2020-2021年中考英語書面表達(dá)專題剖析與專題同步訓(xùn)練(含答案)(word)

1、2020-2021 年 中考英語書面表達(dá)專題剖析與專題同步訓(xùn)練（含答案）（word）一、中考英語書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1 面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介 我的朋友 陽的短文?；厩闆r 陽，陽光中學(xué)九年 二班學(xué)生1.喜 。每周花七個多小 各種 型的 ，因 趣 好2.喜 。每年 兩次 兒的數(shù)量，以研究 兒在數(shù)量方面的 化。 秀事跡上個月把零花 捐 了希望工程未來夢想1.希望成 接家 到上海路段的高 工程 2.每個人 保 境都可以做一些改 。如：（. 1例）要求： 1）表達(dá)清楚， 法正確，上下文 ；2）必 包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng) ；3） 數(shù)： 100 左右（短文的開 已 出，不 入 數(shù)）

2、；4）不得使用真 姓名、校名和地名等。zhang yang is a student in sunshine middle school._【答案】 zhang yang is a student in sunshine middle school. he is in class 2,grade 9. he likes reading. he spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. he enjoys watching birds.

3、he counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. he donated his pocket money to the hope project last month.his dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown toshanghai. he hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environ

4、ment. we m ustn t throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【 解】亮點 明： 篇 作的 次清晰，內(nèi)容 ，表達(dá)流 。文中使用了非常好的短 ，例如like reading ， more than ， all kinds of ， spend time doing ， enjoy doing ， the number of ， twicea year， be the chief engineer of 等。而 he spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he t

5、hinks reading is helpful./ he hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. 等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的綜合運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。【點睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2 亞洲文明對話大會近期在北京召開，你的印度朋友danny 收看了大會相關(guān)報

6、道，對華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，來信向你了解中國文化。假設(shè)你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一封回信給danny。要點內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久，文化各異；傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，多彩習(xí)俗（舉一例）文明行為相互尊重，以禮相待；互學(xué)共鑒，共同成長（或自擬）身邊文明校園文明（自擬一點）注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 90 詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點，可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。3. 文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯 : civilized 文明的dear danny,i m glad to receive your letter. since you are inte

7、rested in civilization（文明） of china, i would like to share something with you.i hope you can come to china someday to experience the ancient culture of china. look forward to hear from you soon.all the best,li hua【答案】 dear danny,i m glad to receive your letter. since you are interested in civilizati

8、on（文明） of china, i would like to share something with you.chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. china is a country of56 nationalities. different nations have difficult cultures. in my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the spring festiva

9、l, mid-autumn festival and the dragon boat festival . they arealso called “ three major chinese holidays ” ine thechinacustoms.here ofar eating zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the dragon boat festival.china is a nation of etiquette （禮儀） . chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. we al

10、l learn and grow together. everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.i hope you can come to china someday to experience the ancient culture of china. look forward to hearing from you

11、 soon.all the best.li hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友danny 寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信。【詳解】文章需要介紹下中國的文化。表格中列舉了三個要點，寫作時注意不要漏寫。平時注意多多積累句型、短語。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀 ”為主，首先要認(rèn)真讀懂圖表中的要求，對所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括，去粗取精；在寫作時目的要明確，要注意內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性和嚴(yán)肅性?！军c睛】寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子。本篇文章寫的好的句子有：chinese civilization i

12、s one of theoldest and longest civilizations in the world中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。china is a nation of etiquette （禮儀），中國是一個禮儀之邦。3今天手機(jī)在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪幸褟V泛使用。但中學(xué)生在學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該持有手機(jī)，一些學(xué)生和老師有不同的觀點。你們學(xué)校的校刊英文版正在就此舉行征文活動，請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇征文。觀點理由一些學(xué)生贊成擁有方便與家長聯(lián)系；一些老師反對擁有有學(xué)生用手機(jī)玩游戲；有學(xué)生用手機(jī)作弊；你的觀點1.2.要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2. 必須包含

13、表格所給的提示信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 數(shù)： 80-100 左右（征文的開 已 出，不 入 數(shù)）。mobile phones have been used widely in our daily lifetoday._【答案】 mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. with the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. however, some parents and tea

14、chers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.some students are for it. they think that it is convenient to contact with parents. mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily.some teachers are again

15、st it they think that some students cant control themselves and often play games. whats worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students eyes.in my opinion, i think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right

16、 way. firstly ， students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. at the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【 解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可 漏。需在平 累相關(guān)的 ，寫作中注意 通 ，符合 關(guān)系，上下文之 可以適當(dāng)使用 接 。如but, so, then 等?？梢?/p>

17、適當(dāng)使用高分句型?！军c睛】高分句型： i think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way我 正確的方式使用手機(jī) 學(xué)生是有幫助的。i think+ 從句。it is+形容 for sb to do sth 做某事 某人來 是的。4 面表達(dá)初中 在即 , 回 三年的學(xué) 生活, 你一定有成功的體 , 如一次考 , 一次比 , 一次表演 . 你以 believe myself, and i will win 寫一篇演 稿。提示：（ 1） what was the event?（ 2） how did you ma

18、ke it?（ 3） whats your feeling?要求：（ 1）發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）發(fā)言稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。（3）詞數(shù)80 個左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù)）。believe myself, and i will winhello,everyone!_thank you for your listening.【答案】 believe myself, and i will winhello, everyone! as an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.

19、there always aredifficulties in our life and we have to face them.when i was in the seventh grade, i always had difficulty in learning english. i just couldn tunderstand it. i even wanted to give it up. then my parents told me that where there is a will,there is a way. they also told me that i shoul

20、d be confident. my english teacher encouraged meto continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. i had the confidence again. i foundwhen i put my heart into it, english didn t seem that difficult. i made great progress. my parentsand teachers were happy for me. i felt pleased and proud f

21、or myself, too.to be confident means i should believe myself. believe myself, there are hopes in my life. in the future, i wont be afraid of the difficulties in my life and im sure that nothing can beat me and i will win! believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me. thank you for your liste

22、ning.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以 believe myself and i will win 為題，寫一篇演講稿。題目中用問題的形式給出了提示，審題可知，文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事；然后介紹你是如何克服了這個困難，最后取得成功的；最后說一下你自己的感受。寫作時學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個內(nèi)容提要，發(fā)揮自己的想象力，將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整，用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容，不能遺漏要點，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但要與上下文意銜接起來。其次要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不

23、同的，不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇適當(dāng)句型、短語、詞匯進(jìn)行表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為主，穿插并列句或復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)注意銜接詞以及高級句式或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，寫了一篇演講稿。文章有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，層次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主題都很明確，敘述詳細(xì)、清楚。其次短文使用了正確的 和人稱，短文主要使用了一般 在 和一般 去 ， 形式 化準(zhǔn)確，尤其注意了不 的 去式形式， 法 范，用 準(zhǔn)確。文章中句式 化豐富，有 句、并列句、復(fù)合句，

24、 短句 合，增 了文章的表 力。短文中使用了 豐富的句型，如 when i was in the seventh grade, i always had difficulty in learning english.、 my englishteacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、 i foundwhen i put my heart into it, english didn t 、seeminthethatfuture,difficultiwont be afraid

25、 ofthe difficulties in my life and im sure that nothing can beat me and i will win!等等。5 面表達(dá)根據(jù)下列表格的提示，寫一篇 changes in our hometown 的英 短文（80 左右）文章內(nèi)容必 包含所 的所有信息開 已 出，不 入 數(shù)內(nèi)容要點： 去 在1舊房1高樓2河水 2河水清澈（ clean and clear）3步行、 自行 上班3乘公交 、小汽 上班4道路狹窄（ narrow ）4街道 （ wide ），干 整 5居住條件（ living conditions ）差5生活越來越好， 境（

26、 environment ）越來越舒適6你的感想 （寫兩到三句）changes in our hometownin the past ten years ， great changes have taken place in our hometown 【答案】 changes in our hometownin the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. in the past, there used to be old houses. the river was very dirty. the roa

27、ds were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. people were not rich. they went to work on foot or by bike. but now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. we can see the clean river and the clear water . even we can see fish in the water. there are many wide and clean roads. our lif

28、e is better and better the environment around us is more and more comfortable. people usually go to work by bus or by car.i am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. but i think it s still important to remember the past. it tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【 解】亮點 明： 篇 作的 次清

29、晰，內(nèi)容 ，表達(dá)流 。文中使用了非常好的短 ，例如take place， in our hometown ， in the past ， used to be ，go to do ， on foot ， by bike，betterand better ， more and more 等。而 i think its still important to remember the past/it tells that we should cherish the present life. 等賓語從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可

30、任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6書面表達(dá)假如你是李明，你的英國筆友jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。請你按照以下提示給他回一封e-mail 。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴(yán)重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。參考詞匯：霧霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連

31、貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。dear jack,i m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. now i d like to tell you something about the haze._yours,li ming【答案】 dear jack,i m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the wea

32、ther and my health. now i d like to tell you something about the haze.the hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. it was bad for our daily life. more and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. a great number of people

33、 have to stay at home .people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. the government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus andthe subway.as for me, i will go to school by bike or on foot. in addition, i will tell the people i

34、meet to protectthe environment. would you like to tell me some good ideas?i m looking forward to your reply.yours,li ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。題目中列出了三個要點，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點提示，來組織語言，充實內(nèi)容。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴(yán)重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎么做。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個內(nèi)容一段。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達(dá)

35、的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句；語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達(dá)清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過

36、去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。短文中語言得體，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有more and more people have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 the government sugges

37、ts that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 in addition, i will tell the people i meet to protect the environment. 等。7 書面表達(dá)請將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。一直以來，同學(xué)們對作業(yè)持有不同的觀點。在你班的主題班會上，同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了“is dailyhomework necessary ？ ”的討論，請你根據(jù)提示和要求，并結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表你的觀點。yesnotake up too

38、much time ；help us understand what we have learned ；make us less interested in studying ； .practice makes prefect ； .your opinion ：要求：180 以上。2文中不得出 真 的人名、校名。【答案】 dear students ，im glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. i think its necessary for us to do daily homework.doing daily ho

39、mework can help us understand what we have learned in class. for me, i always have some difficulties in mastering all of what i have learned in class. through daily homework, i review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. little by little, i have a better understanding.so i always believe“

40、practice makesperfect”in my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. but it shouldnt be too much. it can improve our skills. daily homework should be different and colorful. it might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. we should be left enough free time so that we ca

41、n do things we really like to do.thats all. thanks.【解析】寫作分析： 之后能明白寫作任 是要寫出一篇小 文， 每日的作 到底是不是必要的。首先需要 述正反兩方面的 點，其次 合自己的 ， 表自己的 點。寫作 程中要注意 準(zhǔn)確，注意正確使用 ，借助 例、 來佐 自己的 點。寫作亮點：首先用一個自然段來 明寫作的主 ，表達(dá)出自己的 點（ 作 是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do 的句型。其次，開始具體 述 點， 述的 候要適當(dāng)使用 例，相關(guān)用到的短 有have some difficulties in d

42、oing在做 的 候有困 ， review the knowledge 復(fù) 知 ， think over the difficulties來回思考 點，little by little一點一點地。恰當(dāng)?shù)?也 文章增色不少，例如用到了“practice makes perfect熟能”生巧 個 。最后可以用 理的方式來介 做作 的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我 的技能，在 里也有一點亮點，就是 作 也要有 化性，要豐富多彩，體 了作者的深度思考，總體來說出色地完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。8書面表達(dá)每個人都有自己心愛的物品，相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧！請以“a（ n）

43、 _ ihave ”為題，描述一個或一件你心愛的物品，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。要求： 1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3.語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順，80 詞左右。a（ n） _ i have_【答案】 a（ n） toy gun i haveeveryone has an object that she/ he like best. so do i.in my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. it s a black toy gun and it can s

44、hot somsmall plastic pills for ten meters. when i was young, i played with other kids with my toy gun.they all admired me and put me in the place of leader. i was so happy then.when i was a little boy, i liked watching the war movies best. i was eager to have my own toy gun.one day, it was my birthd

45、ay. i asked for it when my father came back. my family was poor thenand my father didn t promise me. from then, father worked harder and came back more lately. aweek later, father put a box to me. a black toy gun in it! i was moved with tears. in order to get it,father worked late and hurt himself. he died a month later.now i hope i can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. i willremember my father s love forever. every time i miss