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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。WhenMatwasjust12yearsold,hisworldwasturnedupsidedownafteraterriblecyclingaccidentlefthimwithsevereinjuries.Fortwolongyears,hestruggledwiththephysicalandemotionalpain,dreamingofthedayhecouldwalkagain.Determinedtomakethisdreamareality,Matembarkedonajourneytoraisemoneyforanoperationthatcouldgivehimbackhismobility.Mat’seffortsweretirelessandinnovative.Heorganizedcommunityevents,setupanonlinedonationpage,andsharedhisstorywithlocalmediaoutlets.Eachcontribution,nomatterhowsmall,broughthimclosertohisgoal.Andfinally,thedayarrivedwhenhehadaccumulatedtherequiredsum,andtheoperationwasscheduled.TheanticipationofregaininghisabilitytowalkfilledMatwithexcitement.Heenvisionedhimselfplayingwithfriends,sprintingacrossplaygrounds,andevencompetinginraces,perhapsevensecuringaspotonthewinner’spodiumafterhisrecovery.Justaweekbeforethelong-awaitedsurgery,Matcameacrossaheart-wrenchingstoryinthenewspaper.Itwasaboutafive-year-oldboynamedJamie,whohadspenthisentireliferelyingonawalkingframetomovearound,andhisparentsweretirelesslyraisingfundsforanoperationthatcouldhelptheirsonwalkindependently.ReadingJamie’sstory,Matfeltaninstantconnectionwiththelittleboy,knowingalltoowellthechallengesofnotbeingabletowalk.HewasmovedbyJamie’sdeterminationandtheloveofhisparents.Jamie’sstorykeepingringinginMat’smind,helostinthought.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Para.1:Afteraday’sthinking,Matmadethebigdecision,andcontactedthenewspaper.______________________________________________________________________________Para.2:Jamie’soperationwasagreatsuccess.______________________________________________________________________________Mat和Jamie的故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(兩段)第一段:Mat的無私抉擇與社會反響情感沖突:Mat內心掙扎后決定捐出全部積蓄,體現(xiàn)超越年齡的成熟與同理心。媒體推動:通過報紙報道引發(fā)連鎖反應,陌生人的善意匯聚,形成“善的循環(huán)”。細節(jié)描寫:Mat顫抖的手、母親含淚的擁抱,以及匿名支持者的出現(xiàn),增強故事感染力。第二段:希望的傳遞與生命的聯(lián)結Jamie的新生:手術成功后的首次獨立行走,象征希望的實現(xiàn)。Mat的康復:在社會支持下完成手術,雙線索交匯,突出互助主題。升華場景:兩人賽后相擁的畫面,隱喻“真正的勝利是超越自我,溫暖他人”。情感線(150字)Mat:從事故后的絕望(“struggledwithpain”)到籌款時的堅持(“tirelessefforts”),再到看到Jamie故事時的共情(“instantconnection”),最終通過捐錢實現(xiàn)自我救贖(“l(fā)egacyofkindness”)。Jamie:從依賴助行器的無助(“relyingonaframe”)到術后獨立行走的喜悅(“wobblingtowardthecamera”),成為Mat善舉的直接受益者。社會:媒體傳播(“wentviral”)引發(fā)陌生人的善意(“anonymoussupporters”),展現(xiàn)集體溫暖如何放大個體善舉。故事線(6條)Mat決定捐出手術費給Jamie,聯(lián)系媒體公開善舉。報道引發(fā)關注,Jamie的手術費迅速湊齊,Mat的費用也被匿名資助。Jamie手術成功,首次獨立行走,與Mat視頻分享喜悅。Mat完成手術,逐漸恢復行走能力。兩人見面,共同參與康復訓練,建立深厚友誼。結尾以“racingwheelchairs-turned-crutches”象征重生,點明“善良是生命的翅膀”。主旨升華句(5句英文)"Truestrengthliesnotinovercomingphysicallimits,butinthecouragetoliftothers.""Asingleactofselflessnesscanigniteachainreactionofhope,rewritingdestinies.""Mat’ssacrificetaughtusthathealingbeginswhenweseeourstrugglesmirroredinothers.""Inthesharedjoyoftwoboystakingtheirfirststeps,kindnessfounditstruestform.""Theirpodiumwasn’tbuiltwithmedals—itwasforgedinempathy,standingtallerthananyvictory."寫作示范兩篇(160字)示范一(情感治愈型)Para.1:Afteraday’sthinking,Matmadethebigdecision,andcontactedthenewspaper.Hisvoicesteadydespitethetears,Mattoldthereporter,“Jamieneedsthismore.”Thestoryspreadlikewildfire.Strangersmailedchecks,studentsorganizedbakesales,andevenalocalgympledgedhalfitsprofits.Withindays,Jamie’sfundoverflowed—andananonymousdonorquietlycoveredMat’ssurgery.“Youinspiredus,”readthenote.Para.2:Jamie’soperationwasagreatsuccess.MatwatchedvialivestreamasJamietookhisfirstunaidedsteps,hislaughterechoingthroughthehospital.Twomonthslater,Matstoodtoo,hislegstremblingbutstrong.Attheirfirstmeeting,Jamiehandedhimamedal:“Forbeingmyhero.”Mathuggedhim,whispering,“You’reminetoo.”Now,theyracethroughthepark,crutchesclattering—asymphonyofresilience.示范二(社會影響型)Para.1:Afteraday’sthinking,Matmadethebigdecision,andcontactedthenewspaper.Theheadline“BoyTradesWheelchairforKindness”sparkedglobaldonations.ApharmaceuticalcompanywaivedJamie’ssurgeryfees,whileaprostheticsfirmofferedMatfreerehabilitation.“You’veshownkindnessiscontagious,”theCEOwrote.Mat’ssavings,nowdoubled,fundedascholarshipfordisabledkids.Para.2:Jamie’soperationwasagreatsuccess.Ontheone-yearanniversary,MatandJamiestoodonastage,Jamiedancing,Matwalkingwithacane.“We’renotjustsurvivors,”Matsaid.“We’reproofthatwhenyoulightacandleforothers,yourownpathbrightens.”Thecrowdrose,applaudingnotjusttheirrecovery,buttherippleeffectofoneboy’sheart.【答案】Para.1:Afteraday’sthinking,Matmadethebigdecision,andcontactedthenewspaper.MatexplainedhissituationtothenewspaperstaffandexpressedhisdesiretodonatethefundshehadraisedtoJamie’soperation.Heknewitwasatoughchoice,buthebelievedthatJamie’sneedwasevenmoreurgent,givenhisyoungageandthelifelongimpacttheoperationcouldhaveonhim.ThestaffweretouchedbyMat’sselflessnessandagreedtohelpfacilitatethetransferoffunds.Mat’sparents,thoughinitiallyshocked,supportedhisdecision,seeingthecompassionandcourageintheirson’seyes.Para.2:Jamie’soperationwa

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