讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-攀巖悟人生：從巖壁到抗癌的勇氣之旅+講義 高三上學(xué)期實(shí)驗(yàn)班12月大聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Myfive-year-olddaughterRuthieseemedverysmallstandingatthebaseofthehugerock-climbingwallasayoungemployeedouble-checkedherequipment.Itwasoursecondtimeatthisindoorcrowdedclimbinggym.Onourfirstvisit,Ruthiehadbeggedmyhusbandandmetolethertryclimbingthewall,butIdeniedher,afraidthatshewasundersized.Butlifehaddramaticallychangedsincethen.Afterreceivingacancerdiagnosis(診斷),Ifeltthatmylifewastooshorttodenyherachance.Istoodoutsidethewaitingarea,watchingtheemployeeattachRuthietoasafetyrope.Thenhegaveherathumbs-upsign,andmydaughterbeganclimbing!Withthatrope,shecouldn’tpossiblyfall.Shemightslip,butshewouldn’tfall.Iwassurprisedathowshedidthatsoeasilyandjoyfully.“Ifmycanceristherockwall,IwanttobeRuthie,”Ithought.Whenshetouchedthegroundagain,Ileanedoverthelowfenceandasked,“Howdoyoudothat?”“Ijusttrusttherope.It’sveryeasy,”shesaidwithashrug,andstartedonhersecondclimbing.Apparently,ifIhadknownthesecret,Icouldhaveclimbedthewallmyself.WhenIwassixteen,Ioncefailedtoclimbarockwall.Withaddedweightandreducedmuscletone,IdoubtedifIcouldevendoit.Ididn’tseeanyothermomstryingtoclimbthewall.Severalmonthsearlier,embarrassmentwouldhavestoppedmefromtrying.Butmycancerdidfunnythingstomybrain.ItmademerealizethatIneededtobebraverthanIthought.Withdetermination,Idecidedtotryitandthesameyoungemployeecheckedmysafetyropeandgavemethethumbs-upsign.AsIbeganmyclimb,Iwasexcitedbymyownbraveryfortryingsomethingsonew.However,onlytenfeetup,myfingersandtoesstartedtotire,andtherewasabsolutelynoplacetorest.MyexcitementbegantodisappearandIwasafraidthatIwasgoingtoslipandfall.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ButIknewifIwantedtomakeit,Ihadtotrusttherope.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thatday’ssuccessfulexperienceinspiredmeinmycancerbattle.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：五歲的Ruthie站在巨大的攀巖墻下，身形顯得格外嬌小，工作人員幫她仔細(xì)檢查裝備。這是她們第二次來(lái)到室內(nèi)攀巖館，第一次時(shí)，因擔(dān)心女兒年紀(jì)小、體格瘦弱，“我”拒絕了她攀巖的請(qǐng)求。然而此后生活發(fā)生巨變，“我”被診斷出患有癌癥，深感生命短暫，不應(yīng)再剝奪女兒嘗試的機(jī)會(huì)。看著Ruthie輕松愉悅地攀爬，“我”驚嘆不已，她表示只是信任繩索所以覺(jué)得簡(jiǎn)單。回想起自己16歲時(shí)攀巖失敗，且如今身體狀況不佳、體重增加、肌肉松弛，本有些猶豫，但癌癥改變了“我”的想法，讓“我”鼓起勇氣嘗試。攀爬途中，“我”起初興奮，可爬了僅十英尺就手指腳趾乏力，找不到休息之處，興奮漸消，恐懼襲來(lái)。伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)：伏筆：第一次拒絕Ruthie攀巖，因覺(jué)得她體格小。回應(yīng)：凸顯后來(lái)“我”因癌癥改變想法，同意她攀巖的轉(zhuǎn)變，體現(xiàn)“我”對(duì)生命、對(duì)孩子成長(zhǎng)態(tài)度的變化。續(xù)寫(xiě)中“我”受Ruthie感染，勇敢攀爬，完成自我突破。伏筆：“我”被診斷出癌癥，深感生命短暫?；貞?yīng)：解釋“我”為何不再阻攔Ruthie攀巖，推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展，讓“我”的行為有了情感支撐。續(xù)寫(xiě)中“我”將抗癌與攀巖類(lèi)比，從攀巖經(jīng)歷汲取抗癌力量。伏筆：Ruthie輕松信任繩索完成攀爬?；貞?yīng)：為“我”后續(xù)攀爬時(shí)內(nèi)心的掙扎與最終選擇信任繩索做鋪墊，形成對(duì)比與呼應(yīng)，展現(xiàn)榜樣的力量。續(xù)寫(xiě)中“我”效仿Ruthie，克服恐懼，成功登頂。伏筆：回憶16歲攀巖失敗，且如今身體條件不佳?；貞?yīng)：增加此次攀爬的難度與挑戰(zhàn)，襯托“我”克服內(nèi)心障礙、勇敢嘗試的可貴。續(xù)寫(xiě)中克服身體局限，展現(xiàn)堅(jiān)韌。伏筆：攀爬途中體力不支、恐懼來(lái)襲?；貞?yīng)：制造懸念與危機(jī)，引出后續(xù)“我”如何抉擇應(yīng)對(duì)，吸引讀者。續(xù)寫(xiě)中憑借信任繩索、堅(jiān)定意志戰(zhàn)勝困難。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：第一段情感線(xiàn)：從恐懼、猶豫，幾近放棄，到在內(nèi)心掙扎后選擇信任繩索，重燃斗志，堅(jiān)定攀爬；故事線(xiàn)：“我”在體力不支、害怕滑落的絕境下，回想起Ruthie的話(huà)，決定像她一樣信任繩索，克服身體的疲憊與內(nèi)心的恐懼，艱難地一步步向上攀爬，最終登頂。第二段情感線(xiàn)：受攀巖成功激勵(lì)，由之前對(duì)癌癥治療的擔(dān)憂(yōu)、迷茫，轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)閳?jiān)定、積極面對(duì)；故事線(xiàn)：“我”將攀巖過(guò)程與抗癌歷程相類(lèi)比，意識(shí)到如同信任繩索一樣，要信任醫(yī)療團(tuán)隊(duì)與治療手段，以更頑強(qiáng)的毅力投入抗癌斗爭(zhēng)，迎接未來(lái)挑戰(zhàn)。主旨升華句：Inthefaceofdifficulties,trustistheropethatpullsusupfromtheabyssoffearanddoubt.（面對(duì)困難時(shí)，信任是將我們從恐懼與懷疑的深淵拉起的繩索。）Sometimes,thegreatestcourageisfoundinthesmallestofus,likeachild'sfearlesstrust,inspiringourjourneyforward.（有時(shí)候，最偉大的勇氣源自我們當(dāng)中最弱小的個(gè)體，就如孩子無(wú)畏的信任，激勵(lì)著我們前行。）Life'schallenges,whetheratoweringrockwalloradauntingillness,canbeconqueredwhenwefindthestrengthtotrustandpersevere.（生活中的挑戰(zhàn)，無(wú)論是高聳的攀巖墻還是可怕的疾病，當(dāng)我們找到信任與堅(jiān)持的力量時(shí)，都能被征服。）Thejourneyofovercomingobstaclesisnotjustaboutphysicalstrength,butaboutthementalresolvetotrustintheunseensupport.（克服障礙的旅程不只是關(guān)乎體力，還關(guān)乎信任無(wú)形支持的精神決心。）Whenweembracetrustasourguide,wecanscaletheheightsofourfearsandemergevictoriousontheotherside.（當(dāng)我們將信任當(dāng)作指引時(shí)，就能翻越恐懼的高峰，在彼岸取得勝利。）寫(xiě)作示范一：ButIknewifIwantedtomakeit,Ihadtotrusttherope.Iclosedmyeyesforamoment,gatheringmyfrayednerves.ImagesofRuthie'sconfidentclimbflashedbeforeme.Itookadeepbreathandwhispered,“Justtrustit.”Withnewfounddetermination,Ireachedforthenexthold.Myfingersached,butIgrittedmyteeth.Slowly,Ifoundarhythm,movingonelimbatatime.AsInearedthetop,thecrowdbelowseemedtofadeaway.AllIcouldfocusonwasthatropeandthegoalabove.Finally,Igraspedthetopledge,andawaveofeuphoriawashedoverme.Thatday’ssuccessfulexperienceinspiredmeinmycancerbattle.Irealizedthatcancerwasmytoweringrockwall,andthemedicalteamandtreatmentweremyropes.Ihadbeensoafraid,doubtingeverystepoftheway.Butnow,likeonthewall,Ichosetotrust.Ifacedchemosessionswithanewmindset,seeingthemasnecessaryclimbs.Whenthesideeffectshithard,Irememberedthestruggleonthewallandheldon.Iwasdeterminedtoreachthesummitofrecovery,knowingthatwithtrustandperseverance,Icouldconquerthismountaintoo.寫(xiě)作示范二：ButIknewifIwantedtomakeit,Ihadtotrusttherope.IglanceddownandsawRuthielookingupatme,hereyesfullofanticipation.ThatsimplelookgavemethepushIneeded.Iforcedmyfingerstouncurlandgrabthenextprotrusion.Itwasagony,butIrepeatedRuthie'smantrainmyhead:“Justtrusttherope.”AsIinchedhigher,sweatpoureddownmyface,mixingwithtearsofexertion.ButIdidn'tstop.Eachmovewasabattle,butIwaswinning.Eventually,Ihauledmyselfoverthetop,collapsinginaheapofexhaustionandpride.Thatday’ssuccessfulexperienceinspiredmeinmycancerbattle.Iunderstoodthatjustastheropehadmybackonthewall,Ihadasupportsysteminmyfightagainstcancer.Family,friends,anddoctorsweretheretocatchmeifIfell.Istoppeddreadingthefuturescansandtreatments.Instead,Iembracedthemasopportunitiestoprovemystrength.Wheneverself-doubtcreptin,IthoughtbacktothatvictoriousclimbandknewIhadthegutstofaceanything.Iwasonajourneytobeatcancer,andthiswasjustthebeginning.【答案】ButIknewifIwantedtomakeit,Ihadtotrusttherope.Itookadeepbreath.Immediately,Ifeltthesafetyfromtherop