讀后續(xù)寫+老人冬天生日派對故事+講義 高二上學(xué)期教學(xué)質(zhì)量檢測英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Tessawoketothesoundofsnowplowsandrushedtothewindow,hereyeswidewithexcitement.Seeingtheworldblanketedinwhite,sheexclaimed(大叫)withdelightatthesightofthesnowylawn,sidewalk,andtheirredcarhiddenbeneaththesnow.Itwasthefirstsnowshecouldrememberinalongtime.Shestuffedherfeetintoherslippersanddashedtothekitchen,wherethesweetnessofbananapancakesfilledtheair.Sheslidtoastopinfrontofthewallcalendar,herfingersdancingacrossthedatesbeforefindingtherightdate:December21.SheannouncedtohermotherthatitwastheFirstDayofWinter.“TodayisOldManWinter’sbirthday,Mom!”Tessascreamed,jumpingupanddown.Curious,TessaaskedwhoOldManWinterwas.Hermothersmiled,pointingatthewinterskythroughthekitchenwindow.“Hebringsuswintereachyear,alongwiththesnow.”Excitedly,Tessaaskediftheywouldhaveabirthdaypartyforhim.Hermother,returningtothepancakes,gentlyrepliedthatwhileitwouldbefun,shewastoobusythatday.Disappointed,Tessafrowned,thinkingitwasunfairthattherewasnobirthdaypartyplanned.Butthen,abrightideastruckher.Afterbreakfast,shephonedherbestfriends,SarahandAndrew,tellingthemtomeetherattheplaygroundinfifteenminutes.Wrappedupinherpurplesnowsuit,Tessamarchedthroughthesnow-coveredsidewalkandenteredtheplayground.Tessagrinnedatthesightofherfriends—thetwinslookedsohappyswinginghighintotheaironthewoodenplayset.Theirgigglesechoedoffthemerry-go-roundandslidesastheyleapedfromtheswings,landinginthesoftsnow.Tessarantogreetthem,herfacelitupwithenthusiasm.Shegreetedthemandaskediftheyknewwhatdayitwas.Theyshooktheirheads,puzzled.Tessagrinned,explainingthattodaywasOldManWinter’sbirthdayandtheyweregoingtothrowhimaparty.Excitedly,Sarahagreedandaskedwhattheyshoulddofirst.Tessasuggestedtheymakeasnowcake.注意：（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thethreefriendseagerlygottowork,readytocelebrate.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Candles!”Sarahremembered.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________老人冬天生日派對故事續(xù)寫一、續(xù)寫要點（兩段）第一段：在孩子們成功舉辦派對后，著重描寫他們之間的互動。比如他們互相分享對OldManWinter的祝福內(nèi)容，交流在派對籌備過程中最難忘的瞬間?？梢蕴砑右恍┯腥さ男〖毠?jié)，如Tessa不小心滑倒在雪地里，大家一起歡笑幫忙扶起她的場景，進一步展現(xiàn)孩子們之間的友誼和派對的歡樂氛圍。第二段：講述派對結(jié)束后孩子們回家的情景。描述他們帶著滿足的心情回到各自家中，向家人講述派對的精彩過程，家人對他們創(chuàng)意和善良的贊揚。接著展望未來，孩子們期待下一次為OldManWinter慶祝生日，或者計劃在其他季節(jié)為大自然舉辦類似的慶?；顒樱w現(xiàn)他們對自然的熱愛和對生活的積極態(tài)度。二、情感線（150字）故事起始于Tessa發(fā)現(xiàn)下雪后的興奮，對為OldManWinter舉辦生日派對充滿期待。在派對籌備過程中，孩子們熱情高漲，滿懷喜悅地制作雪蛋糕、尋找裝飾和“蠟燭”。派對成功舉辦時，他們興奮激動，充滿成就感?；丶曳窒砼蓪?jīng)歷時，自豪滿滿，收獲家人贊揚后內(nèi)心溫暖。展望未來慶?；顒訒r，又充滿期待，情感從最初的興奮期待，歷經(jīng)歡樂滿足，最終升華為對生活和自然的持續(xù)熱愛與積極展望。三、故事線（6條）孩子們分享為OldManWinter許下的生日愿望，各自的愿望體現(xiàn)對冬天不同的美好期待。Tessa滑倒后，朋友們的關(guān)心與幫助，展現(xiàn)他們之間深厚的友誼。孩子們回家向家人講述派對過程，家人的驚訝、贊賞與鼓勵。孩子們交流派對籌備中最開心的環(huán)節(jié)，如找到獨特裝飾的時刻。孩子們計劃下一次為OldManWinter慶祝生日的初步想法，比如準備更特別的禮物。討論在其他季節(jié)為大自然舉辦類似慶?；顒拥膭?chuàng)意，如春天為花仙子舉辦派對。四、主旨升華句5句英文ThisbirthdaypartyforOldManWinternotonlybroughtjoytothechildrenbutalsokindledtheirdeep-seatedlovefornatureandthespiritofcelebration.Throughtheirsimpleyetheartfeltcelebration,thekidslearnedthebeautyofsharingjoyandcreatingmemories,enrichingtheirchildhoodexperiences.Thechildren'sactofthrowingapartyforOldManWintershowsthateventhesmallestgesturesofkindnessandcreativitycanaddmagictoourlivesandtheworldaroundus.ThisadventureofcelebratingOldManWinter'sbirthdayservesasareminderthatnatureisasourceofendlessinspirationandwonder,andweshouldcherishandcelebrateit.Thestoryofthesekids'celebrationforOldManWinterrevealsthatthepureheartsofchildrencantransformordinarydaysintoextraordinaryones,filledwithloveandwarmth.五、寫作示范詳細敘事風格Afterthecandleswereblownout,thethreefriendssatinthesnow,beamingwithhappiness.“IwishedthatOldManWinterwouldbringevenmoresnownextyearsowecanbuildbiggersnowmen,”Tessasaid,hereyesshining.Andrewchimedin,“Ihopedhewouldmaketheiceonthelakethickenoughforustoskate.”Sarahsharedherwishformorebeautifulsnowflakes.Astheychatted,Tessaaccidentallyslippedonthesnow,andherfriendsrushedtohelpherup,theirlaughterfillingtheair.Whentheyfinallyreturnedhome,theycouldn'twaittotelltheirfamiliesabouttheparty.Theirparentslistenedintently,theirfacesfilledwithpride.“Youkidsaresocreativeandkind-hearted,”Tessa'smompraised.Thechildrenalreadystarteddiscussingtheirplansfornextyear'scelebration.“MaybewecanmakeasnowcastleforOldManWinter,”Andrewsuggested.Theywerelookingforwardtoanotherwonderfulcelebration,readytoembracemoreofnature'smagic.活潑明快風格Oncethecandleswereout,thekidswereallhypedup.“Guys,IwishedOldManWinterwouldgiveusasnow-dayeveryweek!”Tessaexclaimed,jumpingupanddown.Andrewlaughed,“Iaskedforasnow-slideinthepark!”Sarahaddedherwishtoo.Suddenly,Tessatookatumbleinthesnow.Herfriendsburstoutlaughingbutquicklyhelpedherup.Backhome,theywerelikeexcitedlittlebirds,tellingtheirfamiliesallabouttheparty.Theirparentsweresuperimpressed.“Youguysareawesome!”Sarah'sdadsaid.Thekidswerealreadythinkingahead.“Nextyear,let'smakeahugesnow-cakewithrealicing,”Tessasaid.Theycouldn'twaitforthenextchancetocelebrateOldManWinterandhavemorefuninnature.參考答案Thethreefriendseagerlygottowork,readytocelebrate.Tessa,withagleaminhereye,tookthelead,herarmsscoopingandpackingsnow.Sarahpressedhermitten-cladhandsagainstthesnow,pressingitfirmlyintoasmoothsurface.Andrew,withaplayfulgrin,rolledamassivesnowballwithglovedhands,hislegspushingandguidingitacrosstheplayground.Theirbreathsfoggedtheair,andtheircheeksglowedrosyfromthecold.Theyworkedtogether,Tessashapingthecake’slayers,Sarahpattingthesidessmooth,andAndrewfoundpinecones,twigs,andevenafewbrightredberriesscatteredontheplayground.Withgigglesandlaughter,theyadornedthebigsnowycakethatwouldmakeOldManWinterproud.“Candles!”Sarahremembered.Andrewquicklym