中考英語作文課件.ppt

1、,中考指南：書面表達,How to write a good composition,書面表達是全國各地中考的必考題型，該題型重在考查學生運用所學語言基礎(chǔ)知識正確遣詞造句的能力以及連句成篇的語言組織能力。初中英語書面表達的考查形式比較簡單，且大多帶有提示，對文采、修辭要求很低，只要根據(jù)所給的提示把主要內(nèi)容設(shè)法充分地表達出來即可。因此，在具體寫作中可以運用以下策略：,（一） 細審題目， 擬定提綱。 在進行寫作之前，務(wù)必把寫作要求認真完整地看一遍, 確定對要寫的內(nèi)容、文章體裁進行整體性的思考。根據(jù)題目中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾。設(shè)想幾個承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語記下，形成提綱。,時

2、態(tài),人稱,體裁,內(nèi)容,字數(shù),（二）簡潔通順，行文流暢。 這是根據(jù)審題時定出的時態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結(jié)尾，以及列出的提綱和要點，把各部分內(nèi)容細化的過程。寫作應(yīng)注意語言簡潔、通順，表達正確，切中要點。在連詞成句，連句成篇時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：,(1)盡量使用自己最熟悉、最有把握的句型和短語表達。但也要盡量使句型多樣化，如適當使用一些并列句或主從復合句，這樣不會使人覺得乏味； (2)語句通順，要用英語思維和表達，切忌漢語式英語。時態(tài)、語態(tài)要正確，主謂要一致，注意人稱代詞、物主代詞用法等； (3) 層次要清楚，行文要連貫流暢。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此考生應(yīng)盡量使用and, or, (al)

3、though，but, however，because, so等詞，以便使行文自然流暢； (4)不會表達，另辟蹊徑。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。,（三）書寫工整, 標點正確。 卷面整潔與否也是能否得高分的重要因素之一。另外, 拼寫、標點也不可忽視, 標點符號特別要注意漢英之間句號、句點的不同，即漢語是句號“?！?，而英語是句點“. ”。,自從實施規(guī)范辦學后，中學生有了更多自主支配的時間，但有些同學不知如何利用好這些時間，針對這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校園英語之聲”欄目就“如何更好地利用課余時間”進行征文。請你用英語給該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點包括：,注

4、意: 100詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù),體裁,人稱,內(nèi)容,時態(tài),字數(shù),以一般現(xiàn)在時為主,Introduction Main body Conclusion,不良現(xiàn)象同行為,看法,建議,Write an outline,花太多時間在興趣愛好上 迷戀網(wǎng)吧，打電腦游戲 -,-,合理安排時間 參加興趣小組 -,已給出,總結(jié)全文，再次點題,列關(guān)鍵詞,Problems spend too much time on their hobbies , be crazy about, play computer games , watch too much TV , refuse to do home

5、work, ,列關(guān)鍵詞,Opinions not good for our health and study, pay more attention to ,列關(guān)鍵詞,Suggestions plan time carefully, join interest groups , achieve a balance between study and bobbies, take part in different after-school activities, do some sports , do some housework ,列關(guān)鍵詞,Conclusion Lets, I hope,并列

6、句,復合句 結(jié)果狀語從句,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies. They cant finish their homework on time.,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and they cant finish their homework on time,Some students spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time,How

7、to make better sentences?,變換句式,連詞成句,細心檢查,Now, we have much free time than before. But many students dont know how should they spend the time. They spend so much time to play that they cant finish homework on time. Also some of them watch too many TV, Some are crazy about play computer games. I dont

8、think its good for their study and health. However, how can we make better use of our spare time? First, we can plan our time careful and try to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. Second, we can take part in interest groups. Besides these, we should help parents do some houseworks. Let

9、s make better use of our free time and make our life colorful!,more,they should,playing,much,playing,carefully,join,housework,4 大錯，4小錯。-5分,r,15分,From Susan,11分,卷面整潔不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！,應(yīng)對策略：,1、仔細審題，判定哪些是要表達的內(nèi)容，哪些是干擾信息。 2、謀篇布局。不能遺漏要點。 3、考慮時態(tài)、語態(tài)、人稱，用自己最熟悉的句型、短語 去寫。 4、要使用過渡語言；盡量用一些復合句；注意字數(shù)要求。 5、不要出現(xiàn)真實的校名、

10、姓名。 6、書寫工整。 7、不能空白,1.認真審題,2.列出提綱,3.連詞成句,4.連句成文,5.細心檢查,a good composition,Summary,假如上周一你班舉行了“愛護水、節(jié)約水”的主題活 動，請你根據(jù)以下要點為你校校報寫一篇活動報道。,要求：1. 詞數(shù)不少于90，文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)； 2. 要點完整、層次清晰、語法正確、上下文連貫； 3. 文中不得使用真實的人名、校名。,Introduction Main body Conclusion,內(nèi)容,收獲,Write an outline,邀請王老師作報告 全班討論如何節(jié)水和愛護水,我國一些地方水源受到污染 我市

11、也缺水 節(jié)水和愛護水的方法,舉行主題班會,活動感受,列關(guān)鍵詞,Introduction hold an activity about save and protect water,列關(guān)鍵詞,Content invite sb to do give sb a talk have a discussion about how to save and protect water,列關(guān)鍵詞,Achievement some of the rivers be polluted be short of as a result throw rubbish into dumpinto use less wat

12、er ,列關(guān)鍵詞,Feeling: take part in the importance of protect the environment ,Last Monday our class held an activity. We talked about saving and protecting water.,How to make better sentences?,變換句式,連詞成句,Last Monday our class held an activity about saving and protecting water.,After taking part in the ac

13、tivity, we had a better understanding of the importance of protecting the environment and saving water.,范文展示,Last Monday our class held an activity about saving and protecting water.,Mr. Wang was invited to give us a talk. After his speech, we had a discussion about how to save and protect water.Now we know that some of the rivers are polluted in our country and that we are short of water although there are some rivers and lakes in our city. As a result, we need to protect and save water. For example, we shouldnt leave water running after using it. Besides, we mustnt thr