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HowtodoProof reading短文改錯 馬雪芳高三 3 班 Learningaims 學(xué)習(xí)目標 1 LearnsomestrategiesinalimerickabouthowtodoProof reading 2 LearntousethestrategiesproperlywhendoingProof reading Icangotohomenow 2 Ilikeplayingpiano 3 IamfondatEnglish the Wrongword Missingword of Unnecessaryword Formsofcorrectingacomposition 多 缺 錯 Step1Leading in Stepsofcorrectingacomposition 1 Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea 瀏覽全文 掌握大意 2 Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthemistakes 分句閱讀 逐行找錯 3 Readthepassageforthethirdtime checktheanswersandcorrectthedifficultones 檢查核對 攻克難點 Step1Leading in Limerick動詞形 名詞數(shù) 還要注意形和副 代詞格 細領(lǐng)悟 介詞短語須關(guān)注 習(xí)慣用法要記住 冠詞連詞常光顧 請先念一遍 咒語 吧 Step2Self learning I 8min Task1動詞形1 WhenIwasachild Ihopedtoliveinthecity IthinkIwouldbehappythere 2015全國卷I 2 Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry 2015全國卷II 3 Wecanchoosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip 2016全國卷II thought began taking 謂語動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)錯誤 非謂語動詞錯誤 謂語動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)錯誤 Step3Feeding back I Task2名詞數(shù)指名詞單 復(fù)數(shù)形式的用法錯誤4 Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier 2015全國卷I 5 Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest 2016全國卷I 6 Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme 2016全國卷III air years 不可數(shù)名詞 news advice knowledge information honesty 不可數(shù)名詞用法錯誤 名詞用法錯誤 可數(shù)名詞單復(fù)數(shù)用法錯誤 Task3還要注意形和副7 Globalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem 2015全國卷I 形容詞和副詞的誤用8 Myparentscouldn tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem 2016全國卷III 形容詞和副詞的誤用 serious free Task4代詞格 細領(lǐng)悟9 Myuncleistheownerofarestaurant Hehopesourbusinesswillgrowsteadily 2016全國卷I 人稱代詞 物主代詞 反身代詞使用錯誤10 IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself 2016全國卷III 人稱代詞 物主代詞 反身代詞使用錯誤 his myself Task5介詞短語須關(guān)注 習(xí)慣用法要記住 11 Unfortunately onthedevelopmentofindustrialization theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted 2015全國卷I 主要考查固定短語 固定介詞的搭配 12 Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichinashortperiodoftime 2016全國卷III 主要考查固定短語 固定介詞的搭配 13 NowIamleavinghometocollege 2016全國卷III 主要考查固定短語 固定介詞的搭配 with of for Task6冠詞連詞常光顧14 Thoughnotverybig buttherestaurantispopularinourarea 2016全國卷I 連詞but and or so和although等邏輯性錯誤15 Atthefirst IthoughtIkneweverything 2016全國卷III 冠詞a an和the的用法錯誤 Limerick動詞形 名詞數(shù) 還要注意形和副 代詞格 細領(lǐng)悟 介詞短語須關(guān)注 習(xí)慣用法要記住 冠詞連詞常光顧 Step4Self learning II Practice 5min 2017全國卷II短文改錯 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文 文中共有10處語言錯誤 每句中最多有兩處 每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加 刪除或修改 增加 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號 并在其下寫出該加的詞 刪除 把多余的詞用斜線 劃掉 修改 在錯的詞下劃一橫線 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞 注意 1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞 2 只允許修改10處 多者 從第11處起 不計分 Mr andMrs Zhangallworkinourschool Theylivefarfromtheschool andittakesaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday Intheirsparetime theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools Beside theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheinternet Whensummercame theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthevegetables Step5Discussion Step6Feeding back II Mr andMrs Zhangallworkinourschool Theylivefarfromtheschool andittakesaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday Intheirsparetime theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools Beside theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheinternet Whensummercame theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthevegetables an interested early information comes Besides both 代詞格 細領(lǐng)悟 冠詞連詞常光顧 還要注意形和副 which 代詞格 細領(lǐng)悟 還要注意形和副 習(xí)慣用法要記住 還要注意形和副 名詞數(shù) 動詞形 習(xí)慣用法要記住 to Summary 1 Stepsofcorrectingacomposition2 Thelimerick動詞形 名詞數(shù) 還要注意形和副 代詞格 細領(lǐng)悟 介詞短語須關(guān)注 習(xí)慣用法要記住 介詞短語須關(guān)注 習(xí)慣用法要記住 冠詞連詞常光顧 Don tforget 當堂檢測1 Asresult theplantsaregrowingsomewhere 2014全國卷I 2 Withthehelpbyourfather mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoesinourbackgarden 2014全國卷I 3 Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost 2014全國卷I of wonderful a 冠詞連詞常光顧 還要注意形和副 介詞短語須關(guān)注 習(xí)慣用法要記住 當堂檢測4 Hermotherkeptsheintheroom 2015全國卷II 5 Someclassmatessuggestweshouldgotoplacesofinterestnearby Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea 2016全國卷II 6