高中英語(yǔ)概要寫作實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練.doc

高中英語(yǔ)概要寫作實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Are you shy? If you are，you are not alone.In fact，close to 50 percent of people are shy.Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives.These days，shyness is becoming more and more common.Now，scientists are trying to understand shyness.They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.Is it possible to be born shy? Many scientists say yes.They say 15 to 20 percent of babies behave shyly.These babies are a little quieter and more watchful than other babies.Interestingly，these shy babies usually have shy parents.As a result，scientists think that some shyness is genetic.Family size might cause people to be shy as well.Scientists at Harvard University studied shy children.They found that 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters.As a result，they became shy.At the same time，children with no brothers and sisters may be shy as well.Growing up alone，they often play by themselves.They are not able to learn the same social skills as children from big families.You may also be shy because of where you were born.When scientists studied shyness in different countries，they found surprising differences.In Japan，most people said they were shy.But in Israel，only one of three people said so.What explains the difference? One scientist says the Japanese and Israelis have different opinions of failure.In Japan，when people do not succeed，they feel bad about themselves.They blame themselves for their failure.In Israel，the opposite is true.Israelis often blame failure on outside reasons，such as family，teachers，friends，or bad luck.In Israel，freedom of opinion and risk taking are strongly supported.This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.For shy people，it can be difficult to make friends，speak in class，and even get a good job.But scientists say you can get over your shyness.They suggest trying new things and practicing conversation.And dont forgetif you are shy，you are not the only one.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇說明文。這篇文章的主題段是第一段，主要告訴人們害羞是一種普遍的現(xiàn)象。因此，在概括時(shí)要把文章主題段的中心詞(shy，common，why)用自己的話概括出來(lái)。為了避免雷同，用自己的話概括時(shí)要注意同義詞的轉(zhuǎn)換，如原文中的why可用the reason轉(zhuǎn)述。其次，還應(yīng)注意不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，即害羞的原因，不同國(guó)家間的原因是不一樣的以及專家給出的克服害羞的建議等。最后，注意詞數(shù)在60詞左右，恰當(dāng)使用過渡詞與亮點(diǎn)句型，以使行文連貫。6_ _ _ _ _ _12_ _ _ _ _ _18_ _ _ _ _ _24_ _ _ _ _ _30_ _ _ _ _ _36_ _ _ _ _ _42_ _ _ _ _ _48_ _ _ _ _ _54_ _ _ _ _ _60_ _ _ _ _ _66_ _ _ _ _ _72_ _ _ _ _ _78_ _ _ _ _ _84_ _ _ _ _ _閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Weve reached a strangesome would say unusualpoint.While fighting world hunger continues to be the matter of vital importance according to a recent report from the World Health Organization(WHO)，more people now die from being overweight than from being underweight.Its the good life thats more likely to kill us these days.Worse，nearly 18 million children under the age of five around the world are estimated to be overweight.Whats going on?We really dont have many excuses for our weight problems.The dangers of the problem have been drilled into us by publichealth campaigns since 2001 and the message is getting throughup to a point.In the 1970s，F(xiàn)inland，for example，had the highest rate of heart disease in the world and being overweight was its main cause.Not any more.A publichealth campaign has greatly reduced the number of heart disease deaths by 80 percent over the past three decades.Maybe that explains why the percentage of people in Finland taking diet pills doubled between 2001 and 2005，and doctors even offer surgery of removing fat inside and change the shape of the body.No wonder it ranks as the worlds most bodyconscious country.We know what we should be doing to lose weightbut actually doing it is another matter.By far the most popular excuse is not taking enough exercise.More than half of us admit we lack willpower.Others blame good food.They say: its just too inviting and it makes them overeat.Some also blame their parentstheir genes.But unfortunately，the parents are wronged because theyre normal in shape，or rather slim.Its a similar story around the world，although people are relatively unlikely to have tried to lose weight.Parents are eager to see their kids shape up.Do as I saynot as I do.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇議論文。文章以論證的方式說明了優(yōu)質(zhì)生活導(dǎo)致的肥胖問題給人們的健康帶來(lái)的危害，呼吁人們積極行動(dòng)遠(yuǎn)離肥胖，不要再找借口。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意把握文章要點(diǎn)：1.優(yōu)質(zhì)生活成了人們健康的殺手；2.始于2001年的公眾健康運(yùn)動(dòng)讓人們意識(shí)到肥胖的危害以及在減少肥胖方面所起的作用；3.人們采取消極行動(dòng)去減肥；4.人