高二上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)期末沖刺讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)考前點(diǎn)撥及必背句式短語(yǔ)清單

高二英語(yǔ)期末沖刺讀后考前點(diǎn)撥及必背句式短語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)寫(xiě)作思路考前點(diǎn)撥一、5R解讀故事

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forcharacters(人物)

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forconflict/problems(沖突/問(wèn)題)3.

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forplot(情節(jié))

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foremotionalchanges(情感變化)5.

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fortheme(主題)二、3大續(xù)寫(xiě)原則

1.Action一Response原則:角色A的所言、所行、所感、所想會(huì)引起其他角色的一系列反應(yīng)。每段對(duì)話12句，不一定兩個(gè)人都要說(shuō)話，無(wú)聲的動(dòng)作也是一種response。

2.Conflict—Solution原則:一般而言第二段會(huì)有問(wèn)題的solution。(同時(shí)思考:能否在第一段出現(xiàn)一個(gè)問(wèn)題，然后把它解決了或者沒(méi)有解決。一方面是增加看另一方面也是給第二段作鋪墊。)

3.negative一Positive原則：寫(xiě)作中一定要有情感的變化,無(wú)論前面是怎樣的情感，最終都應(yīng)該是積極的。三、寫(xiě)作口訣1.兩段首句定一框：由續(xù)寫(xiě)的第一段首句與第二段首句確定第一段的框架。2.二框二首正能量：第二段的框架，由第二段首句與正能量結(jié)尾來(lái)確定。四、十句五定法整個(gè)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)大概分10句話，每段各5句（其中第1/5/10句至關(guān)重要）第1句：情感描寫(xiě)（情感萬(wàn)能句）第2句：細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)（可用分詞/形容詞作狀語(yǔ)）第3句：對(duì)話描寫(xiě)（如文章不存在對(duì)話可寫(xiě)內(nèi)心獨(dú)白等）第4句：細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)（使用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)等）第5句：過(guò)渡銜接句（通過(guò)第二段第一句寫(xiě)出，可使用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句等）第6句：銜接句（第2段的第1句，銜接前面一句給出內(nèi)容，可用倒裝）第7句：細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)（可適當(dāng)添加環(huán)境描寫(xiě)）第8句：細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)（可用無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)，呼應(yīng)第一句存在的情緒變化）第9句：引出道理（可用強(qiáng)調(diào)句）第10句：結(jié)尾感悟+萬(wàn)能結(jié)構(gòu)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)必背句式及短語(yǔ)情感(4)So情感adj.was/weresb.that+從句(So+adv.didsb.do..that+從句某人如此...以至于...)Soterrifiedofbeingcalledontoanswerquestionswashethatheloweredhishead.他如此害怕被提問(wèn)以至于他低下了頭。SodeterminedwasDavidthathefinallyreachedthefinishinglineandallthestudentscheeredforhim.大衛(wèi)如此堅(jiān)定，他終于到達(dá)了終點(diǎn)，所有的學(xué)生都為他歡呼。Soloudlydidshespeakthateveryonecouldhearherclearly.她講的如此大聲以至于每個(gè)人都可以聽(tīng)清楚。情感adj.and情感adj.,sb.didsth.又...又...，某人做某事Exhaustedandscared,Janelaydownnearastone,missingherfamily.又疲憊又害怕，簡(jiǎn)躺在一塊石頭旁邊，想念她的家人。Determinedandinspired,Davidraisedhishead,lookingatmewithgratitude.感到堅(jiān)定和受到鼓舞,David抬起頭，感激地看著我。Relaxedanddelighted,Davidwavedatmeimmediatelyaftercrossingthefinishline,conveyinghishappinessandgratitude.（2022全國(guó)1卷）感到放松開(kāi)心，大衛(wèi)在穿過(guò)終點(diǎn)線后立刻向我揮手，表達(dá)他的快樂(lè)與感激。情感adj.assb.+was/were,sb.(still)dosth.盡管某人（感到）...，某人(仍做)某事AnxiousandunwillingasIwas,IstilldidthedishesatDad’srequest.盡管很著急和不情愿，我還是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。Scaredandanxiousashewas,HelctorstillpluckeduphiscouragetoexplainwhathadhappenedtoMr.Alder.盡管他很害怕和緊張,赫克托仍然鼓起勇氣解釋了瓦爾德先生的遭遇。Aflush/wave/surge/senseof情感n.seized；tookholdof(抓住)/washedover；sweptover；floodedover；creptover/overwhelmed(充滿)sb.一陣...感涌上心頭/向某人襲來(lái)。A

flush/wave

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seized/took

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her.改寫(xiě)：Suddenly

aflush/waveofhappinessandexcitementseized/tookholdof/sweptoverherwhenshecaughtsightofafamiliarfigure.當(dāng)她看到一個(gè)熟悉的身影,內(nèi)心突然涌起一陣興奮.With+情感n+writtenonone’sface,sbdidsth.某人臉上寫(xiě)滿了...,某人做某事Withlookofsadnesswrittenonhisface,hesaidgoodbyetohisbestfriendwhowasmovingaway.他向即將離開(kāi)的最好的朋友告別，臉上寫(xiě)滿了悲傷。One’sface+brimmed(充滿)litup(點(diǎn)亮)/beamed(喜笑顏開(kāi))/burn(燃燒)/flush(臉紅)/pale(變得蒼白)/darken(變暗)+with+情感n.Hisfacebrimmed/beamedwithpridewhenhereceivedtheaward.

當(dāng)他獲得獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)時(shí)，他的臉上洋溢著自豪。

動(dòng)作：一...就(4)Assoonas/Theinstant/Themoment/Theminute/ImmediatelyInstantly+從句...,sbdid..Assoonas/Themoment/theminute/theinstant/Immediatelytheresultwasannounced,theystartedtocelebrate.結(jié)果一宣布，他們就開(kāi)始慶祝。Hardlyhadsb.donesth.whensb.did...;Nosoonerhadsb.donethansb.did..Hardlyhadshesteppedintotheclassroomwheneveryoneshouted“surprise”.她一走進(jìn)教室，每個(gè)人就大喊“驚喜”。Nosoonerhadhefinishedhisspeechthantheaudienceeruptedintoapplause.他一完成演講，觀眾們就爆發(fā)了掌聲。On/Upondoingsth,sb.did...Upon/Onhearing

theunexpectednews,hewassoshockedthathecouldn'tutterasingleword.一聽(tīng)到這個(gè)出乎意料的消息，他震驚到說(shuō)不出話來(lái)。Atthesight/sound/thoughtof...,sb.did...一看到/聽(tīng)到/想到...，某人....Atthesightofthewolf,Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating.一看到狼，我就有一種強(qiáng)烈的恐懼感，手心冒汗。Atthesoundoftheapproachingfootsteps,hewassodelightedthathecouldhardlycontainhisexcitement.一聽(tīng)到接近的腳步聲，他如此高興以至于他幾乎不能抑制興奮。心理(多用于主題升華)（5）Ithit/struck/occurredto/dawnedonsb.that...某人突然意識(shí)到/明白...AsInoticedthesignofthesupermarket,itsuddenlystruck/hit/occurredtomethatIcouldgivehimsomedailynecessitiesandfoodasagift.當(dāng)我注意到超市的標(biāo)志時(shí)，我突然想到，我可以給他一些日常必需品和食物作為禮物。Throughthisunforgettableandremarkableevent,iteventuallydawnedonmethatnothingisdifficultwithawillingheart.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)通過(guò)這一難忘而非凡的事件，我最終意識(shí)到，有志者，事竟成。Notuntil/Onlythendidsb.(eto)realize/learnthat...(倒裝句式)直到那時(shí)，某人才意識(shí)到...Notuntil/OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasbraverythatcanconquerwhateverdifficultycameintheway.直到那時(shí)我才意識(shí)到，只有勇敢才能克服路上的任何困難。Itwasthen/atthatmomentthatsb.realizedthat...正是在那一刻某人(開(kāi)始)意識(shí)到(強(qiáng)調(diào)句式)ItwasthenthatIrealizedthateverysmallactionofkindnesscanmakeabigdifferencetotheworld.正是那一刻我意識(shí)到每個(gè)小的善舉可以產(chǎn)生很大的影響。The/Sucha...experience/sceneenlightened/remindsb.that...這次.../如此..的經(jīng)歷/景象使某人明白/提醒某人...Suchawarmsceneenlightenedmethatthelanguagebarriercanneverbeaproblembetweenkindandfriendlypeople.如此溫馨的場(chǎng)景使我明白語(yǔ)言障礙永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)是善良友好的人們之間的難題。(When/Whenever)Lookingbackon/Reflectingon/Thinkingoftheexperience/journey,sblearnedavaluablelessonthat/stillfelt.../couldn’thelpdoingsth...回首/回想/反思...,某人學(xué)到一個(gè)寶貴的教訓(xùn)/任然感受到/情不自禁做某事...Lookingbackontheexperience,Ilearnedavaluablelessonthatnaturewassoadorableandmysteriousthatweallfeltawedandhumblewhenfacedwithit.回顧這次經(jīng)歷，我學(xué)到了一個(gè)寶貴的教訓(xùn)：大自然是如此可愛(ài)神秘，以至于我在面對(duì)它時(shí)感到敬畏和謙卑。Wheneverthinkingofthatheartwarmingscene,Janecouldn’thelpgettingdeeplymovedbytheselflessloveandcareofherneighbour.每當(dāng)想起那暖心的場(chǎng)景，簡(jiǎn)都會(huì)情不自禁的被鄰居的無(wú)私關(guān)愛(ài)深深打動(dòng)。Sb’s...words/encouragementalways/stillsounded/echoed/rangout/lingered/dwelledinone’smind/head/ear.某人...的話語(yǔ)/鼓勵(lì)總是/仍然在腦海中/耳邊回響。Throughmanyyearshavewornon,myfather’splainbutencouragingwordshavealwayslingered/echoedinmymind,guidingthewayofmylife.盡管許多年過(guò)去了，父親平淡但鼓勵(lì)的話語(yǔ)一直在我腦海中回響，指引著我的人生道路。語(yǔ)言(1)“...,”sbsaid/uttered(說(shuō))/announced/declared(宣布)/whispered/murmured(低語(yǔ))/shouted/screamed(喊叫)/responded/replied(回復(fù))+副詞+ina...voice或in/with+情感n.,doing/done非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞或with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu).“Ihatethem,”Lindascreamedangrilyinatremblingvoice,clenchingherfist.“我恨他們，”琳達(dá)緊握拳頭用顫抖的聲音憤怒地尖叫?！癠ncle,forgiveme!I...brokethevase...unintentionally,”thelittleboystutteredfearfully,withhisheadlow/loweringhishead.“叔叔，請(qǐng)?jiān)徫?！?..無(wú)意...打...破花瓶，”小男孩害怕地結(jié)巴起來(lái)，低著頭。必背短語(yǔ)（6）鼓起勇氣：pluckup/screwup/gather(up)/summonone’scourageFinally,Ipluckedupmycouragetogoonstage.我終于鼓起勇氣登上了舞臺(tái)。感到欣慰/放下心來(lái):toone’srelief,...

使人欣慰的/放心的是/breatheasighofrelief/sighwithrelief

松了一口氣/(Awaveof)relieffloodedthrough/washedoversb.

Ibreathedasighofreliefastheplanelandedsafely.飛機(jī)安全著陸，我頓時(shí)放下心來(lái)。因...顫抖：tremble/shiver/shakewithfear(害怕)/panic(驚恐)/excitement(興奮)/anger/rage(憤怒)Heclenchedhisfistsandtrembledwithrage/anger,tearsrollingdownhercheeks.他握緊拳頭，氣得發(fā)抖,淚珠順著面頰滾落下來(lái)。①不久后:notlongafterthat,..=shortlyafterwards,..=beforelong,...=Itdidn’ttakelongbefore從句Itdidn’ttakelongbefore

theygottheirtastyfoodready.=Beforelong,theygottheirtastyfoodready.不久后他們準(zhǔn)備就好了美味的食物。②一瞬間/剎那間:inasplitsecond/foraninstant/moment/Itwasinaflashthat...Itwasinaflashthat

thetwinsrestartedtheirmeaningfulwork,withthefather’shelp.很快,在爸爸的幫助下，雙胞胎重新開(kāi)始他們有意義的工作。③不知不覺(jué)/某人還沒(méi)來(lái)得及做某事,...:Beforesb.knewit,.../Beforesb.coulddosth,...

BeforeIcouldsaysomething,thekindmanvanishedinthecrowd.我還沒(méi)來(lái)得及說(shuō)什么，這個(gè)善良的人就消失在人群里。④似乎一個(gè)世紀(jì)那么長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間后：Afterwhatseemedacentury，...Withsurprisewrittenonhisface,fatheraskedwhattheyweredo