初三書面表達(dá)課件用.ppt

1、作文指導(dǎo),Guide in writing,玉蟬中學(xué)李玉婷,Teaching aims(教學(xué)目標(biāo)）,1、找出引起你作文不能取得高分的原因。,2、學(xué)會(huì)一些提高作文成績(jī)的方法。,3、不再那么害怕寫作。,中考作文15分， 你能拿多少分？,直擊中考,中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) A檔（1315): 能很好地完成了規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)。包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)句流暢，意思清楚、連貫。使用較為豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，語(yǔ)法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤極少，格式正確，書寫規(guī)范。 B 檔（10 12）：較好地完成了規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)?；景袃?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)較為完整，語(yǔ)句完整，意思清楚。語(yǔ)法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較少，格式基本正確，書寫較為規(guī)范。

2、 C 檔 ( 79 ):基本上完成了規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)。包含主要內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)欠完整，少數(shù)語(yǔ)句不通順，意思基本清楚。語(yǔ)法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多，格式基本正確，書寫基本規(guī)范。 D 檔（ 46 ）：未能完按要求完成規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)。只包含少數(shù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)不完整，多數(shù)語(yǔ)句不通順，意思不夠清楚。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多，影響理解，格式不夠正確，書寫欠規(guī)范。 E 檔（ 03）：未能完按要求完成規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)。只寫出個(gè)別要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)不完整，多數(shù)語(yǔ)句完整或意思不明，語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤很多，書寫不規(guī)范。,一篇作文由句子組成,一個(gè)句子由單詞組成,詞,句子,作文,Is writing so hard?,詞、句與篇的關(guān)系,Comp

3、osition,C,paragraph,sentences1sentences2,Words1 words 2words3,句子訓(xùn)練,走進(jìn)作文大門,二、抓住要點(diǎn),確定主要行為,并 列 出 提 綱,三、擴(kuò)展成句,把要點(diǎn)變成完整的句子。,避免中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)。,以寫正確、通順為最基本要求。,重短輕長(zhǎng), 就易避難。,此路不通，繞道迂回,四、連句成文,過渡自然, 表達(dá)流暢。,遞進(jìn): first, then, next, at last, 轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, after all 總結(jié): finally, at last, in a word, 其他連接句子的詞 suddenly, as we

4、all know等。,注意使用連詞,使文章緊湊連貫,五、成文之后，查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò),主謂一致嗎？,時(shí)態(tài)正確嗎？,語(yǔ)態(tài)正確嗎？,人稱正確嗎？,要點(diǎn)有無遺漏?,單詞拼寫有無錯(cuò)誤?,非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作主語(yǔ)/賓語(yǔ)是否用了動(dòng)名詞？,有無漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)?,名詞的可數(shù)不可數(shù)用對(duì)了嗎？,六、謄寫,卷面整潔不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！,書寫規(guī)范, 卷面整潔。,Which is better？,the best!,例文解析,2013年中考作文,假如你是李明，4月8日是你的生日，你在家里舉行生日晚會(huì)，邀請(qǐng)一些朋友來參加，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中的信息提示，寫一篇英語(yǔ)日記。,注意: 1、日記必須包含表格中所提供的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2、

5、80詞左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))； 3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名和地名。,Saturday, April 8th I had a birthday party at home today.,分組討論并找出要點(diǎn),when(時(shí)間):,where(地點(diǎn)):,who(人物):,what(事件):,why(原因):,activities and gifts:,Tense(時(shí)態(tài))：,at 7 April 8th,at home,LiMing and his,had a birthday party,to celebrate（慶祝) ,至少三項(xiàng),過去時(shí),Feeling(感受):,happy, ex

6、cited,person(人稱)：,第一人稱,精彩范文賞析,I had a birthday party at home today. Some of my friends came to my home at 7 in the evening. At the party. I got a lot of presents. Such as cards、shoes、 and some money. My mother bought a big birthday cake for me.,_,地點(diǎn),_,時(shí)態(tài),人稱,人員,_,時(shí)間,_,_,幾件禮物,After singing the song “H

7、appy birthday”, I blew the candles and ate the cakes. Next we we played games, and danced with the music. We had a good time that day.,_,_,_,連詞,_,_,幾項(xiàng)活動(dòng),I had great fun on my birthday. I was happy and excited . Thanks ,my parents and friends.,_,兩點(diǎn)感受,_,_,實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練,秀出我自己,at the Old Peoples Home,參觀敬老院,Visit

8、 the Old Peoples Home,濃情三月，你校組織志愿者去郴州敬老院開展“學(xué)雷鋒，送溫暖”活動(dòng)。假如你是學(xué)生張華，請(qǐng)你將活動(dòng)情況介紹給美國(guó)朋友Ben。,要求：1短文應(yīng)包括表中所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息； 3文章不低于80詞。開頭、結(jié)尾已給出。,Dear Ben, Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did in our school. _ If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us. Yours, Zh

9、ang Hua,濃情三月，你校組織部分學(xué)生去郴州敬老院開展“學(xué)雷鋒，送溫暖”活動(dòng)。假如你是學(xué)生張華，請(qǐng)你將活動(dòng)情況介紹給美國(guó)朋友Ben。,要求：1短文應(yīng)包括表中所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息； 3文章不低于80詞。開頭、結(jié)尾已給出。,Who writes best ?,老師的范文,Dear Ben, Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did in our school. On March 5th, 2014, some students in our school got to th

10、e Old Peoples Home, we brought some flowers and fruits to the old people. We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. Then we sang and danced. How happy we were!,After that, we chatted with them and gave our best wishes to them. The old people were very excited. It was our duty to care for the old people If