何凱文寫作強化班整理筆記

1、何凱文寫作強化班整理筆記1、Just as an old Chinese proverb says.正如一句古老的中國諺語所說。2、Sample as the picture is, the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.盡管圖畫很簡單，寓意卻非常深刻。3、Aspire to inspire until I expire.生命不息，奮斗不止。aspire/spa/ v(aspiring,aspired,aspires)有志 (于)inspire /nspa/ v(inspiring,inspired,inspires)鼓舞; 激勵

2、expire /kspa/ v(expiring,expired,expires)到期; 失效4、With current state of affairs being so sorry, it is high time that we took effective measures to tackle this problem.問題如此嚴重，是馬上采取有效措施解決這個問題的時候了。tackle /tkl/ (tackling,tackled,tackles)處理5、It is imperative that corresponding laws and regulations be intr

3、oduced and enforced to curb and harness this urgent problem.我們必須制定并執(zhí)行一些法律和政策來解決這個問題。correspond /krspnd/v (corresponding,corresponded,corresponds)相一致; 相對應(yīng)imperative /mprtv/ adj至關(guān)重要的curb and harness 解決6、In no country other than China , it has been said , is the problem of environment more serious.在中國，

4、環(huán)境問題是最重要的。7、There has been a heated discussion about this picture in newspaper.報紙上有一張圖畫引起了人們廣泛的關(guān)注。8、The future has arrived, it commences now.未來已經(jīng)到來，它始于現(xiàn)在。commence /kmns/ V-T/V-I (commencing,commenced,commences)使開始; 開始一、 作文寫作方式主題詞：1、堅持： perseverance /psvrns/ N-UNCOUNT堅持不懈persistence /psstns/ N-UNCOUN

5、T堅持不懈; 執(zhí)著2、榜樣：model, example, role model3、創(chuàng)新：innovation, creation, the spirit of innovation, the spirit of think different形式第一段：2-3個句子（30-60字）第二段：4-9個句子（100-120字）第三段：3-4個句子（30-60字）語言正確，用詞準確二、 第一段寫作1、 第一句：圖畫描述句As is shown above Which is symbolic ofWhich symbolizeSymbolizing小結(jié)：簡要描述，與主題相關(guān)2、 第二句：圖畫影響句，引

6、起關(guān)注The topic illustrated in the picture will make a heated discussion.引起關(guān)注：Verb：trigger/spark/arouse/stimulate/cause/prompt/promoteN：attention, imaginationAdj：much attention, abundant imagination.In China, a nation with great populationOn Weibo, a popular social media3、 第三句：圖畫意義句（深刻）As deep as ocean

7、/as profound as oceanprofound /prfand/ (profounder,profoundest)ADJ深刻的; 極大的強調(diào)The drawing truly displays a states that is worthy of our attention.We cant afford to turn a blind eye to the problem highlighted by this picture.我們承受不起這幅圖畫所展現(xiàn)的問題。三、 第二段寫作1、 第一句：提出論點，主題很重要The picture tell us that nothing can

8、 be compared with（主題），when it comes to the personal growth , especially in this ever rapidly changing world.這幅圖畫告訴我們沒有什么比（主題）重要，尤其是在這樣一個人口增長，告訴發(fā)展的世界。The picture demonstrates that the sense of environmental preservation（環(huán)保意識） is part and parcel to the sound growth of society and its absence will inev

9、itably inflict/cause great losses on us.這幅圖畫告訴我們，環(huán)保意識是社會健康發(fā)展的重要部分，它的缺失必然會造成巨大損失。demonstrate /demnstret/vt. 證明；展示；論證vi. 示威part and parcel重要(或主要、基本)部分；不可缺少的部分sound growth 良好發(fā)展、（身心）健康成長、穩(wěn)定增長inevitably /nevtbl; nevtbl/ adv. 不可避免地；必然地inflict /nflkt/ vt. 造成；使遭受（損傷、痛苦等）；給予（打擊等）The picture tells us that the

10、 honesty was, is and remains to be an integral part in ones success, be it the individual or organizational.這幅圖畫告訴我們，誠信在過去、現(xiàn)在、將來都是成功不可缺少的部分，無論對是個人還是組織來說。was, is and remains to be過去、現(xiàn)在、未來be it A or B 不論是A還是B。 integral /ntgrl/ ADJ構(gòu)成整體所必需的The picture/drawing/photo illustrates that the positive mental s

11、tate plays a pivotal role in individual success, especially when confronting the setback and the adversity.積極的心理狀態(tài)在個人成功中扮演著特別重要的角色，特別是在面對困難的時候。pivotal /pvtl/ ADJ關(guān)鍵的The drawing reminds us that the social value of the morality should enhanced and maintained to ensure a healthy community, which is in t

12、he best interests of general public.道德的社會價值是應(yīng)該被提升并維持的，目的是為了保持一個健康的社區(qū)，這樣做是符合大眾利益的。2、 第二句：強調(diào)論點To be sure, never in any era of our nation have the stakes involving environment protection been higher than now.在我們國家的任何一個歷史階段中，都沒有哪個階段比現(xiàn)在環(huán)境保護更重要的。Indeed, the idea that a child can attain personal success on

13、ly with individual efforts oversimplifies, they effect of role model also matters a lot.3、 第三句：公眾態(tài)度The general public has/have attached due attention to this positive force.Due attention has been attached not only by government but by the organizations and individuals.due attention 應(yīng)有的重視The public f

14、ails to stress the fundamental role of environmental preservation in the sound growth of the modern society.在健康發(fā)展的現(xiàn)代社會，公眾沒有加強在環(huán)境保護中基本角色的作用。No one would deny independence is truly the vital attribute of top performers, which separates the high achievers from the rest of the pack.沒人能夠否認，獨立是精英們的重要品質(zhì)，并將

15、精英同凡人區(qū)別開來。vital /vatl/ ADJ至關(guān)重要的attribute 動詞/trbjut/名詞/trbjut/(attributing,attributed,attributes)把歸因于top performers=high achievers 精英rest of the pack 凡人People in all walks of life take substantial note of this character.各行各業(yè)的人都重視這種品質(zhì)。In all works of life 各行各業(yè)Take substantial note 重視substantial /sbstn

16、l/ADJ大量的; 很大程度的This topic has been now high on the government agenda.這一話題已經(jīng)引起政府高度重視。4、 第四句：強調(diào)第三句5、 第五句科學(xué)論據(jù)法According to a survey one of the latest survey conducted by a certain international organization.Money spent on sth is as much asMoney spent on sth has reached as much asMoney earned /collected

17、/raised is as much asChina Daily has conducted an interview recently on this topic, involving four individuals-a surgeon, a lawyer, a worker and a civil servant.According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Science(CAS).According to a survey conducted by CAS ,those who are confident are more

18、 likely to establish career, compared with those who are not.根據(jù)社科院的調(diào)查，那些自信的人比不自信的人更容易成功。舉例法Our society has been filled with a variety of examples of（主題），with the following one being the most impressive.Among all touching facts relating to（主題）that I have heard ,noticed and experienced the most impres

19、sive one is提升：enhance/promote/improve/facilitate/stimulate/upgrade/boost/enrich加強：reinforce/strengthen/consolidate/hone/sharpen/intensify培養(yǎng)：cultivate/foster/nurture執(zhí)行：perform/conduct/implement/enforce制定：formulate/introduce珍惜：value/treasure/cherish解決：combat/address/solve/takle/harness/curb/optimize破壞

20、：breach/erode/exhaust/undermine/ruin/spoil/degrade/violate惡化/阻礙：corrupt/distort/aggravate/hinder/impede/obstruct平行展開法&因果展開法More than（肯定）This is more than a challenge.The role model is more than a way to educate children but an effective mode of communication as well.Far from being(絕不是) China is far

21、from being a world economic leading nation.Contrary to a popular assumption=contrary to a common beliefassumption /smpn/ N-COUNT假設(shè)Contrary to a common belief environmental preservation should have priority over economic growth. 連接3個或3個以上Not only A but also B and such benefits/problems as C and D.Not

22、 the least 絲毫不Not the least of the factors that make for success in many field is在任何領(lǐng)域當中取得成功最重要的因素是In term of 就而言(主題)will give youngsters an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.就應(yīng)對學(xué)生時代的挑戰(zhàn)而言，主題會給年輕人帶來優(yōu)勢。Cope with 應(yīng)對 cope V-erb 解決Sth is/are not restricted to ,but is /are a

23、lso evident among主題并不局限于，在中也明顯。The benefits of the being independent are not restricted to improving ones academic performance, but are also evident among promoting ones energy, enthusiasm and charm.獨立的好處并不局限于提升一個人的學(xué)術(shù)表現(xiàn)，在提升一個人的能量、熱情還有魅力方面也很明顯。Be it A or B 無論是A還是BBe it long or short, rough or smooth,

24、 we mean to reach our journeys end.一些連接詞To do this 這樣一來To become successful 成為一個成功的人By doing so 這樣一來Obviously 很明顯In many ways 在很多方面In some case 在某些情況下Put it another way 換句話說To put it mildly 換句話說In other words 換句話說To put it strong 換句話說四、 第三段寫作正面話題1、第一句：再次確認其重要性It is imperative that the essence be abs

25、orbed and the drawbacks be neglected, especially in the times of knowledge explosion when news, facts, opinions and even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world.the essence be absorbed and the drawbacks be neglected取其精華去其糟粕2、第二句：_/_/給出建議Researchers, scholars and experts in the related area are expected to work out up-to-date proposals to ensure this positiv