2010天津作文講評(píng).ppt

1、English writing,2010 天津高考作文,假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的高中生李華。你校擬選拔一批優(yōu)秀生,利用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)。你希望參加此活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)給校評(píng)選組寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信： 對(duì)此活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)（如對(duì)本人、學(xué)生級(jí)社會(huì)的益處等） 個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)（如性格、獨(dú)立生活能力、語(yǔ)言能力等） 你的計(jì)劃（如怎樣進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)等） 注意:1.詞數(shù)120-150； 2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫； 3. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：晨曦希望小學(xué) Chenxi Hope School Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua from Class

2、 One, Senior Two. _ Yours Sincerely, Li Hua,審題- 人稱(chēng): 時(shí)態(tài): 體裁及類(lèi)型：,篇章結(jié)構(gòu): Part 1： Part 2： Part 3：,第一人稱(chēng),一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),應(yīng)用文書(shū)信體格式，半開(kāi)放性提綱類(lèi)作文,personal desire and understanding of the activity,personal advantage,plans for the activity,Key words &sentence patterns,choose, coach, help sb with sth, be beneficial to, train

3、 sb in sth, be qualified for , be independent in and proficient in , have the ability of doing sth, stimulate their interests in , get sb interested in, create a good learning environment Im writing to apply for the opportunity to Its a good opportunity for me to do Thats why I apply for - I hope yo

4、u can offer the opportunity Id appreciate it if you ,Writing,20 minutes,書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（總分30）: 書(shū)面不潔/字跡潦草，-3 詞數(shù)少于120， -2 要點(diǎn)有無(wú)遺漏 拼寫(xiě)；標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)；應(yīng)用詞匯 錯(cuò)誤 (圈出） 動(dòng)詞；語(yǔ)法/句子結(jié)構(gòu) 錯(cuò)誤 （橫線(xiàn)劃出） 有適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接過(guò)渡詞，高級(jí)詞匯，可適當(dāng)提高1-2 上下文如果優(yōu)美的表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確的詞句：名詞性/定語(yǔ)從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等，可適當(dāng)提高2-3,Correcting,Dear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. Im wr

5、iting to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chenxi Hope School with their English. Because I think it will be beneficial to me as well as the students and the society. Meanwhile, it can also train me in teaching technique and improve my English. I am kind, easy-going and have the abil

6、ity of solving problems by myself. Besides, I am independent in life and proficient in English. Thats why I apply for the position. If I am chosen, I plan to communicate with the students first to know what they need. In addition, Ill try to get them more interested in English by telling stories, si

7、nging songs, playing games and so on. Id appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity. Look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,Good sentences for appreciaton,I hear your school will choose some excellent students to coach the students in the primary school in English. I want to take part in this activity. Im writing to apply to work as a volunteer to help the students in Chenxi Hope School with their English In my view, its a good opportunity for me to do something for others and improve my own abilities. It will be beneficial to me as well as the students and