Unit5Feelingexcited單元寫作指導(dǎo)-2024-2025年八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下冊(cè)易錯(cuò)易混考點(diǎn)（仁愛）

Unit5FeelingExcited單元寫作指導(dǎo)★話題命題角度Unit5主要涉及個(gè)人經(jīng)歷情感體驗(yàn)方面的“經(jīng)歷與感受”這一話題主要考查：1.自己的經(jīng)歷與感受；2.他人的經(jīng)歷對(duì)自己的影響。此話題偶爾還會(huì)涉及社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)進(jìn)而提出一些自我提升的方法和建議。一、核心詞句【詞匯積累】品德修養(yǎng)1.quality品質(zhì)；人品2.spirit精神3.honesty誠(chéng)實(shí)4.kindness善良5.admire欽佩6.independent獨(dú)立的7.positive積極的8.moral道德的9.grateful感激的10.behavepolitely舉止文明11.respecteachother相互尊重12.keeppromises信守承諾13.strongwill堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志14.befriendlyto對(duì)……友好15.beresponsiblefor對(duì)……負(fù)責(zé)16.bepatientwith對(duì)……有耐心17.bethankfultoothers感恩他人18.bereadytohelpothers樂(lè)于助人19.nevergiveup永不放棄自我認(rèn)識(shí)與提升1.influence影響2.experience經(jīng)驗(yàn)；經(jīng)歷3.dare敢于4.require需要5.fail失敗6.silent不說(shuō)話的；沉默的7.helpful有幫助的8.valuable寶貴的9.seldom很少10.dealwith應(yīng)對(duì)；處理11.inpublic公開地12.inperson親身；親自13.takepridein為……感到自豪14.beproudof為……驕傲15.makeplans制訂計(jì)劃16.managetime管理時(shí)間17.overechallenges克服挑戰(zhàn)18.sticktodoingsth.堅(jiān)持做某事19.achievethegoal實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)20.take…seriously認(rèn)真對(duì)待……21.aslongas只要22.learnfrommistakes從錯(cuò)誤中學(xué)習(xí)23.makeprogress取得進(jìn)步二、話題佳句記背過(guò)去經(jīng)歷1.IusedtobeafraidofwritingEnglisharticles.我過(guò)去害怕寫英語(yǔ)文章。2.HownervousIwaswhenIwastoldtogiveaspeech.當(dāng)聽說(shuō)我要發(fā)表演講時(shí)我緊張極了。3.ThebiggestchangeI’veevermadeisthatI’vefalleninlovewithreading.我做過(guò)的最大的改變是我愛上了閱讀。4.Myteacherencouragedmetostudyhardandgavemesomehelpfuladvice.我的老師鼓勵(lì)我努力學(xué)習(xí)，并給了我一些有用的建議。5.Ididn’tfallbehindtheotherswithhishelp/withthehelpofhim.在他的幫助下，我沒有落在別人后面。6.Hespentonehoureverydaystudyingwithherandexplainingdifficultproblemstoher，soshemademuchprogressinmath.他每天花一個(gè)小時(shí)和她一起學(xué)習(xí)，給她解釋難題，所以她在數(shù)學(xué)上取得了很大的進(jìn)步。感受和影響1.Allinall，theworldneedsloveandweshouldgetreadytohelpothersatanytimewithoutexpectinganythinginreturn.總而言之，世界需要愛，我們應(yīng)該隨時(shí)準(zhǔn)備幫助別人，不求任何回報(bào)。2.Inmyopinion，it’sveryimportanttolearntobethankful.Ifeveryonecanhelpeachother，theworldwillbefulloflove.在我看來(lái)，學(xué)會(huì)感恩非常重要。如果每個(gè)人都能互相幫助，世界將會(huì)充滿愛。3.Nomatterhowhardlifeis，wewon’tfailunlesswegiveuphope.無(wú)論生活多么難，除非我們放棄希望，否則我們不會(huì)失敗。我認(rèn)識(shí)與提升1.Inordertocatchupwithmyclassmates,Ibegantopracticerunningeverydayafterschool.為了趕上我的同學(xué)，我開始每天放學(xué)后練習(xí)跑步。2.NomatterwhatkindofdifficultyIfaced,Itriedmybesttosticktoexercising.無(wú)論我遇到了什么困難，我都竭盡全力堅(jiān)持鍛煉。3.Ifinditimportanttokeepapositiveattitudewhenwe'reintrouble.我發(fā)現(xiàn)當(dāng)我們遇到麻煩時(shí)，保持積極的態(tài)度很重要。4.However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.然而，我認(rèn)為它是一個(gè)挑戰(zhàn)，也是一個(gè)提高我的英語(yǔ)水平的好機(jī)會(huì)。個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)5.Iusedtobeveryshy,notdaringtoexpressmyselfinpublic.我過(guò)去很害羞，不敢在公共場(chǎng)合表達(dá)自己。6.Butwiththeencouragementofmyteachers,Inotonlybeemoreoutgoingbutalsogetonwellwithallthepeoplearoundme.但是在老師的鼓勵(lì)下，我不僅變得更加外向，而且與周圍的人相處得很好。7.Makingandkeepingpromisesplaysanimportantroleinourlives.許下承諾并信守承諾在我們的生活中扮演著重要的角色。8.Don'tspendtoomuchtimeonhardthinkingbecauseonlyactionleadsyoutosuccess.不要花太多時(shí)間苦思冥想，因?yàn)橹挥行袆?dòng)才能帶你走向成功。三、開頭中間結(jié)尾模板開頭段1.Theactivityimpressedmemostwasabasketballgame.給我印象最深的活動(dòng)是一場(chǎng)籃球賽。2.ItwasatthattimethatIdecidedtohelpmorepeopleinneed.就是在那個(gè)時(shí)候，我決定幫助更多需要幫助的人。3.Thereisalwayssomethingunforgettableinmylife，especiallythestoriesbetweenmyfriendandme.在我的生活中總有一些難忘的事情，尤其是我和朋友之間的故事。4.Thoughthephysicaltestintheentranceexaminationforseniormiddleschoolwasover，itleftmeadeepimpression.即使中招體育考試已經(jīng)結(jié)束了，但它給我留下了深刻的印象。中間段Toprepareforthephysicalexamination，Igotupearlyandusedsomefreetimetopracticethesesports.InP.E.class，Ialsohadapetitionwithothers.Finally，Igotfullmarksintheexamination.在這次體育考試的備考期間，我每天早起并用空閑時(shí)間練習(xí)這些考試項(xiàng)目。在體育課上，我也和其他人進(jìn)行了比賽。最終，我考試得了滿分。結(jié)尾段1.Throughthisexamination，Iunderstandthataslongasweworkhard，therewillbeharvest.SoIwillcontinuetoworkhardandnevergiveupinmyfuturelifeandstudy.通過(guò)這次考試，我明白了只要努力就會(huì)有收獲。因此，在未來(lái)的生活和學(xué)習(xí)中，我會(huì)繼續(xù)努力，永不放棄。2.Thisexperiencetaughtmenottolookdownonothers.這次經(jīng)歷教會(huì)我不要小瞧別人。四、話題俗語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)1.ThereareathousandHamletsinathousandpeople’seyes.一千個(gè)人眼中有一千個(gè)哈姆雷特。2.Youhavetosowbeforeyoucanreap.Youhavetogivebeforeyoucanget.先播種才能收獲，先付出才能得到。3.Indoingwelearn.實(shí)踐長(zhǎng)才干。4.Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.凡事必先難后易。5.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.行動(dòng)勝于空談。6.Badluckoftenbringsgoodluck.塞翁失馬，安知非福。7.Ajourneyofathousandlibeginswithasinglestep.千里之行，始于足下。水滴石穿，繩鋸木斷。堅(jiān)持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。請(qǐng)以“OnethingIkeepdoingeveryday”為題，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，參加學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)主題演講活動(dòng)。1.要點(diǎn)：1)你每天在堅(jiān)持做什么；2)你堅(jiān)持這么做的理由；3)它會(huì)給你帶來(lái)怎樣的影響或改變。2.要求：1)文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名和師生姓名；2)詞數(shù)100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。OnethingIkeepdoingeverydayGoodmorning,everyone!Iamveryhappytobeheretomakeaspeechtoday.ThetopicofmyspeechisonethingIkeepdoingeveryday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That'sall.Thankyou!【審題】人稱：______________時(shí)態(tài)：______________【列綱】【成文】OnethingIkeepdoingeverydayGoodmorning,everyone!Iamveryhappytobeheretomakeaspeechtoday.ThetopicofmyspeechisonethingIkeepdoingeveryday.IloverunningandIhavekeptrunningforthreeyears.WhenIwasinGrade7,Iwasnotgoodatsportsandrunningwasalwaysmyweakness.Ioftenfailedmyrunningtests.①Inordertocatchupwithmyclassmates,Ibegantopracticerunningeverydayafterschool.Sometimes,IwassotiredthatIreallywantedtogiveup.②ButIkepttellingmyselfthatIcouldmakeit.③NomatterwhatkindofdifficultyIfaced,Itriedmybesttokeeprunning.NowIdomuchbetterinrunning.I'mveryproudofmyselfandI'mreadyforanychallengeinthefuture.That'sall.Thankyou！加分亮點(diǎn)①句使用inorderto引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)，闡述作者每天堅(jiān)持練習(xí)跑步的原因，表達(dá)干凈利落，使文章句式結(jié)構(gòu)多樣；②句使用轉(zhuǎn)折詞but及that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，生動(dòng)形象地描述了作者不輕易放棄的決心，邏輯嚴(yán)密順暢，內(nèi)容更加連貫；③句使用nomatter引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，再次闡明作者勇于面對(duì)困難，使文章句式更高級(jí)，內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)。1．每個(gè)人都有自己的閃光點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)以“MyShiningPoint”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文。要求：（1）講述一個(gè)自己的故事；（2）你的感悟；（3）適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，行文連貫；（4）文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

MyShiningPointImeetmanyexcellentpeopleeverydayandatthesametimeIalsofindmyselfreallygood.Icanseetheworldwithkindeyes.IthinkIdon’tliketoplain.Ifinditimportanttohaveapositiveattitude.Lastmonth,IwaschosentoplayaroleinanEnglishshow.Itwasdifficultformetomemorizethelinesinashorttime.However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.SoImadeanefforttopractice.Finally,Imadeitandreceivedhighpraise.Infact,itismypositiveattitudethatbringsoutthebestinmeallthetime.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)；③提示：以“MyShiningPoint”為題并結(jié)合提示進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明自己有哪些閃光點(diǎn)；第二步，講述一個(gè)自己的故事；第三步，介紹自己的感悟。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①atthesametime同時(shí)②playarolein在……中扮演角色③regard…as把……當(dāng)作[高分句型]①However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.(which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)②Infact,itismypositiveattitudethatbringsoutthebestinmeallthetime.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)2．你校EnglishReadingClub正在組織一次英文小說(shuō)讀書分享會(huì)，本周閱讀內(nèi)容為Auggie’sStory（閱讀D篇）。請(qǐng)從以下兩個(gè)標(biāo)題中任選一個(gè)，寫一篇英文讀后感。選擇一：以Sometimespeoplesurpriseus為題，內(nèi)容包括：1．你對(duì)這句話的理解；2．結(jié)合實(shí)際生活舉例說(shuō)明；3．你得到的啟發(fā)。選擇二：以Troubleisafriend為題，內(nèi)容包括：1．你對(duì)這句話的理解；2．結(jié)合實(shí)際生活舉例說(shuō)明；3．你得到的啟發(fā)。注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右；2．請(qǐng)先填寫你所選的標(biāo)題，再寫文章；3．照抄閱讀語(yǔ)篇不得分；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)校名和姓名等信息。Title:____________AfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Title:Troubleisafriend AfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched.AndIthinktroubleisafriend.Themeaningofthissentenceisthatalthoughtroublemaybefrustratingandupsetting,itisalsoaremindertobemorecarefulandavoidbiggerproblems,justlikeafriend.InmyEnglishstudylastyear,mygrammarwasverybad.Thatwasabigtroubleforme,becauseitloweredmyEnglishscore.Butthankstothehelpofmydeskmate,shehelpedmemakeagrammarstudyscheduleandhelpedmewithgrammareveryweek.AndIspentanhourstudyinggrammareveryday.Intheend,mygrammarimprovedgreatly.Inmyopinion,troubleisbad,butitsometimesmakesusbetter.Itremindsusnottogiveupwhenfacingdifficultiesandtofacethembravely.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：選擇一個(gè)話題完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，請(qǐng)先填寫你所選的標(biāo)題并介紹你對(duì)這句話的理解；第二步，結(jié)合實(shí)際生活舉例說(shuō)明；第三步，最后表達(dá)你得到的啟發(fā)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①thanksto多虧②helpsbdosth幫助某人做某事③inmyopinion在我看來(lái)[高分句型]①Themeaningofthissentenceisthatalthoughtroublemaybefrustratingandupsetting,itisalsoaremindertobemorecarefulandavoidbiggerproblems,justlikeafriend.（表語(yǔ)從句，讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）②Thatwasabigtroubleforme,becauseitloweredmyEnglishscore.（原因狀語(yǔ)從句）3．假定你是李華，學(xué)校正舉辦“我勞動(dòng)，我快樂(lè)”為主題向?qū)W生開展征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿。要點(diǎn)包括：（1）分享你的勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷；（2）談?wù)勀愕膭趧?dòng)感受；（3）表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)并發(fā)出倡議。注意：（1）詞數(shù)90左右；（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Lastweekend,Igotupearlyandcookednoodlesformyparents.First,Iboiledsomewater.ThenIputsomenoodlesintothepot.Aboutfiveorsixminuteslater,Iplacedtheminthebowlsandaddedsomesaltandoil.Whenmyparentsgotup,theyweresurprisedandpraisedmewithabigsmile.Itwasthefirsttimeformetocookforthem.Alittlebittiredbuthappy,IfeltproudofmyselfbecauseIcouldtakecareofmyparents.Fromthisunforgettableexperience,I’vealsogotadeeperunderstandingofmyparents.Ithinkit’sourdutytosharesomehousework.Besides,doingsomehardhouseworkisakindofphysicalexercise.Asteenagers,weshouldtakeactiontohelparoundthehouse.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)注意用一般過(guò)去時(shí)敘述自己的勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷和感受，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)談自己的觀點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步：介紹自己的勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷；第二步：談?wù)勛约簭倪@次勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷中獲得的感受；第三步：表達(dá)自己對(duì)勞動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①surprised驚訝的②praise表?yè)P(yáng)③takecareof照顧④unforgettable難以忘記的⑤takeaction采取行動(dòng)[高分句型]①Itwasthefirsttimeformetocookforthem.（itis/wasthefirsttimetodosth.第一次做某事）②doingsomehardhouseworkisakindofphysicalexercise.（動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)）4．某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“我最想感謝的人”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)務(wù)l是你最想感謝的人，他/她是怎樣幫助你的，以及你的收獲。提示詞語(yǔ):trouble,encourage,improve,stickto提示問(wèn)題:.·Whodoyouwanttothankmost?·Howdidhe/shehelpyou?·Whathaveyoulearnedfromhim/her?Inmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Inmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.Mymotherismyrolemodel.Iadmireherverymuch.Mymotherisresponsibleandcareful.Sheisnotonlybusywithherworkbutalsotakesgoodcareofourfamily.What’smore,ShedidalotformewhenIwasupset.OnceIfailedasingingpetitionandfeltveryupset.Iwascryinginthecornerofthehallwhenmymothercametome.Shehandedmeapieceoftissueandhuggedmetenderly.ShekeptfortingmeandencouragedmetillIstoppedcrying.Fromherwords,Ibecamecalmandfoundconfidenceagain.IloveherandIwilllearnfromher.Shemakesmeknowtheimportanceofdiligence.Iwillworkhardandtrymybesttohelpothers.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出“我最想感謝的人”的話題；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“身份、事件、感悟”等方面進(jìn)行介紹；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)，總結(jié)全文。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①admire欽佩②diligence勤奮③notonly…butalso…不僅……而且……[高分句型]①Iwascryinginthecornerofthehallwhenmymothercametome.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②ShekeptfortingmeandencouragedmetillIstoppedcrying.（till引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）5．家是溫馨的港灣，家是幸福的源泉，家是永遠(yuǎn)的依戀，每年5月15日是世界家庭日(InternationalDayofFamilies)。學(xué)校英語(yǔ)?？e辦征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷，破解家庭幸福的“密碼”，寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.你對(duì)家庭幸福的理解；2.你家發(fā)生的一件有意義的事；3.促進(jìn)家庭和諧幸福的幾點(diǎn)建議(請(qǐng)列舉兩到三條具體做法)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Familyisthesourceofhappinessandtheharborofwarmth.Tome,ahappyfamilymeansmutualrespect,understanding,andsupportamongallmembers.Onemeaningfuleventinmyfamilywaswhenweallworkedtogethertoprepareasurprisebirthdaypartyformygrandmother.Everyonehadaroletoplay,andthejoyonherfacewaspriceless.Topromotefamilyharmonyandhappiness,Ihaveafewsuggestions.First,spendqualitytimetogether,suchashavingmealsorplayinggames.Second,municateopenlyandhonestlytounderstandeachother’sfeelingsandneeds.Lastly,showappreciationandgratitudeforeachother’seffortsandcontributions.Byfollowingthesesteps,wecancreatealovingandsupportivefamilyenvironment.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：文章應(yīng)該包括三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)；行文時(shí)多用第一和第三人稱，盡量多使用短語(yǔ)和句型；寫作中適當(dāng)使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。[寫作步驟]第一步，整體介紹對(duì)家庭幸福的理解；第二步，具體描述家庭中發(fā)生的一件有意義的事；第三步，最后提出促進(jìn)家庭和諧幸福的建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①thesourceof……的來(lái)源②preparefor準(zhǔn)備③showappreciationfor對(duì)……表示感謝[高分句型]①Onemeaningfuleventinmyfamilywaswhenweallworkedtogethertoprepareasurprisebirthdaypartyformygrandmother.（表語(yǔ)從句）②Topromotefamilyharmonyandhappiness,Ihaveafewsuggestions.（動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)）6．在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中，青少年面臨越來(lái)越多的煩惱與壓力，請(qǐng)以此為話題給英語(yǔ)報(bào)社投稿，寫一篇文章談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?nèi)容包括：（1）導(dǎo)致青少年壓力大的主要原因？（學(xué)習(xí)、與他人相處等，至少兩條）（2）減少壓力的措施？（運(yùn)動(dòng)、聽音樂(lè)、與他人談心等，至少兩條）（3）簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀銓?duì)壓力的看法。要求：（1）包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）詞數(shù)80左右。（3）不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Weteenagershavemoreandmorepressurewhilegrowingup.Themainreasonforpressureisschoolworkandgettingalongwithothers.Studentshavesomuchhomeworkthattheyhavenotimetorelax.Somestudentsdon’tknowhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Theyfeellonely.I’llgiveyousomewaystorelievepressure.Firstofall,youneedtotakepartinallkindsofclassactivities,suchassportsmeetings,footballgamesandsingingpetitions.Besides,youshouldtrytomunicatewithyourclassmatesasoftenaspossible.Inmyopinion,properpressureisbeneficialtoourgrowthanddevelopment.Weshouldlearntofacepressureinourlife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：材料所給提示不得遺漏，注意“原因”和“措施”部分至少寫明兩條。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹青少年壓力大的原因；第二步，闡述減輕壓力的方法；第三步，表達(dá)自己對(duì)壓力的看法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①growup長(zhǎng)大②getalongwithsb.與某人相處③firstofall首先④takepartin參加[高分句型]①Studentshavesomuchhomeworkth