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1、新題型基礎(chǔ)寫作,Pengpai Middle School,徐 惠 玲xuhuiling,寫作指導(dǎo),提綱類基礎(chǔ)寫作復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)(記敘文),審題 體裁:記敘文 六要素:時間,地點(diǎn),人物,事件,原因,結(jié)果),寫作順序:開始發(fā)展高潮結(jié)局),1抓出重點(diǎn)詞匯 2組構(gòu)短語 3選擇句型,思維過程:單詞短語句型,處理信息(此為最關(guān)鍵)-即將信息進(jìn)行整理組 合,以明確五個信息句。,抓關(guān)鍵信息且不漏任何信息,基礎(chǔ)寫作步驟,審,抓,擴(kuò),連,改,抄,你很榮幸地成為2008北京奧運(yùn)會的一名志愿者,負(fù)責(zé)編寫奧運(yùn)比賽項目的英語介紹。 寫作內(nèi)容 請根據(jù)以下中文提綱,編寫射擊項目的英語介紹:,寫作要求:只能使用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容
2、 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。,拆分和整合五個信息句,1896:第一次成為奧運(yùn)項目 1904:中斷 1928:中斷,為第二信息模塊,1932:重回奧運(yùn)會,為第三信息模塊,1968:第一次允許婦女參加奧運(yùn)射擊比賽,為第四信息模塊,現(xiàn)狀:穩(wěn)步發(fā)展,1896奧運(yùn)會 只有三項射擊項目,現(xiàn)今有17項,為第五信息模塊,1904:中斷 1928:中斷,為第三信息模塊,背景:射擊最初只是生存工具,19世 紀(jì)末才發(fā)展成為一項體育運(yùn)動。,為第一信息模塊,現(xiàn)狀:穩(wěn)步發(fā)展,1896奧運(yùn)會 只有三項射擊項目,現(xiàn)今有17項。,為第五信息模塊,1932:重回奧運(yùn)會,1968:第一次允許婦女參加奧運(yùn)射
3、擊比賽,為第四信息模塊,1896:第一次成為奧運(yùn)項目,為第二信息模塊,Sentence 1 主(射擊)+ be +表+ 并列連詞 sth V (into +O) +時狀 Sentence 2 時狀主 it +V +O+ 轉(zhuǎn)折連詞 主+ V + 時狀 Sentence 3 時狀,主 + +(to+O) Sentence 4 時狀,主 + +(to+O) Sentence 5 時狀,主 + V +并列連詞 the sport + V +form _+to_.,采用“主謂”模式(草稿句型),(develop),(become),(return),(stop),(be allowed),(develo
4、p),(grow),Originate(vi)起源于,來自,產(chǎn)生 Survival Develop Item(項目) Stop/suspend:終止,暫停,Be allowed to do Participate in Take part in Steady/steadily,Linking words 并列關(guān)系的:and besides 轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的: But , however, while, yet,Key words & expressions:,學(xué)生作品,Its not until at the end of 19th century that shooting has develop
5、ed a sport for its just a survival means first. And it was in 1896 that shooting became an Olympic item . Unfortunately, it had to be stopped in 1904 and 1928. To our delight, shooting returned to Olympic in 1932. In1968, it was its first time to allow women to take part in Olympic shooting Games .N
6、owadays, shooting is developing smoothly, which has 3 shooting events in 1896 but 17 now.,學(xué)生作品,Firstly, the shooting is a survival tool, and by he end of 19th century it developed into a physical sport .In 1896 , shooting became Olympic item but from 1904 to 1928 it was suspended . Until 1932, it re
7、turn to Olympics . Then in 1968, it was first time that women were allowed to take part in Olympics shooting games . Now , shooting developed steadily.,下面例作大多是簡單句,一律采用“主-謂”句型,因而讀起來單調(diào)乏味: Shooting was a means of survival and developed into a kind of sport at the end of the 19th century. It became an O
8、lympic item in 1896. It was stopped in 1904 and 1928. In 1932, it returned to the Olympic Games. In 1968, women were allowed to join Olympic Games. Now, it developed steadily and in 1896 there were only three shooting items but now there are 17 items.,句式多樣 文章增“靚”,一. 使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔,二. 巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力,三.
9、嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式,(三 )成篇(making up) 1. 添加過渡詞 2. 多樣化句式 單句 并列句 復(fù)合句 . 巧用句型: 倒裝:not until+時狀+助動+主+ (Sentence 1,2,4) 強(qiáng)調(diào):it is /was +時狀+that+非強(qiáng)調(diào) (Sentence 1,3,4) With+ (Sentence 5),妙筆生花,5. it was not until the late 19th century did shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed as a sport (強(qiáng)調(diào)句),Sentence 1
10、,1. Shooting was a means of survival , and it developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. (并列句),2. Shooting, which originated as a means of survival , developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. (復(fù)合句),3. Shooting, originated as a means of survival , developed into a sport only in
11、 the late 19th century. (簡單句過去分詞作定語),4. Not until the late 19th century did shooting, originated as a means of survival, develop as a sport (倒裝句),4. the sport first appeared in 1896 (若按寫作模式一,可but 再加19281932),Sentence 2,1. The sport first became an event of the Olympic Games in 1896.,2. not until 189
12、6 did shooting become an event of the Olympics.,3. it was not until 1896 that shooting first became an event of the Olympics.,3. twice in history (1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics.,3. It was in 1932 that the sport return to the Olympics .,Sentence 4,Sentence 3,1. it was stopped in
13、1904 and 1928.,2. none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games.,1. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932.,2. not until 1932 did the sport returned to the Olympics .,3. It was in 1968 that women were first allowed to participate in the competition.,Sentence 5,Sentence 6,2. Now, with it ste
14、ady development, shooting includes 17 events, while only 3 in 1896.,women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968.,2. Not until 1968 were women first allowed to participate in the competition.,1.The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Gam
15、es to 17 today. (from 1896s 3 events to todays 17),如果做到多樣性的要求,做如下改變,就會帶來生動、流暢、連貫、節(jié)奏感強(qiáng)的表達(dá)效果。 Shooting, originated as a means of survival , developed into a sport only at the end of the 19th century. (過去分詞短語作定語) The sport first became an event of the Olympic Games in 1896, but it was stopped in 1904 a
16、nd 1928.(并列句)It was in 1932 that the sport returned to the Olympic Games.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句) Not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting.(倒裝句) Now, with it steady development, shooting includes 17 events, while only 3 in 1896. (并列句和省略句),例作,高考范文 Version 1 Shooting, originated as a me
17、ans of survival , developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown stead
18、ily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. Version 2 It was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Yet, twice in history (1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics. It returned to the Games in 1932, and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968. The sport has been growing steadily from 18
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