2017-2018學年人教課標高一英語必修4輔導Unit4BodylanguageGUIDEDWRITING

如何寫慰問信【寫作任務】假定你是李華，你的美國筆友Amy是一名網(wǎng)球運動員，最近她因訓練時右腿骨折導致停訓數(shù)月而悶悶不樂。請你用英語給她寫一封慰問信，要點包括：1.

同情遭遇；2.

給予安慰；3.

表達祝愿。注意：

1.

詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結尾已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.

可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearAmy,

Yours,

LiHua【寫作指導】一、審題定調本篇習作要求寫一封慰問信，它是一種應用文體，用于向收信人表示關懷和問候。寫慰問性信函時要注意態(tài)度誠懇、真切，語氣誠摯。寫慰問信時，時態(tài)以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱主要用第一人稱或第二人稱。二、謀篇布局慰問信的格式和普通信件一樣，通常包括以下幾個部分：信頭、稱呼、正文、結束語和簽名。其中信頭部分為寫信人地址和寫信日期，常省略。因本寫作任務稱呼、結束語和簽名已給出，所以我們只需寫出正文部分。慰問信的正文通常分為三部分：第一部分：引入話題（同情對方遭遇，表明寫信目的）；第二部分：表示慰問（向對方的處境表示理解、關心，并給予鼓勵或者提供幫助等）；第三部分：總結全文（表達美好祝愿）。三、組織語言1.

第一部分：引入話題（同情對方遭遇，表明寫信目的）。普通表達高級表達★Iheardthat...andIfeelreallysorryforthat.★Iamshocked/awfullysorrytohear/learnthat...★Ifeelgreatpityforyou.★Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsad/sorryIwastohearthat...★Itwasagreatshockforme/brokemyhearttohearthat...★I’mwritingtoexpressmydeepestsympathyforyou.2.

第二部分：表示慰問（向對方的處境表示理解、關心，并給予鼓勵或者提供幫助等）。普通表達高級表達★Iunderstandhowyoufeelnow.★Youmustbeverysad/upset/disappointed...★Lifeisn’tthatbad.★If/Aslongasyou...,you’llgetbettersoon.★WearebestfriendssoIwill...★PleaseletmeknowifthereisanythingIcando.★It’safactthatattitudedecideseverything.Soyoushouldnevergiveupwhateverhappens.★Thesituationisn’tasbadasyouthink.★Remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.★Aslongasyou...,you’resuretorecover/beassoundasabellagainbeforelong.★IfIcanbeofanyhelp,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.3.

第三部分：總結全文（表達美好祝愿）。普通表達高級表達★Ihopeyou’llgetbettersoon.★Ihopethattimewilltakeawayyoursorrow.★Ihopeyou’llrecoverassoonaspossibleandcarryonasnormal.★Cheerup!I’mfirmlyconvincedthatyouwillgetoveritand...soon.★Ihopeyou’llmakeafullrecoverysoon.

【范文展示】普通范文DearAmy,I’msorrytohearthatyouhurtyourrightlegduringyourtrainingandhadtoquittennisforafewmonths.Ifeelgreatpityforyou.Youmustbeverysadnow.However,inmyopinion,lifeisn’tthatbad.Aslongasyoulistentothedoctoranddoashe/shetellsyou,you’llgetbettersoon.Duringthisperiod,youcandootherthingsyoulike,suchasplayinginstrumentsordrawing,whichwillhelpyourelax.Finally,pleaseletmeknowifyouneedanyhelp.Ihopeyouwillgetwellsoonandbeabletocontinuewithyourtennispractice.

Yours,

LiHua高級范文DearAmy,Ican’ttellyouhowsorryIfelttohearyou’vehurtyourrightlegduringyourtrainingandmustquittennisforafewmonths.I’mwritingtoexpressmydeepestsympathyforyou.Iunderstandyourfeelings.However,thesituationisn’tasbadasyouthink.Aslongasyoufollowthedoctor’sadviceclosely,you’llrecoversoon.Meanwhile,youcanpursueyourhobbieslikeplayinginstrumentsordrawing,whichwillputyourselfinamorerelaxedmood.Finally,ifIcanbeofanyhelp,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.Ihopeyou’llrecoverassoonaspossibleandcarryonasnormal.

Yours,

LiHua同學們，學習兩篇范文后，你是否掌握了慰問信的一些常用表達了呢？是否掌握了一些復雜結構或高級詞匯呢？希望大家認真研讀范文，平時注意積累高級詞匯，嘗試使用從句等高級句型，以使自己寫作能力更加出色?！緦崙?zhàn)演練】假定你是李華。你的美國筆友Ella因即將跟隨父母到另外一個國家生活和學習，她情緒非常低落。請你用英語給她寫一封電子郵件，表示安慰。注意：

1.

詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結尾已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)）；

2.

可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearElla,I’msorrytohearthatyou’reupsetthesedaysbecause

Yours,

LiHua答案DearElla,I’msorrytohearthatyou’reupsetthesedaysbecauseyou’llhavetomovetoanewcountry.Truly,it’shardtoleaveaplacewhereyou’velivedformanyyearsandtosaygoodbyetoyourfriends.Iunderstandthatyou’llhavetofaceawholenewenvironmentwhereyoubarelyknowanyone.However,thingswon’tbeasbadasyouthink.Youcanstillkeepin