廣東省深圳市松泉中學(xué)中考英語 寫作 人物篇課件 牛津深圳版.ppt

中考英語寫作 人物篇 brainstorming howtointroduceaperson yearsold he sheis his hername he sheis he shewasborn in 地方 on月日 年 tall short thin longhair bigeyes read basketball he sheis adj 形容詞 he shehas 名詞短語he sheisadjwith名詞短語 shy outgoing kind he sheis he sheis not goodat he shedoeswellin english maths jim kate he shelikesv ing n his herhobbyis yourbestfriendanunforgettablepersoninyourlifeanimportantpersoninyourlifethepersonyouadmiremost whatactivitiesdoyoudotogether havedinnertogetherenjoyfood playbasketballtogetherdosportstogether thethingsthatyourfrienddidmakeyoufeelthankful helpsbwith studystudytogether behurt illtakesbtothehospital whatdoyourfather motherdoforyou takegoodcareofmecookformekeepmecompanyisagoodlistenerisalwaysbethereformealwaysencouragesme 寫人文章可通過介紹人物的年齡 外貌 職業(yè) 愛好 學(xué)習(xí)工作等方面來展現(xiàn)人物鮮明的個性 同時 通過事例來佐證 敘述的原則是從外到內(nèi) 書面表達5步法 一 審題注意 三定 1 定內(nèi)容 根據(jù)要點定內(nèi)容 2 定人稱 用第一人稱親近自然 用第三人稱客觀真實 3 定時態(tài) 記敘文 日記一般用一般過去時 說明文 通知 布告 介紹等用一般現(xiàn)在時 計劃等用一般將來時 書面表達 滿分25分 初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)生活馬上就要結(jié)束了 在這三年中 你一定和你的同學(xué)結(jié)下了深厚的友誼 請根據(jù)提示要求 寫一篇短文 講述你們之前的交往 80詞左右 提示 建議內(nèi)容如下 1 whoyourbestfriendis 2 whatmakesyougetonwellwithher him 3 oneunforgettablethinghappenedtobothofyou寫作要求 1 短文須包括所給的提示內(nèi)容 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象 2 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名 校名 班級和地名 3 語句通順 意思連貫 書寫工整 詞數(shù)80詞左右 二 列提綱根據(jù)要點列提綱 列提綱時候應(yīng)以動賓短語或者系表短語的形式羅列 beginning ending mainbody outline name character activities oneunforgettablething leaveschool makefriends behappy thankful luckysuchabestfriend tony jim bekind outgoing havedinner dosports studytogether behurt illtakesbtothehospital beginning ending mainbody outline name character activities beginning ending mainbody outline name character whatactivitiesdoyourfriendsandyoudotogether havedinnertogether enjoyfood playbasketballtogether dosportstogether theunforgettablethingsthatmakeyoufeelthankful helpsbwithhomeworkstudytogether behurt illtakesbtothehospital 三 擴展成句 將提綱里的動賓短語或系表短語擴展成完整的句子 beginning ending mainbody name character activities oneunforgettablething leaveschool iamsohappy thankful luckythatihavesuchabestfriend tony kindandoutgoing makefriends iamgoingto ihavemadelotsoffriends mybestfriendis heis 擴展成句 havedinner dosportsandstudytogether hurt illatsportsmeeting behappy thankful luckysuchabestfriend weoften iwas tonyhurriedto takemetothehospital 四 連句成文 補充適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞和過渡句 使之時間 空間 細(xì)節(jié)有邏輯 連貫呼應(yīng) beginning ending mainbody name character activities oneunforgettablething leaveschool ifeel amhappy luckythatihavesuchabestfriend tony kindandoutgoing iamgoingto ihavemadelotsoffriends mybestfriendis heis 連句成文 weoftenhavedinner dosportsandstudytogether iwashurt illatsportsmeeting tonyhurriedtotakemetothehospital soon duringthreeyears oneday iwasdeeplymoved thankful 五 查錯改錯 主要檢查 1 人稱是否用錯 并注意人稱代詞的主格和賓格形式是否有錯 2 動詞的時態(tài)形式是否準(zhǔn)確無誤 特別注意查看一般現(xiàn)在時主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時謂語動詞是否加了 e s 3 名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式 4 單詞拼寫 標(biāo)點符號和大小寫是否錯 5 格式是否有錯 要盡量剔除錯誤 最后抄正文章 iwillleavemyschoolsoon duringthesethreeyears imadesomefriends jellyisoneofmybestfriend sheisverykindandeasygoing ilearnalotfromher weoftendosportsorstudytogether oneday iwanttocopyhermathshomeworkbecauseiwasn tgoodinmaths butsherefusedme iwasangrywithshe thenextevening shecametomyhomeandsaidshewouldliketohelpmewithmymaths iwasdeepmoved fromthenon idobetterinmathswithherhelp iamsothankful 請改正文中的六個錯誤 havemade friends her deeply at wanted a 了解一些新聞人物b