北京市高中英語 Unit 4 Making the news Period 6 Reading and writing課件 新人教版必修5.ppt

新聞報道是關于最近發(fā)生的重要而新鮮的事情的報道或評述 寫好一篇高質量的新聞報道應注意以下兩個方面 即新聞的題目 它是文章的眼睛 既要體現鮮明的個性 又要生動 形象 有美感 才能引人入勝 是新聞報道內容的概括和濃縮 包括五大要素 時間 地點 人物 起因和結果 導語是新聞報道的精華 也是信息傳遞的集中體現 是導語之后的新聞展開 補充更加充實 新聞報道由于是反映最近所發(fā)生的重要而新鮮的事 所以時態(tài)以現在時 過去時為主 篇幅一般不長 內容短小精悍 多用動詞 長短句交錯使用 5月1日 高二 3 班的學生志愿者去陽光敬老院開展志愿者活動 送水果 打掃 聊天等 假如你是校報的英語記者 請按下列要點用英語寫一則100 120個詞的新聞報道 要求 1 時間 地點 人物 活動 2 老人們的反應 3 簡短評論 第一步認真審題 analyzetherequirements 第二步謀篇布局 drawupanoutline 第三步聯句成篇 organizethesentences 第四步錦上添花 getthearticlepolishedup 第五步查漏補缺 checkthemistakes 審主題審體裁 審人稱 審時態(tài) 審要求 students time place persons activitiesreactionoftheelderlybriefevaluation didvoluntarywork aletter thethird thepasttense 標題 headline studentvolunteersbroughtsunshine whatwouldbetheheadlineofthiscomposition 導語 lead liyueandzhanghua studentsfromclassthree gradetwo sunshinenursinghomeand wentto didsomevoluntarywork 正文 body they theelderly flowersandfruits thentheystartedworkingatonce and everythingdone theysatintheyard presented with cleaningthewindows sweepingthefloor chattingwiththeelderlypeople 評語 evaluation whattheydidhasbrought toothersand theirownlives joy enriched first second then finally atlast soon immediately suddenly here there ononeside ontheotherside infrontof atthebackof nextto foronething fortheotherthing ononehand ontheotherhand but however while though otherwise because since as thanksto asaresult of aslongas solongas onconditionthat if unless though as evenif though whether who what when where ever what smore besides tomakethematterworse what sworse inaword altogether allinall ingeneral theygaveflowersandfruitstotheelderly they theelderly flowersandfruits theysaidthestudentshaddonesomuchforthemandtheywouldneverforgetthem theysaiditwas abeautifulday theywouldrememberitforever such that whentheyarrived theirarrival upon theystartedworkingatonce thewindowsand thefloor 2 theysatintheyard withtheelderlypeople 巧用分詞 cleaning sweeping everythingdone chatting 名詞性從句要用得妙 whattheydidhasbroughtjoytoothersandenrichedtheirownlives theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits theystartedworkingatonce cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople then everythingdone onmayday liyueandzhanghua studentsfromclassthree gradetwo wenttosunshinenursinghomeanddidsomevoluntarywork upontheirarrival liyueandzhanghuawerewarmlywelcomed andrespectfully theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits thentheystartedworkingatonce cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor everythingdone theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople whenitwastimeforthevolunteerstoleave theelderlypeoplethankedthemfortheirkindness theysaiditw