoodupexcitedly,openedhisarmswide,andembracedmetightly.Atthatmoment,Ifeltanoverwhelmingsenseofwarmth.Hegentlystrokedmyheadandpromisedtolove,careforme,andaccompanymeasarealgrandpawould.Fromthenon,ourbondgrewevencloser,andIeagerlylookedforwardtospendingtimewithGrandpaBilleveryday.13范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,IfollowedGrandpaBillwithgreatanticipationtolearntodrivethelawntractorequippedwithasnowplow.Atfirst,Ioperateditcarefully,andthingsweregoingsmoothly.However,allofasudden,duetomycarelessness,thelawntractorrushedtowardsthechain-linkfenceandknockeddownalargesectionofit.Iwassofrightenedthatmyfaceturnedpale,andmyheartwaspoundingwildly.Istoodthere,frozenwithfear.GrandpaBillrushedoverimmediately.Insteadofscoldingme,hepattedmyshouldergentlyandsaid,“Don'tbescared,sweetheart.It'sjustanaccident.We'llfixittogether.”So,wegottoolsandspentthewholemorningrepairingthefence.Whenmyparentscamehomeandlearnedaboutthis,theydidn'tgetangry.Instead,theypraisedourteamwork.ThismademefeelwarminsideandfurtherstrengthenedthebondbetweenGrandpaBillandme.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Iknockedonhisdoor,tookaseatinhislivingroom,andmusteredthecouragetoposethequestion:“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”Bill,initiallystartled,wassoonoverwhelmedbyawaveofpleasantsurpriseandprofoundemotion.Hiseyeswelledupwithtearsofjoy,andatendersmilegracedhislips.“Mydearchild,areyoutrulyinclinedtomakemeyourgrandpa?”hequeried,hisvoicetremulouswithemotion.Inoddedvehemently,proclaiming,“Absolutely!You'vealwaysshoweredmewithkindness.Iyearnforyoutobemygrandpa.”Bill,brimmingwithexcitement,rosetohisfeet,flunghisarmswide,andenfoldedmeinatightembrace.Inthatinstant,asurgeofwarmthcoursedthroughme.Hetenderlycaressedmyhead,vowingtocherish,safeguard,andstandbymeasanydotinggrandpawould.Fromthatmomentforward,ourconnectiondeepened,andIeagerlyawaitedeachdayspentinGrandpaBill'scompany.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,ItrailedGrandpaBillwithbatedbreath,eagertomastertheartofdrivingthelawntractorfittedwithasnowplow.Initially,Ihandledthecontrolswithutmostcaution,andprogresswassmooth.However,inasplit-secondofinattentiveness,thetractorcareenedtowardsthechain-linkfence,obliteratingasubstantialportion.Panic-stricken,myfacedrainedofcolor,andmyheartracedunc