讀后續(xù)寫+南希與小狗的故事+講義 高考診斷性測(cè)試英語(yǔ)試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ihadalwayswantedadogsinceyoung.Myparentswereagainsttheidea,sayingthattakingcareofadogwasalifetimecommitment.Onmytenthbirthday,Fathersteppedintothehouseandannounced,“Nancy,youhaveanewpuppy!”IshoutedindelightandrantowardsFather,onlytofinditwasatoypuppy.Myfacefell.Iturnedaway.Fatherexplained,“Thisisa‘Think-It-Over’puppy.Youshouldtrytakingcareofitbeforedecidingaboutarealdog.”Thepuppydidlooklikearealdogfromadistanceanditevenhadadogsmell.Insideitsbodywasacomputerprogrammedtomakebarkingsounds.Fatherhandedmeakey,whichcouldbestuckintoitsbacktostopitsbarking.Iacceptedthepuppy,whichInamedFridaysinceitwasFridaythatday.Thatevening，myfriendsandIdecidedtotakeFridaytoadogcafé.Itwasfreezingcold,soIwrappeditinablanketasifitwerearealdog.Thecomputerinsidecouldtellifsomeonetreateditbadly,likeshakingornotcaringforit,andIdidnotwantthatrecorded.Havingwaitedinline,wefinallygotatable.Thewaiter,notknowingIwascarryingafalsepuppy,askedattentivelyifIwouldneedabasketwithcushion.Itoldhim,“Oh,it’snotarealpuppy,but...”BeforeIcouldfinishmysentence,hegavemeanunpleasantlook,turnedandservedotherdinerswhowererighttheretoplaywiththecafé’sdogs.Imighthaveseemedunusualtohim.Duringourmeal,myfriendsandIreceivedstrangelooksfromtheotherdogownersinthecafé.Weignoredthemandcontinuedwithourownconversation.Afterdinner,wewenttoanearbyshoppingmall,wherecustomerswereselectingtheirfavorites.Myfriendswerelookingatclothes,butIcouldn’t.ThepuppyIwascarryingwasbecomingincreasinglyheavy.ExtremelytiredofFriday,Iputitdowninacornerandjustwanderedaround,seekingclothesIcouldtryon.注意：（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答。Suddenly，F(xiàn)ridaystartedtobarklikearealdog.ThemomentIgothome，IhandedFridaytoFather，tearsineyes.南希與小狗故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）?第一段：?場(chǎng)景渲染：細(xì)致描繪周五突然吠叫后商場(chǎng)內(nèi)的混亂景象，如周圍店鋪的店員探出頭張望，廣播聲因吠叫戛然而止，背景音樂也被掩蓋?！癝uddenly,Friday'sbarkingshatteredthenormalatmosphereofthemall.Shopassistantspokedtheirheadsoutfromthestores,andthemall'ssoft-spokenannouncementscametoanabrupthalt.Thebackgroundmusicwasdrownedoutbythecontinuousbarking,whichechoedthroughthevastspace,makingthewholeplaceseemchaotic.”?他人反應(yīng)：進(jìn)一步刻畫周圍顧客的反應(yīng)，除了驚訝的目光，有的匆忙護(hù)住自己的寵物，有的開始小聲議論，猜測(cè)這突如其來吠叫的緣由?！癈ustomerswiththeirownpetsquicklypulledthemcloser,lookingaroundnervously.Othersbegantowhisperamongthemselves,speculatingaboutwherethebarkingwascomingfromandwhythistoydogwasmakingsucharacket.”?自身行動(dòng)：深入描述“我”在慌亂中尋找鑰匙關(guān)閉吠叫的過程，包括內(nèi)心的焦急，腦海中不斷閃過糟糕的念頭，以及雙手因緊張而不聽使喚，連口袋的拉鏈都難以拉開?！癕yheartpoundedinmychestlikeadrum.Thoughtsofhowembarrassingthissituationwasracedthroughmymind.MyhandstrembledsoviolentlythatIcouldbarelyunzipmybag.Ifumbledaround,pushingasidevariousitems,myeyesdartingbetweenthebagandthebarkingFriday,prayingtofindthekeysoon.”?朋友互動(dòng)：生動(dòng)展現(xiàn)“我”關(guān)閉吠叫后朋友的不同反應(yīng)，有的笑得前仰后合，眼淚都快出來了，有的則趕緊過來詢問“我”是否沒事，幫忙整理弄亂的物品?！癘ncethebarkingceased,myfriends'reactionswereablendofamusementandconcern.Onefrienddoubledoverwithlaughter,tearsstreamingdowntheirface,whileanotherrushedtomyside,asking,‘Areyouokay,Nancy?Here,letmehelpyoutidyup.’”?第二段：?歸家狀態(tài)：具體描述“我”回家時(shí)的狀態(tài)，腳步沉重，像拖著千斤重?fù)?dān)，身體微微顫抖，臉上還殘留著未干的淚痕?！癟hemomentIsteppedthroughthefrontdoor,mystepswereheavy,asifIwerecarryingahugeburden.Mybodytrembledslightly,andthedried-uptearstainsonmyfacewerestillvisible.Ishuffledtowardsthelivingroom,whereFatherwassitting,feelinglikeIwaswalkingtomydoom.”?父子對(duì)話：詳細(xì)闡述父親安慰“我”時(shí)的表情、語(yǔ)氣和具體動(dòng)作，父親放下手中的報(bào)紙，起身迎向“我”，臉上帶著溫和的笑容，眼神中滿是理解與包容，然后輕輕將“我”擁入懷中?！癋atherputdownthenewspaperhewasreadingandstoodupassoonashesawme.Hewalkedtowardsmewithagentlesmileonhisface,hiseyesfilledwithunderstanding.Hewrappedmeinawarmhugandsaidsoftly,‘Nancy,don'tbesohardonyourself.Takingcareofalivingbeing,evenatoyone,isnotaseasyasitseems.’”?內(nèi)心轉(zhuǎn)變：深入描寫“我”聽了父親的話后的內(nèi)心變化，從最初的自我否定，覺得自己一無是處，到逐漸被父親的話語(yǔ)打動(dòng)，開始反思自己的不足，同時(shí)也對(duì)未來養(yǎng)真狗有了更清晰的認(rèn)識(shí)和期待?！癆tfirst,Iwasstilllostinself-blame,thinkingthatIwascompletelyincompetent.ButasFathercontinuedtospeak,hiswordsslowlysankin.IstartedtoreflectonmyactionsandrealizedthatIhadbeentoohasty.Aglimmerofhopeemergedinmyheart,andIlookedforwardtotheideaoflearningtotakecareofarealdogwithFather'sguidance.”?情感線（150字）?周五吠叫前，“我”在商場(chǎng)輕松自在，對(duì)帶著玩具狗出行感到新奇有趣。吠叫瞬間，尷尬與慌亂如潮水般將“我”淹沒，在眾人目光下，緊張與不安達(dá)到頂點(diǎn)。關(guān)閉吠叫后，面對(duì)朋友的反應(yīng)，羞愧感讓“我”無地自容?；丶颐鎸?duì)父親時(shí)，沮喪和自責(zé)占據(jù)內(nèi)心，認(rèn)為自己辜負(fù)了父親的期望。而父親溫暖的安慰與鼓勵(lì)，如同一束光，驅(qū)散了“我”內(nèi)心的陰霾，讓“我”重新燃起對(duì)養(yǎng)真狗的希望，從消沉走向積極。?故事線（6條）?“我”自幼渴望養(yǎng)狗，父母因養(yǎng)狗責(zé)任重大而反對(duì)，十歲生日時(shí)父親帶來名為周五的玩具狗，讓“我”通過照顧它來決定是否養(yǎng)真狗。?當(dāng)晚，“我”和朋友帶著周五去狗咖啡館，因周五是玩具狗，遭受服務(wù)員異樣對(duì)待以及其他狗主人奇怪目光。?晚飯后前往商場(chǎng)，“我”因嫌周五沉重將其放在角落，自己去挑選衣服。?周五在商場(chǎng)突然吠叫，引發(fā)商場(chǎng)內(nèi)混亂，眾人投來目光，“我”在慌亂中關(guān)閉吠叫，尷尬不已，朋友反應(yīng)不一。?“我”心情低落回家，哭著將周五交給父親，傾訴自己無法照顧好它的愧疚。?父親安慰“我”，告知養(yǎng)狗需耐心和責(zé)任，若“我”仍想養(yǎng)真狗，可從小事學(xué)起，“我”在父親鼓勵(lì)下重拾信心，期待未來養(yǎng)真狗。?主旨升華句5句英文?Thisincidentservesasavividillustrationthatthepursuitofourdreamsisoftenaccompaniedbyunexpectedhurdles,andonlybysummoningupthecouragetofacethemhead-oncanwefullyappreciatethesignificanceofouraspirations.?這次事件生動(dòng)地表明，我們對(duì)夢(mèng)想的追求往往伴隨著意想不到的障礙，只有鼓起勇氣直面它們，我們才能充分體會(huì)到自己愿望的重要性。?ThroughNancy'sexperiencewiththetoydog,itbecomesevidentthatresponsibilityisaweightymatterthatdemandsourfullattention,andeverylearningprocess,regardlessofsuccessorfailure,isanessentialbuildingblockinourgrowthjourney.?通過南希與玩具狗的經(jīng)歷，很明顯責(zé)任是一件需要我們?nèi)褙炞?duì)待的重要事情，每一個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)過程，無論成敗，都是我們成長(zhǎng)道路上的重要基石。?ThesuddenbarkingofthetoydogandNancy'ssubsequentself-awarenessvividlyhighlightthesignificanceofperseveranceandself-reflectioninthefaceofdifficulties,astheyarethefundamentalelementsforpersonalgrowthandself-improvement.?玩具狗的突然吠叫以及南希隨后的自我認(rèn)知，生動(dòng)地凸顯了在困難面前堅(jiān)持和自我反思的重要性，因?yàn)樗鼈兪莻€(gè)人成長(zhǎng)和自我提升的基本要素。?Thisnarrativeactsasapowerfulreminderthatourinitialpreconceivednotionsaboutthingsfrequentlydeviatefromreality,anditisthroughreal-worldexperiencesthatwecangainamoreprofoundunderstandingofourselvesandtheworldsurroundingus.?這個(gè)故事有力地提醒我們，我們對(duì)事物最初的先入之見常常與現(xiàn)實(shí)不符，正是通過現(xiàn)實(shí)世界的經(jīng)歷，我們才能更深刻地理解自己和周圍的世界。?FromNancy'sinitialdisappointmenttoherrekindledhope,itisclearthatsetbacksaretransient,andwiththesupportofthoseclosetous,wepossessthestrengthtosurmountobstaclesandprogresstowardsourdreams.?從南希最初的失望到重新燃起希望，很明顯挫折是短暫的，在身邊人的支持下，我們有力量克服障礙，朝著夢(mèng)想前進(jìn)。?寫作示范一?Suddenly,Fridaystartedtobarklikearealdog.Theshrillsoundpiercedthroughthemall'scalmness,instantlydrawingalleyes.Shoppersfrozeintheirtracks,somewiththeirhandsstillreachingforitemsontheshelves.Agroupofchildrennearbyshriekedinexcitement,thinkingitwasarealpuppy.Ifeltarushofbloodtomyface,myhandsshakinguncontrollablyasIdugthroughmybagforthekey.MyheartwaspoundingsohardthatIcouldhearitinmyears.Finally,afterwhatseemedlikeaneternity,IfoundthekeyandmanagedtosilenceFriday.Myfriends,whowereinitiallyshocked,nowhadamixofamusementandconcernontheirfaces.Oneofthemjoked,“Well,thatsureliveneduptheplace,Nancy!”ButIwastoomortifiedtolaugh.?ThemomentIgothome,IhandedFridaytoFather,tearsstreamingdownmyface.“I'macompletefailure,Dad.Icouldn'tevenhandleatoydogwithoutmakingamessofthings,”Isobbed.FathergentlytookFridayfrommeandplaceditaside.Hethenwrappedmeinawarmhug.“Nancy,it'snotaboutfailure.Takingcareofalivingbeing,evenapretendone,isabigresponsibility.Fridaywasmeanttoteachyouthat.Butifyoustillhaveyourheartsetonarealdog,wecanstartsmallandlearntogether.Thisisjustasmallstepontheway.”Ilookedupathim,aglimmerofhopeinmytear-filledeyes.Irealizedthatthisexperiencewasavaluablelesson,andwithFather'ssupport,Icouldstillpursuemydreamofhavingadog.?寫作示范二?Suddenly,Fridaystartedtobarklikearealdog.Thebarkingechoedthroughthemall,causingastir.Peoplestoppedtheirconversationsandturnedtolook.Somerushedtowardsthesourceofthenoise,thinkingitwasalostpuppy.Iwasinastateofpanic,myhandstremblingasIsearchedforthekey.Idroppedmybagintheprocess,spillingitscontentsalloverthefloor.Myfriendswerelookingatme,someinshock,sometryingtohelp.Afterseveraltensemoments,Ifinallyfoundthekeyandturnedoffthebarking.IwassoembarrassedthatIwantedtodisappear.?ThemomentIgothome,IhandedFridaytoFather,myshouldersslumped.“I'msorry,Dad.IthoughtIcoulddoit,butImessedup.Ican'teventakecareofatoydogproperly,”Isaid,myvoicechokedwithemotion.Fathersatmedownandlookedatmekindly.“Nancy,it'sokay.Takingcareofadogisahugecommitment.That'swhywegotFriday.It'snotaboutwhathappenedtoday.It'saboutlearningfromit.Ifyou'restilldetermined,wecantryagain.We'lltakeitonestepatatime.”Inodded,feelingasenseofrelief.IknewthatwithFather'sguidance,Icouldovercomethechallengesoftakingcareofarealdoginthefuture.?參考答案Suddenly,Fridaystartedtobarklikearealdog.Itbarkedsoloudlyasifprotestingagainstmypr