高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+泳池初體驗(yàn)勇敢學(xué)游泳之旅+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)泳池初體驗(yàn)，勇敢學(xué)游泳之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Thesummerfinallycame.Thatafternoon,thehotsunwasshiningbrightly,makingthetreeleavesalmostburnandmakingpeople’sbodiesseemtobeonfire.Havingnothinginterestingtodoathome,Idecidedtogotothepooltoenjoythecoolnessinsteadofgoingswimming.Thereasonwassimple—Istillcouldn’tswim.Iwasimpatient,andIalwaysfailedtodosomethingandsufferedlosses.Sotheswimminglessonwasputoffagainandagain.Uponarrivingatthegym’spool,Iwasgreetedbyalivelyscene.Somepeoplejustjumpedintothewater,withhandsenteringfirstandthebodyfollowinginasmoothmotion.Somewerekickingtheirlegsrhythmicallybelowthesurface.Allwerehappy.Thatwasinfectious,andIcouldn’thelpbutfeeldeepadmiration.ThenImadeadecision!Takingadeepbreath,Ifollowedtheirexample,closingmyeyesandjumpingintothe“vastwater”withaplop(撲通聲).4續(xù)寫原文Atthismoment,myheadwaspointingtothegroundandmyfeettothesky.WhenI“plopped”tothebottom,mywholebodywasswinginghardandmyhandsandfeetlosttheirabilitytofeel.Ijustfeltwaterrushingtowardsme,andmynosewasfilledwithwater.Itwasveryterrible.Suddenly,Iwashitbysomething.Istruggledoutofthelightbluewaterbitbybitasifbeingdragged.“That’shorrible!”Ishouted1oudly,andwhileIwascomplaining,IsuddenlyrealizedthatIcouldn’tswiminthefirstplace,sowhyshouldIbeshocked?JustwhenIdecidedtostayawayfromwater,someonegentlypattedmyshoulderandsaid,“Don’tbediscouraged,littlegirl.Look,swimmingrequires...”TheladyintroducedherselfasAllison.Shegavemea“1ecture”onhowtoholdmybreath,howtokickgently,andhowtostartwithfloatingwiththehelpofaswimmingring,beingpatientwhilegivingmeademonstration.5段首句Paragraph1：“Whynottryonemoretime?”saidAllison.Paragraph2：Asthedaydrewtoaclose,Istillcouldnotswimverywell.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了炎熱夏日，不會游泳的“我”因無聊前往泳池納涼。看到別人暢快游泳，心生羨慕，決定效仿跳水，卻遭遇失敗。此時，Allison出現(xiàn)，耐心給“我”講解游泳技巧。在她的鼓勵下，“我”一次次嘗試，雖當(dāng)天仍未熟練掌握游泳技能，但克服了對水的恐懼，收獲了堅持的力量，并決心日后繼續(xù)練習(xí)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：“Whynottryonemoretime?”saidAllison.Allison鼓勵道：“為什么不再試一次呢？”她那溫柔且充滿力量的話語，瞬間點(diǎn)燃了我內(nèi)心的斗志。我深吸一口氣，鼓起勇氣再次踏入水中。這次，我全神貫注地回憶著她教給我的每一個動作要領(lǐng)。先穩(wěn)穩(wěn)地憋住氣，隨后按照她示范的那樣，小心翼翼地輕輕踢腿，同時努力讓自己的身體在水面上浮起來。過程中，我難免還是會有些手忙腳亂，甚至又嗆了幾口水，但我不再像之前那般驚慌失措。每一次嘗試，我都能感受到自己在慢慢進(jìn)步。Allison始終在一旁關(guān)注著我，每當(dāng)我有一點(diǎn)進(jìn)步，她都會及時給予表揚(yáng)，這讓我的信心愈發(fā)充足。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Asthedaydrewtoaclose,Istillcouldnotswimverywell.隨著天色漸暗，這一天即將結(jié)束，我不得不承認(rèn)，自己依舊沒能熟練地學(xué)會游泳。然而，我已然不再是那個一碰到水就害怕得不行的女孩了。我清楚地知道，自己已經(jīng)取得了實(shí)實(shí)在在的進(jìn)步。更重要的是，我成功戰(zhàn)勝了內(nèi)心對水的恐懼。我滿心感激地走到Allison面前，真誠地向她道謝。她不僅傳授給我游泳的基礎(chǔ)技巧，更讓我深刻領(lǐng)悟到了堅持的寶貴意義。離開泳池時，我內(nèi)心充滿了新的決心。我暗暗告訴自己，一定要定期來練習(xí)游泳。我滿心期待著，在不久后的某一天，我也能像初次來泳池時看到的那些人一樣，在水中自由自在地暢游。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)“Whynottryonemoretime?”saidAllison.Hervoicewaslikearayofsunshine,fullofwarmthandencouragement.Unabletoresistherpersuasion,Itookadeepbreathandsteppedintothewateroncemore.Thistime,Iwasfullyconcentratedonthetechniquesshehadtaughtme.Iheldmybreathfirmly,kickedmylegsgentlyasshehaddemonstrated,andmadegreateffortstofloat.Despitestumblingseveraltimesandevenchokingonwaterabit,Ididn'tpanicasIdidbefore.Witheachattempt,Icouldfeelmyselfgettingbetter.AllisonkeptacloseeyeonmeandpraisedmewheneverImadeanyprogress.Herwordsofencouragementreallyboostedmyconfidence.13范文呈現(xiàn)Asthedaydrewtoaclose,Istillcouldnotswimverywell.However,Iwasnolongerthegirlwhowasterrifiedofwater.Ihadmadeevidentprogress,andmoreimportantly,Ihadovercomemyfear.IwalkeduptoAllisonwithgratitudeinmyeyesandthankedhersincerely.Shehadnotonlytaughtmethebasicskillsofswimmingbutalsoinstilledinmethevalueofperseverance.WhenIleftthepool,Iwasfilledwithanewdetermination.Idecidedtopracticeswimmingregularly.IwaslookingforwardtothedaywhenIcouldswimfreelyjustlikethosepeopleIsawatthepoolonthathotsummerafternoon.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)“Whynottryonemoretime?”saidAllison.SowarmandencouragingwashervoicethatIsimplycouldn'tresisthavinganothergo.Takingadeepbreath,Isteppedintothewateragain,withmymindfullyfocusedonthetechniquesshehadimparted.Holdingmybreathsteadily,Ikickedgentlyasshedemonstrated,makingeveryefforttofloat.AlthoughIstumbledseveraltimes,notoncedidIpanicasbefore.Eachattemptwitnessedmyimprovement.Allison,keepingawatchfuleyeonme,praisedmyefforts,whichsignificantlyboostedmyconfidence.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Asthedaydrewtoaclose,swimmingproficientlystilleludedme.Nevertheless,gonewasthegirlwhowaspetrifiedofwater.Ihadmaderemarkableprogress;moreimportantly,Ihadconqueredmyfear.ApproachingAllisonwithgratitudewellingupinmyheart,Ithankedhersincerely.Shehadnotonlytaughtmethebasicsofswimmingbutalsotheimportanceofperseverance.Leavingthepool,Iwasbrimmingwithanew-fo