如何寫作文.ppt

1、如何寫作文,From:Huaishupu Middle School Name: 王齊鴻 E-mail address: ,英語(yǔ)寫作重要性,英語(yǔ)寫作的重要性 初中階段的英語(yǔ)寫作既是英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)“聽(tīng)、說(shuō)、讀、寫”四項(xiàng)必備基本技能之一。寫作還是是中考的必考題型，且所占比重較大（15分），同時(shí)也是拉開(kāi)考生距離的關(guān)鍵題型。,初中生寫作“現(xiàn)狀”,初中生寫作“六大病癥”： 1) 審題不清，抓不住要點(diǎn)，東拉西扯： 2) 單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤： frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet 3) 動(dòng)詞缺失：Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. 4）前后不一致（

2、數(shù)、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、主謂不一致等）： Eg: All people have their own dream. He said he wants to have a good rest. 5）中式英語(yǔ) Eg: I very like sports. 6) 綜合性錯(cuò)誤： 包括單詞大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)以及形容詞副詞的混淆、連詞的缺失誤用、句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整等。,如何寫作文？ 如何寫出高分作文？,問(wèn)題思考：,認(rèn)真審題，找出文章要表達(dá)的中心。,寫作第一步,審,英語(yǔ)作文五步法,健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過(guò)假期的呢？國(guó)際健康組織對(duì)此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此

3、次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請(qǐng)為國(guó)際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。,審,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,找出題目的關(guān)鍵詞,根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡(jiǎn)單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn),如何度假 調(diào)查報(bào)告 倡議假日休閑,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,寫作第二步,列,用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語(yǔ)列出文章要點(diǎn)。,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit

4、friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.,列,加,加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開(kāi)頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔，漂亮。,寫作第三步：,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our s

5、urvey report.,Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,a nice head,a nice tail,a nice body,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other peopl

6、e visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.,連,恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。,寫作第四步：,要用上連接詞。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則, 因此考生應(yīng)盡量使用according to ,and, or, (al) though, but, however, because, so等詞, 以便使行文自然流暢。,How do people spend their vacation? We

7、made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,連,美,選好詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語(yǔ)言功底。,寫作第五步：,We inter

8、viewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends o

9、r parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美,原文： How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some

10、 other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,效果對(duì)比,英語(yǔ)作文“五步法”,審,列,加,連,美,實(shí)戰(zhàn)演習(xí),以 “I have a dream”為題寫一篇不少于80個(gè)詞的短文， 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。 (以下句型供參考） My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/prefer To make my dream come true, I If m

11、y dream comes true,I have a dream Anybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams. Most people always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I admire theyre free, they can do everything they want. When theyre flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even theyre the most beautiful animals. I really want to