英語作文綜合訓(xùn)練一(競選班長).pptVIP

假如你是楊方，你要競選班長(class president)，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇競選演講詞。 1. 你認(rèn)為自己具備什么條件可以勝任班長工作？ 2. 如果當(dāng)選你會為班級同學(xué)做些什么？ 注意：詞數(shù)140個左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。,審題： 1.體材：應(yīng)用文-競選演說詞 2.時態(tài)和人稱：第一人稱，現(xiàn)在時 II.謀篇: 1.競選演說詞一般要求有稱呼語、開頭語、結(jié)束語以及拉票，表達(dá)謝意等內(nèi)容。（本文開頭語已給出。）,2.本文內(nèi)容要點： 1）個人所具備的競選班長的優(yōu)越條件 2） 如果當(dāng)選你打算要為班級做什么,即競選目標(biāo) 3）表決心，拉票，表示感謝 3. 段落層次： 根據(jù)三個內(nèi)容要點，可分三段來寫。 4.注意點： 該文體寫作應(yīng)樸實，真誠(sincere)，條理清楚，話語要具有感染力（powerful），煽動性，讓聽眾（選民）信服你，感受到你的真誠及能力。,范文 My name is Yang Fang. Im glad to have this opportunity to tell you why you should vote for me as class president. （開頭語，引出話題）,I am responsible, sociable, and easy-going by nature. I like class work and enjoy serving others. Additionally, I have varied interests. I love singing and playing the drums as well as soccer. I am also a good listener and always open to different opinions. I am confident that I can do the job well.(本段描述個人所具備的條件優(yōu)越：responsible, sociable, easy-going, like class work ，a good listener，have various interests, 在羅列這些優(yōu)點時，既有“籠統(tǒng)的”responsible, sociable等“詞匯”又有“具體的”例子love singing and playing the drums as well as soccer ， open to different opinions等 ，最后表明自己有信心勝任班長工作:I am confident that I can do the job well.。內(nèi)容真實可信，語言具有感染力與說服力。,Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our class will improve their studies. For those students who are falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge between the teachers and us students. Finally, I will arrange parties to relax ourselves. （本段具體描述你的競選目標(biāo)： 1create an academic atmosphere 2 serve as a bridge 3 arrange parties to relax ourselves ；描述時 分別用了firstly ，Secondly， Finally ，使得層次清晰，邏輯有序）,I believe I am the right person for this post and I hope to have your support and vote. Thank you! （結(jié)束語簡明扼要，態(tài)度真誠，自信）,典型錯誤 Im a kind and outgoing people.(Im a person.) I want to serve for my class.（serve + n.） I have a kind-heart . ( a kind heart) Ill make the environment more clean.(cleaner) I also good at sports.(I am good at) Creat harmony atmosphere (harmonious atmosphere) Ill spare no pains to do things what will benefit our class.(things that will benefit our class) As you known.(As you know) Ill hard working and try my best.(work hard) Ill help you when you have difficult.(difficulty) I get on well with them and they are like me.(they all like me),要點1 I love our class. I enjoy class daily work. Im good at communicating with people and it can close the distance between teachers and students. A good relationship can make it easier for me to manage our class well. I like to be helpful . Whenever you need my help, Im always there. I have enough confidence that I can run our class perfectly because of my rich experience Ive got from my previous work.,要點2 If elected, the first thing I will do is to decorate our classroom to be a nice place . Ill manage to lead our class to the top of our school. And Ill put my heart into class daily work. If I have the honor to be class president , Ill work harder not only to further improve myself but also do more things for our class. Im supposed to let other students voice their opinions about class building and try to keep our class in order.,要點3 Im sure I would be an excellent class president. Give me a chance. I wont let you down. Im eager to get the position so that I can do more things for our teachers and classmates as well. I promise that I ll manage the class in a nice way, more scientifically and effectively. It is self-evident that a class needs a good class president, and a teacher needs a good assistant. Thats ME! Dont hesitate to vote for me .,I am so devoted to class that Ill perform functions as expected. Leadership enables me to keep the class in order. Responsibility reminds me to serve classmates without complaining.,decorate the corner of classroom as “Telling you” place where we can convey our thoughts to our teachers and classmates. bridge the gap so that students can benefit from teachers. announce the distribution of duties among the classmates/ improve a sense of glory psychological instruction course will be included in the plan for we bear too many expectations.,advocate/ launch a jogging campaign. Without health, no one can harvest achievement. make our class a place where we obtain pleasure and graduate with knowledge as well as perfect memory. strengthen a good class image./ present the gift to whoever ranks the first place in every field.,In general, Im convinced that I have the ability to be the class president. For one thing, I do well in most subjects specially in English, which enables me to set a good example for our classmates. For another, I have taken part in various activities, ranging from research work to volunteer work, from which I reap a lot of experience. In addition, I get on well with most of you with whose help I have made continuous progress.,Therefore, I think it beneficial for you to vote for me. If I were the class president, I would devote myself to making contributions to creating our class a harmonious family. Firstly, I would help classmates who have difficulty in study, thus offering us a better atmosphere to study well. Secondly, I would organize colorful outdoor activities, such as spo