好了歌譯文賞析.ppt

好了歌英譯賞析,作家作品介紹,原文、譯文介紹,兩種譯本整體賞析,兩種譯本具體比較,結(jié)語(yǔ),關(guān)于紅樓夢(mèng),紅樓夢(mèng)成書(shū)于18世紀(jì)中葉的乾隆時(shí)代。原著120回，前80回曹雪芹著，后40回為無(wú)名氏續(xù)寫(xiě)。它以榮國(guó)府的日常生活為中心，以寶玉、黛玉、寶釵的愛(ài)情婚姻悲劇及大觀園中點(diǎn)滴瑣事為主線，以金陵貴族名門賈、史、王、薛四大家族由鼎盛走向衰亡的歷史為暗線，展現(xiàn)了窮途末路的封建社會(huì)終將走向滅亡的必然趨勢(shì)。它標(biāo)志著中國(guó)古典小說(shuō)的高峰，被譽(yù)為“中國(guó)封建社會(huì)的百科全書(shū)”。曹雪芹（1715-1763或1724-1764），滿族正白旗人。清代小說(shuō)家，名沾（音同“沾”），字夢(mèng)阮，號(hào)雪芹、芹圃、芹溪。他的先世原是漢人，祖籍是河北豐潤(rùn)縣，后移居遼寧遼陽(yáng)，大約在明末被編入滿洲籍，身份是“包衣”(家奴)。他出身于一個(gè)“百年望族”的大官僚地主家庭，從曾祖父起三代世襲江寧織造一職達(dá)六十年之久。后來(lái)父親因事受株連，被革職抄家，家庭的衰敗使曹雪芹飽嘗了人生的辛酸。他在人生的最后幾十年里，以堅(jiān)韌不拔的毅力，歷經(jīng)十年創(chuàng)作了紅樓夢(mèng)并專心致志地做著修訂工作，死后遺留下紅樓夢(mèng)前八十回的稿子。,關(guān)于好了歌,好了歌以及解注的每一句都是全書(shū)的伏線，有人稱之為紅樓夢(mèng)的“綱”或“眼”。跛足道人語(yǔ)言通俗易懂作者看透了世態(tài)炎涼,好了歌,世人都曉神仙好，惟有功名忘不了！古今將相在何方？荒冢一堆草沒(méi)了。世人都曉神仙好，只有金銀忘不了！終朝只恨聚無(wú)多，及到多時(shí)眼閉了。世人都曉神仙好，只有姣妻忘不了！君生日日說(shuō)恩情，君死又隨人去了。世人都曉神仙好，只有兒孫忘不了！癡心父母古來(lái)多，孝順子孫誰(shuí)見(jiàn)了？,關(guān)于好了歌英譯本,好了歌目前有8個(gè)英譯本。姜其煌（1996）介紹了7種，它們分別由H.B.喬利(JolyH.Bencraft.，1892）、E.赫德森（Hudson，Elfridai,1928）、王際真（WangChi-Chen,1929）、麥克休姐妹（McHugh,Florenceandlsabel,1958）、王際真（1958）、大衛(wèi)霍克斯（Hewkes，David1973）和楊憲益和戴乃迭（Yang，Hsien-yiandGladysYang，1978）翻譯。第八種B.D.BOnsall于上個(gè)世紀(jì)五十年代完成的紅樓夢(mèng)英文全譯本中好了歌的譯文。,好了歌世人都曉神仙好，惟有功名忘不了！古今將相在何方？荒冢一堆草沒(méi)了。世人都曉神仙好，只有金銀忘不了！終朝只恨聚無(wú)多，及到多時(shí)眼閉了。世人都曉神仙好，只有姣妻忘不了！君生日日說(shuō)恩情，君死又隨人去了。世人都曉神仙好，只有兒孫忘不了！癡心父母古來(lái)多，孝順子孫誰(shuí)見(jiàn)了？,Won-DoneSongMenallknowthatsalvationshouldbewon,Butwithambitionwonthavedone,havedone.Wherearethefamousonesofdaysgoneby?Ingrassygravestheylienow,everyone.Menallknowthatsalvationshouldbewon.Butwiththeirricheswonthavedone,havedone.Eachdaytheygrumbletheyvenotmadeenough.Whentheyveenough,itsgoodnighteveryone!Menallknowthatsalvationshouldbewon.Butwiththeirlovingwivestheywonthavedone.Thedarlingseverydayprotesttheirlove:Butonceyouredead,theyreoffwithanotherone.Menallknowthatsalvationshouldbewon,Butwiththeirchildrenwonthavedone,havedone.Yetthoughofparentsfondthereisnolack,OfgratefulchildrensawIneeraone.（DavidHawks譯）,一、二、四句押韻韻尾采用的形式是：aaba,aaca,aada,aaea。尾韻“won,done,one”,基本符合原作“好、了、了”的韻腳和意義。與下文銜接,Shi-yinapproachedtheTaoistandquestionedhim.“Whatthehellyouaresaying?AllIcanmakeoutisalotofWonandDone”.“IfyoucanmakeoutWonandDone”,repliedtheTaoistwithasmile,“youmaybesaidtohaveunderstood;forinalltheaffairsofthisworld,whatiswonisdone,andwhatisdoneiswon;forwhoeverhasnotyetdonehasnotyetwon,andinordertohavewon,onemustfirsthavedone.IshallcallmysongtheWon-DoneSong!”,AllGoodThingsMustEndAllmenlongtobeimmortalsYettorichesandrankeachaspires;Thegreatonesofold,wherearetheynow?Theirgravesareamassofbriars.AllmenlongtobeimmortalsYetsilverandgoldtheyprizeAndgrubformoneyalltheirlivesTilldeathsealsuptheireyes.AllmenlongtobeimmortalsYetdoteonthewivestheyvewed,WhosweartotheirhusbandevermoreButremarryassoonashesdead.AllmenlongtobeimmortalsYetwithgettingsonswonthavedone.Althoughfondparentsarelegion,Whoeversawareallyfilialson?（楊憲益戴乃迭譯）,好了歌世人都曉神仙好，惟有功名忘不了！古今將相在何方？荒冢一堆草沒(méi)了。世人都曉神仙好，只有金銀忘不了！終朝只恨聚無(wú)多，及到多時(shí)眼閉了。世人都曉神仙好，只有姣妻忘不了！君生日日說(shuō)恩情，君死又隨人去了。世人都曉神仙好，只有兒孫忘不了！癡心父母古來(lái)多，孝順子孫誰(shuí)見(jiàn)了？,二、四句押韻，每節(jié)韻腳不同韻尾采用的形式是：abcb,abdb,aefe,aghg.缺點(diǎn)是與好、了、了”對(duì)不上號(hào)，不能一貫到底增加了下段文字中翻譯跛足道人關(guān)于“好、了”兩字所發(fā)議論的困難,標(biāo)題,楊譯是散體（一切好事都要完結(jié)）屬于陳述，含有教誨的意味；霍譯是韻體（好了歌），音節(jié)鏗鏘，屬于勸善說(shuō)唱。標(biāo)題的音節(jié)數(shù)和漢語(yǔ)原文完全吻合，難能可貴，不僅如此，它還有兩個(gè)更大的作用：一是統(tǒng)帥全詩(shī)的格律，二是與小說(shuō)的正文相互印證。,世人都曉神仙好，惟有功名忘不了！古今將相在何方？荒冢一堆草沒(méi)了。（霍）：Menallknowthatsalvationshouldbewon,Butwithambitionwonthavedone,havedone.Wherearethefamousonesofdaysgoneby?Ingrassygravestheylienow,everyone.（楊）：AllmenlongtobeimmortalsYettorichesandrankeachaspires;Thegreatonesofold,wherearetheynow?Theirgravesareamassofbriars.,功名：功績(jī)和名位;封建時(shí)代指科舉稱號(hào)或官職名位richesandrank比ambition好“將相”：great側(cè)重于描述有能力，有成就的人，而famous則常指眾所周知的名人最后一句霍譯比楊譯和上文承接得緊密,楊譯：“神仙”（immortal）是一個(gè)道教概念；人的出世與人世意欲之間的矛盾霍譯：salvation：InChristianity,salvationisthefactthatChristhassavedapersonfromevil.(基督教中)靈魂的拯救；現(xiàn)實(shí)的享樂(lè)與靈魂的拯救之間的矛盾,世人都曉神仙好，只有金銀忘不了！終朝只恨聚無(wú)多，及到多時(shí)眼閉了?；簦篗enallknowthatsalvationshouldbewon.Butwiththeirricheswonthavedone,havedone.Eachdaytheygrumbletheyvenotmadeenough.Whentheyveenough,itsgoodnighteveryone!楊：AllmenlongtobeimmortalsYetsilverandgoldtheyprizeAndgrubformoneyalltheirlivesTilldeathsealsuptheireyes.,霍譯幽默楊譯形象,“恨”：遺憾，不滿意,世人都曉神仙好，只有姣妻忘不了！君生日日說(shuō)恩情，君死又隨人去了。霍：Menallknowthatsalvationshouldbewon.Butwiththeirlovingwivestheywonthavedone.Thedarlingseverydayprotesttheirlove:Butonceyouredead,theyreoffwithanotherone.楊：AllmenlongtobeimmortalsYetdoteonthewivestheyvewed,WhosweartotheirhusbandevermoreButremarryassoonashesdead.,人稱,世人都曉神仙好，只有兒孫忘不了！癡心父母古來(lái)多，孝順子孫誰(shuí)見(jiàn)了？霍:Menallknowthatsalvationshouldbewon,Butwiththeirchildrenwonthavedone,havedone.Yetthoughofparentsfondthereisnolack,OfgratefulchildrensawIneeraone.楊：AllmenlongtobeimmortalsYetwithgettin