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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。OnepleasantNew-yearmorning,Edwardrose,andwashedanddressedhimselfinahurry.HewantedtobefirsttowishahappyNewYeartohisfamily.Heturnedupateverydoorofthehouse,andshoutedthewordsof“HappyNewYear”inanexcitedvoice.Afteraquickbreakfast,hehoppedalongthestreetlikeahappybird,greetedandrepeatedthewordstothosehemet.Whenhecameback,hisfathergavehim50dollars,sayinghecouldbuywhateverhehadbeenwishingfor.Hisfacelightedupashetookthem.Hehadwishedforalongtimetobuysomeinterestingbooksthathehadseenatthebookstore.Hethankedhisfatheranddancedoutofthehouseagainwithalightheart,wantingtobuythosebooks.Asherandownthestreet,henoticedapoorGermanfamily,thefather,mother,andthreechildrentremblingwithcold.“IwishyouahappyNewYear,”saidEdward,ashewashappilypassingon.Themantookalookatthehappyboyandshookhisheadsadly.Edwardstoppedandsaid,“Itseemsthatyoudonotbelongtothiscountry”Themanagainshookhishead,aconfusedexpressionappearedoverhisface,forhecouldnotunderstandorspeakEnglish.Butthepoormanpointedtohismouth,andtothechildrenwithhungrylooks,asiftosay,“Theselittleoneshavehadnothingtoeatforalongtime.”Edwardquicklyunderstoodthatthesepoorpeoplewereindifficultsituation.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Hetookouthisdollars,andgavethemalltotheman._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:WhenEdwardwenthome,hisfatheraskedwhatbookhehadbought._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意新年的早晨,愛(ài)德華早早起床,興奮地向家人和街上的人送上新年祝福。父親給了他50美元,他打算去買心儀已久的書(shū)。在街上,他遇到了一家貧窮的德國(guó)人,父母和三個(gè)孩子在寒風(fēng)中瑟瑟發(fā)抖。他向這家人送上祝福,卻發(fā)現(xiàn)男人搖頭,通過(guò)男人的肢體語(yǔ)言,他意識(shí)到這家人正處于困境,孩子們很久沒(méi)吃東西了。故事山分析開(kāi)端:新年早晨,愛(ài)德華開(kāi)心地向家人和路人送祝福,收到父親給的50美元,準(zhǔn)備去買書(shū)。發(fā)展:愛(ài)德華在街上遇到貧困的德國(guó)家庭,發(fā)現(xiàn)他們處于困境,了解到孩子們挨餓的情況。高潮:愛(ài)德華把買書(shū)的錢給了這家人,面臨著回家如何向父親交代的問(wèn)題。結(jié)局(待續(xù)寫(xiě)):回家后,父親詢問(wèn)買書(shū)的情況,愛(ài)德華說(shuō)明原因,得到父親的理解和贊揚(yáng),愛(ài)德華也收獲了成長(zhǎng)和內(nèi)心的滿足。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)伏筆:父親給愛(ài)德華50美元讓他買書(shū)?;貞?yīng):在第一段續(xù)寫(xiě)中,愛(ài)德華把錢給了德國(guó)家庭,放棄了買書(shū);在第二段續(xù)寫(xiě)中,父親詢問(wèn)買書(shū)情況,引出愛(ài)德華的解釋和父親的反應(yīng)。伏筆:愛(ài)德華看到德國(guó)家庭的困境?;貞?yīng):在第一段續(xù)寫(xiě)中,促使他做出把錢給這家人的決定;在第二段續(xù)寫(xiě)中,成為他向父親解釋的原因,也是故事升華的關(guān)鍵。伏筆:愛(ài)德華的快樂(lè)和善良,如向家人、路人送祝福。回應(yīng):在第一段續(xù)寫(xiě)中,體現(xiàn)為他毫不猶豫地幫助他人;在第二段續(xù)寫(xiě)中,得到父親認(rèn)可,進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)化他善良的品質(zhì)和積極的價(jià)值觀。伏筆:德國(guó)家庭的語(yǔ)言不通,男人搖頭、表情困惑?;貞?yīng):在第一段續(xù)寫(xiě)中,通過(guò)肢體語(yǔ)言讓愛(ài)德華更深刻理解他們的困境;在第二段續(xù)寫(xiě)中,作為愛(ài)德華幫助他們的特殊背景,突出幫助行為的意義。伏筆:愛(ài)德華開(kāi)心地跳舞出門(mén)買書(shū)?;貞?yīng):在第一段續(xù)寫(xiě)中,形成他放棄買書(shū)幫助他人的行為反差;在第二段續(xù)寫(xiě)中,與回家后的情景對(duì)比,突出故事發(fā)展和人物內(nèi)心變化。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)第一段:詳細(xì)描述愛(ài)德華把錢給德國(guó)家庭時(shí)的動(dòng)作、語(yǔ)言和表情,以及這家人的反應(yīng),如驚訝、感激等,還要體現(xiàn)愛(ài)德華放棄買書(shū)的心理過(guò)程。第二段:著重描寫(xiě)愛(ài)德華回家后與父親的對(duì)話,他如何向父親解釋錢的去向,父親的態(tài)度和反應(yīng),以及愛(ài)德華內(nèi)心的感受,如是否后悔、是否因幫助他人而感到滿足等。情感線起初愛(ài)德華因新年收到錢和準(zhǔn)備買書(shū)而開(kāi)心興奮。看到德國(guó)家庭困境時(shí),他心生憐憫。把錢給這家人時(shí),雖放棄了買書(shū)但因幫助他人而感到溫暖?;丶颐鎸?duì)父親詢問(wèn)時(shí),他有些忐忑,得到父親理解后,內(nèi)心充滿自豪和滿足。故事線新年早晨,愛(ài)德華向家人和路人送祝福,收到父親給的50美元準(zhǔn)備買書(shū)。愛(ài)德華在街上遇到貧困的德國(guó)家庭,發(fā)現(xiàn)他們的困境。愛(ài)德華把錢給了德國(guó)家庭,放棄買書(shū)。愛(ài)德華回家,父親詢問(wèn)買書(shū)情況。愛(ài)德華向父親解釋錢的去向。父親理解并贊揚(yáng)愛(ài)德華,愛(ài)德華收獲成長(zhǎng)和內(nèi)心的滿足。主旨升華句ThisactofkindnessnotonlybroughtwarmthtothepoorfamilybutalsotaughtEdwardthetruemeaningofhappiness,whichliesingivingratherthanreceiving.(這次善舉不僅給貧困家庭帶來(lái)了溫暖,也讓愛(ài)德華懂得了幸福的真正含義在于給予而非索取。)Throughthisexperience,Edwardrealizedthatasmallactofcompassioncanhaveaprofoundimpactonothers'lives,andthevalueofempathyandgenerosityfaroutweighsmaterialpossessions.(通過(guò)這次經(jīng)歷,愛(ài)德華意識(shí)到一個(gè)小小的同情之舉可以對(duì)他人的生活產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)影響,同理心和慷慨的價(jià)值遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超過(guò)物質(zhì)財(cái)富。)Edward'schoicetohelptheGermanfamilyinsteadofbuyingbooksshowedthatinthefaceofothers'suffering,truekindnessprevailsoverpersonaldesires,andsuchselflessactscancreateamoreharmoniousandlovingworld.(愛(ài)德華選擇幫助德國(guó)家庭而不是買書(shū),表明在他人受苦時(shí),真正的善良戰(zhàn)勝了個(gè)人欲望,這種無(wú)私的行為可以創(chuàng)造一個(gè)更和諧、更有愛(ài)的世界。)AsEdwardreceivedhisfather'spraiseforhiskindness,heunderstoodthatthegreatestwealthinlifeisnotmoneyorpossessionsbuttheabilitytobringjoyandhopetothoseinneed.(當(dāng)愛(ài)德華因善良得到父親的贊揚(yáng)時(shí),他明白了人生最大的財(cái)富不是金錢或財(cái)產(chǎn),而是給有需要的人帶來(lái)快樂(lè)和希望的能力。)ThisNew-Year'sstoryofEdwardservesasareminderthatinthepursuitofourowndreams,weshouldalwayskeepaneyeontheneedsofothers,foritisinhelpingothersthatwetrulygrowandfindtheessenceoflife.(愛(ài)德華的這個(gè)新年故事提醒我們,在追求自己夢(mèng)想的過(guò)程中,我們應(yīng)該時(shí)刻關(guān)注他人的需求,因?yàn)檎窃趲椭说倪^(guò)程中,我們真正成長(zhǎng)并找到了生命的真諦。)寫(xiě)作示范一第一段Hetookouthisdollars,andgavethemalltotheman.Withadeterminedlookonhisface,Edwardplacedthemoneygentlyintotheman'shand.“Takethis.Itwillhelpyoubuysomefoodforyourfamily,”hesaidsoftly.Theman'seyeswidenedindisbelief,andthenfilledwithgratitude.Hislipstrembledasifhewantedtosaysomethingbutcouldn'tfindthewords.Thechildren,too,lookedatEdwardwithbig,roundeyes,aglimmerofhopeshininginthem.Edwardsmiledatthem,feelingawarmthinhisheartdespitegivingawayallhismoney.第二段WhenEdwardwenthome,hisfatheraskedwhatbookhehadbought.Edwardloweredhisheadforamoment,abitnervous.Thenhelookedup,methisfather'seyes,andtoldhimthewholestory.“I'msorry,Dad.Ididn'tbuythebooks,butIcouldn'tbeartoseethemhungry,”hesaid.Hisfathersmiledwarmlyandpattedhimontheshoulder.“You'vemadetherightchoice,son.Yourkindnessismorepreciousthananybook.”Edwardfeltasurgeofprideandhappiness.Herealizedthathelpingothersbroughthimajoythatnobookcouldeverreplace.寫(xiě)作示范二第一段Hetookouthisdollars,andgavethemalltotheman.Withouthesitation,Edwardthrustthemoneyintotheman'scoldhands.“Here,thisisforyouandyourfamily,”heexclaimed.Themanwasstunned,hisfaceamixofshockandgratitude.Heboweddeeply,whilethechildrengatheredaround,theirthinfaceslightingupwithafaintsmile.Edwardfeltastrangesenseofcontentment,eventhoughhisdreamofbuyingbookshadvanished.Heknewinhisheartthathehaddonesomethingfarmoreimportant.第二段WhenEdwardwenthome,hisfatheraskedwhatbookhehadbought.Edwardtookadeepbreathandtoldhisfathereverythingthathadhappened.Hisfatherlistenedattentively,aproudlookgraduallyappearingonhisface.“Son,you'veshowngreatcompassiontoday.Thebookscanwait,butthehelpyougavetothatfamilyispriceless.”Edwardsmiled,hisheartfull.Heunderstoodthattruehappinesscamefrommakingadifferenceinothers'lives,andhecouldn'twaittospreadmorekindnessinthefuture.【答案】Paragraph1:Hetookouthisdollars,andgavethemalltotheman.Howtheireyessparkledwithgratitude!Theysaidsomethingintheirlanguage,whichmightmean,“Youaredoingmea

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