最新高考英語寫作專題輔導課件基礎寫作地點介紹

1.neighbor與為鄰2.bemadeupof/consistof由組成3.belocated/situatedin/near坐落在4.serveas當用5.with/hasahistoryof有的歷史,相關(guān)短語,6.with/hasapopulationof有人口7.coveranareaof面積有.8.thethirdlargestcity第三大城市9.befamousfor以而著名10.bewell-knownfor/as因為/作為而出名,11.onitseastlies東邊有12.afantasticplace一個極好的地方13.berich/abundantin盛產(chǎn)14.athree-storeyedbuilding一棟三層樓的房子,1.Iwouldliketointroducemyhometowntoyou.我向你介紹一下我的家鄉(xiāng)。2.Myhometown,neighboringHongKong,islocatedinGuangdongProvince.我的家鄉(xiāng),毗鄰香港,位于廣東省。,相關(guān)句式,3.Guangzhou,acitywithapopulationofaboutthirteenmillion,hasahistoryofmorethan2,200years.廣州,擁有一千三百人口的一座城市,有三百多年的歷史了。4.Coveringatotalareaof7,434squarekilometersthiscityhasapopulationofabouttenmillion.這座城市占地面積達7,434平方公里,人口大約是10,000,000。,5.Itisrichinnaturalsourcessuchascoalandgold,andhasmildclimate.它自然資源得天獨厚,有豐富的煤和金礦,而且氣候溫和。6.Ourschoolisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.我們學校再也不是過去的樣子了。,1.介紹或描述地點的基礎寫作,通常以表格形式來呈現(xiàn)寫作點。該類表格通常有兩列,其中一列概括事物特征、屬性,另一列對此特征、屬性展開描述。學生必須重新組織表格內(nèi)容,不能死板地依據(jù)表格從左到右翻譯,如不能寫成“ThelocationofGuangzhouisinthesouthofChina”這樣不地道的句子,相應的表達應該是:GuangzhouliesinthesouthofChina.,2.確定時態(tài)。介紹地點等描述基本特征的文章通常使用一般現(xiàn)在時。3.避免開頭指代不明。若文章沒有給出寫作對象或設定情景，避免用it作主語引導第一句,而應該具體寫出描述的對象，如theGreatWall,HongKong等。但如果整篇文章多處用“it”等作主語,文章會稍顯遜色,所以在寫作過程中,可根據(jù)文意適當變換主語,如改寫為theplace,thecity等。,你將帶領(lǐng)一個外國旅游團參觀長城，請根據(jù)以下的信息要點，用5個規(guī)范的英語句子寫一篇長城的簡單介紹。你的介紹應包括全部信息要點，介紹的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入5個句子中?！拘畔⒁c】,寫作要求只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。評分標準句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。,例題導寫1.按順序?qū)懽?。學生應該按照表格內(nèi)容(即“歷史、特點、現(xiàn)狀”)的先后順序進行寫作，這樣既可避免重整順序而浪費時間,也避免錯改順序而給老師帶來閱卷困難。2.草擬提綱、簡單翻譯是寫作重要步驟之一。請翻譯要點：(1)有(多久)的歷史_,Ithasahistoryof.,(2)世界最長的城墻_(3)6000多千米長_(4)由石頭,磚頭做成_(5)由人工修建_,beconstructedbyhand,thelongestwallintheworld,6000kilometerslong,bemadeofstonesandbricks,6)防御外來入侵者_(7)每隔幾百米_,everyfewhundredmeters,preventthecountryfrombeinginvaded;defendthecountryagainstforeigninvaders,(8)著名旅游景點之一_(9)吸引許多外國游客_,oneofthefamousscenicspots;oneofthefamousplacesofinterest;oneofthefamoustouristattractions,attractmanyforeignvisitors,3.規(guī)范表達名詞。如果名詞修飾語過長,應轉(zhuǎn)用“a/an/the+名詞+of”的表達,例如,“兩千多年的歷史”應該寫成“ahistoryoftwothousandyears”,而不能寫成“twothousandyearshistory”。,4.變換表達,豐富句式。請按要求完成句子：(1)Itismorethan6000kilometersinlength,_(“是世界上最長的城墻”,使用非限制性定語從句)(2)ItwastheGreatWall_inancienttimes.(“幫助人們防御外來入侵者”,使用強調(diào)句),thathelpedpeoplefightagainsttheforeigninvaders,whichmakesitthelongestwallintheworld,(3)_,therewerewatchtowerseveryfewhundredmetersalongthewall.(“長城主要用于防御外來入侵者”,使用原因狀語從句)(4)TheGreatWallisoneofthewell-knownplacesofinterestonearth,_.(“每年吸引許多外國游客到長城觀光旅游”,使用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)),(5)TheGreatWallis_afamoushistoricalattraction_itattractshundredsofthousandsofforeignvisitorseachyear.(使用“如此以致”的句型表達)(6)So_thatitattractshundredsofthousandsofvisitorshomeandabroadeveryyear.(“長城如此吸引”,使用倒裝句),attractiveistheGreatWall,such,that,參考范文LadiesandGentlemen，WelcometotheGreatWall.TheGreatWall,whichismorethan6,000kilometerslong,isthelongestwallintheworld.Ithasahistoryofmorethan2,000years.Itismadeofstonesandbricksandalmostalltheconstructionwasdonebyhandwithoutanymachine.,Asthewallwasbuilttodefendthecountryagainstforeigninvaders,therewerewatchtowerseveryfewhundredmetersalongthewall.Now,theGreatwallisoneofthemostfamousplacesofinterestinChinaanditattractsmanyforeignvisitorseveryyear.,能力提高1.請根據(jù)中文提示,完成有關(guān)地點介紹的語匯積累。(1)位于_(2)靠近_,nextto/closeto,intheneighborhoodof,neighboring.,belocated/situatedin；lie(s)in,(3)有(多少)人口_(4)有(多久)歷史_,Ithasapopulationof.;Withapopulationof.,sth.;Thepopulationhasreached.,Ithasahistoryof.;Withahistoryof.，sth.,(5)占(多大)面積_(6)表達“容量”Thehotel_(擁有)120rooms;Thebuildingcan_(容納)5000people.,coveranareaof.(squarekilometers/squaremeters),possesses,hold,(7)是(多少)長/寬/深I(lǐng)tis._/_/_.=Itis.in_/_/_.(8)著名景點aplaceof_,ahistorical_,ascenicspot(9)表達“吸引、著名”sth._sb.;sth.be_(形容詞);befamous_(因而著名);befamous_(作為而著名),as,long,wide,deep,length,width,depth,interest,attraction,attract/appealto,attractive/appealing/wonderful,for,2.請根據(jù)中文,完成短文。Guangzhou,thethirdlargestcityinChina,alsoknownasCityofFlowers,servesasthecapitalcityofGuangdongand(1)_(政治，經(jīng)濟，科學，教育，文化中心).(2)_(全市面積7434.4平方公里),itishometomorethan11millionpeople.,Covering/Withanareaof7434.4squarekilometers,LocatedinthemiddleofGuangdong,northofthePearlRiverDeltawiththePearlRiverwindingitswaythroughthecity,Guangzhou(3)_(氣候溫暖濕潤).Besides,itisafamouscitywith(4)_(有著2,200多年歷史)andastartingportoftheMaritimeSilkRoad.Withitsbeautifulscenery,Guangzhou(5)_(旅游資源豐富).,enjoysawarmandwetclimate,你參加了學校的旅游興趣小組，在匯報課上，各小組成員要介紹一個獨具魅力的城市，以下是你搜集到的關(guān)于香港的信息。,參考詞匯：澳門Macao南丫島LemmaIsland寫作內(nèi)容請根據(jù)以上表格內(nèi)容,介紹香港的有關(guān)情況。寫作要求只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。評分標準句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。,參考范文HongKong,acitysituatedclosetothesouthofGuangdongandtotheeastofMacao,isfamousfortraveling,food,shoppingandfilmindustryaswell.Inthismoderncity,therearevariouskindsofbrandsfromallovertheworldforpeopletochoosefrom,whichmakesHongKonganidealplaceforshopping.,HongKongisalsoanexcitingplacewherepeoplecanenjoytheirleisuretimeandholidaybyvisitingthefamousscenicspots,suchastheDisneyland,theOceanPark,theLemmaIslandandsoon.Intherestaurantsrunbythelocalpeople,visitorscanenjoythedeliciousfoodatareasonableprice.Whatsmore,HongKongpeoplearecreativeandpassionate,creatingtheirpromisingfuturewithwisdomanddiligence.,精華點評,介紹地點的文章,往往涉及一些地方著名景點的介紹。在日常閱讀積累中,學生必須記住一些著名的、常用的景點,如本文出現(xiàn)的“迪士尼樂園”(Disneyland),“海洋公園”(theOceanPark),這些香港著名景點也曾經(jīng)出現(xiàn)在學生課本,需引起重視。此外,對于語言表達的難點,要學會轉(zhuǎn)換思維方式,了解中英文表達的差異,這樣才可以在寫作時準確、地道地翻譯要點,如題目中出現(xiàn)的“勤勞的雙手”,英語表達時不能直接翻譯,而用diligence或hardwork便可表達中心要點。,2012年體育盛事奧運會將在倫敦舉行。你校一年一度的英語體育節(jié)將至，請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容,用英語寫一篇介紹倫敦的文章，張貼在體育節(jié)的宣傳欄上。寫作內(nèi)容,London,themostimportantindustrialcityofEngland,servesasthecentreofitspolitical,economicandculturallife.LocatedinthesoutheastofEngland,itcoversanareaof1580squarekilometers.Theweatherischangeableanditrainsoften.Peoplecanenjoytheconvenienceofthemeansoftransportation,butatarelativelyexpensiveprice.Withitsbeautifulscenery,Londonattractsvisitorsfro