專題09未來與規(guī)劃-備戰(zhàn)2022年上海中考英語書面表達滿分攻略(原卷版+解析)

（一）（2021年崇明區(qū)二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Inthreeyears’time”（以“三年以后”為題寫一遍不少于60個詞的短文，標定符合不占格。）你是否想象過，三年以后你的生活或者周圍的世界會發(fā)生產(chǎn)怎樣的變化？你對三年以后的自己周圍的世界有怎樣的期待？你能為此做些什么？（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何校名、人名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）（2019年崇明區(qū)一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic＂Mydreamwillcometrue“（以“我的未來不是夢”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）你對自己的未來一定有美好的夢想：但夢想的實現(xiàn)取決于勤奮、努力等諸多因素。請結合你自己的夢想，談談你將如何使美夢成真。Thefollowingwordsorphrasesareonlyforreference．（以下詞或短語僅供參考）Mydreamistobe/dowiththehelpetruetakepartinhardworkingrealize（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）三年將盡，未來已來，我們如何成為更好的自己？請以“ToBeaBetterMan”為題，寫一篇英文短文，從學習方法、生活習慣、交友溝通等方面進行描述。寫作要求：1.參考所給提示，可適當發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，語句通順；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、學校名等個人真實信息；4.短文詞數(shù)在80至120詞之間。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myhometownintenyears”(以“十年后的家鄉(xiāng)”為題，寫一篇短文，不少于60詞，標點符號不占格。)提示：十年后，你希望家鄉(xiāng)會有哪些變化？是希望她成為一格時尚之都，還是一個山清水靜的現(xiàn)代化農(nóng)村？請展開你的想象，圍繞一個嗯中心簡單闡述一下。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（一）（2021年崇明區(qū)二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Inthreeyears’time”（以“三年以后”為題寫一遍不少于60個詞的短文，標定符合不占格。）你是否想象過，三年以后你的生活或者周圍的世界會發(fā)生產(chǎn)怎樣的變化？你對三年以后的自己周圍的世界有怎樣的期待？你能為此做些什么？（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何校名、人名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Inthreeyears’timeThereisnodenyingthattheworldischangingfast.Idobelievethatmylifewillbedifferentinthreeyears'time.Ononehand,itwillbemoreconvenient,wecanstudyathome.Whetherwegotoschoolorstayathomedependsonourchoices.Certainly,unlikethelastspecialyear,wehadtostudyonlinebecauseofthevirus.Ontheotherhand,theenvironmentmaybecomeworseespeciallywhitepollution.Sadly,Thenumberofpeoplewholiketothroweverywhereisstillrising.Ihopetheworldwillbemorebeautiful.Toachievethis,Ineedtolearnmoreknowledgeabouthowtoprotecttheenvironment.Callonmorepeopletotakepartinfightingagainstpollution.Onlybyworkingtogetherwillourfuturebebetterin3years.（二）（2019年崇明區(qū)一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic＂Mydreamwillcometrue“（以“我的未來不是夢”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）你對自己的未來一定有美好的夢想：但夢想的實現(xiàn)取決于勤奮、努力等諸多因素。請結合你自己的夢想，談談你將如何使美夢成真。Thefollowingwordsorphrasesareonlyforreference．（以下詞或短語僅供參考）Mydreamistobe/dowiththehelpetruetakepartinhardworkingrealize（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】MydreamwillcometrueThereisnodoubtthateverypersonhasadream.Somepeoplemaywanttobeasuperstarandothersarewillingtoberichmen.Butmydreamistobeateacherjustlikemymom.Asweallknow,nobodycangainsuccesswithoutcontinuoushardworking.Inordertomakemydreamcometrue,IrealizethatIshouldtakepartinvariouskindsofactivitieswhichareorganizedbymyteacherssothatIcanimprovemyselftosomeextentandmakemyselfaperfectperson.What’smore,IknowthatifIwanttobeateacher,Imustbeapersonwhohasagoodcommandofknowledge.Withthehelpofmymom,Iknowthatnopainsnogains.WheneverandwhereverImeetdifficulties,mymomwillgivemeconfidenceandcourage.Inbrief,inordertorealizemydream,IwillsparenoefforttostudyhardandwhenIhavetroubleandlearnfrommyclassmatesaswellasmyteachers.IfirmlybelievethatIcanmakeit.（三）三年將盡，未來已來，我們如何成為更好的自己？請以“ToBeaBetterMan”為題，寫一篇英文短文，從學習方法、生活習慣、交友溝通等方面進行描述。寫作要求：1.參考所給提示，可適當發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，語句通順；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、學校名等個人真實信息；4.短文詞數(shù)在80至120詞之間。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ToBeaBetterManEveryonewantstobebetter.Inordertoimprovemyself,Ihavemadesomeplans.Firstofall,Iwillstudyharder.Iamgoingtolistentotheteacherscarefullyinclassandfinishthehouseworkontime.WhenImeetdifficulties,Iwilltrymybesttosolvethem.Second,Iplantopayattentiontomyhealth.Iwilleatmorehealthilyanddomoreexercise.What’smore,itisimportanttokeepagoodmoodandbehappyeveryday.IfIfeeltired,Iwilllistentosomemusictorelaxmyself.Third,Iintendtotrymybesttogetalongwellwiththepeoplearoundme.Atschool,Iwillhelpmyfriendsinneed.Iwillcommunicatewithmyparentsmore.Besides,Iwillkeepsmilingandbekindtoeveryone.Inshort,thereisnosuccesswithouteffort.IthinkIcanbemoreexcellentifIkeeptrying.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。要求以“ToBeaBetterMan”為題，從學習方法、生活習慣、交友溝通等方面進行寫作，注意要點齊全，可適當發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第一人稱來行文，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。作文可分為五段，第一段引出話題；第二、三、四段分別從學習方法、生活習慣、交友溝通三方面進行闡述；第五段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。（四）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myhometownintenyears”(以“十年后的家鄉(xiāng)”為題，寫一篇短文，不少于60詞，標點符號不占格。)提示：十年后，你希望家鄉(xiāng)會有哪些變化？是希望她成為一格時尚之都，還是一個山清水靜的現(xiàn)代化農(nóng)村？請展開你的想象，圍繞一個嗯中心簡單闡述一下。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________